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TheChristmasholidayswerefastapproaching,andwehadorderedmanygiftsonline.So,whenthedoorbellrang,Iwassuresomeofthepackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulcalicokitten(雜色貓)sittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasnowaythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?交待小貓的來歷。時間:圣誕節期間,意料之外的禮物。方式:猜測自己按門鈴。本段中的時間、禮物、來歷都為后文鋪墊。尤其是對小貓的來歷的描述為后文小貓具有獨特的能力這一點鋪墊。作者第一次見到小貓的印象:beautiful,big,intelligenteyes說明了小貓的一些特點。為后文小貓的聰明和敏銳鋪墊。語言特點:動作描寫;大量并列句和從句(時間狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句等),非謂語動詞如:結果狀語、伴隨狀語等。

Wefiguredthatsomeonehadfoundthekittensomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.Theyaccuratelyguessedwewouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.這個段落對小貓的特點進行了詳細的介紹:angel,acalmaura,anoldsoul,perfectcompanion,morelikeapuppy,wisebeyondheryears,enjoywanderingthroughthetunnelsandmysteriousrooms,courageous等都為后文作者被困后小貓的陪伴和幫助女主人脫困鋪墊。angel這個名字恰如其分,救人于水火。性格特點:calm,wise,courageous,adventurous(enjoywanderingthroughthetunnelsandmysteriousrooms),loyal(perfectcompanion,morelikeapuppy)Myhusbandcalledherourlittleangel,sowenamedheraccordingly.Shehadacalmaura(氣質)aboutherasshewalkedstraightintoourhomeandhearts,fittinginperfectly.Itseemedasifshewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisbighousewithus.Shewasanoldsoulandturnedouttobetheperfectcompanion.Alwaysbymyside,shewasmorelikeapuppythanakitten.Wisebeyondheryears,sheenjoyedwanderingthroughthetunnelsandmysteriousroomsasmuchasIdid,butwithmuchlessfear.Angelicathecalicowascourageous.本段為后文作者被困的地點鋪墊。介紹了自己的孤身勇探地窖的原因——takeapagefromherbook。地窖的特點:aricketyladder,murkydepths,old.Twelvefeetdeep都為后文鋪墊。梯子壞掉,女主人公摔下地窖,昏暗老舊的地窖和作者的恐懼心理關聯,12feetdeep(3.6米)說明無法爬出地窖。So,Itookapagefromherbookanddecidedtobebrave,too.Therewasanundergroundstonecellar(地窖)Ihadbeeneagertoexplore.Theonlywayinwasdownarickety(搖晃的)laddertoitsmurkydepths.Iguesseditwasanoldrootcellar,probablytwelvefeetdeep.本段為后文作者被困的地點鋪墊。介紹了自己的孤身勇探地窖的原因——takeapagefromherbook。地窖的特點:aricketyladder,murkydepths,old.Twelvefeetdeep都為后文鋪墊。梯子壞掉,女主人公摔下地窖,昏暗老舊的地窖和作者的恐懼心理關聯,12feetdeep(3.6米)說明無法爬出地窖。IhadpromisedmyhusbandthatIwouldn’texploredangerousareasunlessheorsomeoneelsewasaround.(鋪墊作者摔下地窖無法自救時的懊悔心理)ThoughIknewIwasstretchingit,IfiguredthatAngelicawouldcountasmycompanion.(鋪墊后文小貓作為同伴陪伴并救出作者的情節)Iwasreadytoexplorethiscellar,andsowasshe.Iequippedmyselfwithagoodflashlightandwarmclothes,(鋪墊摔下地窖后有手電幫助作者緩解恐懼心理并觀察所處環境的尋找出路)andcarefullystarteddownthericketyladderwhileAngelicawaslookingdownatmefromabove.(沒有一起下去,鋪墊后文作者摔下地窖后往上看到小貓的情節)FaintcrackandsuddencrashwerewhatIcouldremember.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右:2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。Paragraph1Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor._______________________________________________________Paragraph2Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,wasmylasthope.________________文本分析:故事梗概:TheprotagonistreceivedanabandonedstraycatnamedAngelicabeforeChristmas.Angelicagetsalongharmoniouslywithhermaster'sfamily,isbraveandintelligent,andhasbecomeherfaithfulcompanion.Theowner,byunderstandingAngelica'sbravery,decidedtobecomebraveaswell.So,theownerdecidedtoexploretheundergroundstonecellarathome,andAngelicabecameherexplorationcompanion.However,theownerfellontheladderofthestonecellar.Angelicapromptlynotifiedtheowner'shusbandtocomeforrescue.ThestoryreflectstheimportanceofcourageandresponsibilitythattheprotagonistlearnedfromAngelica.續寫思路分析:Paral.Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.首句分析:Wokeup和前文結尾處的whatIcouldremember照應,說明作者摔下地窖后陷入昏迷,時間未知。Rotting,brokenladder照應前文faintcrackandsuddencrash,可知作者摔下地窖的原因是梯子年久失修而腐爛斷裂。從第二段的首句可知,本段中主要描寫作者在醒來后用不同的方式自救。大概情節推斷:腿傷——利用手電探查環境和尋找出口未果——抬頭呼救(期待)未果((懊悔,害怕)——發現小貓;(如何自救?我的心情?結果如何?)Para2.Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,wasmylasthope.首句分析:根據句中mycompanion,Angelica可知,續寫第一段中在作者摔下地窖昏迷后小貓并沒有離開,而是作為一個忠實的陪伴者在守護作者。Wasmylasthope可知,作者之前嘗試了不同逃離地窖的方式,但是沒有成功。最后的希望是小貓,暗示本段將講述小貓如何利用自己的智慧幫作者脫困。大概情節推斷:嘗試與小貓交流——小貓離開(期待,擔憂)——獲救(慶幸,感激)——尾聲(主題升華,首位呼應)(如何讓小貓救我?我的心情?結果?)主題:ThethemeofthearticleisaboutthestoryofAngelica,anabandonedstraycat,andtheowner'sexperienceofbecomingbraveandadventurousunderherinfluence.Atthesametime,thestoryalsoconveystheimportanceofresponsibilityandbravery.參考范文:Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.Iwokeuponthestonefloorwithasplittingheadacheandunclearthinking.Istumbledonthethirdstepandtheladdercollapsed,causingmetofalltotheground.Myleftarmisinseverepain,andIknowit'sbroken.Iamtrappedinthedarkground,unabletoclimbout,lonelyandhelpless.Irequestedrescue,butmyvoiceechoed,emptyandpowerless.Asdespairwasabouttoengulfme,Iheardafaintbutfamiliarmeow.Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,wasmylasthope.Ipraythatshewillrealizethatthesituationisnotrightandcometosaveme.Herbravenatureandloyalqualitiesgavemeaglimmerofhope.Lyinginthedarkness,Itriedtocalmmybreathingandlistentoa

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