四級寫作考試沖刺班內部筆記寫作的重要性6分最低限，只要結構不出錯，得分應該為9分。評判作文四級考試作文主要看內容、結構、語言三個方面。內容不跑題即可，注意：1.不要妄圖以情動人;2.不要妄圖在構思上出奇制勝。(TopicSentence)(Conclusion)。語言最重要，往往使評分產生重大差異，語言要模仿和包裝。基本表達人們認為人們普遍認為Itisgenerallyagreed/believedthat越來越：beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof萬能理由(Omnipotence)1.方便：convenient/convenience2.效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency3.節省和浪費：savetime/money/space;economical,thrift;wastetime/money/space;costly,lavish4.人的心理健康：independent,cooperative,competitive,considerate,confident,creative,sociable,perseverance;selfish,isolated,conservative5.人的身體健康：health,disease,strong,strength,energetic6.娛樂：colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainment,relax,tired,boring,lonely7.環境：environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty8.安全和危險：safe,danger,risk9.經驗：experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety110.人際：humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely寫完之后修改注意：(內容方面盡量不要修改)1、字母大小寫2、怪符號3、單詞拼寫4、主謂一致5、動詞時態6、名詞單復數來源實例一題目：Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提綱：(1)為什么自行車在中國這樣普及(2)和汽車的比較(3)自行車在中國的前途Score:14BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.注：1.第一句總寫，第二句和第三句分寫，最后總寫。:考2.Duringtherushhour分詞結構開頭。3．Almostadv.幾乎，差不多3.破折號內容為同位語,句式多變化。Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadriver2toparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.注：1.Comparedwithcars分詞結構開頭。2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto優于/低于3.First,second,third英語語言有層次感，信號詞4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive5.begoodforhealth對健康有好處(萬能理由)6.Moreover表示遞進Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.注：promising有前途的apromisingyoungmanScore:11aaaaa注：第一句應該用therebe結構aaaaaaa3IaaaII、對比觀點選擇題：1.有人認為??;2.另外一些人認為??;3.談談你的觀點和看法。(最好寫成4段)實例二99年6月真題ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?Outline:1.有人認為讀書要有選擇2.有人認為應當博覽群書3.我的想法Howshouldweread?Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?Everyonehashisownview.Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.4Who’sright?Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：(啟)ParagraphI：(1)引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點;(2)簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。Score:14分Howshouldweread?Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?Everyonehashisownview.(啟)注：第一句提出問題，第二句提出兩種見解典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：(承)ParagraphII：(1)提出一種觀點或優點;(2)本段的支持性分論點;(3)本段總結(可以省略)。Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.(承)注：1.本段總分總結構52.theyarguethat=theythinkthat3.withthedevelopmentof...隨著??的發展4.what'smore遞進關系，moreover5.bad=pornographic色情的&violent暴力的(轉)ParagraphIII(1)承上啟下的過渡句;(2)提出另一種觀點或缺點;(3)本段的支持性分論點(4)本段總(可以省略)。Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.(轉)注：1.But轉折詞(信號詞)2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthat3.today'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas現代社會今昔非比4.許多知識awiderangeofknowledge/alargescopeofknowledge/muchknowledge;獲取知識acquire/getknowledge65.knowsnothing→little;hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：(合)ParagraphIV：(1)平衡兩種看法;(2)給出自己的觀點。Who’sright?Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.(合)Score:11分Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.注：結構非常好，可以套用。Thosepeople，whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.注：1.“people,who...,”應去掉逗號，改為限制性定語從句。2.asmanyasbadbooks改為asmanyasbadones3.leadustothewrongway改為leadsb.astray74.theysuggestthat=theythinkthat5.touch碰(閃光點詞匯：如教材P7shoulderingtheresponsibilityofdoingsth.肩負起責任)But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat“toknowmore,toreadmore”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.注：1.hold認為同樣表示“think”的詞還有argue,emphasize,believe,suggest,claim,insist,maintain,agree,hold2.thebestbook在西方國家是“圣經”的意思3.toknowmore,toreadmore錯誤，中式英語Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.