讀后續寫：VacationonUncle'sfarm

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Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.He

decidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.We

reachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusup

fromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.

HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanand

Kyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothe

frogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaul

wokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm/1hesaid.After

breakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUncle

Paultotakethesheepouttograze（吃草）.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUncle

Paulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.

Intheafternoon,1askedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahoseride,andhesaidyes,as

longasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,

mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowly

towardsthemountains."Don'tbelateforsupper/1UnclePaulcried,"andkeepto

thetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaul

andhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthe

brownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreatea

magicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（編織的）blanketspreadoutuponthe

groundjustforus.

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Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

優秀作文1:

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.ltappearedsoabruptlythat

Ihadtodragthereinviolently,whichquitefrightenedmyhorse,leadingittogallopcrazily

withoutanydirection.ArippleoffearpassedthroughmeandIbegantoyell,whichmade

thehorseevenmadder."Don'tletgotherope!Keepcalm!”Dadchasedandshoutedfrom

behind.Bendingoverthehouseback,Iheldthereintightlyandkeptstilltoavoidscaring

thehouseagain.Gradually,thehouse'spacesloweddownandthenstoppedinareallydeep

mountains,butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefoundushadlosttrackandgotlost.

Wedidn'tknowwherewewereanditgotdark.Parchedwithhungerandthirst,I

wonderedifwecouldfindwayback,soIkeptshoutingforhelpandhopedmyshoutscould

beheardbysomeone.Havingnocluetofindthetrack,Dadalsosoundedalittleworriedas

heremindedmetocalmdown.Allofasudden,itwassomeringingsoundthatcaughtmy

ears."River,Dad!”Ishoutedexcitedly,"UnclePaufsfarmisjustnearthevalley.Wecango

back!”Afteralongridedowntheriver,whatembracedusfirstwasthefamiliarsoundofthe

sheepandthegreatsightofthehighfarmhouse."You'relate!”Aswesteppedintothe

house,UnclePaulpattedatourshoulderandlaughedtous."Yes,butitisreally

animpressivevacation!”DadandIsmiledateachuseyestoeyes.

優秀作文2：

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.ltwassocutethatIwas

completelyattractedbyit.IwantedtohaveacloselookjustasIwasgettingoffthe

horse,however,Iunconsciouslykickedit.Theastonishedhorsebegantorunfast,

withmyDadrunningafterus.Strugglingtositonthehorseagain,itoccurredtome

thatUnclePaulhadtaughtmehowtostopahorse.Ipulledtheropebackheavilyand

shouted"Stop!”Thehorsestoppedrunning.ButthenwhatIcouldseewasariver,a

silentfieldandmyexhaustedDad.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wegotlostandcouldn*t

findthetrackbackanymore.Weattemptedtofindourwaybackbuteverythingin

sightwasstrange.Astheskywasincreasinglydark,horrorwelledupinmybrain.I

wouldneverhavethedeliciousdinner,neverfeedthechickensinthefarmhouseand

evennevercomebackhome!Sobbingviolently,IthrewmyselfintomyDad'sarms.

Wethendecidedtowait.Andfortunately,Isawthelightofthecarandheardasound

ofrunningtruck.UnclePaulfoundus!Whatagreatgaietyofreturninghomefroma

horriblefield!

優秀作文3

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse."Whatalovelyrabbit!”I

shoutedwitheyesglitteringwithterrificexcitement.Itwasquitedifferentfromthose

Isawinourcity,thusimmediatelystimulatingmyinterest.Dadwasalsostunned

bythisspecialrabbit,gawkingatitmotionlessly."Daddy,let'smakeitasourpet!”I

suggested,unexpectedlyreceivinghispromptagreement.Entirelyforgettingwhat

UnclePaulhadtoldus,wechasedafterthatprettyrabbit,franticwithrapture.

Unfortunately,socleverandswiftwasitthatitdisappearedintheforestbeforelong.

Notuntilthendidwerealizethatthelastrayoftwilightwasquicklydisappearing

amongthenumeroustreesandwecouldn'tfindourtrackatall!Wedidgetlost!

