2020-2021學(xué)年新北師大版高中英語(yǔ)必修2：Unit4InformationTechnology單元寫作梳理SectionⅥWriting——個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介本單元的寫作項(xiàng)目屬于新課標(biāo)中應(yīng)用文體類別中的個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介。個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介一般用來(lái)在參加某個(gè)俱樂(lè)部或某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)時(shí)簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己。個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介一般包括用戶名、年齡、地址、自我簡(jiǎn)介、參加該俱樂(lè)部原因等。Ⅰ.Pre－writing(Ⅰ)LearntowriteafterthemodelUsername HappyHermioneAge 17Mylocation(optional) WuhanAboutme I’maseniorsecondaryschoolstudentandmyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.Ialsoenjoyhistoryandgeography,andIloveexploringnewplaceswithmyfamily.Inmyfreetime,I’musuallyinthelibraryorattheparkwithagoodbook.I’vealwayslovedtoread!Ithinkreadingisjustanotherwayofexploringtheunknownworld.It’sanexcitingexperienceforme.That’swhyIbelievethatbooksaboutforeignculturesorimaginaryworldsarethebest！Favoritetypesofbooks FantasyandtravelFavoritebooks IlikeallthebooksintheHarryPotterseries.However,Ibelievethefirstoneisthebest.Inmyopinion,theauthordidanamazingjobofcreatingawholenewworldthroughthisbook.Afterreadingit,Iwantedtofindoutwhathappenedtoeachofthecharacters.IlikeHermionemost,becausewehavealotincommon.Arethereotherreaderswhoalsolikeher？Reasonforjoiningthereadingclub Ithinkit’sfuntohearaboutnewbooksthatotherpeopleenjoy.Isthereafantasybookthatyoureallylike?Let’sshareideas.(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①advantagen．優(yōu)勢(shì)；有利條件②graduationn.畢業(yè)③applicationn.申請(qǐng)④confidencen.自信⑤choosev.選擇⑥favoriteadj.最喜愛的⑦explorev.探索⑧enjoyv.享受；喜歡⑨beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣⑩wouldliketodo...想要做……?prefertodo...更喜歡，寧愿?inone’sopinion依某人看來(lái)?findout找出；查找；發(fā)現(xiàn)?inone’ssparetime在某人的業(yè)余時(shí)間Ⅱ.While－writing假定你是李華，17歲，就讀于濟(jì)南某中學(xué)。你校成立了青年志愿者協(xié)會(huì)，你想報(bào)名參加，于是向協(xié)會(huì)提出申請(qǐng)，簡(jiǎn)要介紹你自己并陳述你加入這個(gè)組織的理由。理由包括：1.在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)里幫助別人是禮貌行為，且我們處于困境時(shí)也需要他人幫助；2.通過(guò)幫助別人，自己獲得體驗(yàn)，增強(qiáng)信心；3.志愿者活動(dòng)使生活更有意義，使世界更美好。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Username:LiHuaAge：17Mylocation(optional)：Jinan,ChinaAboutme：簡(jiǎn)要自我介紹ReasonforjoiningtheYoungVolunteersAssociation：禮貌行為；獲得體驗(yàn)，增強(qiáng)信心；使生活更有意義，使世界更美好Step2Listthewords,phrasesandsentences.1．Wordsandphrases①excellentadj.優(yōu)秀的；卓越的②mannersn.禮貌③experiencen.體驗(yàn)；經(jīng)歷④rewardingadj.有益的；值得的⑤begoodat擅長(zhǎng)于⑥getalongwellwith與……相處融洽⑦lastbutnotleast最后但并非最不重要的是⑧incase以防萬(wàn)一⑨buildupone’sconfidence建立自信心⑩makeadifference有影響；起(重要)作用2．Sentences①我們能夠通過(guò)幫助他人來(lái)提高自己，因?yàn)槲覀兛梢栽诜?wù)他人的時(shí)候獲得有價(jià)值的體驗(yàn)，增強(qiáng)信心。(beabletodo；while)Weareabletoimproveourselvesbyhelpingothersbecausewecangainvaluableexperienceandbuildupourconfidencewhileservingothers．②志愿者活動(dòng)使我們自我感覺更好，從而使我們的生活更有意義。(make復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))Volunteeringmakesusfeelbetteraboutourselves，thusmakingourlifemoremeaningful．