Unit2OnwardsandupwardsPart4Writing寫一次經歷寫作題目假定你是李華,曾經在一所聾啞學校做過助教,請根據以下要點用英文寫一篇關于你的助教經歷的文章。1.一位對生活失去信心的失聰女孩Jean在你的幫助下重拾生活信心;2.當時你遇到的最大困難是溝通障礙;3.你是如何克服困難的?你從中學到了什么?注意:1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

思路點撥遣詞造句Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞填空1.adj.難堪的,尷尬的

2.adj.令人愉快的,討人喜歡的

3.n.友誼;友好交往

4.adj.心煩意亂的,煩惱的

5.adv.然而,不過

6.v.鍥而不舍,堅持不懈

答案1.panionship4.upset5.nevertheless6.persevereⅡ.本單元語塊、語法運用1.完成句子第一部分:概述助教經歷(1)Onthewhole,helpingJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlifeis(一次愉快的經歷).

第二部分:遇到的困難及解決辦法(2)Thebiggestdifficulty(我面對的)wasthecommunicationbarriers.

(3)First,Iadvisedherto(鼓起勇氣)toconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadof(逃避它們).

(4)Furthermore,Imadeeveryeffortto(建立友誼及互相的信任)withher.

(5)Eventually,whatmatteredmostwasto(堅持我正在做的事情).

第三部分:你的收獲(6)WhatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreally(有助于我們的成功).

答案(1)adelightfulexperience(2)thatIfaced(3)gathercourage;escapingfromthem(4)establishcompanionshipandmutualtrust(5)persevereinwhatIwasdoing(6)contributetooursuccess2.句式升級(7)用it作形式主語改寫句(1)

(8)將句(2)改為強調句

答案(7)Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.(8)ItwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultythatIfaced.連句成篇Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.Frommymemory,whenwefirstmet,shewasalwaysupset,whichmademeembarrassed.Meanwhile,itwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultythatIfaced.Nevertheless,Imadeit.First,Iadvisedhertogathercouragetoconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadofescapingfromthem.Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttoestablishcompanionshipandmutualtrustwithher.Eventually,whatmatteredmostwastopersevereinwhatIwasdoing.WhatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreallycontributetooursuccessandthateveryoneshouldbeconfidentaboutlife.寫作積累開頭:簡要敘述發生的事情1.Asscheduled,the...tookplaceat...in...,lasting2hours.按計劃,……于……(時間)在……(地點)舉行,歷時兩個小時。2.OnceIwasinvitedto...butwhathappenedlatermademefeel...有一次我被邀請去……但后來發生的事讓我覺得……主體:事件過程1.AtfirstIthought...butitturnedouttobe...whichmademefeel...起初我以為……但結果是……這讓我覺得……2.OnlywhenIwastoldthat...didIbegintorealizewhatasillymistakeIhadmade.只有當我被告知……時我才開始意識到我犯了一個多么愚蠢的錯誤。結尾:事件結果1.Throughthismeaningful...activity,welearnedsomethingthatcantbelearnedinclass.通過這次有意義的……活動,我們學到了在課堂上學不到的東西。2.Theactivitymadeushaveabetterunderstandingofthemeaningof...這次活動讓我們更好地了解……的意義。實戰演練答案見P122

假設你是Tom,請根據以下提示講述你和父親一起爬山的經歷。1.去年暑假我和父親早晨出發去爬山;2.在半路上,下起雨來,我們全身被淋濕了,又冷又累;3.我開始抱怨,想要放棄;4.父親給予我鼓勵和溫暖;5.最終我們成功到達山頂,欣賞了美景。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

答案與分層梯度式解析Unit2OnwardsandupwardsPart4Writing實戰演練Onepossibleversion:IstillrememberthedaywhenIwentclimbingwithmyfatherinthelastsummervacation.Wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Unluckily,itbegantorainonthehalfway.Igotwetallthrough,feelingcoldandtired.SoIcouldnthelpcomplainingandwantedtogiveup.Justatthattime,myfatherencouragedmenottogiveupandputhiscoatonmesoftly.Hetoldme,“Wewontseethebeautifulsceneryunlesswereachthetop.”Hiswordsreallycheeredmeup.WegottothetopatlastandenjoyedthebeautyofnaturethatIhadneverseen.1.重點詞匯①setoff出發②onthehalfway在半路上③canthelpdoingsth.禁不住做某事④complainv.抱怨⑤giveup放棄⑥cheersb.up激勵某人,使某人振作起來2.亮點句型①IstillrememberthedaywhenIwentclimbingwithmyfatherinthelastsummervacation.(when引導定語從句,修飾先行詞theday)我還記得去年暑假我和父親去爬山的那一天。