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試題呈現:When

Dr.Henderson

wasassigning(指定)

project

matesforhispsychologyclass,

IsecretlyhopedhewouldpairmewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateI

couldhavesomefunwith.

Aboveall,

Ihopedhewouldn'tassignmetoworkwiththefiercelypetitive,

extremely

serious

fellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonality

tomatch.

Asfate(命運)

wouldhaveit,

Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworkingwiththeonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.I

wentuptomynew

teammate

andintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIweren’tthere.

IfelthetreatedmeasthoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimtogetan“A”

inthecourse.

Hewasn’tmeanorabusive;he

justgavemetheimpressionhecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedupbetterifhedidit

alone.Needlesstosay,Ididn'tlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn'tsayanything

forfearthat

Imakethingsworse.Theprojectrequiredeachlabteamtodevelopahypothesis(假設),setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,

dothestatisticalanalysisandpresentthe

findings.Whatever

grade

theteamreceivedwouldbe

shared

bybothstudents.WhenmyteammateandImetto

discuss

ourproject,

I

wasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohadareputationforsinglemindedness

and

goodgradestheexactoppositeofme.

Iactuallywantedtodroptheclassatonepoint,

butstoppedshortbecauseIdidn'twanttogivehimthe

satisfaction

ofmychickeningout.

Idecidedtosticktoitnomatterwhat.Afterlong

discussions,

wesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwellbeingforteenagers.I

wasn'tsurewhatitmeant

butatleastwehadatopic.注意:1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;Paragraph1:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Paragraph2:OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.優秀作品1:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Atfirst,hetooktheleadingrole,andIjustwrotedownhisideas.Atsomepoint,agoodideahitme,butIhesitatedtospeakitout.Myteammateseemedtobecapableofreadingmymindandencouragedmetobeinvolvedindevelopingahypothesistogetherwithhim.RealizingthathewasnotsoseriousasIhadimagined,Idiscussedsomedetailswithhim,duringwhich,tomysatisfaction,Ilearnedalotabouthisbrilliantperceptionsofspace.WhileIcouldn’tsitstillforlong,it’snotunmonthatheworkedfarintonighttobthroughthestatistics.109WOnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.Feelingupset,Iwenttoseehim,carryingwithmesomefruit,onlytofindhewasaloneinaward,lookinghelpless.Iofferedtoacpanyhim,butheinsistedthathewasOKwiththehelpofdoctorsandnurses,andthatIshouldgoonwiththeproject.Inoddedandtookupwherehestopped.WheneverIranintotrouble,IwouldturntotheInternetorcallhimforhelp.ThepresentationdaycameandouruniqueinsightsintospacewontheapplauseofourclassmatesandDr.Gullickson.Wegotthehighestgrade!WhenIsharedthenewswithmyteammates,hegavemeathumbsup.Eversincethen,wehavebeenbestfriends.107優秀作品2:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Serious

asmyteammatewas,wegradually

grewingoodtunewith

eachother.He

hadawaywithtechnicalthings

and

approachedeverydetail

withaclearpurpose.AndIsparednoefforttodomybit,

collectingdata

and

recordingresults

carefully,soasto

makeupfor

my

academicdisadvantage.I

fullydiscussedmyideas

andsharedmyinsightswithhim,whowasonce

indifferent

but

laterlistenedtome

withcloseattention.Weweremakingsteadyprogresswithour

project.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.ThemomentIsawhimlyinghelplesslyinbed,Idecided

Ihadtoactaloneanddomybest.

Iassuredhim

Iwouldnotlethimdownandheshouldconcentrateonrecovering.

Ipouredmoretimeandenergy

intothat

project

thaneverbefore,andfinally

presentedourfindings

totheclass,whichsurprisinglyearnedus

anexcellentgrade!WhenItoldhimaboutoursharedsuccess,hesmiled.Ithadtodowithtrustandthejoyofsharingamonprize.優秀作品3:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupour,hisacademicexcellencedidputhiminauniquepositiontobeincharge.Iwatchedhimbusyinghimselfinthelab,curiouslyyetadmirably.Occasionally,hewouldsitdownasiftorturedbysomepains,whenhewouldmotionmetocontinue.Iwasgladtotakeoverandtriedtomakethebestofit.Themoretimeshequitforrest,themorechancesIhadtojustifythequalificationsashispartnerandthefaithhecouldputinme.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.Iwasindeedstartledthatthepainshe’dbeensufferingshouldprovetroublesome.Seeinghimconfinedtothehospitalbed,Ifeltforthefirsttimethathewasnolongerintense,norfiercelypetitive.Isharedmyworriesaboutthefinalpresentationbuthestoppedme,sayingfirmly“Youcanmakeit.”So,wemadethewardoursecondlab.ThebigmomentwasimpressivewhenIcarriedthroughourpresentationunexpectedlywell.Shownthe“Aplus”awardedbyDr.Gullickson,hebeamedabroadgrin.Ituckedhiminandsaidmerrily,“Justgetbetter.Wearepartners,everafter.”優秀作品4:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.panionasIwasintheproject,Istillhad

nosenseofparticipatingintheproject.Myteammatekepthisbrainoccupiedin

developingthehypothesis,

settingupanexperimenttotestit,andrunningthetestsalone

,leavingmejuststandingbesidehim

asifIwereafool.“Whatadullprojectitis!”

