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閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasafinesummermorning,perfecttobeoutdoors.Twosistershadbeenoutmushroompicking,andwereontheirwayhomewithheavybasketsfullofmushrooms.Theysangsongsontheway,andplayedwitheachother.Soontheyreachedapointwheretheyhadtocrossarailwaytrack.Theydidnotthinktwiceaboutcrossingitsincetherewasnotraincoming,andtheycouldnothearanywhistle.Theyslowlyclimbedthesteeprailwayembankment,takingcarenottodropthebaskets.TheywereverynearthetrackandthelittlesisterMarywasabouttocrossitfirstwhenatrainwhistledinthedistance.Hearingthetraincoming,Rosetheeldersisterquicklyrandown.Shethoughtthattheyoungonewasfollowingher.Butassheturnedback,shewasshockedtoseeherlittlesisterstilluptherecrossingthetrack.“Comebackhere!Runbackfast!”sheshouted.Maryseemednottohearthewhistlenorhersister’scryasshewasconcentratingonsteppingoverthetrackwithherlittlefeet,andholdingontothebasket.Thenshetrippedandfellonthetrack,scatteringhermushroomsaround.Theenginedriverpanickedonseeingagirlbetweenthetrackswhowasonherhandsandkneesandheblewthehornwithallhisstrength.PoorMary,whowasfrightenedbythecomingdanger,frozeanddidn’tknowwhattodo.WhenRosesawthescene,shescreamedatthetopofhervoiceforMary’sattention.Marynoticedthathersisterwasnotaroundandcriedforhelp.Withthetraindrawingnear,theenginedrivergrewextremelyanxious.Ashardashecould,hekeptblowingthewhistleandstartedreducingspeed.Yetitwasnotpossibleforhimtostoptheheavytrainwithinsuchashortdistance.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetrainrolledoverandfinallystopped.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:在一個美好的夏日清晨,兩姐妹采完蘑菇回家途中要穿過鐵路軌道。她們起初未發(fā)現(xiàn)火車駛來,當聽到火車鳴笛時,姐姐Rose迅速跑下鐵路堤岸,以為妹妹Mary會跟上,然而Mary卻在跨越軌道時摔倒。火車司機看到Mary后驚慌失措,盡力鳴笛減速但無法在短距離內(nèi)停車,情況十分危急。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應:伏筆:姐妹倆未仔細確認有無火車便準備穿越鐵路。續(xù)寫回應:導致她們遭遇火車駛來的危險情況,使得故事進入緊張的危機情節(jié),凸顯了她們的大意帶來的嚴重后果。伏筆:Rose以為Mary會跟著自己跑下鐵路堤岸。續(xù)寫回應:當發(fā)現(xiàn)Mary仍在鐵軌上時,引發(fā)了Rose后續(xù)的焦急呼喊與救援行動,推動情節(jié)進一步發(fā)展,也體現(xiàn)出姐妹間的牽掛。伏筆:Mary因?qū)W⒂诳缭杰壍篮湍梅€(wěn)籃子而未聽到火車鳴笛和姐姐呼喊。續(xù)寫回應:所以她摔倒在鐵軌上并在危險面前不知所措,增加了故事的緊張感和戲劇性,為后續(xù)救援營造了緊迫氛圍。伏筆:火車司機在遠處看到Mary后驚慌并全力鳴笛。續(xù)寫回應:這引起了Rose的注意并促使她采取更激烈的行動去救Mary,同時也讓Mary意識到危險,使人物間的互動和情節(jié)發(fā)展更加緊密。伏筆:火車無法在短距離內(nèi)停下。續(xù)寫回應:強調(diào)了危險的緊迫性,讓Rose必須在極短時間內(nèi)做出拯救Mary的行動,否則悲劇將不可避免,從而引出Rose在絕境中的勇敢表現(xiàn)。續(xù)寫要點:
第一段:描述Rose為阻止悲劇發(fā)生所采取的行動,比如她如何不顧危險沖向Mary,試圖將其拉離鐵軌等。體現(xiàn)Rose在緊急時刻的勇敢和對妹妹的深切關(guān)愛。第二段:講述火車停下后的場景,如Mary的狀況、人們的反應等。表達姐妹倆劫后余生的心情以及從這次經(jīng)歷中得到的感悟。情感線:
姐妹倆開始時是輕松愉悅的,在采蘑菇后回家途中充滿歡樂。當火車出現(xiàn)危險時,Rose轉(zhuǎn)為極度焦急和擔憂,Mary則是驚恐萬分。在Rose實施救援行動過程中,她的勇敢與堅定占據(jù)主導,而Mary充滿對姐姐救助的期待與依賴。火車停下后,姐妹倆先是心有余悸,而后對彼此的感情更加深厚,也意識到安全的重要性,情感從輕松到緊張再到慶幸與感悟,經(jīng)歷了巨大的起伏變化。故事線:
Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.Withoutamoment’shesitation,shesprintedbackuptheembankmenttowardsMary.Thetrainwasthunderingcloser,butRose’sonlythoughtwastosavehersister.ShereachedMary,grabbedherarmwithallhermight,andpulledheroffthetrackjustinthenickoftime.Thetwosisterstumbleddownthesideoftheembankment,thebasketsofmushroomsflyingeverywhere.Thetrainrolledoverandfinallystopped.Thedriverrushedout,paleandshaken.Marywascryinghysterically,whileRoseheldhertightly,tearsstreamingdownherfaceaswell.Theywerebothinastateofshockbutincrediblygratefultobealive.Thepeoplenearbywhohadwitnessedthescenewerealsorelieved.Thesistersrealizedhowpreciouslifewasandvowednevertobesocarelessagain.主旨升華句:“Inthefaceofimminentdanger,thebondofsisterhoodcanbecomeanunbreakableshield,defyingeventhemightiestofthreats.”(在迫在眉睫的危險面前,姐妹情誼能成為堅不可摧的盾牌,抵御最強大的威脅。)“Asinglemomentofcarelessnesscanleadtothebrinkofdisaster,butloveandcouragecanpullusbackfromtheabyss.”(片刻的疏忽可能導致災難邊緣,但愛與勇氣能將我們從深淵拉回。)“Life'spreciousnessisoftenmostvividlyrevealedintheshadowofnear-tragedy,teachingustocherisheveryheartbeatandeverylovedone.”(生命的珍貴常常在近乎悲劇的陰影中最生動地展現(xiàn),教導我們珍惜每一次心跳和每一位親人。)“Whenthetracksoffateseemtoleadtodoom,thestepsofloveandsacrificecandivertthecourseandrewritetheending.”(當命運的軌道似乎通向厄運時,愛與犧牲的腳步可以改變方向并改寫結(jié)局。)“Thewhistleofdangerisacalltoaction,awakeningwithinusthedormantheroismthatliesbeneaththesurfaceofordinarylife.”(危險的汽笛聲是行動的召喚,喚醒我們在平凡生活表象下沉睡的英雄主義。)寫作示范一:Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.ShemusteredallhercourageanddashedtowardsMarylikeaboltoflightning.Ignoringthedeafeningsoundoftheapproachingtrain,shetuggedMaryupfromthetrackswithastrengthshedidn’tknowshehad.Thetwosistersclungtoeachotherastheyrolledawayfromthetracks.Thetrainroaredpast,thewindfromitnearlyknockingthemover.Thetrainrolledoverandfinallystopped.Theconductorandpassengerscamerunningtocheckonthem.Marywastrembling,herfaceashen.Rosecomfortedhersoftly.Theythankedthepeoplearoundthemandthedriver,whowasstillvisiblyshaken.Thesistersknewthattheyhadbeengivenasecondchance.Theypromisedtoalwaysbemorecautiousandtovaluetheirlivesandeachotherevenmore.Thisterrifyingincidenthadstrengthenedtheirbondandmadethemmoreawareofthefragilityoflife.寫作示范二:Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.Inasplitsecond,shemadeadecisionandracedbacktoMary.ShethrewherselfontopofMary,shieldingherfromtheoncomingtrain.Thetrainscreechedandrumbledoverhead,butRoseheldontight.Miraculously,thetrainpassedwithoutharmingthem.Thetrainrolledoverandfinallystopped.Thesisterslayontheground,gaspingforbreath.MarylookedatRosewithtearfuleyesandsaid,“Yousavedme.”Rosejusthuggedhertighter.Peoplegatheredaround,marvelingattheirnarrowescape.Thesistersfeltamixtureofemotions-relief,gratitude,andanewfoundrespectforthepoweroflifeanddeath.Theyknewthattheirsisterlylovehadtriumphedoverthegreatestdangerandthattheywouldneverforgetthislessonabouttheimportanceofsafetyandthedepthoftheirbond.【答案】Para1:Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.
Sherusheduptheembankmentstaircase,repeatingatthetopofhervoice“Stayoffthetracks!”Mary,atthesightofRose’scomingtoherrescue,burstintotearsofjoy.Th
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