范文22.IsTelevisionaBlessingoraCurse?Now,itisgenerallyacceptedthattelevisionplaysanimportantpartinpeople’slives.But,thereisanongoingheateddiscussionastowhethertelevisionisablessingoracurse.8注：itisgenerallyacceptedthat人們通常認為Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople,televisionkeepsonebetterinformedaboutcurrentevents,allowsonetofollowthelatestdevelopmentsinpoliticsandscience,andoffersanendlessseriesofprogramswhicharebothinstructiveandstimulating.Themostdistantcountries,thestrangestcustomsandthemostattractivescenesofnaturearebroughtrightintoone’sroom.試大-英語四級考試注：1.Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople=Somepeoplethinkthat2.“使??”不用make，而用keep,allow,offerHowever,otherpeopleinsistthattelevisionisacurseratherthanablessing.Theyarguethatithasbroughtaboutmanyseriousproblems.Themajoroneisitseffectsonyoungpeople.Theyarenowsousedtogettingtheirinformation,educationandentertainmentfromtelevisionthattheirliteracyaswellasphysicalabilityhasbeengreatlyweakened.Evenworsethanthat,vulgarcommercialsandindecentprogramsmaycultivatetheirbadtastes,distorttheirviewpointstowardshumanlifetosuchadegreethattheirmindsmightbecorrupted.Insummary,televisionhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain,televisioninitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusestowhichitisputthatdeterminesitsvaluetosociety.范文5.TravellingPeoplewholiketravellinghavetheirreasons.Theymaintainthat9travellingcanhelpthemexpandtheirscopeofknowledge,especiallygeographicalandhistoricallearning.Theygoontopointoutthattouringwillprovidemorechanceforthemtoenjoyfoodandtryonclothesthattheyotherwisecannotpossiblehave.注：geographicalandhistorical押尾韻，如：押頭韻clear&cleanThosewhodisliketravellinghavetheirreasons.Theywouldarguethattravellingmeansaconsiderableamountofmoneyandenergy.Forexample,trafficandaccommodationrequiremoneyandwalkingwhileseeingsightsoftentiresyou.Inpractice,travellingdoesmoregoodthanharm.Ifyourfinanceandhealthpermit,youmightaswelldosometravellingfromtimetotime.Itwillatleastenableyoutogetfamiliarwithpeopleandthingsthatyouwillprobablygrowtolikeandlove.注：1.inpractice=Ithink2.doesmoregoodthanharm好處比壞處多，其他表達方法：besuperiorto/inferiorto比如：theadvantagesaresuperiortothedisadvantages3.enable使范文1.IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?AtestofspokenEnglishwillbeincludedasanoptionalcomponentoftheCollegeEnglishTest(CET).SomepeoplearguethatitisabsolutelynecessarytoholdatestofspokenEnglishinChinabecausewehavebeeninformedfrequentlythataChinesestudentwhohasbeenlearningEnglishforovertenyearscannotevencommunicatewithanativespeaker.SometimeseventhosetopstudentswhoexcelingrammarandwritingskillsfindtheirEnglishinadequatetoexpresstheirthoughtsfreely.Atest10ofEnglishwillbringthecollegestudentsanawarenessoftheimportanceoforalEnglish,andwillthushelpthemwiththeircommunicatingskills.使句子具有表現力的手段：1、用形容詞修飾名詞;2、副詞修飾動詞、副詞修飾形容詞Ontheotherhand,someothersstillmaintainthatagoodcommandofreadingandwritingskillswillbeenoughfortheEnglishlearners.Tosomeextenttheiropinionderivesfromthefactthatstudentsarealreadyunderconsiderablepressurefromtheiropinionderivesfromthefactthatstudentsarealreadyunderconsiderablepressurefromtheircoursework.Anotherrequiredtestwillonlyaddtotheirburden.Moreover,somestudentsmaytaketheshortcutbyfocusingonseveralguessedquestionsaccordingtothefixedformatofthetest,hopingforacoincidencetobringthemgoodluck.Inmyopinion,atestofspokenEnglishwilldomoregoodthanharm.SinceChinawillcontinueitspolicyofopeningandreform,theabilitytospeakEnglishfluentlyisamustforanyonewhowantstosurpassothersinahighlycompetitivesociety.WhetherItakethetestornot,IshallsparenoeffortstopracticeoralEnglishintheremainingyearsofmycollegestudy.范文21.Shouldsmokingbebanned?Shouldsmokingbebanned?Answerstothisquestionvarygreatly.Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofsmoking.Theyalwayssaythatitcangetridofthetirednessandmakethemrefreshed.Andtheyalsosaythatgivingandbeinggivencigarettesisasignoffriendship.Therefore,theycarrycigaretteswiththemwherevertheygo.11注：1.varygreatly許多種2.beinfavorof=agree/beoftheopinionthat3.getridofthetirednessandmakethemrefreshed使人神清氣爽4.Givingandbeinggiven給與被給。主、被動關系在英文中用現在、過去分詞表達。a注：1.Theyhaveheardtheofficialreportsthat...官方報告表明..2.bemorelikelyto更有可能，更容易3.chance可能tooverweight超重2.最后用兩句反問句結尾，非常精妙。課后作業PrivateCars寫成4段的首段寫法：①12②a③aa寫成3段的首段寫法：/)支持段的主題句：Somepeopleclaimthat/Asispointedoutthat/Itisgenerallybelievedthat/Itiswidelyacceptedthat,therearesomeadvantagesofowningaprivatecar.13Thereisnodoubtthatprivatecarsbenefitpeoplehugely.支持段的分論點：①方便First,privatecarsprovidepeoplewiththemostconvenientformoftransportation.②舒適Second,itiscomfortableforpeopletotravelin,especiallyinchangeableweather/rainingdays/sandstorm.③炫耀Third,onlyaprivatecarcanshowaperson'ssocialstatus/achievement/success/prosperityinhisorhercareer.否定段的主題句：①However(Nonetheless/Nevertheless/But),therearesomedisadvantagesofowingaprivatecar/Everycoinhastwosides.②Whileenjoyingtheconveniencethatprivatecarsbringus,weshouldnotignoretheproblemtheycreate/produce/introduce/make.③Despite/Inspiteof/Foralltheadvantages,theybringstheirowndisadvantages/problems/negativeeffects④Likeanythingelse,privatecarsalsohavetheirownweakness/limits.⑤However,privatecarsarenotwithoutshortcomings/faults.14⑥Yetotherspeakoftheproblemsprivatecarshavebrought.Theycomplainthat......⑦However,privatecarsmayalsobringwithitproblemsoursocietyhadnotpreviouslyfaced.⑧Despitetheincreaseinefficiencyandconveniencegeneratedbyprivatecars,thechangestheybringcouldverywellleadtopotentiallyadverseconsequences.否定段的分論點：①占有空間Ontheonehand,privatecarstakeup/occupytoomuchspace.②交通事故Ontheotherhand,adrivershouldbecareful/cautiouswhiledriving,otherwise,caraccidentsaremorelikelytohappen.③污染環境What'smore/Inaddition,privatecarsgiveoff/discharge/releaseCOwhichpollutetheenvironment/air.superordinate的詞;而下義詞就是具體的東西，即subordinate的東西。第四段(總結段)的寫法：①Despiteallthedisadvantagesmentionedabove,Istillthinkthattheadvantagesoutweigh/aregreaterthanthedisadvantages.Asfortheaboveproblem,I'msuretheywillbesettledbythescientistsinthe15future/Itisonlyamatteroftimefortheproblemstobesolved.②Unquestionably,thechallengeofprivatecarsmeansweallshouldconsiderhowwecancontrolthem,sothattheywillnotcontrolus.③Whethertheprivatecarsareablessingoracurseisadifficultquestiontoanswer,yetthedesireforthecomfortandindependenceaprivatecarcanbringwillnotbeelminated.④Anyway/Anyhow/Inanycase,whethertheeffectisgoodorbad,onethingiscertain:privatecarshavechangedandwillcontinuetochangethewayofourtransportation,ourleisureandourlife.范文一：Withtheincreaseinthegeneralstandardofliving,someordinaryChinesefamiliesbegintoaffordacar.Yetopinionsofthedevelopmentofaprivatecarvaryfrompersontoperson.Itgivesamuchgreaterdegreeofcomfortandownerofacarisnolongerforcedtoreplyonpublictransport,andhencenoirritationcausedbywaitingforbusesortaxis.However,othersstronglyobjecttodevelopingprivatecars.Theymaintainthatasmoreandmorecarsareproducedandruninthestreet,alargevolumeofpoisonousgaswillbegivenoff,pollutingtheatmosphereandcausingactualharmtothehealthofpeople.WhetherprivatecarsshouldbedevelopedinChicagoisadifficultquestiontoanswer,yetthedesireforthecomfortandindependenceaprivatecarcanbringwillnotbeeliminated.16范文二Nowadaysmoreandmorefamiliesownprivatecars.Privatecars,astheproductofmodemcivilization,havebeenplayingavitalroleinpeople'sdailyFirst,privatecarsareaconvenientmeansoftransportation.Youcangowhereveryoulike.Secondly,thereisnodoubtthatprivatecarswillhaveagreatimpactontheTherapidcarindustrygrowthwillcontributemuchtokeepingthecountry'seconomygrowingatahigherrateinthenearfutrue.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thedevelopmentoftheprivatecarswillbringaboutaseriesofproblems.Forexample,thepollutedairgivenoffbycarswilldogreatharmtoourhealth,toomanyprivatecarswillleadtotrafficjamsandagreatdealofenergywillbewastedandsoon.SoIthinkweshouldtakeadvantagesofpr