對比觀點型作文

議論文

議論文（argumentation）是用來論述某個道理、闡述某種觀點的一種文體。它通過擺事實、講道理、辨是非來表達作者的見解和主張。這種文章或從正面提出某種見解、主張，或是駁斥別人的錯誤觀點。議論文應該觀點明確、論據充分、語言精煉、論證合理、邏輯嚴密。

論點、論據和論證是議論文的三要素。議論文常用的寫作方法有：歸納法、推理法、對照法、駁論法、例證法等等。議論文人們對于學生網上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關于學生網上交友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點，并表達自己的看法。贊成的理由:1.廣交朋友2.可自由表達思想3.利于外語學習反對的理由:1.浪費時間2.影響學習3.可能上當受騙你的看法:Lead-in文體：時態：內容要點：

議論文一般現在時1．贊同2．不贊同3．我的看法

廣交朋友可自由表達思想利于外語學習浪費時間影響學習可能上當受騙對比型作文

__________hadadiscussionaboutwhether__________.Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.________ofthestudentsthink_________should________._____.What’smore,_______.

Ontheotherhand,______ofthestudentsthink_______shouldn’t______.What’sworse,______.

Frommypointofview,Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeopleholdtheviewthattheinternethelpsmakemanyfriends.Chattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions,andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.However,otherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthatmakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecanreadilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.Therefore,Ithinkthere’snoneedtomakefriendsonline.

topicPros(贊成)Cons(反對)

conclusion

Thestructureofthearticle介紹討論的主題(開頭句)：我們舉行了一場討論，討論內容是學生是否可以……

Wehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我們已經作了一個調查，調查內容是學生是否可以……

We’vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我寫信是要告訴你我們的一場討論，討論內容是否可以……

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwehavehadaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…Howtointroducethetopic總起:

Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Opinionsaredividedonthisproblem.Peoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisproblem.

Howtobeginwith介紹正方觀點：…ofthestudentsarefortheidea,firmlybelievingthat…

…ofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto…Somepeoplethink/believethat…Theyareoftheopinionthat…Pros進一步介紹反方觀點What’sworse,/Evenworse,/Worsestill,/Tomakemattersworse…Inaddition,…Apartfromthat,…Tobeginwith…,Besides/Apartfromthat/What’smore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover…/What’sworse/Evenworse/Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse…/Asaresult/Therefore…并列關系：and,aswellas,also…遞進關系：besides,inaddition,moreover,what’smore…比較、對比：like,unlike,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand…過渡句However,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,eachcoinhastwosides.

Transitionsentence介紹反方觀點However,…ofthestudentsthinkthat…Ontheotherhand,…ofthestudentsbelievethat…But…ofthestudentsarguethat…Cons

總結（你的觀點）AsfarasIamconcerned,Frommypointofview,Butforme,Personally,Itismyopinionthat…Inmyopinion,Conclusion

時下，很多學生帶手機上學。為此，某英語報在你校組織了一場討論。討論的主題：中學生是否有必要帶手機去學校。下表提供的信息供參考，給報社寫一封信，介紹討論情況并發表自己的意見。大多數同學認為：可方便與家長、同學聯系；是一種時尚。 大多數老師認為：中學生年齡尚小，還不能自控；用手機玩游戲，發短信浪費時間；容易引起攀比。你的觀點： 注意：1．信的開頭已為你寫好。2．詞數：100左右。3．參考詞匯：攀比：viewith…在校園內：onthecampusDeareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussion…Writing

仔細審題（4確定）

（1）style(體裁)

__________________（2）content__________________________

______________________________________________（3）中心人稱Person

__________________（4）主體時態Tense

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aletterthethirdpersonthesimplepresentwhetheritisnecessaryfor

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schoolstudentstocarrymobilephonestoschool內容

2.提煉要點，確定重點詞匯要點：正反觀點+我的觀點Point1:可方便與家長、同學聯系Point2:是一種時尚Point3:中學生年齡尚小，還不能自控Point4:用手機玩游戲，發短信浪費時間Ponit5:容易引起攀比Mypointofview:

convenient,keepintouchwith

fashioncontrolthemselvesawasteoftime,playgames,sendmessagesviewitheachother3.連詞成句1.可方便與家長、同學聯系2.是一種時尚

Itisconvenientforthemtokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandclassmates.It’safashion.3.中學生年齡尚小，還不能自控4.用手機玩游戲，發短信浪費時間5.容易引起攀比Middleschoolstudentsarenotoldenough.Theycan’tcontrolthemselves.Studentsplaygamesandsendmessagestoeachotherbymobilephone.It’sawasteoftime.It’seasytocausethestudentstoviewitheachother.按要點間的內在關系組織文章,使用關聯詞。1．表示轉折關系

but/yet/whereashoweverotherwiseinspiteof/despiteinstead(of)ratherthan（2）巧妙使用連接詞2．表示遞進關系

aswellasinaddition(to)besidesmoreoverwhat’smore

Thankyou!Deareditor，I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheritisnecessaryformiddleschoolstudentstocarrymobilephonestoschool.Themajorityofthestudentsthinkthatitismoreconvenientforthemtokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandclassmatesiftheyhaveamobilephone.Andwhat'smore,it'safashion.However,mostteachersthinkthatmiddleschoolstudentsarenotoldenoughtocontrolthemselves.Itisawasteoftimeforstudentstoplaygamesandsendmessagestoeachotherbymobilephone.Andit'seasytocausethestudentstoviewitheachother.Inmyopinion,followingthefashionisunderstandable.Butasmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldputallourheartintoourstudies.A.對比觀點題型

I.要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。1．有一些人認為…2．另一些人認為…3．我的看法…Thetopicof①-----------------（主題）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsofit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-----------------（支持A的理由一）Whatismor