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Thebone-chilling

windhowledfiercelylikeawolf,makingthedarknessevenmoresuffocating."Dad,

whatcanwedo?”Ithrewmyarmsaroundhimtightly,quiveringandseizedbyhorror.

“AHisgoingwell!”Dadansweredinagentlevoice,calmandmollified.Wewandered

inthescaryforestanddidn'tknowwhathorriblethingwouldhappentous,hopingto

findthewayback.Suddenly,weheardthesoundofwaterrollingdowntheriver.We

wereoverthemoonanddecidedtofollowtheriver.Afterawhile,weheardthe

familiarsoundofsheepandthencaughtsightofthefarmhouse.Thefamilywere

waitingforusinthedistance.Seeingthis,Ifeltaradiantsmilelitupbothofourfaces.

優秀作文4

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorsewassoafraid

thatitbeganrunningferociously.Icouldfeeltheairbeatingagainstmyfaceheavily

andhearmydad'shystericalcryfromadistance.Myheartwaspumpingwildlyand

mybloodwaspulsingthroughmyveins.Ipulledbackthereins,distractedthehorse

andtriedeverymeanstostopthehorsebutinvain.Afterwhatseemedaneternity,

mydadcaughtupwithmebreathlesslyandmanagedtostopmyhorse.Butwefound

thatwewereindistress,withnotrackbesideus.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Theriverbesideuswas

stillandsereneunderthelastrayofsunshinebutwedidn'thavethemoodtoenjoyit.

Suddenly,itoccurredtousthattherewasalsoarivernearbythefarmhouse.

Realizingtherivermaybeaguideback,ourspiritssoaredandwebegantotrot

brisklyalongtheriver.Justafewminuteslater,catchingsightofthesilhouetteofthe

house,Ifeltafeelingofreliefandrelaxationsurgingthroughme.IcouldpictureUncle

Paul'ssmilingfaceandourdelicioussupperandIthoughttomyselfthatour

beinglostaddedaspecialtastetomyadventurousvacation,whichIwouldremember

allmylife.

優秀作文5

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AfraidthatImighthurt

thelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.However,it

becamescaredandstartedtorunlikecrazy.Allthiscoming,withoutwarning,Iwas

seizedbyfear."Don'tletgotherope!Keepcalm!"yelledDad.Ifollowedwhathetold

meto.Tomyrelief,itstoppedslowly.Butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefound

thatwehadbeenoffthebeatentrackandgotlost.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,I

wonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.Ikeptshoutingforhelp,hopingmyshouts

couldbeheardbysomeone,buttherewasnoreply.Dadsoundedalittleworriedashe

remindedmetocalmdown.Itwasthenthatmymindraced."Listen,Dad,therushing

riverwater/1Ishoutedexcitedly,"wecanreturntothefarmhousedowntheriver."

Beforelong,wecaughtsightofthelightsinthedistance.Weknewweweresafe.What

athrillingvacation,likeneverbefore,wehad!

優秀作文6

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Sostartledwasmyhorse

thatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.Iwasholdingonashardas1couldandmydad

wastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstopped

whenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthat

wehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartback

butthetrackwasnowhereinsight.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Mydadhadagreatideatofollow

thestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightabove

UnclePaul'sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome.Withdoubtfulthoughts

goingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn'tseehungrywolves.Werodealong

thedirt.Werodelikethewind.Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncle

tightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.

優秀作文7

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwasfurrywithacoat

ofgorgeousbrownhair.Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbeganto

scurryahead.nWhynotcatchitandbringitbacktoUnclePaul?Theymustbevery

happy."Withthisthought,Irodehardtohuntforit.Dadsawitandhadtofollowme.

