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ToactwithintegritywasahabitwithSusanwhoalwaysfollowstheGoldenRule:"Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyou."Butwhenshethoughtoverherpastconduct,ablushofshamecrepttohercheeks,asmanylittleactsofselfishnessandunkindnesscamebacktohermemory.Sheresolvedthatforthefuture,bothin
greatthingsandsmall,shewouldrememberandfollowtheGoldenRule.
Itwasnotlongafterthisthatanopportunityoccurred,whichtriedSusan'sprinciples.OneSaturdayeveningwhenshewent,asusual,toMr.Thompson'sinn,toreceivethemoneyofhermother'swashingforhim,whichamountedtofivedollars,shefoundMr.Thompsonapparentlyinaterribleragewith
somehorsedealerswithwhomhehadbeenbargaining.Heheldinhishandanopenpocketbook(錢袋子),fullofbillsandscarcelynoticingSusanasshemadeherrequest,excepttoswearatherfortroublinghimwhenhewasbusy,hehandedherabanknote.
Gladtoescapesoeasily,Susanhurriedoutofthegate.Pausingtoputthemoneysafelyinherpurse,shediscoveredthathehad
givenhertwobillsinsteadofone.Shelookedaround;nobodywasnearandherfirstimpulsewasjoyattheunexpectedprize.“Itisallmine,"shesaidtoherself.“Iwillbuymymotheranewcoatwithit,andshecangiveheroldonetomysisterMary,andthenMarycangototheSundayschoolwithmenextwinter.I
wonderifIcanbuyapairofshoesformybrotherTom,too."
Atthatmomentsherememberedthathemusthavegivenittoherbymistake.Butagainthevoiceofthetempterwhispered,"Hegaveit,andhowdoyouknowthathedidnotintendtomakeyouapresentofit?Keepit!Hewillneverknowit,forhehadtoomanysuchbillsinthatgreatpocketbook.”注意:
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Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.___________________________
“Sir,youpaidmetwobillsinsteadofone,”shehandedhimtheextranote.________________
主題:Thethemeofthisarticleistopromotetheneedforhonestyandintegrityinlife,andnottoabandonone'sstubbornnessorprinciplesduetopoverty,luck,orextravagance:"Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwant.".文本分析:Afteranalyzingtheoriginaltext,especiallythefirsttwoparagraphs,acleverauthorwillknowthattheparagraphtobecontinuedmustmentiontheGoldenRule:DonotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyouItispreciselybecauseoneofthemaincharactersinthestory,Susan,firmlybelievedinthisgoldenrulethatshelatergainedrespectfromothersandunexpectedjoy.Theotherprotagonistinthestory,MrThompsonappearstobeawealthyandimposingfigureinthetext,butinfact,heshouldhavethemostkindandinnocentsideofhumannature.ItwaspreciselybecauseofthenobleactionofthelittlegirlSusan'srefundthatMrThompson'srefundalsomadehimsuddenlybeemorenoble.Notonlydidhenotacceptthemoneyhetookoutbymistake,butitalsoimpressedthebusinesspeoplewhotradedhorseswithhim.Everyoneinthescenemusthavefelttheimportanceofbeingsincere.Theadultsinthestorywentfrominitialangertolaterharmonyandbeauty,andevenMrThompson'sattitudetowardsthosearoundhimcannotbedescribedastoogentle.Ifcandidatescanunderstandtheprofoundmeaningofthisarticle,theartisticconceptionofthewritingwillbeevenhigher,andthisispreciselytheliteracythatwestudentsneedtostrivetoimprovethroughreadingandthinking.Asforwordchoiceandsentenceconstruction,payattentiontonaturalness,appropriateness,variedsentencestructures,andabinationoflongandshortsentences.Bewareoftwosituationswhenwritingofftopic:1.ThefirstparagraphnevermentionedthatSusanranbacktoMr.becauseshethoughtoftheGoldenRuleThompson'stavern;2.ThesecondparagraphiswrittenasMrThompsontooktheextrabanknotefromSusanandsaidheintentionallygaveheranextrabanknotetoverifyherhonesty.官方范文,
Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.
SherepeatedlybalancedthefortsthemoneywouldbuyagainsttheharmofwrongingMr.Thompson.SuddenlytheGoldenRule“Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyou.”soundedinherearslikeatrumpet.Turningroundasifflyingfromsomeunseendanger,thechildrushedalongtheroaduntilshefoundherselfonceagaininfrontoftheinn.“Whatdoyouwantnow?”askedthegruffoldman,doubtfully.Hestaredatthechildashesawthetearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Sir,youpaidmetwobillsinsteadofone,”shehandedhimtheextranote.
“Twobills?DidI?Letmesee;well,soIdid.Youwantedtokeepit,Isuppose.”Susanblushedandhungherhead.Heseemedtouchedbyherdistress.Puttinghishandinhispocket,hedrewoutasmiling(先令)andofferedittoher.“No,Sirthankyou,”sobbedshe.Idon’twanttobepaidfordoingright.”Susanreturnedtoherhumblehomewithalightenedheart,andthroughthecourseofalongandusefullifesheneverforgotherfirsttryingoftheGoldenRule.參考范文一,Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.
Thethoughtofkeepingitandprovidingextramoneyforthefamilywastempting.Withthemoney,shecouldhavehersiblingsandmomlivebetterofftemporally.However,thegoldenrulelingeredinhermind,whisperingtoher,“you’reathief.You’recheatingyourself.Youknowitwasnotapresent!”Nowthemoneyfeltheavyandscorchinginthehand.Finally,theconsciencetooktheupperhandandSusanmadeuphermindtoreturntheextranote.WhenshereturnedtoMr.Thompson’sshop,Mr.Thompsonfrownedandshoutedimpolitely,“whathappened?Ihavegiveyouthenote.”“Sir,youpaidmetwobillsinsteadofone,”shehandedhimtheextranote.
Theactioncamewithareliefandrelaxation.Itfeltgreattobeinnocentandguiltfree.WithablankfaceandMr.Thompsonhesitatedandtooktheextranote.Susansmiledandturnedaround,readytogobackhome.Then,Mr.Thompsoncalledherandtookoutaonedollarbill,“thanks,kid.Hereisyourprizeforyourhonesty.”ThenignoringSusan,hekeptloudlywiththehorsedealer.Withtheprizetipandarelievedheart,Susancamebackhomehappily.Notonlyhadsheadheredtoherintegrity,butalsostrengthenedhermitmenttofollowingthegoldenrules.
參考范文二,Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.
Susan'sinitialjoyattheunexpectedwindfallwasquicklyovershadowedbythevoiceofherconscience.Shestoodatthecrossroadsofamoraldilemma,tornbetweenthetemptationtokeeptheextramoneyandthemitmenttotheGoldenRulethatshehadrecentlyembraced.Thethoughtofhermother'steachingsonhonestyechoedinh
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