查補易混易錯點12應用文寫作之申請信、咨詢信、求助信體裁命題形式寫作主題2022新高考I卷應用文邀請信寫郵件邀請外教進行一次訪談II卷應用文邀請信寫郵件邀請外教進行一次訪談全國卷乙卷說明文投稿利用填表調查結果給報社投稿甲卷應用文投稿以世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿2021新高考I卷應用文投稿校刊youth慶祝十周年，向校刊表達自己經歷，并送上祝福II卷應用文投稿校刊youth慶祝十周年，向校刊表達自己經歷，并送上祝福全國卷乙卷應用文發言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”為主題寫一篇發言稿參賽甲卷應用文征求建議征求外國朋友建議，哪些中國傳統文化更吸引外國友人2020全國卷I卷應用文投稿寫一篇以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題投稿參賽II卷應用文日記寫一篇英文短文介紹上周末采摘活動III卷應用文求助信給外教寫一封信，請幫忙指導【申請信】首段：自我介紹，說明申請內容Ilearnedfromyourwebsite/theeveningpaperthatyourcompanywantedtohire....youareinneedof....我從網站/晚報上得知貴公司想招聘……/你們需要……Irecommendmyselfasaqualifiedcandidatefor........我推薦自己作為……的合格人選。Ireadtheannouncementof.......thatyouhavepostedandIamveryinterestedinit.看了你發布的公告，我對它很感興趣。主體部分：陳述本人優勢和特長性格優勢Asanoutgoing，warmandfriendlyperson，Icangetalongwellwith......我性格開朗，熱情友好，可以與…相處得很好。I'measy-goingandgood-natured，whichmakesiteasyformetofitinwithothers.我隨和且脾氣好，很容易與他人合得來。經驗特長IhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishsoIcancommunicatewithnativespeakersinEnglishfreely.我精通英語，因此我可以用英語同以英語為母語的人自由交流。Myprevious........experiencewillqualifymefortheposition.我以往的……經驗將使我能夠勝任這個職位。Ialwaystakeanactivepartin.........SoexperiencedamIthatIamsuretogive..abetterexperienceof........我總是積極參加……。我經驗豐富，一定會給……帶來更好的……體驗。尾段：表達感謝，期盼回復Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration/account.如果您能考慮我的申請，我將不勝感激。Shouldyoutreatmyapplicationfavorably，Iwouldsparenoefforttooffermybestservice.如果您看中我的申請，我將不遺余力地提供我的最佳服務。【滿分范文】DearSir/Madam，IamLiHua，aChinesestudentwhoisstudyinginLondon.KnowingthataChinesepaintingexhibitionwillbeheldatthelocalgallerynextmonthandyouareinneedofsomevolunteers，Iamwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Tobeginwith，IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIcancommunicatewithvisitorswithoutdifficulty.What'smore，asaChinesepaintingloverIknowalotaboutthisartform.Ifaccepted，IcanintroduceChinesepaintingskillstovisitors，whichcanhelpthemknowmoreaboutChineseculture.IthinkIamqualifiedtobeavolunteer.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldagreetomyrequest.Yours，LiHua【咨詢信】首段：自我介紹并表明寫信目的1、I'm.......,aChinesestudentplanningto/interestedin.......Iamwritingtoaskforinformationabout........我是……，一個計劃…/對……感興趣的中國學生。我寫信來咨詢關于……的信息。I'mwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding.......我寫信是想知道您是否能給我提供有關……的信息。I'mwritingtoenquiresomedetailed/furtherinformationabout.........我寫信想詢問一些有關……的詳細/進一步的信息。主體部分：說明咨詢事由First,Iwonderif........AnotherpointI'mnotcertainaboutis..........首先，我想知道是否……。我不確定的另外一點是……Moreover,I'dliketo........Inaddition,asyouknow,.........,so..........isalsoamatterImconcernedabout.此外，我想……。另外，正如你所知，……，因此，……也是我關心的問題。Ifthereisanythingelsethatneedsspecialattention,pleaseinformmeatyourconvenience.如果有其他需要特別注意的事，請在您方便的時候告訴我。尾段：期盼回復并表示感謝Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.如果您能盡早回復，我會很感激。Thankyouforyourkindness,andyourpromptattention/earlyreplytothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.謝謝您的好意，我將非常感激您對這封信的及時關注/早日回復。【滿分范文】DearSir/Madam,I'mastudentfromChina.I'mwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregardingtheEnglishcourseofyourschool.Tobeginwith,couldyoubesokindastotellmewhenthecoursewillstartandhowmanyperiodsthereareperweek?Moreover,whatabouttheclasssize?Additionally,I'dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourse.Lastbutnotleast,Iwonderiftherewouldbeanyhostfamiliesordormitories.Thankyouforyourkindness,andyourpromptattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【求助信】首段：開門見山表明求助意圖Hearingyouhavemuchexperiencein...，Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp./someadvice.聽說您在……方面很有經驗，我寫信向您求助/征求建議。Ihavesomedifficultyin...，whichbothersmealot，soIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyou.我在……方面有一些困難，這讓我很困擾，所以我別無選擇只能向您求助。Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties，Iamanxioustoaskyouforhelp.面對如此多的難題，我非常想向您求助。主體部分：說明求助事由Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichbothermealot.Tobeginwith，...What'sworse，...Whattroublesmemostis.…Alloftheseupsetmebecause.…我遇到了三個很困擾我的問題。首先，……。更糟糕的是，……。最讓我苦惱的是…。所有這些都讓我很不高興，因為……Ireallyhavenoidea/wonderhowtodealwiththeproblems.我真不知道/想知道如何解決這些問題。尾段：期盼回復并表示感謝Iwillbegratefulifyoucansparetimetogivemeahand/domeafavor.如果您能抽出時間幫我，我將很感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbesokindastogivemesomeuseful/practicaltips/suggestions.如果您能非常友好地給我提供一些有用的/實用的建議，我將不勝感激。Thanksforconsideringmyrequest.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.多謝考慮我的請求。我期待您的答復。【滿分范文】DearMike，I'mLiHua，oneofyourstudents.I'mwritinginthehopethatyoucangivemesomeadviceonmyEnglishstudy.Ournewwritingtaskcalled"extendedwriting"requiresustowriteareasonableendingtoastory.Obviously，thisisaveryopentaskwithmultiplepossibilities.WhileIenjoythecreativitythistaskrequires，Ifinditchallengingtoidentifytheplotandgivemyversionofthepossibleending.Ialsohavetroubleexpressingmyideasaccuratelyduetomylimitedvocabulary.Anysuggestionswouldbegreatlyappreciated.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)Iamreallydelightedtolearnthat______(職位)isrequired,andIfeelthis______(職位或機會)

