讀后續寫：籃球少年

一,＞原文

Nickwasnew,sohedidn'thavemanyfriends.Onedaywhenhesatbyhimselfatlunch,

theheadmasterwalkedinandannouncedthatitwasthebasketballseason,sotheyneededto

practiceafterschooltill6.Nicksmiled.Helovedplayingbasketball.

Laterthatdayitwastimetogotothefirstpracticeoftheseason.Therewereotherguys

andtheyallsattogethertalking,butNickjustsatthereandwaited."Alrightboys!Lineup

andtellmeyournames/9thecoachdemanded."Ricky,Derick,Josh,Dan,Nick."they

answered,oneafteranother.Practicewentonandthecoachbegantotryouttheboys.Ricky

andhisfriendsdidreallygood.ButthecoachranoutoftimebeforehecouldtryoutNick.

Thenextday,RickyandhisfriendscameuptoNickandtoldhimhewasn'tgood

enoughthoughtheyhadneverseenhimplay.Nicksaidnothing.Soonenoughitwastimefor

Nicktotryout."Wewillstartwithfreethrows/9thecoachsaid.Nickstoodonthefreethrow

lineandthenshot.Hedidn'tmissoneshot.Theboyswereamazed.Rickywasmadbecause

theywereallgivingtheattentiontoNick.ThecoachinformedNickthathemadetheteam.

Alltheboyswerecongratulatinghim.

Nickwashappythathewasontheteamanditwasagoodwaytomakefriends.Ricky

juststoodthereandlookedathiminanger.RickyalwaysgottheattentionbutnowNickdid

becausehe'sanamazingplayer.ThenextdaycameandNickwenttolunch.Hesatbyhimself

andthenextthingheknewwasthatthetablehewassittingatwasfilledwithallthe

basketballplayersexceptRicky.

Soonenoughitwastimefortheirfirstgame.Thegamewasacloseone...Therewere5

secondsleftandRickyhadtheball.EveryonewasblockedbutNickwasopen."Fmopen.I'm

open,“Nicksaidoverandover.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式作答。

Parctgraph1:Rickysawthathewasopenbuthedidn'tcare.

Paragraph2:NickdecidedtotalktoRickyaftertheyfailedthegame.

二、分句練習

Rickysawthathewasopenbuthedidn'tcare.

?他只是狠狠地看了一眼之前點燃他怒火的尼克，決定自己投籃。

HejustcastasharpglanceatNickwhofueledhisangerbefore,anddeterminedtoshoot

byhimself.

?他剛邁步向前，對方的幾個隊員就沖向他，限制他的投籃。

Hardlyhadhesteppedforwardwhenseveralmembersoftheopposingteamrushedto

himandrestrictedhisshooting.

?在全場觀眾的注視下，球還是被扔了出去，彈到籃筐上，落在地上。

Undertheentireaudience'sgaze,theballwasstillthrownout,bouncingofftherimand

fallingtotheground.

?隨著哨聲劃破寂靜，球隊籠罩在失敗的陰影中，而他們的對手則在勝利中大笑和尖

叫。

Withthewhistlepiercingthroughsilence,theteamwascloudedbyfailure,whiletheir

competitorslaughedandscreamedintriumph.

NickdecidedtotalktoRickyaftertheyfailedthegame.

?然而，瑞奇還是睜一只眼閉一只眼，毫不遲疑地從他身邊走過。

However,Rickystillturnedablindeyetohimandwalkedpasthimwithoutdelay.

?尼克幾乎無法抑制他強烈的情緒，但他努力讓自己冷靜下來，因為他清楚地知道，

贏得即將到來的比賽是頭等大事。

Nickalmostcouldn'trestrainhisstrongemotions,buthestruggledtocalmdown,since

heclearlyknewthatwinningthegamewhichwasaroundthecomerwasontopofthe

agenda.

?于是他緊緊抓住里基的胳膊，向他解釋他們面臨的情況。

SohegrabbedRicky'sarmfirmlyandexplainedthesituationtheyfaced.

?“我們應該共同努力!’‘聽到尼克的話，里奇羞愧地低下頭，為自己的自私行為向尼克

道歉。

“Weshouldmakejointefforts!,9HearingwhatNicksaid,Rickyloweredhisheadin

shame,apologizingtoNickforhisselfishbehavior.

?兩個人在陽光燦爛的天空下擁抱在一起。

Thetwoguysembracedeachotherunderthesunshiningbrightlyinthesky.

教師下水文：

Rickysawthathewasopenbuthedidn'tcare.

?沒有回應尼克，里基是那么自負和驕傲，他焦急地加快步伐向前投籃。

NotrespondingtoNick,SoconceitedandproudwasRickythathequickenedhispace

anxiouslyforwardandshottheball.

?“我會證明我是得分最高的人，你永遠不能搶走我應得的關注。”里奇低聲說。

“IwilldemonstrateIamthehighpointscorerandnevercanyoustealthespotlightI

deserve.^^whisperedRicky.

