一、寫作思路：審題（題目主干+要點+要求）時態和人稱，特別注意三單和過去式，運用要準確三段：Paragraph1:點題（根據題目主干提綱挈領點題：如介紹學校+提出旅行建議）Paragraph2:主體（要點，可適當擴充，豐富信息；邏輯連接詞）Paragraph3:總結/評論+期待/呼吁（表總結的邏輯詞）句型的豐富檢查拼寫，語法，格式二、常用詞句：開頭：I’dliketo...表達個人觀點替換think：inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview/forme/formymind/asfarasIamconcerned避免詞語的過度重復少用and;and可替換為aswellasbut可替換為However,.../Nevertheless,...very可替換為rather/morethan/quiteso（表結果時）可替換為Therefore,.../Thus,...(表示“因此”)becauseof可替換為for,dueto,owingto主體邏輯連接詞：First/firstly/firstandforemost/tobeginwith...Second/secondly/next/additionally/besides/what’smore/moreover/further/furthermore...Third/thirdly/last/lastbutnotleast/themostimportantpointis.../themostsignificantoneis.../mostimportantly結尾表總結：allinall/toconclude/inconclusion/insummary/inshort/tosummarize/tosumup/inaword結尾表希望：Itishopedthat.../Isincerelyhopethat.../Iamhopingthat.../I’mlookingforwardto...直接結尾；Ihopetheaboveishelpful.Pleasefeelfreetoaskmeforinformation..祝福詞：allthebest/bestwishes/wishyouahappyandhealthylife...三、句型改編：段落結構要點簡單打草后（可以畫樹狀圖）正式寫進行擴充與句型的復雜化簡單句的三單或過去時等動詞時態必須保證準確簡單句靈活復雜化（最少三句，且開頭需要一句，通常可使用定語從句）：主動句→被動句簡單句→定語從句為代表的主從復合句兩句主語一致時，逗號連接主語，第二句省略主語，動詞變為ing形式it的句型：it’s+形容詞+todo.../itisfoundthat.../Ifindithardto.../強調句（itis...that...）短語運用如notonly...butalso.../too...to.../therebe...with的復合結構（兩句主語一致時，為避免過度重復，可以改被動或ing或利用定語從句）旅行AnUnforgettableThinginTravellingIwillneverforgetthecleanerwhohelpedtheoldwoman,andthatteachesmetohelpothers.LastsummerholidayIwenttotheGreatWallforatripwithmyparents.Whenwegotoffthetrain,Isawanoldwomanbeingknockeddownontothegroundbyacar.Shewasbadlyhurt.Atthemoment,thereweremanypeoplestandingthere,butnobodyhelpedher.Suddenly,acleanercametoherandtookhertothenearesthospital.Althoughthecleanerismonanddoesn’tearnalotofmoney,heisn’tafraidtogetintotroubleandisreadytohelpothers.Iwasdeeplymovedbyhim.Thoughsometerriblethingsmayhappeninourlife,therearestillsomanypeoplewhoareveryhelpful.Asastudent,IthinkIshouldlearnfromhim.二、學校生活MyLifeinMiddleSchoolTimefleetsinthepastthreeyears,bringingmebacktothosememoriesofmylifeinmiddleschoolespeciallythecolorfulactivities.Thereisnodoubtthatlifeinmiddleschoolisratherbusywith10classeseveryweekdayandonly10minutebreakinbetween.However,itwasthoseexperiencesofhardworkthatequippedmewithknowledgeIneed.What’smore,therewerevisitstodifferentplacesduringtheschoolyearsuchasmuseumsandtheaters,puttingknowledgeintopractice.Inordertokeepushealthy,ourschoolalsoarrangedustotakeexerciseseverymorning.Sportsmeetingwasheldonceaterm,whichreallycheeredusupinthosestrugglingdays.LifeinmiddleschoolisstressfulbutmeaningfulandI’lltreasureitinmydeepheartwhilemovingforward.