環(huán)境保護話題作文策馬前途須努力，莫學(xué)龍鐘虛嘆息。目錄01佳作賞析03評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)04學(xué)以致用02寫作運用RubbishSortingStartswithMe

①Nowadays,

moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceof

rubbishsorting.Itisimportantforustocreateanenvironmentallyfriendly

society.Rubbishsortinghas②madeagreatcontributiontoenvironmental

protection.Atthesametime,

itcanreducerubbishgenerationandrecycle

rubbish.Herearesomesuggestionsforrubbishsorting.

Firstofall③,

wecanlearntheknowledgeofrubbishsortingthrough

booksandtheInternet.Besides,

wecanparticipateinvoluntaryserviceto

helppeoplesorttheirrubbish.Second③,

wearesupposedtoputallkindsof

rubbishintodifferentcolouredtrashcans.Third③,

wecanmakeoldclothes

intoshoppingbagsandwasteintoart.Andthemostimportantthingisto

reducetheuseofplasticbags.

④Ifallofustryourbesttosortrubbish,

we’llleadabetterlife.Allofus

candoourparttoprotecttheenvironmentandencourageotherstosorttheir

rubbish.⑤Let’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.

第一段：重要性和意義第二段：分析做法第三段：表達(dá)觀點

佳作賞析

①Nowadays,

moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceof

rubbishsorting.②

Itisimportantforustocreateanenvironmentallyfriendly

society.Rubbishsortinghas③

madeagreatcontributiontoenvironmental

protection.Atthesametime,

itcanreducerubbishgenerationandrecycle

rubbish.Herearesomesuggestionsforrubbishsorting.如今,越來越多的人已經(jīng)意識到...的重要性

寫作積累對我們來說，做...很重要Itisimportantforustodosth.Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceof...為...做出巨大的貢獻(xiàn)vmakeagreatcontributiontoreduce減少Firstofall③,

wecanlearntheknowledgeofrubbishsortingthroughbooksandtheInternet.Besides,

wecanparticipatein

voluntaryservicetohelppeoplesorttheirrubbish.Second③,

wearesupposedtoputallkindsofrubbishintodifferentcolouredtrashcans.Third③,

wecanmakeoldclothesintoshoppingbagsandwasteintoart.Andthemostimportantthingistoreducetheuseofplasticbags.邏輯順序短語Firstofall,Tostartwith,What'smore,Inaddition,Lastbutnotleast,Atlast,Finally,Moreover,Furthermore,Besides,Second,Third,

④Ifallofustryourbesttosortrubbish,

we’llleadabetterlife.Allofuscandoourparttoprotecttheenvironmentandencourageotherstosorttheir

rubbish.⑤Let’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.Ifallofustryourbesttodosth....,wewill...Let’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon如果我們盡我們最大努力做......我們將會......現(xiàn)在，讓我們齊心協(xié)力，行動起來。sortrubbish(動詞短語）垃圾分類rubbishsorting(名詞短語）

寫作運用時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時人稱第一人稱結(jié)構(gòu)123生態(tài)環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀環(huán)保措施呼吁123Pre-writing1While-writing

但近年來，地球上發(fā)生了許多災(zāi)難，同時很多人破壞環(huán)境。Dearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inShenzhen.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedonontheearth.manypeopledidsomethingwrongtotheenvironment.Meanwhile,1

因此,

越來越多的人意識到環(huán)境的重要性。我們應(yīng)該為我們的家園做出貢獻(xiàn)。Dearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inShenzhen.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedontheearth.Meanwhile,manypeopledidsomethingwrongtotheenvironment.

moreandmorepeopleenvironment.WemakecontributionstoAsaresult,Therefore,Asaresult,While-writingmoreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceof...makecontributionstoshouldourhomeshoulddosth.besupposedtoneedtodosth.hadbetterdosth.haverealizedtheimportanceofWhile-writing

