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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文WhenIwas13,Iclimbedmyfirstmountain-a3,900-footpeak(山峰)nearwhereIliveinSurrey,BritishColumbia.IwasoverweightatthetimeandoutofbreathwhenIreachedthetop.ButIlovedtochallengesomethingbiggerthanmyself,SoonI'dclimbednearly100peaks.MyparentswerehappyI'dfinallyfoundahobby.IoftengoclimbingwithmyfriendMelOlsen,whomI'dmetontheInternet,Twoyearsago,on30DecemberwhenIwas16,sheandIdrovetoOregontoclimb11,240-footMountHood.It'ssafertostartwinterclimbsatnightwhenthere'slessdangerofthesunmeltingthesnowpack.Thatday,westartedat3am,followingthepathalongsidetheskiruns.Thetemperaturewasabout-10C.Alongtheway,wemettwootherclimbers,andthefourofuscontinuedtogether.Afteraboutfivehours,wereachedDevil'sKitchen,aplateau(高原)atabout10,000feet,justbeforethefinalpushtothetop.Bythispoint,thewindconditionswereterrible.Myskinfeltasthoughitwereburning.Theotherclimbersdecidedtoturnback,butMelandIwentahead,Wecheckedourequipmentandwerepreparedfortheclimb.Thewaywefollowedgrewnarrowerandsteeper(更陡的).Ataround9am,wereachedanicestep.Itwasaboutthreeorfourfeettall,Ivolunteeredtogofirst.Iplacedmyleftfootontheicestep.Itfeltgood,Confidently,IthoughtIwassafe,Iputmyfullweightonit.Suddenly,Iheardacrack(爆烈聲),andawholepieceoficebrokeoffthestep,rightundermyfoot.注意:1續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答Inawhile,Istartedtofall.I'dbeenlyingontheiceforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.續寫1:Inawhile,Istartedtofall.
Myleftfoothadlostitssupport,andItumbledbackwards.Melgrabbedmyjacketandmanagedtoslowmedown,butIstillfellabout50feetdownthemountain.Iwasluckytobealive,butIwasbadlyinjured.Myleftlegwasbrokeninmultipleplaces,andIhadadeepgashonmyforehead.Melcalledforhelponhersatellitephone,andtherescueteamarrivedinahelicopter.
I'dbeenlyingontheiceforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.
Iwasfreezingcold,butIwasgratefultoseethem.Theycarefullyputmeonastretcherandloadedmeintothehelicopter.IwastakentoahospitalinPortland,whereIwastreatedformyinjuries.Despitetheaccident,Istillloveclimbing.It'sachallengethatpushesmetobemybest.I'velearnedalotfrommyexperiences,andI'mdeterminedtocontinueclimbing,butI'malsomorecarefulnow.Ialwaysmakesuretochecktheconditionsandtakethenecessaryprecautionsbeforeheadingoutonaclimb.續寫2:Inawhile,Istartedtofall.
MyheartpoundedinmychestasIreachedfortheiceaxe,butmyfingerscouldn'tgripit.Icouldn'tfeelanythingbelowmywaist,butIknewIwasindeeptrouble.IlookedupatMelandsawthefearinhereyes.Shewasholdingontotheiceaxewithallhermight,butitwasnouse.Theicestepwasgivingwaybeneathus.I'dbeenlyingontheiceforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.
Mywholebodywasnumb,andIcouldbarelymove.IlookedupatMelandsawthereliefinhereyes.Shehadmanagedtoclingtotheiceaxe,butshewasexhaustedandcoveredinbruises.Therescuersquicklysecuredusbothwithropesandcarefullyliftedusoffthemountain.續寫3:Inawhile,Istartedtofall.
Myleftlegwasstillcaughtintheice,andIwashangingupsidedown.Iwasconfusedandscared,butIrememberedmytraining.Istayedcalm,andIusedmyiceaxandcramponstoslowmyfall.Istoppedabout20feetbelowtheicestep.I'dbeenlyingontheiceforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.
Mybodywasnumbfromthecold,andIcouldn'tfeelmyleftleg.Therescuersputmeonastretcherandcarriedmedownthemountain.Iwasgratefulfortheirhelp.Despitetheaccident,Istillloveclimbing.It'sagreatwaytochallengemyselfandexperiencethebeautyofnature.I'velearnedalotfrommyexperiences,andI'mgratefulforthesupportofmyfriendsandfamily.I'llcontinuetoclimb,butI'llalwaysbecarefulandfollowsafetyguidelines.續寫4:Inawhile,Istartedtofall.
Fortunately,Iwasabletograbontoarockwithmyrighthandandholdonfordearlife.Iwassuspendedinmid-air,hangingontotherockfordearlife.Melquicklyrealizedwhathadhappenedandrushedovertohelpme.Shecarefullyplacedheraxintheicebelowmeandusedittohelpmebackontothetrail.
I'dbeenlyingontheiceforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.
Iwascoldandscared,butIknewthatMelandIhadmadetherightdecisiontoturnback.Wewereabletomakeitdownthemountainsafely,thankstothesupportandguidanceoftherescueteam.Despitethechallengeswefaced,Istillhaveadeeploveforclimbingandplantocontinueexploringthegreatoutdoors.參考范文:Inawhile,Istartedtofall.IcouldhearMelcallingmynameasIrolleddownthemountain.Istuckoutmyarmsandlegs,grabbingatanythingIcouldtouch.Afterafewseconds,IcametoastopjustabovetheDevil'sKitchen.I'dfallen600feet,Myclotheswerebrokenandmyfacewasbloodiedfromcuts.AsMelmadeherwaydown,Icalledforhelp,andotherclimberscametoassistme,MelstayedbymysidewhileItriednottocryfromthepain.I'dbeenlyingontheiceforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.Theytiedmeintoasledandpulledmedownthemountain.
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