Imurmuredtomyself.However,

somethingchangedgradually,asIbecameawarewhatthe

psychologicalwellbeingofteenagers

meant.Thankstotheintense,

fiercelypetitive,

singularlyserious

fellow,thewholeprocedurewentsmoothly,closetothefinalstage.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.Withoutanydelay,Ipackedupmyschoolbag,tookalltheexperimentstatistics

andrushedtothehospital.Seeingthepalefellowwearingpurewhiteclothesinsteadoftheannoyingdarkclothes,Ifeltasenseofsympathyandmercywellingupinmyheart.Withhisguidance,Ifinishedthe

statisticalanalysis

and

presentedthefindings.ItturnedouttobesuchanamazingandpersuasivestudythatmyteammateandIdidwinthebestgrade.Now,wehavebeenmostreliablecooperativepartnerseversince!優秀作品5:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Ireallyhadbutterfliesinmystomachinthebeginning.Butaswegraduallygotacquaintedwitheachother,Idiscoveredthathewasactuallymoreshythandistant.Ihadtoadmitthatitwashethatwaspushingaheadwithmostoftheproject.ButhedidletmeparticipateasmuchasIcouldandofferedtimelyhelpwhennecessary,thusmakingmyconcernsthingsofthepast.IguessedIcouldseewhyDr.Gullicksonpairedhimwithme.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.Itwasdrawingclosetothefinalpresentation.Andasfatewouldhaveit,thereremainedonlyonesingleguytofaceit.However,Ididn’twantourprojecttoendinfailure,whichwouldcertainlybeanotherblowtomyhospitalizedpartner.Itookovertherestoftheworkanddevotedallmyselftoit,informinghimofdailyupdatesandmeanwhilegettingencouragementoverthephone.WhenIfinallyshowedupinhiswardwiththeAplusgrade,webothlaughedheartily.Weweregladthatwehadgotcloser,academicallyandemotionally.Andwewereluckytohavebeenpartnered.優秀作品6:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.

Initially,whenwe

discussed

myopinion,Ifelthewaseyeingmedoubtfullyasiftosayhowstupiditwas.Thenmypetitivenessaskedmenottogivein.Seeingthat,hewouldpatmeontheshoulder,insistingsmilingly,“Letmeexplainwhy.”Ihadtoadmithisintelligenceoutdidmeandhisrigourinfluencedmedeeply.Everytime,hecheckedthedatawithgreatcautionbeforeleavingthelab,hisfacesurprisinglypaleanddrawn.

OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.

Itreallystartledmeandfilledmewithregret.Ishouldn’thavebotheredhimsomuch.Ishouldn’thaveplainedfornoreason...However,hecalledmeandencouragedmetocontinue

alone.Ifoughtbacktears,promising,“Our

findings

mustbeperfect.”Thenextweekssawallmyeffortsinvestedinthe

project

withhisremoteguidance.Asfatewouldhaveit,InowewereawardedAby

Dr.Gullickson

atlast!

優秀作品7:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.

Wheneverwemet,Iwouldtrydesperatelytogethimto

takemeseriouslyasa

teammate.WhileIamusuallymorelaidback,forthisprojectIworkedhardtobeusefultothepartnership.Iconductedthoroughresearchonthetopicandactively

discussed

withhimmyideasonthematter.Aftersometime,Ibegantoseehimlooseninghisaloofdemeanor.Heusedtodisregardmypresence;Now,

helistened

intentlywhenIshard

withhimmythoughtsandinsightsontheproject.Itlookedlikethisnewpartnership

wasgoingwell.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.

WhenDr.Gullicksonfirstletmeknowaboutthesituation,IfeltageneralconcernformyteammatewhoIhad

growntorespecthistirelessworkethic.Iwasaskedtofinishtheprojectonmyown,wasreadytoprovetomypartnerthatIwould

notlethimdown.Iconductedthestatisticalanalysisoftheresultswegotfromtheexperimentswedidtogetherandpresentedourfindingstotheclass,allonmyown,withastandardforperfectionthatevenmyteammatewouldbeimpressedwith.Formyhardwork,theteamwasawardedaperfectmark.Intheend,

Iearnednotonlyrespectfrommyteammate,butalsothe

satisfaction

ofdeliveringgoodresultswhenhewasforcedtorelyonme.優秀作品8:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.ThoughIwantedtosharemyideaswithhimfully,IfailedtodosoforfearthatIwouldholdhimback.Ijustkeptnoddingwhenheaskedmewhetheritisoktodothiswayorthatway.Ithoughtitwasimpossibletopersuadehimintoacceptingmyviews,soIdidn’twanttowasteourtimetodiscuss.Istartedtowaittoleaveimmediatelywearrivedattheplace,andsodidhe.Ijusthopedthatthepresentationdaycouldeearlier.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.IfeltsosorrytohearthatandIthoughtIshouldvisithiminanycase.HewasalittlesurprisedtoseemewhenIsteppedintohiswardwithsomeflowersandfruits.Iofferedtodotherestworkofourproject

andheinvitedmeto

share

myideastoperfectit.Webegantoworkasafineteamandfinallyfinishedourprojectontime.Ourhardworkpaidoffand

Dr.Henderson’swasverysatisfiedwithourwonderful

findings.Fromthisproject,wealsolearnedthesignificanceof

teammates.Justasthesayinggoes,onepersoncangofar,butagroupofpersonscantravelfarther.優秀作品9:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Asexpected,myideaswerepletelyeclipsedbyhisintelligenceduringourfirstfewmeetingsanditseemedthattherewasnowaythatIcouldmakeacontributiontotheproject.However,myselfesteemwouldn’tallowmetoyieldtothechallengeandItookamoreactivepartinthetestofthehypothesis.Daysandnightswitnessedmydevotiontoobservingteenagersaroundusandinterviewingthempatientlyandlogically.Mydedicationgradually

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