首先，在日常生活中，節(jié)約用水和能源對我們來說很重要。比如，當(dāng)我們離開房間時應(yīng)該關(guān)燈。Firstofall,Itisimportantforsb.todousForexample,Weturnoffthelightinourdailylife.2Itisimportantforsb.todoturnoffthelightsavewaterandenergysavewaterandenergyaresupposedtowhenweleavetheroom.While-writing

其次，為了減少空氣污染，我們應(yīng)該出行乘坐公交車、騎自行車或步行。First,itisimportantforustosavewaterinourdailylife.Weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavetheroom.What’smore,inordertobybus，bybikeonfoot.goout2gooutairpollutioninordertoweorreducehadbetterairpollution,reduceWhile-writing

另外，我們要在扔垃圾前學(xué)會把垃圾分類，我們最好少用塑料袋。First,itisimportantforustosavewaterinourdailylife.Weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavetheroom.Second,inordertoreducetheairpollution,we’dbettergooutbybike,bybusoronfoot.Besides,webeforeWeplasticbags.sortouttherubbish2sortouttherubbishplasticbagsneedto

uselearntohadbetternotwethrow

it.

While-writing

最后，我們必須保護野生動物，我們吃他們是不對的。First,itisimportantforustosavewaterinourdailylife.Weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavetheroom.What’smore,inordertoreducetheairpollution,we’dbettergooutbybike,bybusoronfoot.Besides,weshouldlearntosortouttherubbishbeforewethrowit.We’dbetternotuseplasticbags.Lastbutnotleast,wewildanimals.protect2wildanimalsItiswrongofustodosth.mustItiswrongofustodoeatthem.While-writing總而言之，在我看來，毫無疑問的是如果我們盡我們最大努力去保護環(huán)境，我們將會過上更好的生活?，F(xiàn)在，讓我們齊心協(xié)力，行動起來！

Let’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.

wewillAllinall,protectenvironmentlead3IfallofustryourbesttoLet’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon如果我們盡我們最大努力做......我們將會......現(xiàn)在，讓我們齊心協(xié)力，行動起來。Allinall，inmyopinion，thereisnodoubtthat

④abetterlife.inmyopinion,Ifallofustryourbesttodosth....,wewill...thereisnodoubtthat...thestandardofevaluation評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Let’sTryOurBesttoProtecttheEnvironmentDearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inShenzhen.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedontheearthandunusualweatherappearedveryoften.Besidesthebadthingswerecausedbytheterribleenvironment,manypeoplealsodidsomethingwrongtotheenvironment.AsstudentsinShenzhen,weshouldtryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.First,itisimportantforustosavewaterinourdailylife.Weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavetheroom.Second,inordertoreducetheairpollution,we’dbettergooutbybike,bybusoronfoot.Thesewayscanhelpprotecttheenvironment.Third,weshouldlearntosortouttherubbishbeforewethrowit.We’dbetternotuseplasticbags.What’smore,wemustprotectthewildanimals.Itiswrongofustoeatthem.Let’sstartfromdoingsmallthingsandtryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.Ifweallkeepdoingthesethings,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’stryourbest!

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學(xué)以致用IV.學(xué)以致用(一)在6月5日“世界環(huán)境日”到來之際,你們社區(qū)打算舉行義賣活動為綠

化小區(qū)環(huán)境出一份力?請你根據(jù)以下表格提示,用英語寫一篇倡議書,呼

吁更多人參與?

學(xué)以致用ACommunityCharitySaleTimeontheafternoonofJune1stPlaceatthecommunitygateItemsschoolthings,

toys,

clothes,

etc.Purposetoraisemoneytoplantmoretreesandflowers

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學(xué)以致用

Asweallknowtheenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseand

worsetheseyears.SoIthinkwemustdosomethingtoprotectthe

environment.

Butwhatcanwedo?Firstly,

wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplastic

bagswhenwegoshopping.Ithelpstoprotecttheenvironment.Secondly,

wecanreusetheoldtextbooksaspossibleaswecan.What’smore,

we

shouldalsoneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenweleavethe

classroomsinordertosaveenergy.

Inaword,

ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,

there

willbelesspollutionandourlifewillbebetter.ThereisonlyoneEarth.I

hopeeveryonecanprotectourenvironmentwell.

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