Therabbitwasveryagile,soonenteringamountainforest.Wehadtogetdownthe

horses,continuingthechaseandtotallyforgettingthetrackback.Eventhoughwe

trieddesperately,therabbitwasoutofsightintheend.Thenwerealizedwewerein

thedeeppartofaforest.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Anddarkcloudsseemedtobe

gatheringinthesky.Takingoutthecellphone,wesoonfoundsomethingwaswrong:

nosignal.Andnocompass.Frightened,IstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionfor

thetroublefromhim."Maybewhatyouhavelearnedingeographyclassworks,"he

said,pointingtothestarsinthesky.IknewhemeanttheNorthStar.Soonwefound

therightdirection.Wehurriedbackfindingthehorses.Andtheriverwasinsight

again.Thefamilywasworriedandabouttocallthepolice.Atthesightofus,they

wererelievedandhuggedustightly.Therewasnothingmorememorablethanthis

rabbithuntinginmylife!

優秀作文8

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.DadandIfounditwasso

cutethatwedecidedtochaseit.Afterawhile,wewerecompletelylostintheforest.

Therewasnothingleftinoursightbutthetrees.aWemaynotbeabletomakeitback

tothefarmhouseintimeforsupper/*Ithoughttomyself.Afteraseriesoffruitless

attemptstofindawayout,wefelthungryandtired.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wegotstuckintheforest.

Andanunexpectedshoweraddedtothedifficultyofusinfindingawayhome,forall

thetrackswehadmadedisappearedbecauseoftherain.Iwasalmostontheedgeof

breakingdownwhenmyfathersaid,"Don'tworry,myson.Irememberthereisariver

nearthefarmhouse.Findtheriverandwewillbebackhome."Finally,wefoundthe

riverandgotbacktothehousealongit.Needlesstosay,weatealatedinner.

優秀作文9

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Startledbythewhite

fluffyrabbit,thehorsealmostthrewmeoffitsback.Ihurriedlytightenedmygripand

couldn'thelplettingoutscreams.Butafterweregainedourcalm,Iwasamusedboth

bythethrillandtheinnocenceofthelittlecreature.Seeingitfleeing,cheerily,I

turnedtomydad,“Dad,canwefollowit?”Mydadnoddedwithatolerantsmile.Soon

withoutconsciousness,weweremilesawayupintothemountainandwelosttrackof

therabbitandofcourse,thetrackUnclePaulhadaskedustokeepto.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Wehadtogetoffthehorsesand

triedtofigureoutthewayback,butaftermanyattempts,westillfailed-wegotlost.I

grewabitanxious,butwithdadaround,Ifeltallright.Asdarknessthickened,dad

believeditwassafertostayonthespotandwaitedforhelp.Itwasthenthatwe

enjoyedasymphonyofnature-thewarmbreezerufflingthroughthetrees,the

insectsbuzzingandotheranimalscontributingtheiruniquesounds...Thisserenity

endedasweheardshoutsandtorchescameintooursight.Atthistime,Ifelt

extremelygrateful,toPaulandTina,tothisvacationwithmydad,andtonature.

優秀作文10

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledout

loud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittle

creature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackinto

anotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothe

theterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedto

getlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,we

werestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthe

distancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatwe

shouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmightleadustothefarmhouseandnothing

seemedbetterthanthat.TimeappearedtobemerrierandshorterwhenIstayed

togetherwithDadandbeforelong,thefarmhousecameintosight.Whatathrilling

butmemorableexperienceitwas!

優秀作文11

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Iimmediatelygrewfond

n

ofthefurryrabbitandcalledoutexcit心dlyJDad!Look!Alarmed,therabbitranaway

inaflash.Ifollowediteagerly,hopingtocatchitasmytrophyforthetrip.Mydadjust

followedme,knowingitwasimpossibletostopme.Wetrackedtherabbitforabout

tenminutesuntilitgotcompletelyoutofsight.Depressedandtired,Isuggestedgoing

back.Butapparently,wehaddivergedfromthetrackUnclePaulwarnedusto

keep.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Thethoughtthatwe

mighthavegotlostinsuchdarknesssentshiversdownmyspine.Tearsoffearand

regretfilledmyeyes.Fortunately,DadwasnotsopanickedasIwas.Hekeptsilent

andlistenedverycarefullyashetookmyhorsereinandledtheway.Wehad

wanderedforwhatseemedlikeageswhensuddenlyarivercameintosight.Hopefully,

wecouldfindourwaybacktothefarmhouseifwefollowedtheriver.Finally,we

arrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper,butwhatanexperience!Itturnedout

there'salwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm.

