滿分練(十一)短文改錯+書面表達(dá)ⅠⅡ短文改錯(2023四川內(nèi)江三模)Lastsummer,IwenttoDjerba,Tunisia.ItwastrueoneofthemostattractivedestinationIhadevervisited.ImustadmitthatIhaveneverseensuchabeautifulcoastlinebefore.Ispentmostofmydayswalkingonthebeachbutenjoyingthesunandthepeacefulsoundofthewaves.Onmyfourdaythere,Itookatourandvisitedsomelocalattractions,includedtheElGhribaSynagogue.Andthatwasunforgettableexperience.Overall,IfeltsoluckytobetherebecauseofeverythingwasgoodthanIcouldeverimagine.I’mlookingforwardtoexploremoreofthisbeautifulcountrynexttime.ⅠⅡ[語篇解讀]本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要描述了作者去杰爾巴島旅行的經(jīng)歷。1.第二句:true→truly

考查副詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處要用副詞truly作狀語,修飾be動詞was。故將true改為truly。2.第二句:destination→destinations

考查名詞的數(shù)。根據(jù)“one

of

the

most

attractive”可知,后面加名詞復(fù)數(shù),表示“最……的之一”。故將destination改為destinations。3.第三句:have→had

考查動詞的時態(tài)。根據(jù)句意可知,“承認(rèn)”是過去的動作,“看見”這一動作發(fā)生在“承認(rèn)”之前,故用過去完成時。故將have改為had。ⅠⅡ4.第四句:but→and

考查連詞。分析句意可知,“walking

on

the

beach”和“enjoying

the

sun

and

the

peaceful

sound

of

the

waves”是并列關(guān)系,不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故將but改為and。5.第五句:four→fourth

考查數(shù)詞。根據(jù)句意可知,“在第四天,參觀了一些景點(diǎn)”,用序數(shù)詞表示。故將four改為fourth。6.第五句:included→including

考查非謂語動詞。句中已有謂語動詞“took”和“visited”,因此include應(yīng)用非謂語形式,“l(fā)ocal

attractions”和“include”之間是主動關(guān)系,故用現(xiàn)在分詞。故將included改為including。ⅠⅡ7.第六句:unforgettable前面加an

考查冠詞。泛指“一次經(jīng)歷”,要用不定冠詞修飾名詞,unforgettable以元音音素開頭,需用不定冠詞an。故在unforgettable前面加an。8.第七句:because后的of刪掉考查連詞。根據(jù)句意可知,because引導(dǎo)了原因狀語從句,because

of后只能跟名詞、短語等作賓語,不能接從句。故將because后的of刪掉。9.第七句:good→better

考查形容詞比較級。根據(jù)“than

I

could

ever

imagine”可知,要用形容詞比較級。故將good改為better。10.第八句:explore→exploring

考查非謂語動詞。look

forward

to

doing

sth.表示“期待做某事”,用動詞-ing形式作賓語。故將explore改為exploring。ⅠⅡ書面表達(dá)(2023四川自貢二診)假定你校英文報正在以“養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣,促進(jìn)我健康”為主題開展征文活動。請寫一篇短文,向報社投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1.介紹一項你的好習(xí)慣;2.該習(xí)慣對健康的影響;3.呼吁養(yǎng)成健康習(xí)慣。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.請在相應(yīng)位置作答。ⅠⅡGood

Habits,Good

Health

ⅠⅡGood

Habits,Good

HealthNowI’veformedagoodhabittoimprovemyhealth.Thatis,Iplaybasketballwithmyfriendsontheplaygroundfor40minuteseverydayafterschool.However,ayearago,becauseoftheheavylearningtasks,Ialwaysstayedintheclassroom,notparticipatinginafter-schoolactivitiestorelaxmyself.Asaresult,IfoundIcouldn’tconcentrateonmyschoolworkandalwaysfelttired.IrealizedIhadtoadjustmylifestyle.Then,IbeganplayingbasketballsinceIlikethissport.Now,Ifeelenergetic,andmylearningefficiencyissatisfactory.Astrongnationisbasedonitsstrongyouths.Asseniorthreestudents,weshoulddevelophealthyhabitsandhaveahealthybody.ⅠⅡ1.詞匯積累養(yǎng)成:form→develop任務(wù):task→assignment因此:asaresult→asaconseque