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Shouldyouneedanydetailsrelatedtomyapplication,feelfreetocontactmeat______(聯系方式).Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)Iam______(自我介紹).Iamwritingtoinquireabout______(要詢問的內容). Thefollowingismyconfusion.Firstofall,I’mtemptedtoknow

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willbehighlyappreciated.Yoursincerely,LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)Iam______(自我介紹).Iamwritingtoseekforyourhelpin______(寫信目的). Now,Istrugglealotin______(遇到的困難).I’vefoundthat______(描述自己的困難).Foronething,______(困難一).Foranother,______(困難二). Therefore,couldyoupleaseputforwardsomepracticalsuggestions?IamconvincedthatIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice. Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldrespondatyourearliestconvenience.Yoursincerely,LiHua1．（2019·全國·高考真題）假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學習，得知當地美術館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內容包括：1.寫信目的；2.個人優勢；3.能做的事情。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3.結束語已為你寫好。DearSirorMadam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheChinesePaintingExhibitionwhichwillbeheldinyourartgallery.IthinkIamqualifiedforthisjob,becauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingsincechildhood.Besides,IamfluentinbothChineseandEnglish,whichisbeneficialforintroducingChinesepaintings.IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutChinesepainting.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達要求寫一封申請信，屬于書信應用文。【詳情解析】1.審題立意本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫申請信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時態用一般現在時。2.謀篇布局書信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經給出。首段，寫信的目的，中間段寫個人優勢和能做的事，最后一段總結。3.關鍵詞和句子根據寫作要點及構思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有：volunteer，aChinesePaintingExhibition，advantages，Iamgoodat…，Icanhelpwith.../I’lldevotemyselfto…。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯誤，并增加一些細節和過渡性的詞匯，如Firstofall，Besides，tobeginwith，moreover，asforme，Lastbutnotleast等，使全文銜接自然，語義流暢。2．（2010·天津·高考真題）假設你是晨光中學的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優秀學生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信：●對此活動的認識（如對本人、學生級社會的益處等）●個人優勢（如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等）●你的計劃（如怎樣進行輔導等）注意：1.詞數不少于100；2.可適當加入細節，以使內容充實、行文連貫；3.信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入詞數。參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學ChenxiHopeSchoolDearSirorMadam,IamLiHuafromClassOne,SeniorTwo._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.YoursSincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearSirorMadam，

