第二章短文改錯(cuò)口老均?高考短文改錯(cuò)題重視考察考生的語言基本功和正確使用英語進(jìn)行表達(dá)的能力。此題型不單要求考生牢固掌握必然的詞匯和語法知識(shí)，還要求考生具有必然的閱讀理解和邏輯推理能力。它是針對(duì)考一生時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)英語過程中，特別是在寫作中常犯的錯(cuò)誤而設(shè)計(jì)的，考生在平常寫作中常出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤是短文改錯(cuò)考察的要點(diǎn)。近兩年全國(guó)卷命題視角項(xiàng)目2016I卷H卷考點(diǎn)名詞11P4八、、動(dòng)詞2散布形容詞00副詞10代詞13連詞21介詞10冠詞11從句10種類錯(cuò)詞88少詞11多詞11命題規(guī)律］

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2015I卷H卷113320021110111101881111短文改錯(cuò)平時(shí)從詞法、句法和行文邏輯三個(gè)角度設(shè)題，要求考生識(shí)別并糾正短文中的語言知識(shí)錯(cuò)誤。短文改錯(cuò)的錯(cuò)誤種類有多詞、缺詞和錯(cuò)詞三種，在文章的10個(gè)錯(cuò)誤中，以錯(cuò)詞設(shè)計(jì)為主導(dǎo)。■占起電qPassage1（2016全國(guó)I卷）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換更正作文，請(qǐng)你更正你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增添、刪除或更正。增添：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A），并在其下邊寫出該加的詞。刪除：把節(jié)余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。更正：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下邊寫出更正后的詞。注意：1?每處錯(cuò)誤及其更正均僅限一詞；2.只同意更正10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea?ltisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.答案：thatMyuncleistheownerofarestaurantcloseto^1live.Thoughnotverybig,therestaurantispopularinourarea.Itis_alwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleev^a

hadvehonesttowait。血恥.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccesshionesty.EverydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorndhighqualityoilareAusingusedforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreams^aboutbecomingrichintheour—shortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthat^ssteadybusinesswiHgrowsteadilyPassage2（2016全國(guó)II卷）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換更正作文，請(qǐng)你更正你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增添、刪除或更正。增添：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A），并在其下邊寫出該加的詞。刪除：把節(jié)余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。更正：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下邊寫出更正后的詞。注意：1?每處錯(cuò)誤及其更正均僅限一詞;2.只同意更正10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Thesummerholidayiscoming?MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathomeitiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcasewewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroadwecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmanyyetwecanstilllearnalot.答案：howaboutwhatathomeand

chosetododuringtheholiday.Wecanchoosebetweenstayingtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebuttakingandThesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleAworld?Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyouraboutourviewandgaink^wsdg?wecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmates卞canthought磐yetwecanstilllearnalot.itisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcosuggestwe/Shouldgotoplacesofinterestnearby.IthinkthatPassage3（2016全國(guó)皿卷）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換更正作文，請(qǐng)你更正你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增添、刪除或更正。增添：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A），并在其下邊寫出該加的詞。刪除：把節(jié)余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。更正：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下邊寫出更正后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其更正均僅限一詞；2.只同意更正10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefii;stIthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.Howevermyparentsdidn'tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.AtonetimeIevenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.AtlastIwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.答案：—year_Theteenageyearsfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandw^^yearsinmylife.Atfirst,IyourselfthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisions.suchtellHowever,myparentsdidn'tseemtothink?Theyalwaysmewhattodoandhowtodoit.AtonetimeIevenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbeffreelyreefromthem.IshowedthemwearIwasindependentbywearingstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometoforcollege.AtlastIwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyA題演.媒、真題再現(xiàn)

parentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.Passage12015全國(guó)I卷）WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.lthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrializationtheenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout?Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment?lfwefailtodoso,we'lllivetoregretit.答案:thinkWhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.thought'wouldAbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeinorthemountainsaregreen.countryside?Theretheairisclear^ndonUnfortunately,thedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshaveshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.TheseriousairsMuchwereatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtierrareanimalsareairb.Manyfounddyingout.Wemust竹北

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neverhappenagain.Passage1OnthefirstdaywhenIwenttohighschoolIfeltexciting.After9years'studyIfeltIwassocloselytouniversity.DuringthefirstyearImakemanyfriends.Igottoknowallofmyclassmates.Becausetheschoolworkwastough,Isharedhappinessandsorrowformyfriends.WhensecondyearcameIwasarrangedtootherclass.IwasworriedthatnoonecouldtalktomebutImadenewfriendsquickly.NowitisthelastyearofmyhighschoollifdoutI'mdeterminedtostudymoreharderandmakegreaterprogress.HighschoollifeischallengingformebutIwon'tgiveout.答案：_excitingOnthefirstdaywhenIwenttohighschool‘feltexcited.After9]closely_years'study,IfeltIwassoclosetouniversity.Duringthefirstyear,Imakemademanyfriends.Igottoknowallofmyclassmates.Becausetheschoolworkwastough,IsharedAlthough/ThoughAhappinessandsorrowwthmyfriends.Whensecondyearcame,Iotherwasarrangedtoanotherclass.Iwasworriedthatnoonecouldtalktome,butImadenewfriendsquickly.NowitisthelastyearofmyhighschoollifebutniharderandmakeI'mdeterminedtostudyandgreaterprogress?Highschoollifeischallengingforme,butIwon'tgiveoutup.Passage2Smileisamagiclanguagethateveryonecaneasilyunderstandwheneverheorshecomesfrom.Smileisasthegoldensunshinethatbringswarmthtopeopleandmakeshimhappy.Smileisshortestdistancebetweenpeopleanditisagoodwaytoshowofffriendlinesstoothers.Moreimpo