Module3MyFirstRideonaTrain第1頁Writing第2頁寫作五步驟1.審清主題看題目中包括到了哪些關鍵點，這些點要全部包含其中2.搜集素材素材搜集一定要在已經將關鍵點包含其中基礎上，在頭腦中進行相關內容串聯。3.編寫句子：句子編寫過程中要主要句子成份一定要完整；詳細語法使用一定要正確（主謂一致，主格，賓格，固定短語等）；省略掉累贅無須要句子。

4.提醒技巧回想自己曾經記憶過好句型，將簡單句適當轉換為高級句子。5.WriteaParagraph\Paragraphs連句成文Firstly,First,Firstofall,Secondly,Then,Afterthis/that,Finally,Last,Lastly,and,however,therefore.第3頁Brainstorming:試著描述一次你旅行，寫出相關可能包括到關鍵點：第4頁ITEMSDETAILStimeplacespersonstransportWhattodoWeather;climateHowwefeel第5頁ITEMSDETAILStimeLastsummerholidayOntheNationalDayAttheageoftwelveLastSundayplaceThe___MountainTheSummerPalace（頤和園）ThemuseumtheForestPark（森林公園）personsWithmycousinsWithmyparentsWithmyauntsWithmyfriendstransportBytrainBybusBysubwayBybikeWhattodoClimbmountain,Seeforeigners,Talk,LearnfromeachotherGoboating,Haveapicnic,BecaughtwithaheavyrainTired,expensive,Toomanyvisitors,

enjoythemselves,wanttovisitoncemoreWeather;ClimateSnowy;Winter.ColdCloudy;SummerhotSunny;Autumn/fallcoolRainy;SpringwarmHowwefeelexcitedEnjoyedourselvesunforgettableMemorable（難忘，值得紀念）第6頁August14th,itwascloudy.MycollegesandIhadavisittotheGreatOceanRoad（大洋路）inAustralia.（時間，天氣，人物，目地）第7頁

WestartedfromMelbourne.Wedrovealongthefreewaythroughthedesertandforests.(旅程以及交通工具）第8頁Wesawsomekangaroosandkoalasalongtheroad.（見聞）第9頁第10頁Finally,fourhourslater,wearrivedattheGreatOceanRoad.

（注意寫作中連詞利用）第11頁Atthismomentitbegantoraincatsanddogs.猛烈大雨（旅途中天氣改變）第12頁Intherain,thewaves,rocksandwindslookedsplendid(壯觀).(旅途中景色）第13頁Itookalotofpicturesthere.(我活動）

第14頁Afterawhile,therainstoppedandtherainbowappeared.（天氣改變）Inthesun,theseawasdeepblueandtherocksweregolden.第15頁It’sverybeautiful.Thisisamemorabletrip.(結束語：多為對上文寫作內容總結，可表示自己感受等）

第16頁August14,itwasacloudywinterinAustralia.MycollegesandIhadavisittotheGreatOceanRoad.WestartedfromMelbourne.Wedrovealongthefreewaythroughthedesertandforests.Wesawsomekangaroosandkoalasbytheroad.Finally,fourhourslater,wearrivedattheGreatOceanRoad.Atthismomentitbegantoraincatsanddogs.Intheheavyrain,thewaves,windsandrockslookedsplendid(壯觀).Itookalotofpicturesthere.Afterawhile,therainstoppedandtherainbowappeared.Inthesun,theseawasdeepblueandtherocksweregolden.It’sveryattractive.Ienjoyedmyselfverymuch第17頁１．在作文中用到第一人稱用來描述真實或者想想類發生在自己身上事件Instructions第18頁2.可能用到時態（參考時態）普通過去時態：e.g.MycollegesandIhadavisittotheGreatOceanRoadinAustralia.過去進行時e.g.Itwasrainingforabouthalfanhour.過去完成時e.g.Thetrainhadalreadyleftbythetimewegottothestation.

第19頁作業：依據你自己寫出關鍵點，結合練習冊60頁