IamLiHuafromClassOne，SeniorTwo．AsfarasIamconcerned，IbelievetoteachEnglishforpupilsfromChenxiHopeSchoolwillbegoodforboththeprimary-schoolstudentsandhigh-schoolstudenttutors，whichthuswillresultinsubstantialsocialbenefits．

IthinkIamqualifiedforbeingthepupils’Englishcoach，becauseIhavegoodcharacter，andI'mindependentinlifeandproficientinEnglish．That'swhyIapplyfortheposition．IhopeIcanjointheinstructiveactivity．

Myplanforcoachingthepupilsistoteachthembylistening，speaking，readingandwriting．What'smoreimportantistostimulatetheirinterestsinlearningEnglishasaforeignlanguage，creatingagoodlearningenvironment．Ihopeyoucanoffertheopportunity．

Yourssincerely，LiHua【詳情解析】本文要求用英語給學校寫一封申請信，申請用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。時態為一般現在時，人稱以第一人稱為主。文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，但不是很具體，考生要把要點全交代，不能有遺漏。而且要拓展內容，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second，Besides,What’smore等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。重要短語：AsfarasIamconcerned（據我所知），resultin（導致），bequalifiedfor（有資格，合格），beindependent（獨立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulateinterestsin（激發…的興趣）等【點睛】所給范文語言簡潔，應用了一些較好的詞組和句子：AsfarasIamconcerned據我所知，bequalifiedfor合格的。IbelievetoteachEnglishforpupilsfromChenxiHopeSchoolwillbegoodforboththeprimary-schoolstudentsandhigh-schoolstudenttutors,whichthuswillresultinsubstantialsocialbenefits.這句話用了非限制性定語從句，That’swhyIapplyfortheposition.這句話用了表語從句，Myplanforcoachingthepupilsistoteachthembylistening,speaking,readingandwriting.這句話用了不定式做表語。What’smoreimportantistostimulatetheirinterestsinlearningEnglishasaforeignlanguage,creatingagoodlearningenvironment.這句話用了主語從句和現在分詞。3．（安徽省部分學校2022-2023學年高三下學期3月月考英語試題）假定你是李華，你校的英語報正在校內招募“中國傳統文化”專欄的編輯。請你寫封電子郵件申請，內容包括。1.表明意圖；2.自身優勢；3.表達期望。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:專欄columnDearSirorMadam,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHui【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,KnowingthattheschoolEnglishnewspaperislookingforaneditorresponsibleforthecolumn“TraditionalChineseCulture”,I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.IthinkI’mqualifiedforit.Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallywrittenEnglish.Besides,Ihavetakenthepart-timejobasanEnglisheditor,fromwhichIhavegainedrelevantexperience.Moreimportantly,IhavearichknowledgeoftraditionalChineseculture.IwouldreallyappreciateitifIcouldbegiventhepreciouschance.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHui【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假定你是李華，你校的英語報正在校內招募“中國傳統文化”專欄的編輯。請你寫封電子郵件申請。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累尋找：lookfor→searchfor職位：position→post此外：besides→inaddition有關的：relevant→related2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：IthinkI’mqualifiedforit.Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallywrittenEnglish.拓展句：IthinkI’mqualifiedforitbecauseIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallywrittenEnglish.【點睛】[高分句型1]KnowingthattheschoolEnglishnewspaperislookingforaneditorresponsibleforthecolumn“TraditionalChineseCulture”,I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.(運用了that引導賓語從句)[高分句型2]Besides,Ihavetakenthepart-timejobasanEnglisheditor,fromwhichIhavegainedrelevantexperience.(運用了“介詞+關系代詞”結構非限制性定語從句)4．（天津市南開中學2022-2023學年高三下學期第四次月考英語試題）假設你是晨光中學學生李津。目前在倫敦做交換生，得知當地美術館要舉辦中國畫展，請你寫一封信申請做志愿者。內容包括：(1)寫信目的；(2)個人優勢；(3)能做的事情。