三、今日變化LifeTodayandinthePastLifehaschangedgreatlyovertheyears,andthedifferencescanbeseeninmanyaspects.Let'stakealookathowlifehaschangedovertime.Inthepast,familiesoftenlivedinmunitieswhereeveryonekneweachother.Familymembersspentmostoftheirtimetogether.However,everyoneinthefamilyisbusywiththeirstudyorwork,withlessfacetofacemunication.Jobsinthepastweremainlyphysicallabor,andmostpeopleworkedinfactoriesoronfarms.Today,however,lotsofheavyworkcanbedonebymachinesorrobots.Peoplenowdojobsthatneedskillsandknowledge,andtherearemorechancesforgrowth.Inthepast,therewereonlyafewlearningmaterialsandmostgirlswerenotsenttoschool.However,varioussubjectsandactivitiesareavailabletochildren,andgirlshaveachancetogetabettereducation.Peopleusedtoridehorsesortakeboats.Travelingwasslowanditwasachallengetotravelfar.Today,however,wehavedifferentchoicesoftransport,includingcars,buses,trainsandplanes.It'sconvenientforustotravellongdistances.Inconclusion,lifetodayisdifferentfromwhatitwasinthepast.It'simportanttocherishthepastandtakethechancesofthepresent.說明規則或提出建議HowtoProtectOurLivesEveryonehasonlyonelife.Itisourparents’wishtoseeusgrowupsafelyandhealthily.Inreturn,weshouldtreasureourlives.Herearemysuggestionsonhowtoprotectourlives.Firstly,toavoidtrafficaccidents,wemustobeythetrafficruleswhenwewalkontheroad.Atschool,weshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates.Don’tfightwiththem,orwe’llgethurt.Stayawayfromthedangerousplaces.Secondly,itissuggestedtoeathealthyfoodinsteadofjunkfood.We’dbetterhaveenoughsleepanddoexerciseeveryday.Andwemustrefusedrugsaswellassmoking.Besides,wearesupposedtocontrolthetimespentontheInternet.Inaword,wemusttryourbesttoprotectourlives.健康HowtoKeepHealthyNowadays,moreandmorepeopleknowtheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.Thenwhatcanwedotokeephealthy?Youcantrythefollowingtips.First,youaresupposedtohavehealthyeatinghabits.Yououghttohavemealsregularly,keepabalanceddietandeatlessmeatbutmorevegetablesandfruit.Stayawayfromfastfoodaswellasunhealthydrinkfortheyarebadforyou.What’smore,youaresuggestedtoplaysports,whichcanmakeyoustrongerandhealthier.Playingbasketballwithyourfriendswhenyouarefreeaswellasgoingtothemountainswithyourfamilyaregoodchoices.Further,youshouldn’tstayup.Enoughsleepisnecessaryforkeepinghealthy.Stayawayfromsmokinganddrinkingbecausetheyareharmfultohealth.Last,trytobehappy.Ahappymanliveslongerthanasadman.Thus,trytosingasongorwatchaninterestingmovieifanythingbothersyou.Therearemanythingsyoucandotomakeyouhappy.Inthisway,youcanenjoyahappylife.Itishopedthatthesuggestionsaboveareofhelpforyourfuturehealthylife.飲食風俗DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.NowIwanttotellyousomethingaboutChinesetablemanners.InChina,thehostorhostesswon’teatanydishesuntiltheguestbegin.Youaren’tsupposedtotapbowlswiththechopsticks.Youshouldn’treachacrossthetabletogetsomethingtoeat.Youcan’tstarttoeatuntileveryoneisatthetable.Besides,you’dbettertoastthelongevity,goodhealthorsuccessofthehostorhostess.Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeinourcountry!Yours,LiLi英語的學習和使用DearWangWei,Ireceivedyouremailyesterday.Intheemail,youaskedmehowtoimproveyourEnglish.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.WatchingEnglishfilmsandlisteningtoEnglishsongsaregreatwaystolearnEnglish!Watchandlistenseveraltimes,andguessthemeaningofthenewwords.Besides,havingaconversationwithyourforeignteacherisalsoagoodway.You’dbetterstartitwithgreetingsoraquestion.Also,smilebefore