?遺憾的是，球繞著球網轉了一圈又彈了出來。

Regrettably,theballcircledaroundthenetandbouncedout.

?隨著哨聲吹響，他們輸掉了第一場比賽。

Withwhistleblowing,theylostthefirstgame.

?瑞克情緒低落，以最快的速度向更衣室跑去，努力避開周圍的目光。

Downinspirits,Ricktrottedtowardsthechangingroomasfastashislegscouldcarry

him,endeavoringtoavoidthegazearoundhim.

NickdecidedtotalktoRickyafteytheyfailedthega加e.

?猶豫了一會兒，尼克鼓起勇氣對里奇說:“里奇，其實我是懷著一種強烈的愿望來這

里交朋友的。我想知道你是否愿意把個人榮譽放在一邊。”

Havinghesitatedforawhile,NickpluckedupallhiscouragetospeaktoRicky,“Ricky,

actuallyIcomeherewithaburningdesiretomakefriends.Iwonderifyouarewillingtoset

asidepersonalglory.^^

?里基驚訝地揚起眉毛，直視著這個新來的人，尷尬又悔恨。

Raisinghiseyebrowsinastonishment,Rickylookedthenewmanstraightintheeye,

withamixtureofembarrassmentandremorseoverwhelminghim.

?“我為我的自私感到抱歉。讓我們馬上練習投籃和傳球籃球。”瑞奇說。

“Iamsorryformyselfishness.Lefspractiseshootingandpassingbasketball

immediately.^^Rickyuttered.

三、短語積累

throw/shoottheball投籃ontopoftheagenda首要議程；重中

castasharpglanceatsb銳利地瞥了一之重

眼某人embrace擁抱

fuelone'sanger激起某人怒火withhisvoicechoked聲音哽咽著

stepforward向前走Enormoussenseoffrustrationoverwhelmedhim.巨大

restrict限制的挫敗感壓倒了他。

undertheentireaudience'sgaze在全場觀swalloweddownhisrage停止憤怒

眾的注視下interrupt打斷

bounceofftherim撞到籃筐反彈jealous-jealousyenvious-envy嫉妒的一

thewhistlepiercedthroughsilence口哨聲嫉妒n.

劃破寂靜respondtosb回應某人

becloudedby被……籠罩conceitedadj.自負

intriumph勝利地，得意洋的

洋地quickenone'space加快腳步

turnablindeyetosb對...視而不demonstrate證明

見scorern.得分者

withoutdelay立即，毫不耽擱spotlight=attention

restrainsbfromdoingsth抑制某人做某regrettablyadv.令人

事遺憾地

grab抓住circlearound...圍著……

makejointeffort做出共同努力轉圈

inshame羞愧地bounceout跳出去

apologizetosbforsth為某事向某人whistleblows口罩（被）

道歉吹響

aroundthecomer即將到來的bedowninspirits心情沮喪

地gloryn.光榮，榮

thechangingroom更衣室譽

asfastasone'slegscouldcarrysb（人）彳艮raiseone'seyebrowsinastonishment驚訝

快地挑眉

thegazearoundsb周圍人的looksbstraightintheeye直視某人

注視withamixtureofembarrassmentandremorse

pluckupone'scouragetodosth鼓起勇氣overwhelmingsb

做某事尷尬又

withaburningdesiretodosth帶著做某后悔地

事的渴望selfishnessn.自私

setaside才巴....

放在一邊

sbreallywanttodosth一sb'sstrongdesireunawareofthesignificanceofteamwork.

todosthtakeoversb'smind.

Hisstrongdesiretoprovehispersonalability

tookoverhismind,whichmadehimcompletely

四、最終范文

學生優作：

Rickysewthathewasopenbuthedidn'tcare.HejustcastasharpglanceatNickwho

fueledhisangerbefore,anddeterminedtoshootbyhimself.Hardlyhadhesteppedforward

whenseveralmembersoftheopposingteamrushedtohimandrestrictedhisshooting.Under

theentireaudience9sgaze,theballwasstillthrownout,bouncingofftherimandfallingtothe

ground.Withthewhistlepiercingthroughsilence,theteamwascloudedbyfailure,while

theircompetitorslaughedandscreamedintriumph.

NickdecidedtotalktoRickyafteytheyfailedthegame.However,Rickystillturneda

blindeyetohimandwalkedpasthimwithoutdelay.Nickalmostcouldn,trestrainhisstrong

emotions,buthestruggledtocalmdown,sinceheclearlyknewthatwinningthegamewhich

wasaroundthecornerwasontopoftheagenda.SohegrabbedRicky'sarmfirmlyand

explainedthesituationtheyfaced."Weshouldmakejointefforts!,9HearingwhatNicksaid,

Rickyloweredhisheadinshame,apologizingtoNickforhisselfishbehavior.Thetwoguys

embracedeachotherunderthesunshiningbrightlyinthesky.

教師下水文：

Rickysawthathewasopenbuthedidn'tcare.NotrespondingtoN