注意：（1）詞數不少于100；（2）可適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫；（3）開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,IamLiJin,anexchangestudentfromChinacurrentlystudyinginLondon.IammorethandelightedtohearthataChinesepaintingexhibitionwillbeheldinthelocalgalleryandvolunteersareneeded,Iamwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Thereasonsformyapplicationareasfollows.Firstandforemost,IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings,sonotonlycanIexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.Inaddition,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichmakesmehavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Lastbutnotleast,IamsoenthusiasticandresponsiblethatIdoholdthebeliefthatIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiJin【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封信，申請當當地美術館要舉辦的中國畫展的志愿者。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累高興的：delighted→happy職位：position→post首先：firstandforemost→firstofall把……考慮進去：oconsideration→oaccount2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：IamLiJin,anexchangestudentfromChinacurrentlystudyinginLondon.拓展句：IamLiJin,whoisanexchangestudentfromChinacurrentlystudyinginLondon.【點睛】[高分句型1]Inaddition,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichmakesmehavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.(運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,IamsoenthusiasticandresponsiblethatIdoholdthebeliefthatIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.(運用了so...that引導的結果狀語從句和that引導的同位語從句)5．（2023省四川省南充市高三下學期高考適應性考試英語試題）假設你是李華，你的英國筆友John對中國的傳統節日非常感興趣，清明節將至，他發來郵件詢問有關清明節的信息，請你用英文給他回一封電子郵件，內容包括：1.節日的時間；2.節日的活動；3.節日的意義。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯：清明節theTomb-SweepingDayDearJohn,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearJohn,I’mgladtobeinformedthatyoushowgreatinterestintraditionalChinesefestivals.HereIfeelratherdelightedtointroducetheTomb-SweepingDaytoyou.China’straditionalTomb-SweepingDaydatesbacktotheZhouDynasty,whichusuallyfallsonApril5inthesolarcalendar,withahistoryofmorethan2,500years.Thefestivalwascreatedtohonorthedead.Traditionally,peoplewillbringfoodanddrinkstothecemeterytoworshiptheirancestors.Meanwhile,itisalsoachanceforthefamilymemberstoreuniteandtoremember.Inmyopinion,asatraditionalChinesefestival,theTomb-SweepingDaykeepsusremindedofourlostfamiliesandcherishingthelivingones.Bycelebratingit,wefollowthetraceoftheforefathersandmoveonwiththeirmemories.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給英國筆友John寫封電子郵件，介紹清明節的相關情況。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累高興的：glad→delighted同時：meanwhile→inthemeantime有益的：chance→opportunity追溯到：datebackto→tracebackto2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Inmyopinion,asatraditionalChinesefestival,theTomb-SweepingDaykeepsusremindedofourlostfamiliesandcherishingthelivingones.拓展句：Inmyopinion,theTomb-SweepingDay,whichisatraditionalChinesefestival,keepsusremindedofourlostfamiliesandcherishingthelivingones.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’mgladtobeinformedthatyoushowgreatinterestintraditionalChinesefestivals.(運用了that引導的賓語從句)[高分句型2]China’straditionalTomb-SweepingDaydatesbacktotheZhouDynasty,whichusuallyfallsonApril5inthesolarcalendar,withahistoryofmorethan2,500years.(運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)（2020·浙江·高考真題）假定你是李華，你校來自愛爾蘭的外教Peter因病回國休假。請給他寫一封電子郵件，內容包括:1.詢問近況；2.分享班級最新消息；3.表達祝愿。注意:1.詞數80左右；2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearPeter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.Howareyoufeelingnow?Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.Lastmonth,anEnglishfestivalwasheldinourschool,andourclassperformedasongwhichyoutaughtusatthefestival.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.Ifonlyyouhadbeenthere.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，向因病假回國休假的外教老師詢問近況，分享消息和表達祝愿。【詳情解析】第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態：根據提示，時態應為一般過去時和一般現在時。結構：三段式結構。第一段詢問近況；第二段告知班級消息；第三段表達祝愿。要求：1.詢問近況（Howareyoufeelingnow?）

