考研寫作4連俊霞北京新東方學(xué)校第1頁2.2寓意說明+原因分析段Itisblindworshipthatmakesitpossibletodosuchcrazy/unreasonablethingsasthephotosdisplay.Themainreason,Iassume,wouldbethedistortededucationofthepopularcultureleadingtothepervasivenessofthestar-worshipping.Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincreaseofteenagers’someoneissoprominentthattheresultcausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows./10/10Writing21強(qiáng)調(diào)句說明寓意插入分詞做定語3數(shù)據(jù)論證desire/aspirationsofrespectingeagernesstorespect2過渡說明原因第2頁2.2寓意說明+原因分析段…Itmaymisleadadolescentstodreamaboutanimmediatesuccess/triumph

ratherthantodedicatetotheirstudy.Anditisoflittlesurprisetofindtheirdisappointmentatlast.107words/10/10Writing34結(jié)果推導(dǎo)5深入推導(dǎo)形式主語句第3頁二、高分范文得分解密2.2寓意說明段+舉例說明段（1）五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)；第二句說明以下事例能夠證實(shí)；第三四句一個事例及擴(kuò)展；第五六句另一個擴(kuò)展。詳細(xì)化——切忌以理說理。（2）注意事項(xiàng)——切忌例子私人化。（3）擴(kuò)展方式——數(shù)據(jù)論證、借用常識、引用權(quán)威、因果論證、比較論證例中人/例中事behave(s)/occur(s)inthesamewaythat圖中人/圖中事do(es)inthepicture./10/10Writing4第4頁2.3寓意說明+舉例說明段1998(P34)Itseemsreasonablewhenpeoplelaughatthecartoon,butitwouldnolongerbelaughablewhenpeoplefindsimilarthingstakingplaceinourdailylife.1

Recentlythereisatrendofmakingpromisesinvariousfieldsofoursociety.Fromdepartmentsofgovernmenttocommonshoppingcenters,manybusinesseswhosupplyproductsorofferserviceshavemadevariouspromisestotheircustomersorservicereceivers.2

/10/10Writing5分詞作定語定語從句第5頁2.3寓意說明+舉例說明段Theyasserttheirproductstobeofgoodqualityorpromisetoofferexcellentservice.3

Asamatteroffact,manyofthesebusinessesclaiminthesamewaythat（比較）thehenintheabovecartoonpromisestolayeggs.4ofgreatimportance/significance=important/significantofgreat/littlepossibility=possible/impossibleofgreathelp=helpfulofpoor/outstandingquality/10/10Writing6of+n.=adj.比較論證第6頁2.3寓意說明+舉例說明段舉例論證慣用過渡句：Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.…(短語/that主語從句)providesuswithanexcellentexample.Eg.Teenagerssurfingonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.

Thatteenagers,inincreasingnumbers,surfonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample./10/10Writing7第7頁2.4寓意說明+利弊分析段，，主動中帶有消極，消極中暗含主動五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)；第二句說明有利有弊；ononehand,第三四句一個優(yōu)點(diǎn)及擴(kuò)展；ontheotherhand,第五六句一個缺點(diǎn)及擴(kuò)展。優(yōu)點(diǎn)/缺點(diǎn)=原因

擴(kuò)展=舉例/數(shù)據(jù)/權(quán)威/常識/結(jié)果(五種論證)/10/10Writing8論點(diǎn)必須清楚第8頁2.4寓意說明+利弊分析段(P35)Fromthecartoon,wecanconcludethatthecartoonistwantstoconveysuchamessage:withthepopularityofcomputers,peoplefromallovertheworldbecomenearerbyusingtheinternettocommunicatewitheachother.1

Meanwhile,peoplealsobecomefarawayfromtheirfriends.2

Allofusacceptthefactthatthedevelopmentoftheinternetbringslotsofconveniencestoourdailylife,forinstance,wecanbuyabookonthenetinsteadofgoingtoabookstore./10/10Writing9套話一句引出“利”ratherthan第9頁2.4寓意說明+利弊分析段Besides,wecancommunicatewithourfriendsonthenetwithoutgoingoutofhome.3Butwecan'tignoretheothersideofthese:thetimewespendwithfriendsorfamilybecomesless.Andwehardlyseethemonceinaweek.Itwillmakeusfeellonelyifwecontinuetousethetoolonthenettotalkwithfriendsinsteadoftalkingwiththemonthephoneorgoingoutwiththem.4158words/10/10Writing10第10頁2.5提議辦法段三至四句(50-55詞)：第一句過渡詞(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出重復(fù)論點(diǎn)；第二句改進(jìn)提議(消極意義)或提升方式(主動意義)；第三句表明期待結(jié)果。改進(jìn)提議慣用表示方式：Itishightimethat…(did)…Itisimperativefor…that…(should)…(3)提升方式慣用表示方式：Asenhancingthesenseof…,wewouldbenefitmorefrom…

/10/10Writing11第11頁2.5提議辦法段三至四句：第一句過渡詞(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出重復(fù)論點(diǎn)；第二句改進(jìn)提議(消極意義)或提升方式(主動意義)；第三句表明期待結(jié)果。(4)表明期待結(jié)果慣用表示方式：Onlyinthisway/bydoing/byexertingthiscanweboth…andembraceabrightertomorrow./10/10Writing12第12頁2.5提議辦法段(P36)——消極寓義Childeducationhasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartopicsdiscussednotonlybyeducationalexperts,butalsobypeopleinallwalks

oflife.

Thefailureofchildeducationdoesmoreharmtothedevelopmentofoursocietyandourcivilizationthantothechildrenthemselves.Thus,it’shightime

thatparents,educatorsandthegovernmentmade

concerted

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toputanendtothissituation.70words/10/10Writing13重復(fù)觀點(diǎn)第13頁2.5提議辦法段(P47紫)——主動寓義Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakesomemeasurestoenhancethesenseofteamworkinoursociety.Weshouldbearinmindthatteamworkisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves.Everyoneshouldhavetheabilityofteamwork.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccessandonlyinthiswaycanoursocietybecomemoreharmonioustolivein.70words/10/10Writing14both第14頁三、短文寫作篇章分析（1）寫作三段論首段——圖畫描述段中間段1——寓意說明段+原因分析段中間段2——寓意說明段+舉例說明段

中間段3——寓意說明段+利弊分析段尾段——提議辦法段（2）篇章結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)段與段之間過渡——第二段第一句寓意說明；第三段第一句重復(fù)觀點(diǎn)段內(nèi)銜接——各種連接詞使用（P6）/10/10Writing15消極寓意類主動寓意類必須使用！！！利弊包含類第15頁三、短文寫作步驟審題——主動還是消極列提要——三段選擇與句型填充（漢字處理邏輯思緒）開始寫組——注意語法，書寫工整檢驗(yàn)——拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法、動詞（唯一性標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）/10/10Writing16第16頁圖畫描述Thereisaboilinghotpot,asisillustratedinthepicture,withvariousingredientsofmulti-cultures,suchasfamousfigureshomeandabroad:BiShengandShakespeare,philosophicalconcepts:ConfucianismandTaoism,performingart:BeijingOperaandSwanLake,andthelike.Thecaptionunderthepictureisthattheculturalhotpotisbothdeliciousandnutritious.59words/10/10Writing17插入