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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Wehaveallheardtheexpression:“Remembertostopandsmelltheroses.”But,howoftendowereallytaketimeoutofourbusyfast-pacedlivestonoticetheworldaroundus?Ihavereflectedbackononesituationmanytimessinceithappenedandhavelearnedseveralpowerfullessonsfromit.I’masguiltyasanyoneofignoringtheworldaroundinthismanner,especiallywhenIamdrivingonCalifornia’sovercrowdedstreets.Ashorttimeago,however,Iwitnessedaneventthatshowedmehowbeingwrappedupinmyownlittleworldhaskeptmefrombeingfullyawareofthebiggerworldpicturearoundme.Iwasdrivingtoabusinessappointmentand,asusual,IwasplanninginmymindwhatIwasgoingtosay.Icametoaverybusycrossroadswherethestoplighthadjustturnedred.“Allright,”Ithoughttomyself,“IcanbeatthenextlightifIraceaheadofthepack.”Mymindandcarwereinautopilot,readytogowhensuddenlymyabsent-mindedstatewasbrokenbyanunforgettablesight.Ayoungcouple,bothblind,waswalkingarm-in-armacrossthisbusycrossroadswithcarswhizzingbyineverydirection.Thewomanwasholdingsomethingtightlyinherhandsthatslingtoherchest,obviouslycarryingachild.Bothofthemhadawhitewalkingstickextended,searchingforcluestodirectthemacrossthecrossroads.InitiallyIwasmoved.TheywereovercomingwhatIfeltwasoneofthemostfearedhandicaps—blindness.“Wouldn’titbeterribletobeblind?”Ithought.Withoutrealizingthedangertheywerein,theywerewalkingrightthepathofoncomingcars.IwasfrightenedforthembecauseIdidn’tknowiftheotherdriversunderstoodwhatwashappening.However,asIwatchedfromthefrontlineoftraffic,Isawamiracleunfoldbeforemyeyes.注意:
1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Everycarineverydirectiondidthesamething.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nevernoticingsomethingdifferent,thecoupleadjustedtheirrouteastheyfollowedthecoaching.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意我們常說要停下腳步欣賞周圍,但在忙碌生活中卻很少做到。作者在一次駕車去赴商業約會途中,在一個繁忙路口等紅燈時,看到一對盲人夫婦手挽手過馬路,妻子還抱著孩子,他們用盲杖探路,全然不知周圍的危險。作者先是被他們的勇敢觸動,又為他們身處險境擔憂,然而接下來卻目睹了奇跡。五要素分析人物:作者、盲人夫婦、路口的司機們。時間:作者駕車去赴約時。地點:加利福尼亞一個繁忙的十字路口。起因:作者在路口等紅燈時看到盲人夫婦過馬路。經過:盲人夫婦處于車流中,情況危險。結果:即將展開神奇的救援畫面。幾處伏筆及續寫中的回應伏筆:作者擔心其他司機沒注意到盲人夫婦的危險。回應:第一段續寫所有車輛都停下,人們展現出尊重和幫助,消除了作者的擔憂。伏筆:盲人夫婦在車流中行走,需要引導。回應:第二段續寫盲人夫婦在人們的引導下安全過馬路,沒有意識到特殊情況,與開頭盲人不知危險相呼應。續寫要點第一段情感線:緊張轉為感動,原本對盲人夫婦身處危險的緊張,因所有車輛的行動而變為感動。故事線:描述車輛集體停下的安靜又震撼的場景,人們的反應體現出對盲人夫婦的尊重和保護。第二段情感線:溫馨,盲人夫婦在善意的幫助下安全通過,畫面充滿溫暖。故事線:講述盲人夫婦在引導下調整路線過馬路,他們雖不知特殊情況但能感受到善意。主旨升華句Inthefaceoftheweak,kindnessisalightthatcanguidethemthroughthedarknessofdanger.Sometimes,amomentofcollectivehumanitycancreateabeautifulandsafehavenforthoseinneed.Truerespectliesnotinwordsbutinouractionstowardsthosewhoaredifferent.Asimpleactofstoppingcanbethemostpowerfulexpressionofloveandcareinourbusylives.Ourworldisfilledwithsilentheroes,whosekindnessmakesthejourneyofthedisadvantagedlessbumpy.寫作示范第一篇Everycarineverydirectiondidthesamething.Itwasasiftimehadstopped.Thedriversheldtheirbreath,theirhandsstillonthesteeringwheels,eyeslockedonthecouple.Someputontheirhazardlightstosignaltoothers.Peoplegotoutoftheircarstoformahumanshieldaroundthecouple,guidingthemwithgentlevoices.
Nevernoticingsomethingdifferent,thecoupleadjustedtheirrouteastheyfollowedthecoaching.Theywalkedwithconfidence,feelingtheloveandcarearoundthem.Theirsmileswerebright,unawareofthemiraclethathadunfoldedjustforthem.Thecrossroadsbecameastageofkindnessthatday.第二篇Everycarineverydirectiondidthesamething.Theusuallynoisyintersectionbecameasilenttableau.Thedriverswaitedpatiently,theirexpressionssolemn.Afeweventurnedofftheirenginestoshowtheircommitmenttothecouple'ssafety.Theywatchedasiftheywereguardiansoftheblindpair.
Nevernoticingsomethingdifferent,thecoupleadjustedtheirrouteastheyfollowedthecoaching.Theyseemedtosensethegoodwillandmovedforwardwithouthesitation.Whentheyfinallyreachedtheotherside,asighofreliefspreadamongthedrivers.Themomentwasareminderofthepowerofhumancompassion.第三篇Everycarineverydirectiondidthesamething.Thedriversspontaneouslybecameaunitedfrontofprotection.Noonewasinarushanymore.Theywatchedthecouplewithsofteyes.Somewavedtheirhandstosignalthecouplewhichwaytogo.Theairwasthickwithasenseofsharedresponsibility.
Nevernoticingsomethingdifferent,thecoupleadjustedtheirrouteastheyfollowedthecoaching.Theirstepsweresteady.Theynoddedingratitudeatthevoicesguidingthem.Astheywalkedaway,thedriversfeltasenseoffulfillment.Thissimpleactofkindnessmadethecrossroadsasymbolofhopeandlove.參考答案Everycarineverydirectiondidthesamething.Everysinglevehicleremainedstationary,creatinganalmostsurrealsilenceamongtheusuallynoisyengin
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