1、寫作進階提升之五教你如何行文及潤色 寫作進階提升五個步驟1、審題 （文體、主題、內容、人稱、時態）2、提煉要點，思考關鍵詞3、緊扣要點，連詞成句4、連句成文：主語和謂語背景（增加時間、地點條件等）邏輯關系開頭與結尾5、檢查修改，規范抄寫語篇銜接 Some students think it is not good for people to keep pets in cities, because it will cause pollution to our environment. And the pets always make a noise that will disturb othe

2、rs. However, others think we should see the positive aspects of keeping animals. It is very necessary for the lonely old people to have company and pets can be a good choice. If we can get on well with the animals, it will enrich our life, too. I think if we really love animals, we neednt show our l

3、ove to them by keeping them, because the pets are not free and its not fair to the animals. If we donate the money used in keeping pets to some animal organizations, it will be more helpful to the animals. (By Dong Shuoyi) Some say that dogs make a big noise in the community, and sometime they even

4、hurt people. Besides, animal drops also pollute the environment. They dont agree to have pets in cities. Although I admit all the disadvantages they mentioned, compared to the highlights, pets bring such shortcomings seem to be as small as a pencil tip. As we see, a lovely kitty always keeps the old

5、 in company. It may bring good health to the old, as well as joy. And nowadays the harmonious society is being constantly promoted. We humans should live with animal friends in harmony as well. Only in this way can we make our earth a paradise for all the living. So, choose an animal friend and be a

6、 friend to animals. (By Zhuang Chenxi)1.增加較復雜的句子結構 2.使用豐富的詞匯3.適當運用結構詞和關聯詞: however, therefore, thus, after a while, all of a sudden, at last, as a result, in fact 等, 使句子 更為流暢。 As far as I am concerned, I strongly hold the opinion that this plan should be carried out continually not only because it g

7、ives us more space to develop our critical thinking and independent ability but also because we really feel much happier than ever before. 書面表達注意事項 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had bravely saved my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had bravely saved my

8、 little sister. I met an old friend in the street. The street was very crowded. I met an old friend in the street, which was very crowded.We can make progress in English only in this way.Only in this way can we make progress in English. (1) 強調句(2) 倒裝句(3) 復合句(4) 介詞短語 My mother sat in a chair with a n

9、ewspaper in her hand. My mother sat in a chair. There was a newspaper in her hand.（with 復合結構） She left and did not say goodbye. She left without saying goodbye.(5) 分詞短語 Satisfied with the result, he decided to go on with a new experiment. He was satisfied with the result, so he decided to go on with

10、 a new experiment.（分詞做狀語）并列and; as well as ; also; 選擇or; eitheror; or else; otherwise原因because ; owing to; due to ;on account of ; thanks to結果so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result 時間when ;soon after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally ; afterwards.比較on the contrary ; on the other hand

11、; like 轉折but ; yet; however ; although; in spite of ; instead ; 遞進besides ; moreover ; even ; in addition 舉例for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; 總結after all ; in short ; in general ; generally speaking 語篇銜接的過渡詞語潤色提升示例 你的英國朋友正在做一個課題；世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學生過生日的方式。請你根據以下要點寫一篇短文：一、通常方式1生日聚會2

12、生日禮物3生日祝福二、我認為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由 *詞數100-12017 29即時訓練 你班同學參加了 “二十一世紀中學生英文報組織的一場討論。 討論的主題是: 城市內是否可以豢養寵物(狗和貓)。請你根據下表所提供的信息，用英語給報社投稿，介紹討論情況， 并說明自己的觀點和建議。反對飼養寵物的同學認為支持飼養寵物的同學認為造成環境污染安慰孤寡老人吵鬧聲，甚至傷人人與動物和諧相處，增添生活情趣注意：1.信的開頭已為你寫好; 2. 詞數100左右。Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pe

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