應用文之求助信練習寫作講義題目假定你是李華，你和同學根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導。郵件內容包括：1.劇情簡介；2.指導內容；3.商定時間地點。全文呈現(xiàn)（137字）Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Recently,myclassmatesandIhaveadaptedashortplayaccordingtothetextbook.Iamwritingtoaskyoutodousafavorregardingtheplayweadapted.TheplayisbasedonTheMillionPoundBanknotewrittenbyMarkTwain,whichsuccessfullydepictedanunbelievableadventureofHenryAdams,apennilessAmericaninLondon.However,theadaptationisquitechallenging.Asforthescript,theremustbesomemistakesingrammarandinappropriateusageinwordsandexpressions,socouldyouhelpuswithsomecorrections?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextMondaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.逐句翻譯1.

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?

Recently,myclassmatesandIhaveadaptedashortplayaccordingtothetextbook.一切還好嗎？最近，我和同學根據(jù)課本改編了一個短劇。（求助類應用文開頭的背景描述）2.

Iamwritingtoaskyoutodousafavorregarding

theplayweadapted.我寫信是因為我們改編的劇本需要您的幫助。（求助類應用文功能句，建議記憶）3.TheplayisbasedonTheMillionPoundBanknotewrittenbyMarkTwain,whichsuccessfullydepictedanunbelievableadventureofHenryAdams,apennilessAmericaninLondon.這部短劇是根據(jù)馬克·吐溫的《百萬英鎊》改編的，它成功地描述了亨利·亞當斯，一個身無分文的美國人在倫敦經(jīng)歷的一次不可思議的冒險。（寫作要點一：劇情簡介）4.

However,theadaptationisquitechallenging.然而，改編相當有難度。（轉入求助的環(huán)節(jié)，也就是描述問題的環(huán)節(jié)，肯定需要轉折邏輯）5.Asforthescript,theremustbesomemistakesingrammarandinappropriateusageinwordsandexpressions,

socouldyouhelpuswith

somecorrections?劇本里肯定有些語法錯誤，還有詞匯短語的使用不當，所以您能幫我們做些修改嗎？（從問題到求助的句式，建議記憶）6.

Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextMondaytogiveyoumoredetails?如果您方便的話，我可以在下周一去您的辦公室里找您細說嗎？（求助類應用文功能句）7.

Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.我知道您的日程繁忙，所以如果您能提供一些專業(yè)建議，我會不勝感激。期待您的早日回復。（求助類應用文結尾功能句）不同版本（130字）DearMissEvans,Howisitgoing?Iamwritingtoseekyourassistanceregarding

ashortplaythatmyclassmatesandIhaveadaptedfromourEnglishcoursetext.最近還好嗎？我寫信是想向您求助，我和同學根據(jù)英語課文改編的短劇需要您的幫助。Theplayisaboutagroupoffriendswhosetoffonanadventurousjourneytouncoverahiddentreasure.Alongtheway,theyencountervariouschallenges,developstrongbonds,andultimatelysucceedintheirquest.

Wehaveputinmucheffortsto

composethedialogue,

butweneedyourguidanceto

makeitmorenatural.

Also,

wewouldappreciateanysuggestionsfor

enhancingouroverallstageperformance.這部短劇講述的是一群朋友踏上冒險之旅，去尋找隱藏的寶藏。一路上，他們遇到了各種挑戰(zhàn)，建立了牢固的友誼，最終成功地完成了任務。我們已經(jīng)投入了很多努力去撰寫對話，但是我們需要您的指導，讓它更加自然。此外，我們還希望您能給我們提些建議，幫助我們提升整體舞臺表現(xiàn)。Weareexcitedtoworkwithyouandwouldliketoknowifyoucan

cometousattheschooltheaterat4:00thisFridayafternoon.

Thankyouinadvanceforconsideringourrequest.我們很期待能得到您的指導，不知道您本周五下午4點有沒有時間來學校劇院指導我們。謝謝您考慮我們的請求。Bestregards,LiHua題目假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職。你已經(jīng)寫好申請書和個人簡歷。給外教Ms.Jenkins寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式。提示詞：簡歷resume、格式format全文呈現(xiàn)（100字）I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.I’mapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume.However,IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandtheformatI’veused.Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butI’dbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.Pleasefindmyapplicationletterandresumeintheattachment.Thankyouforyourkindness!逐句翻譯1.I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.我是李華，上學期在您的英語寫作班上。（如果和對方不熟悉，可能需要介紹自己。從題目描述來看，這句話并不是完全必要，可以略去）2.

I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.我寫信是想尋求您的幫助。（求助類應用文功能句式）3.I’m

applyingforapart-timejob

ataforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejust

completedmyapplicationletterandresume.我正在申請暑假期間去我所在城市的一家外國公司兼職，我剛剛完成了我的申請信和簡歷。（求助問題的背景）4.

However,

Iamnotquitesureof

thelanguageandtheformatI’veused.但是，我對自己的語言和使用的格式不太確定。（轉折邏輯引出問題描述）5.

Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butI’dbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimeto

gothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.我知道您的工作很忙，但是如果你能花些時間幫我看看有哪些需要修改的地方，我會非常感激。（求助類應用文功能句式）6.

Pleasefind

myapplicationletterandresume

intheattachment.我的申請信在附件里。（求助問題的補充內容）7.

Thankyouforyourkindness!謝謝您的幫助！（求助類應用文結尾句式）不同版本（131字）DearMs.Jenkins,Howisitgoing?Iamwritingtoseekyourassistancein

reviewingmyapplicationmaterials.最近還好嗎？我寫信給您是希望您能幫忙看看我的申請材料。Asthesummervacationapproaches,Iameagerto

gainsomepracticalexperience

byworkingpart-time

ataninternationaltradingcompany.Ihave

craftedmyapplicationletterandresume.

However,

Iunderstandtheimportanceof

anativeEnglishspeaker’sperspective

inensuring

theclarityandaccuracyinmywriting.

Withyourguidance,IbelieveIcan

improvetheexpressionsandformat

ofmyapplicationmaterialsto

makethemmoreprofessionalandappealing

topotentialemployers.暑假臨近，我想在一家外貿(mào)公司做兼職，從而獲得一些實踐經(jīng)驗。我已經(jīng)初步寫好了申請信和簡歷。但是，我知道英語母語的人的視角對于確保我的內容的清晰度和準確性至關重要。在您的指導下，相信我能提升申請材料的表達方式和格式，使其更加專業(yè)，對潛在的雇主更具吸引力。Igenuinelyappreciateyourwillingness