Step3Draftaprofilebyusingthefollowingwords.besides,lastbutnotleast,firstofall,second,what’smore,moreimportantly，inawordUsername LiHuaAge 17Mylocation(optional)： Jinan,ChinaAboutme I’manexcellentstudent,amongthetop3inmyclass.MyfavoritecourseisEnglishandI’mgoodatEnglish,especiallyspokenEnglish.Inmysparetime,IlikereadingChinesenovelsandancientpoems.Beinganactiveyoungperson,Ilikesportsandoutdooractivities.Besides,I’measytogetalongwellwithandIliketomakefriends.Lastbutnotleast,Iliketohelpothers.ReasonforjoiningtheYoungVolunteersAssociation Firstofall，itisgoodmannerstohelpothers，especiallyinmodernsociety.Weneedothers’helpincasewegetintotrouble.Second，wecangainvaluableexperienceandbuildupourconfidencewhileservingothers.What’smore，volunteeringmakesusfeelbetteraboutourselves，thusmakingourlifemoremeaningful.Moreimportantly，wecanmaketheworldabetterplacetoliveinbyvolunteering.Inaword，volunteeringcanmakeadifferencetoourlife，andIthinkitisveryrewardingtobeavolunteer.Ⅲ.Post－writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner,andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Istheformatofthepersonalprofileappropriate?□2.Arethereanyspellingmistakes?□3.Arethereanygrammaticalmistakeslikethetenses(時(shí)態(tài))?□4.Doesthepersonalprofileincludeallthemaincontents?□5.IssimpleandinformalEnglishcorrectlyused?2．長(zhǎng)短句交替使用長(zhǎng)句和短句各有其優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。在具體語(yǔ)言活動(dòng)中，最好長(zhǎng)短句交替使用。這既體現(xiàn)了節(jié)奏上的要求，也是意義上的需要。3．巧用連接詞要想使文章有整體性、連貫性，就要正確使用連接詞。例如：first,second,third,lastbutnotleast。亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)1．Itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunity/chancetointroducemyself.今天有機(jī)會(huì)進(jìn)行自我介紹深感榮幸。2．Iam...yearsold,bornin...Province,northeast/southeast/southwest...ofChina,andIamnowastudentin...我今年……歲，出生在……省，它位于中國(guó)的東北/東南/西南……部。我目前是……的學(xué)生。3．Ienjoybasketball/volleyball/football/badminton/pingpong.我喜歡籃球/排球/足球/羽毛球/乒乓球。4．Ilookforwardtobecomingpartof...我希望成為……的一員。5．Ihavelotsofinterests,suchassinging,dancing,drawingandsoon.我有很多興趣愛好，如唱歌、跳舞、畫畫等。6．Tosumup,IbelieveIcanbeaqualifiedvolunteer.IwillvalueitanddoallIcanifIcouldbeacceptedtobeone.總而言之，我相信我能成為一名合格的志愿者。如果我被接受作為一名志愿者，我會(huì)珍惜它，盡我所能來(lái)做好。7．Inaword，volunteeringhasbroughtmanybenefitstooursociety，thosewhoareinneedaswellasthevolunteersthemselves.Therefore,letusenjoythetimewhenservingasavolunteer.總之，志愿服務(wù)為我們社會(huì)帶來(lái)了許多好處，也給那些有需要的人以及志愿者自己帶來(lái)了好處。因此，讓我們好好享受作為一個(gè)志愿者的時(shí)光吧。8．Inaword,I’dliketohelppeoplewhoneedhelp.Ifeveryonehelpsoutabit,theworldwillbemorecolorful.總之，我想幫助那些需要幫助的人。如果每個(gè)人都能幫上一點(diǎn)忙，世界就會(huì)變得更加多彩。寫作技巧1．注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局開始部分——說(shuō)出文中的要點(diǎn)、核心問(wèn)題。正文部分——圍繞主題展開敘述。結(jié)尾部分——對(duì)全文的總結(jié)和概括。要做到全文中心突出，段落之間必須是有機(jī)的聯(lián)系，內(nèi)容完整、連貫。語(yǔ)言知識(shí)積累關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的常用口語(yǔ)1．Doyouoftenshoponline?你經(jīng)常網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物嗎？2．SometimesIsurfonlineshopstocheckoutwhattheyhaveandthengotoaphysicalstoretodotheactualshopping.有時(shí)候，我會(huì)逛逛網(wǎng)店，看看店里有什么，然后到實(shí)體店去買。3．Canthequalityofgoodsonlinebeguaranteed?網(wǎng)上商品的質(zhì)量能有保證嗎？4．Pricesareoftenrelativelyloweronline.通常，網(wǎng)上的價(jià)格相對(duì)比較低。5．EventhoughIshoponline,Idon’tthinkit’sthebestwaytoshop.雖然我在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物，但我認(rèn)為這并不是最好的購(gòu)物途徑。6．Youcanapplyfora