強基聯盟讀后續寫分析Ahigh-pitchedscreamstoppedLauraDouglasinhertracks.Spinningaroundonthenarrowdirtpath,shethoughtthathercousinCassiewasindanger.Instead,Cassiewasknee-deepinflowersthatcoveredthemeadow（草地）likeaquilt.“Cassie!Youscaredmetodeath!”Laurascolded,hervoiceechoingthroughthemeadow.“Iamsorry,”Cassie,absorbedinherphotography,didn'tnoticethethickfogrollingin,consumingthenearbymountains.“Notagain!”Lauracomplained,hereyesshiftingtotheapproachingclouds.“Wegottago!”Cassie'sfocusremainedonhercamera,capturingtheshort-livedbeautyofthemoment.Lauratiedaredscarfaroundherhair,“Let'sgobacktothecampsite.”Thegirlsquicklyrandownthewindingpath,themeadownowcoveredbyathickfogandasteady,coldrain.Theroadturnedslippery,andtheyhadtomoveslowlytoavoidslidingdown.“It'sdangerous!Weneedshelternow!”Cassiescreamedafteraloudcrackofthunder,thestorm'sstrengthincreasingrapidly.Laura'skeeneyesfoundasmallcaveintherockface,partlyhiddenbyoverhangingbranches.Itwasn'tmuch,butitofferedachancetoescapetherain.“Cassie,overhere!”Lauracalledout,hervoicebarelycarryingoverthewind.Cassie,wetandshaking,stumbledtowardstheplaceofLaura'svoice.Assheapproached,shecouldseetheshelter.Itwasn'tperfect,butitwasbetterthannothing.“Smartthinking,Laura,”Cassiesaid,herteethchattering（打顫）withcoldasshepressedherbackpackclosetoherchest.Thebackpack,atoughandwaterproof（防水的）model,hadbeenagiftfromherfather,anexperiencedhikerwhohadinsistedonitsnumerouspocketsandsectionsforemergencysupplies.Littledidtheyknow,hisadvicewouldproveinvaluableonthisday.注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。“Checkyourbackpack,”Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.前四段的環境描寫都可以呼應微信公眾號ClassroomMissYan1)Cassiewasknee-deepinflowersthatcoveredthemeadow（草地）likeaquilt.這里把花海比做被子，后面可以沿用這個比喻比如：Littledropletsofwaterwerestillhangingonthepetalofflowers,glitteringinthesilvermoonlightliketinydiamondsdecoratingcolorfulmeadow,creatingamostgorgeousandfascinatingquiltintheworld.微信公眾號ClassroomMissYanCassie,absorbedinherphotography,didn'tnoticethethickfogrollingin,consumingthenearbymountains.這里提到有濃霧，后面應該云霧消散，很多暴風雨的場景可以反著寫一寫比如：Thethickandblindingfogeventuallydispersed,revealingtheentirelydifferentsightofthemeadow.微信公眾號ClassroomMissYan(其他自己想)Thebackpack,atoughandwaterproof（防水的）model,hadbeenagiftfromherfather,anexperiencedhikerwhohadinsistedonitsnumerouspocketsandsectionsforemergencysupplies.前面提到主角是又冷又被淋濕了，躲在小山洞里面。這邊爸爸的背包里面有哪一些emergencysupplies可以用呢？這里可以自己自由發揮。“Let'sgobacktothecampsite.”Thegirlsquicklyrandownthewindingpath,themeadownowcoveredbyathickfogandasteady,coldrain.Theroadturnedslippery,andtheyhadtomoveslowlytoavoidslidingdown.微信公眾號ClassroomMissYan這里是蜿蜒的濕滑的小路，最后他們怎么回到露營地的呢？下水作文“Checkyourbackpack,”Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful.Laura’swordsremindedCassieoftheemergencysuppliesherfatherinsistedontaking.Withoutanydelay,sheunzippedallthepocketsofthebackpack,fumblingoutallthesuppliesinadesperateattempttofindsomethinguseful.Fortunately,amongthemwereablanket,aflintandaflashlight.Wrappingthemselvesintheblanket,theyhuddledtogether,withalittlefiretokeepthemwarm.Althoughtheferociouswindwashowlinglikewolves,andtherainwasbeatingagainstthebranchesoutsidetheshelterruthlessly,theyfeltsafeandwarmatthemomentallbecauseoftheirfather’sforesight.(95)微信公眾號ClassroomMissYanAsnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.Silvermoonlightdispersedthedarkcloudintheskyandthickfogonthemeadow,filteringthroughthebranchesandintothelittlecavetheywerehiding.“letgetbacktocampsiteorourfriendsmaygetworried,”Laurasuggested.Afterpackingeverythingup,theyhittheroadwithaflashlightandacompassintheirhands.Theflashlightlitupthewindingpathtowardtheircampsite,illuminatingeverysmallpuddleofwatertheys