【2023·浙江省溫州市高三下學期二模】JuliaalwaysenjoyedrunningthroughTheDarkWalk隧道的潮濕陰暗，烘托出人物內心的害怕towardsthelightattheendofit從黑暗跑向光明，暗示文章最后鱒魚也得到了救贖.Itwasadark,damptunnel(隧道)madeofsmoothbranches.Thisyearshehadtheextrajoyofshowingittohersmallbrother,Stephen,andterrifyinghimaswellasherself.隧道的潮濕陰暗，烘托出人物內心的害怕從黑暗跑向光明，暗示文章最后鱒魚也得到了救贖Onedaytheyfoundaholeononesideofthewalk.Insidetherewaswater,inwhichtheyperceivedapantingtrout象征著仍在為生活的困難而掙扎的人們,以及他們面對困難永不放棄的信念(喘息的鱒魚).Theywerebothsoexcitedthattheywerenolongerafraidofthedarknessastheybentdownandpeeredatthefishpantinginhistinyprison說明鱒魚困在洞里，后文Julia將其放生，鱒魚從他的prison里重獲自由,hissilverstomachgoingupanddownlikeanengine;otherwisehewasmotionless.JuliawonderedwhatheateandthoughtofhishungerJulia一系列的擔憂，暗示下文她決定要幫助鱒魚，放回河里.Shefoundhimaworm.Heignoredthefood,andjustwentonpanting.Bendingoverhim,shethoughthowhehadbeeninthere.Allthewinter,inthedarktunnel,allday,allnight,floatingaroundalone.象征著仍在為生活的困難而掙扎的人們,以及他們面對困難永不放棄的信念說明鱒魚困在洞里，后文Julia將其放生，鱒魚從他的prison里重獲自由Julia一系列的擔憂，暗示下文她決定要幫助鱒魚，放回河里Nobodyknewhowthefishgotthere.Hermother父母親討論鱒魚的來源，但都沒有表露出想去救他，暗示Julia才是最后拯救鱒魚的孤勇者suggestedthatabirdhadcarriedtheegg.Herfatherthoughtthatinthewinterasmallstreammighthavecarrieditdownthereasababy,andithasbeensafeuntilsummercameandthewaterbegantodryup.父母親討論鱒魚的來源，但都沒有表露出想去救他，暗示Julia才是最后拯救鱒魚的孤勇者Beforetheywenttobed,Stephenaskedhismummythewholestoryofthetrout,notreallyinterestedintheactualtrout,butinthestorywhichhismumbegantomakeupforhim弟弟晚上問媽媽鱒魚的故事，媽媽卻編造了一個，稱最后是仙女救了鱒魚,andJulia,inherbed,presentedherbacktothemandreadherbook.Butshekeptoneearcocked偷聽.“Andso,intheend,thisnaughtyfishgotbiggerandbigger,andthewatergotsmallerandsmaller...”Passionately,sheturnedaroundandcried,“Mummy,don’tmakeitahorribleoldmoralstoryJulia聽到這個故事后特別不耐煩，也暗示后文她會拯救鱒魚.”Hermomevenbroughtinafairy(仙子),whohadmadeitrainandfilledthehole,sothatthetroutcouldfloatawaydowntotheriverbelow.Staringatthemoonsheknewtherewasnosuchthingasafairyandthattrout,downinthetunnel,waspantingforhislife.弟弟晚上問媽媽鱒魚的故事，媽媽卻編造了一個，稱最后是仙女救了鱒魚偷聽Julia聽到這個故事后特別不耐煩，也暗示后文她會拯救鱒魚續寫詞數應為150左右；

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Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver._______________________________________________________________________________5R解讀故事：Readforthebackgroundoneday（when）；tunnel，hole（where）ReadforthecharactersJulia，apantingtrout；Stephen，parentsReadfortheemotionalchangesexcitedbutterrified>worried>annoyed(Julia)ReadfortheplotBeginning：JuliaandStephenwentthroughatunnelDevelopment:TheyfoundapantingtroutClimax:MonmadeupastoryandsaidafairyhelpedthetroutResolution:JuliasavedthetroutEnding:ThetoutswamintheriverhappilyReadforthetheme（人與自然）showkindnesstoanimalsTPT模式Paragraph1：ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephanwassoundasleep.Paragraph2:

Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.TransitionStep2(第4句)：Juliamadeabolddecisiontosavethetroutbyherselfwithapotclutchedinherhands.Step2(第2句)：Thetroutbegantofloatcheerfully,hissilverstomachsparklingunderthemoonlightThePlot（Actions+Emotions)Step3Miniplot1:Julia’sactions+emotionsMiniplot2:thetrout’sactionsMiniplot3:Julia’sresponseStep3Miniplot1:thetrout’sactionsMiniplot2:Julia’sresponse(emotions)Miniplot3:Julia’sresponse(realization)TransitionStep2(第3句)：Sheputhimintothepotcarefullyandrantowardsanearbyriverswiftly.Step1(第1句)：Asmallactofkindnesstowardsanimalscouldbepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.Possibleversion:ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephanwassoundasleep.Courageousanddetermined,Juliamadeabolddecisiontosavethetroutbyherselfandslippedawayswiftlyandsilentlywithapotclutchedinherhands.Sodarkandterrifyingwasthetunnelatmidnightthatshedraggedherheavylegstowardsthetroutwithherpalmssweatingandheartpounding.AsJuliaapproachedhim,aflushofexcitementandastonishmentsweptoverher.ThetroutlyingonthecoldgroundbegantopantatafasterspeedasifherealizedJuliawouldhelphimoutoftheprison.Thensheputhimintothepotcarefullyandrantowardsanearbyriverswiftly.(106words)Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.Muchtoherdelight,thetroutbegantofloatcheerfully,hissilverstomachsparklingunderthemoonlight,shininglikeadiamond.Moresurprisingly,hejumpedoutofthewaterasifexpressinghissinceregratitudetowardsJulia.Atthesightoftheinterestingscene,abigsmilecreptonherface.Itwasatthatmomentthatshecametoarealizationthatshewaslikethefairyinhermother’sstory,savingthetrout’slife.Onherwayhome,satisfiedandrelieved,sheknewthatasmallactofkindnesscouldbepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifferenceforthetrout.(103words)解讀ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephanwassoundasleep.Courageousanddetermined,Juliamadeabolddecisiontosavethetroutbyherselfandslippedawayswiftlyandsilentlywithapotclutchedinherhands.（Julia獨自拯救鱒魚是因為父母和弟弟都在幻想仙女會就他；押尾韻；pot對應下文開頭）Sodarkandterrifyingwasthetunnelatmidnightthatshedraggedherheavylegstowardsthetroutwithherpalmssweatingandheartpounding.（darkandterrifying對應原文開頭，烘托出半夜Julia去隧道里害怕的心情）AsJuliaapproachedhim,aflushofexcitementandastonishmentsweptoverher.（押尾韻的修辭）ThetroutlyingonthecoldgroundbegantopantatafasterspeedasifherealizedJuliawouldhelphimoutoftheprison.（pant和prison對應原文）Thensheputhimintothepotcarefullyandrantowardsanearbyriverswiftly.（river對應下段的river）(106words)Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.Muchtoherdelight,thetroutbegantofloatcheerfully,hissilverstomachsparklingunderthemoonlight,shininglikeadiamond.（silverstomach對應原文）Moresurprisingly,hejumpedoutofthewaterasifexpressinghissinceregratitudetowardsJulia.（跳出水面寫出鱒魚獲救后的快樂）Atthesightoftheinterestingscene,abigsmilecreptonherface.（Julia救助鱒魚后內心也感到快樂）Itwasatthatmomentthatshecametoarealizationthatshewaslikethefairyinhermother’sstory,savingthetrout’slife.（fairy對應原文，在這里Julia就是一個仙女，拯救了鱒魚）Onherwayhome,satisfiedandrelieved,sheknewthatasmallactofkindnesscouldbepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifferenceforthetrout.（文章主旨——對動物要懷有善良）(103words)官方參考范文Shesatup.Stephenwasahotlumpofsleep,lazything!Shele