題目ItwasahotdayinFlorida.Theschoolyearhadjustendedanditwastimeforsummervacation.WehadjustgottenalittleblackdogwhowenamedOneEyed.Wechosethatnamebecausehecouldonlyseeoutofoneeye.Everybodywantedtodosomethingforthedog:feedhim,teachhimtricksandtakelongwalkswithhim.Everybodywassohappytohavethisactive,playfulandshaggynewadditiontoourfamily.Everybody,thatis,exceptmymomandme.Allmymomsawwhenshelookedatthedogwassomeoneelsetocleanup

after.Shedding,messy,muddy,hepouncedalloverthehouse.AllMomseemedtocareaboutwasgettingthehousecleaned.MymombegantoputClorox(高樂氏漂白水)inthebathtub.TherewasnomessingwithMomwhenshestartedcleaning,soIdecidedtomoveoutoftheway,Actually,gettingoutofthewayisamoveI’dbeenpracticingforalongtime.Beingtheyoungestinmyfamilyhashaditsadvantages,ofcourse.MorethanafewtimesIwasspoiledoreveryonesaidIwasthecutest.Butbeingtheyoungestalsocamewithitsfairshareoftroubles.“You’retooyoung!”“You’llmessthisup!”they’doftensay.IknewthatmyfamilylovedmebutIcouldn’twaittoshowthemIcoulddothingsbymyself.EverytimeIaskedmybrotherormysisterifIcouldpetOneEyed,theywouldshout,“No!”ortellmethatIhadgermsandifItouchedOneEyed,hewoulddie!Ireallybelievedthem.OnceIevenconfessedtomymomthatItouchedthedogwhennoonenoticed.Atfirst,mymomseemedveryconfusedaboutwhatIwastellingher,butthensherealized.Mymomscoldedmybrotherandsister,“Youbetterstopteasingyourlittlebrother!”Littlebrother!That’sexactlywhatIwas.Thatreallygotmybloodboiling.Secretly,Idecided,“I’llshowthemwhatalittlekidcando.”注意：1.

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請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Thatafternoon,Itookthedogandsneakedintothebathroom.

Paragraph2:Ithoughtmymomwouldpunishme,butshewasjuststandingthereandlaughing.

Analysisofplot這篇文章講述了在佛羅里達度過炎熱夏日的故事。學年結束了，暑假開始了。家里迎來了一只小黑狗，取名為OneEved(獨眼)，因為它只有一只眼睛能看見。家人們都很開心，想要喂養、教它技巧，并和它一起散步。但除了媽媽和主人公之外，其他人都很開心有這個活躍、好玩且毛茸茸的新成員。主人公是家里最小的，經常被認為太小而被忽視，但他決心要證明自己能獨立完成事情。推測題目：IFlushedIttocleansthbycausingwatertopassthroughit.五要素分析：時間Theschoolyearhadjustendedanditwastimeforsummervacation.地點Florida人物theauthor,mymom,mybrother.mysister新添加人物alittleblackdogwhowenamedOneEyedEmotionalChanges：這個故事中包含了家庭成員間的歡樂、挑戰和爭執。家人對于新成員的到來感到高興和興奮，但主人公和他的媽媽對于照顧這只狗所帶來的麻煩感到困擾。主人公作為家里最小的成員，面臨著被忽視和被低估的情感，但他內心充滿了決心和渴望被認可的渴望。整個故事通過孩子的視角展現了勇氣、挑戰和成長的情感線。同學寫作面臨的苦難：同學們比較擅長寫心靈雞湯或者文章有明顯矛盾或沖突類的文章，對于本篇這種家庭詼諧幽默小故事反而手足無措，比如浙江考過的“南瓜”卡頭，還有感恩節父親切火雞腿摔倒。原文心理描寫：Psychologicaldescription1.Everybodywassohappytohavethisactive,playfulandshaggynewadditiontoourfamily.Everybody,thatis,exceptmymomandme.2.ButbeingtheyoungestalsocamewithitsfairshareofknewthatmyfamilylovedmebutIcouldn'twaittoshowthemIcoulddothingsbymyself.3.EverytimeIaskedmybrotherormysisterifIcouldpetOneEyed,theywouldshout,“No!”ortellmethatIhadgermsandifItouchedOneEyed,hewoulddie!4.Allmymomsawwhenshelookedatthedogwassomeoneelsetocleanup

after.Shedding,messy,muddy,hepouncedalloverthehouse.AllMomseemedtocareaboutwasgettingthehousecleaned.MymombegantoputClorox(高樂氏漂白水)inthebathtub.下水文：Paragraph1:Thatafternoon,Itookthedogandsneakedintobathroom.Havingclosedthedoorbehindus,l,withdetermination,turnedtoOneEyed,“1willgiveyouarefreshingshower!”Seeminglyabitconfused,OneEyedstaredatme,wagginghistailAsIfilledthetubwithwarmwaterandguidedhiminside,he,withoutanyhesitationjumpedinwithasplash.IlatheredhimwiththeshampooandscrubbedthedirtoffhimasMomhaddone.EverythingwasgoingjustasIhadhopeduntilincamemybrother'svoice,“OneEyed!”Immediately,thedogsprangtohisfeet,shookhisbodyandjumpedoutofthetub,waterandfoamssplatteringallover.Worsestill,hebarkedfranticallyatthedoor.Myheartsankwhenthedoorwasopened,andmomstoodbehindit.(125w)Paragraph2:Ithoughtmymomwouldpunishme,butshewasjuststandingthereandlaughing.Ihungmyheaddown,avoidinganyeyecontactwithmom.Insteadofscoldingmeforthechaos,mymomsteppedforwardandwipedfoamsfrommyforehead.“Sorry,mom.ljustwanttodomypartforthefamily.”lapologized.Withalovingpatonmyshouldershereassuredme,“Youdidgreat.Now,let'scleanupthismesstogethershallwe?”Inodded.Laterthatday,l,togetherwithmom,gotthebathroomandOneEyedcleaned.Finishingthis,IrealizedthatIcouldprovemyselfcapableevenastheyoungestandmymomwastheretocheermeoneverystepoftheway.(107w)參考范文：Thatafternoon,Itookthedogandsneakedintothebathroom.“I'mgoingtogiveyouabath!"Iannounced.OneEyedlookedatmestrangely,obviouslynotunderstandingwhatIwassaying.Itookmysister’sshampooandpouredthewholebottleintothebathtub.ThenIcoaxedthedoginandstartedscrubbingthedirtoffhimwithourtowels.However,thingsquicklygotmessy.Soapandwatersplashedeverywhere;bubblesfloatedliketiny,soapysnowflakes.OneEyedshookhimselfvigorouslyandbarkedexcitedly,soonturningthebathroomintoawetbattleground.Itshouldhavebeenmysecretmission,butnow,itturnedintoadisaster!Panicking,Iranouttoseekhelp,onlytofindmymomatthedoor.(111w)

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