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每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”(NationalFitnessDay)，為了讓這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)更加深入人心，某英文報(bào)紙正在舉辦有獎(jiǎng)?wù)魑幕顒?dòng)，請(qǐng)你以Doingsportsis_______為題寫篇短文（詞數(shù)80-100），向該報(bào)刊投稿。步驟與要點(diǎn)如下:1.確定主題，并在文中說明原因；2.圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述；3.講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事、經(jīng)歷或計(jì)劃。要求：1.補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題；(參考詞匯:healthy,interesting,useful,helpful…)2.字跡工整，內(nèi)容完整連貫，語言準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范；3.鼓勵(lì)寫出真情實(shí)感，對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分；4.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子；5.作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)校名和姓名。Howcanwewriteagoodcompositon?7stepsofwritingStepsofwriting1.

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