優秀作文12

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwassoquickthatmy

horsewasscared.Thehorsestartedtoneigh,shiverandgraduallylosecontrol.It

suddenlyrantoanotherdirectionawayfromtheinitialtrackUnclePaulhaswarned

ustokeep.Mydadheldtheropetightlyinordertocalmthehorsedown.However,it

didn'twork.Ourcowboyhatswereevenlostwhilethehorsewasrunningwildand

finallywefelldownfromthehorseandthehorsejustranawayleavingmeandmy

dadlyingontheground.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Mylegswerehurtsothat

mydadhadtocarrymeontheback//Wegetlost,right?']askedmydad,"Yes.But

don'tworry,we'llfindthewaybackhome."Weslowlywalkedtowardstheluminous

direction/*!guesswe'relateforsupper//Sensingmyfearandconcerns,mydadtried

tomakemelaugh.Atthattime,wesawtheriverinfrontofus,"Dad,thisistheriver

nexttoourfarmhouse.Wecanfollowtherivertofindourwayhome,""Exactly!How

cleveryouare!"Thenwefollowedtheriverbankandfinallyourhousecameintoour

sight.Reflectingonthismemory,Iregardedthisexperienceasmyspecialadventure

withmydad.

優秀作文13

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Withoutthinking,Iheld

thereinbacktoavoidthelovelycreature.Beyondmywildestdream,myhorsegot

startledandranwild.Mydadacceleratedaswelltokeepmecompany,remindingme

loudlytoholdtheropetightly.Itseemedlikeacenturybeforemyhorsefinally

recoveredfromitsshockandsloweddownitspace.Oh,thankgoodness!Igotoffthe

horsetorelaxmyachinglegsandsorearms.However,myreliefwassoon

transformedintoconfusionandanxietywhenmyfathermentionedwehadbeenoff

thetrack.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Myfathertriedtocomfort

mebuthisseriousexpressionsuggestedthatitwouldbedangerousifwecouldn't

getbacktothetrack.Justatthatverymoment,thefamiliarsoundofrollingwater

caughtourattention.Almostatthesametime,weexclaimed“followtheriver”.Itwas

themostbeautifulmelodyintheworldthathelpedusfindourwaybacktothefarm

house.Thesmellofcookingmeatfilledtheairsurroundingus.Onarrivalatthedoor,

scoopedupbyUnclePaul,Ismiledwithrelief.

優秀作文14

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itgotsuchafrightthatit

rushedatahighspeed.I,frightenedtoo,grabbedthereintightly.Minuteslater,the

horsewasoffthetrackandIfoundthattherewasnosignofmydad.Inthemiddleof

nowhere,Ifeltawaveoffearwraparoundme.Worsestill,theraincamepouring

downandIwaswetthrough.Afterseeminglylonghours,therecamealoudcryofmy

dad.Asaquickresponse,Ishoutedinaloudvoice."Dad,I'mhere!"Tracingmyvoice,

Dadfinallyfoundmeandwegotreunited.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Themoonburstthrough

thecloudsandcastitssilverlightalloverthewetland.Wewanderedslowlyonour

horses,feelingatalosswhattodo.Suddenly,thesoundofafloatingrivercaughtmy

attention."Dad,maybewecanfindthefarmhousedowntheriver."Dadnoddedwith

approval.Withgreatcare,werodeourhorsesalongtheriver.Shortlyafterwards,

UnclePaul'sfarm,sureenough,cameintooursight.Finally,wegottothefarm,safe

andsound.Whatatriplikeneverbefore!