2.告知班級消息（mygoodnews;performedasongwhichyoutaughtus）

3.表達祝愿（wishyouaquickandcompleterecovery）第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）besorrytodo;onsickleave;sweepaway;assoonas;givesb.warmapplause;recovery第三步：連詞成句1.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.2.Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.3.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.4.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，第五步：潤色修改7．（2020·浙江·高考真題）假定你是高一學生李華。請你給你的美國網友Tony寫一封e-mail，把你的暑假安排告訴他，并詢問他的暑假安排。內容包括：1.完成作業，適量閱讀；2.走親訪友；3.參加社區組織的志愿者活動。注意：1.詞數80左右；信的開頭已經寫好。2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearTony,Howiseverythingwithyourecently?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearTony,Howarethingswithyoulately?Iamgladtotellyoutheplanformysummerholiday,whichisapproaching.Aboveall,Ihavegottofinishalltheassignedhomeworkanddosomereadingaswell.Iwillalsospendsometimevisitingrelativesandclosefriendsandeventravellingnearorfar.Besides,Iintendtotakepartinsomemeaningfulvolunteeringactivitiesorganizedbythecommunity.Pleasesendmeane-mail,sharingyourplanforthesummervacation.OK?Lookingforwardtoit!Yourssincerely,Lihua【語篇解讀】本書面表達是一篇提綱類作文。【詳情解析】體裁：應用文時態：根據提示，時態應以一般現在時為主結構：分總要求：1.完成作業，適量閱讀；2.走親訪友；3.參加社區組織的志愿者活動。第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）begladtodosth./tellsb.sth./spendtimeindoingsth./takepartin/intendtodosth./sendsth.tosb./lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.Howiseverythinggoingrecently?2.Iamgladtotellyoutheplanfortheapproachingsummerholiday.3.Aboveall,Ihavegottofinishalltheassignedhomeworkanddosomereadingaswell.4.Iwillalsospendsometimevisitingrelativesandclosefriendsandeventravellingnearorfar.5.Besides,Iintendtotakepartinsomemeaningfulvolunteeringactivitiesorganizedbythecommunity.6.Whataboutyourplanforthesummerholiday?7.Lookingforwardtoit!第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…狀語從句連詞：because/if/though/although…定語從句連詞：which/that/when/where…第五步：修改潤色（加入高級詞匯或短語）【點睛】[高分句型1]Ihavegottofinishallthehomeworkassignedbymyteachersanddosomereadingaswell.我必須完成老師布置的所有家庭作業，并且讀一些書。句中使用了過去分詞短語作后置定語。[高分句型2]Besides,Iintendtotakepartinsomemeaningfulvolunteeringactivitiesorganizedbythecommunity,whichareofgreatbenefit.句中which引導非線性定語從句，和beof+n.表事物特征。8．（重慶市巴蜀中學2022-2023學年高三下學期3月月考英語試題）假定你是李華，正在規劃自己的高中畢業旅行。請你寫一封郵件，向英國好友Jack求助，希望他能幫你解答目前遇到的困惑，內容包括：1.寫信目的；2.求助內容；3.希望回復。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearJack,Howisitgoing?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearJack,Howisitgoing?IwantyoutoknowI’mgraduatingverysoon,andthatI’mplanningatripafterGaokao.I’dliketohearyouropinionsontwocriticalmatters.First,I’mstillwanderingbetweenmytraveldestinations,whichareThailandandSanyahaven’tbeenabroadbeforesoIhaveconcernslikesafety,accommodationsandtravel.However,IheartravelcostinSanyahasskyrocketed,andIdon’thaveabigbudget.Besides,I’dlikeyoutorecommendaffordablerestaurantswithlocalfeatures.Mymouthisalreadywateringatthethoughtofallsortsofdelicacies!Athousandmilesbeginswiththefirststep,asLaoziputit.IbelieveyoufeelsotooandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假定你是李華，正在規劃自己的高中畢業旅行。請你寫一封郵件，向英國好友Jack求助，希望他能幫你解答目前遇到的困惑。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累意見：opinion→recommendation然而：however→nevertheless此外：besides→what'smore各種各樣的：allsortsof→varietiesof2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Besides,I’dlikeyoutorecommendaffordablerestaurantswithlocalfeatures.Mymouthisalreadywateringatthethoughtofallsortsofdelicacies!拓展句:Besides,I’dlikeyoutorecommendaffordablerestaurantswithlocalfeatures,whereIcanenjoyallsortsofdelicacies!【點睛】【高分句型1】First,I’mstillwanderingbetweenmytraveldestinations,whichareThailandandSanyahaven’tbeenabroadbeforesoIhaveconcernslikesafety,accommodationsandtravel.（運用了which引導非限制性定語從句，so連接并列句）【高分句型2】Athousandmilesbeginswiththefirststep,asLaoziputit.（as引導非限制性定語從句）9．（2023屆河南省鄭州市外國語學校高三下學期4月份月考英語試題）假如你是李華，你的英國網友Forbes打算抽空到中國學習太極(TaiChi)，他寫信向你求助，請你根據下列要點給對方寫一封回信：1.介紹學太極好處；2.負責聯系學習地點和老師。注意:1.詞數100左右。2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearForbes,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearForbes,ItisamazingformetoknowthatyoushowgreatpreferenceforTaiChiandarewillingtolearnitsoon.I’mquitesurethatIcangiveyouahandgladly.TaiChiisnotonlyanancientmartialart,buthasalsobeenwidelyacknowledgedasaneffectivehealthexercise.Famousforitsgracefulandwell-balancedmovements,TaiChiprovidesthementalrelaxationandphysicalfitnessthataresoessentialinourmodernstressfullives.