優秀作文IS

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorserearedintothe

air,letoutafrightenedwhinny,andgallopedoffthetrack.Iheldonfordearlife,

brancheslashingintomyarmsandface.Finallyhesloweddown,thenstopped,but

lookingaroundattheendlessseaoftrees,Iknewwehadgottenhopelesslylost.I

called;theonlyanswerwastherustlingofthewindinthetrees.Thehorse

meanderedthroughthelonesomepines,withmecontinuingtocallandscanthe

horizonforafamiliarlandmark,earsprickedforthesoundofahorseorahuman

voice.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.AtlastIheardthewelcomesound

ofrushingwater-theriver!Gratefullywewenttothebankanddrankourfill.We

followeditinthedirectionthatthesunhadset,andeventuallyheardthefamiliar

frogs,andsawthecomfortingsightoftheoldfarmhouse,mydadshiningahugelamp

fromtheporch,guidingourwayhome.

優秀作文16

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Normallythatwouldn't

botherahorse,butforsomereason,mymarewasalotmorenervousthannormal.

Maybeshethoughtitwasarattlesnake!Shestartedtoneigh,kickedupherheels,and

guesswhoslippedoffthesaddle?Luckily,theriverwasrightbesideusandIlanded

plunkinthewater.Thatcushionedthefall,soonlymypridewashurt.

WehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdarkEveningcamesofast,myclothes

hadnotevendried,butIwarmedupbyclimbingthehighestoaktreewecouldfindto

seeifIcouldmakeoutthelightsofthefarmhouse.NeverbeforehadIbeensobrave!

Isawawarm,yellowlightcomingthroughthekitchenwindowwhereUnclePaulwas

probablyhavingcoffee,andworriedsick.Weheadedbackinthatdirection,foundthe

track,andjoinedhimforahotdinner.Thatwasenoughadventureforoneday.

優秀作文17

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itriedtoveerthehorse

lefttoavoidthelittlerabbit,butthehorsegotupset.Itshotitstwofrontlegsup,andI

heldontothesaddletightly.Mydadturnedaroundandshouted,“Holdon!"Allofa

suddenthehorsewasquicklygallopingaway,andwewerewayoffofthetrack.My

dadtriedtokeepupbehindus.Eventually,myhorsesettleddown,andmydadandI

gottostop.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Iturnedtomydadandsaid,“Well,

onethingisforsure,we'regoingtobelatefordinner.UnclePaulisn'tgoingtobe

veryimpressed/1Justthen,UnclePaulappearedamidthetallgrasses,ridinghisown

horse.Prettysoon,weallfoundourwaysafelybacktothefarmhouse.

優秀作文18

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorseboltedtothe

rightasIheldontightlyandtriednottofall.Icouldheardmydadcallingmynameas

thegroundbecameablur.Severalminuteswentbyasmyhorsesloweddowntoatrot

andthenstoppedbesideariver.IlookedaroundandrealizedIhadnocluewhereI

was.AfteranhourofwanderingaroundwithmyhorseIfinallyfoundmydad.Hegave

meahugandItoldhimweweregoingtobelateforsupper.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Thestarscameoutandgaveusa

littlelighttogobyaswetrekkedthroughthewoodsyellingeverysooftenincase

UnclePaulwaslookingforus.LuckilyIhadmydadwithmeandhetoldmejokesto

makemefeelbetter.AfterwhatmusthavebeenseveralhoursIsuddenlyheardthe

familiarsoundofsheepinthedistance.Ifthesheepwereouttograzeearlier,thathad

tomeantheyhadgonebacktothefarmhousebynow.Igrabbedmydad'sarmandwe

bothrodeourhorsestowardthesoundoftheanimals.AswegotcloserwesawUncle

Paulintheyardwithaflashlightwavingusover.Whatanight!

優秀作文19

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpected

appearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly.Itriedmybesttocontrol

it,butinvain.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffrom

fallingoff.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforeariver,outofbreath,

andsodidI.Atthatmoment,mydadalsocameup.SeeingIwasOK,hewasquite

relieved.Butitwasclearthatwegotlost.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Wedidn'tknowwherethefarm

housewas.Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.Butit

wasreallydifficultforusins