Concerningyourlearninglocationandinstructor,I’msoproudtotellyouthatIhavetheabilitytorecommendthebestschoolandbesttrainerinourcitytoyou,foractuallymyuncleisamasterofTaiChiwhoisalwaysinvitedtoinstructothersalloverthecountry.Asaresult,youcanrelyonme.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming!Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應用文,要求寫一封回信，告知Forbes學太極相關的情況。【詳情解析】第一步：審題:回信

告知Frobes學太極相關的情況人稱：第三人稱時態：一般現在時結構：總分法，分三部分，第一部分表示愿意幫助Forbes，第二部分說明學太極的好處和負責聯系學習地點和老師，第三部分期望Forbes的到來。要點：1.表示愿意幫助Forbes2．學太極的好處：是一種有效的健身運動、動作優雅、讓人放松聯系學習地點和老師：會介紹最好的太極學校和老師3．期待Forbes的到來第二步：列提綱（重點詞匯、短語

）showgreatpreferencefor；bewillingto；givesb.ahand；anancientmartialart；bewidelyacknowledged；befamousforprovides；mentalrelaxation；physicalfitness；essential；instructor；recommend；trainer；introduce…to；invite第三步：連詞成句(1)YoushowgreatpreferenceforTaiChi.(2)Icangiveyouahandgladly.(3)TaiChiisanancientmartialart.(4)TaiChihasbeenwidelyacknowledgedasaneffectivehealthexercise.(5)TaiChiisfamousforitsgracefulandwell-balancedmovements.(6)TaiChiprovidesthementalrelaxationandphysicalfitness.(7)Irecommendthebestschoolandbesttrainerinourcitytoyou.(8)MyuncleisamasterofTaiChi.(9)Myuncleisalwaysinvitedtoinstructothersalloverthecountry.

根據提示和關鍵詞進行遣詞造句,適當地運用句型，注意時態和主謂一致問題。第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點詞匯)用notonly…butalso連接下面的兩個句子(3)TaiChiisanancientmartialart.(4)TaiChi