1、英語書面表達大作文ENGLISHenglish writing composition english writing composition english writing english english writing composition english宣講人：某某某 時間：20XX.XX語意要合情合理語法要恰當正確一篇優秀的書面表達應該是：語意要合情合理 過渡要自然順暢段落要清晰明了 語句要有簡有繁語法要恰當正確 語言要地道順暢書寫要規范整潔語言學習語言學習策略寫作任務（改編自2017年山東聊城書面表達）假定你是張華，你在外地學習的好朋友王偉發電子郵件向你請教如何學好英語。請你根據以

2、下要點用英語給他回封電子郵件。語言學習語言學習策略內容包括：看英語電影、聽英語歌曲，猜測生詞意思。與外教交談。把單詞寫在紙條上利用紙條記憶生詞。注意詞數：80左右；可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。Dear Wang WeiI received your e-mail yesterday. In the e-mail, you asked me how to improve your English. Now Id like to give you some advice These are my suggestions. I hope they are usef

3、ul to you. Yours, Zhang Hua 定基調，1、體裁：2、時態：3、人稱：應用文（電子郵件）；電子郵件的主體部分為說明文1、定 2、列 3、寫 4、銜接 5、成文以一般現在時態為主以第二人稱為主列提綱學好英語的建議，看英語電影、聽英語歌曲與外教交談把單詞寫在紙條上列提綱 學好英語的建議看英語電影聽英語歌曲與外教交談把單詞寫在紙條上寫句子WATCHING ENGLISH MOVIES AND LISTENING TO ENGLISH SONGS ARE GOOD WAYS TO LEARN ENGLISH.多看、多聽幾次然后猜測生詞的意思,看英語電影和聽英語歌曲是學習英語的好

4、方法SEE AND LISTEN SEVERAL TIMES,AND GUESS THE MEANING OF THE NEW WORDS.與外教交談也是一個好方法WRITE FOUR OR FIVE WORDS A DAY ON PIECES OF PAPER.每天在紙上寫四到五個單詞巧銜接成文時，可以使用 FIRST，SECOND和LAST將三條建議連接起來常用銜接詞列提綱 學好英語的建議看英語電影聽英語歌曲與外教交談把單詞寫在紙條上寫句子WATCHING ENGLISH MOVIES AND LISTENING TO ENGLISH SONGS ARE GOOD WAYS TO LEAR

5、N ENGLISH.SEE AND LISTEN SEVERAL TIMES,AND GUESS THE MEANING OF THE NEW WORDS. TO HAVE A CONVERSATION WITH FOREIGN TEACHERS IS ALSO A GOOD WAY，WRITE FOUR OR FIVE WORDS A DAY ON PIECES OF PAPER.1.表文章結構順序：First, Secondnext then, Finally2.表并列補充關系的(遞進關系)not only but also 不但而且， at the same time 同時3.表轉折對比

6、關系的：However, but4.用來陳述正反方的不同觀點（一般用于議論文章中）：On the one hand On the other hand一方面，又一方面 Everything has two sides(事物都具有兩面性) 5.表因果關系的：Because（不與so連用）, As a result (結果) thanks to（多虧） because of(由于)6.表進行舉例說明：For example+句子（只舉一例,） such asand so on （可舉多例）7.表陳述事實：In fact 事實上 8.表達自己觀點：As far as I know; In my op

7、inion /依我看 ， to be honest 誠實地說9.表總結：In a word（總之）. Steps of writing書面表達，成文，定，列銜接，寫necessaryWriting skillsIf possible活用多種句型，善用豐富詞匯，妙用格言和諺語加入英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to study English，Practice makes perfect. So ，Joining the English club is a good way to study English加諺語（增文采）

8、英文常用諺語1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Where there is a will, there is a way. 3.Its never too old to learn. 4. Think twice before acting.5.No pains, no gains. 6.Knowledge is power. 7.Failure is the mother of success. 8.To see is to believe. 9.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 10An apple a day, keeps t

9、he doctor away. 11. Love me, love my dog. 熟能生巧有志者事竟成活到老，學到老三思而后行一分耕耘，一分收獲知識就是力量失敗是成功之母眼見為實患難見真情一天一個蘋果，醫生遠離我愛屋及烏范 文Dear Wang WeiI received your e-mail yesterday. In the e-mail, you asked me how to improve your English. Now Id like to give you some advice First, watching English films and listening to

10、 English songs are great ways to learn English. Watch and listen several times, and guess the meaning of the new words Second, having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way. You should start it with greetings or a question. Also, smile before you speak and do not feel shy Last, wri

11、te four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them on the wall. Read the words when you see them, and try to use them in sentences These are my suggestions, I hope they are useful to you. Yours Zhang Hua有關英語學習（Unit1）談論節日文化習俗（Unit2、Unit10）人或事物所發生的變化（Unit4）圍繞規則，做文明游客，倡導孝文化，如何做一名孝 敬父母的好孩子（Un

12、it7）談論成長中的煩惱，健康問題（重要性、方法、結論）食品衛生安全問題易考作文題目（Unit13）環保節能（Unit13）中考之后的打算或談論假期計劃及旅行，畢業感想，對母校的感受（Unit12、Unit14）課業負擔問題的調查結果，談觀點，如何幫助陷入困境中的人（地震、海嘯、火災等發生后，如何幫助那的人們）.圍繞中國夢等熱點時事話題，作為學生應如何做你的學校要在即將畢業的學生當中評選出十名優秀畢業生（excellent graduate）.你認為一名優秀的畢業生應該具備哪些條件？請根據圖表提示，選擇至少兩個方面（可適當發揮）來談談你的看法。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。要求：思想積極向上，語句

13、通順，意思連貫，字跡清楚；短文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名及其他相關信息。走進中考HOBBYHABITHEALTHEXCELLENTGRADUATEStudycommunicationThe Standards of an Excellent Graduate Our school will elect(評選)10 students as excellent graduates. In my opinion_評分時首先要根據作文內容和語言，初步確定其所屬等次，再以該等次的要求來衡量，確定或調整等次，最后給分。第一檔（1513分）：符合題意要求，表達完整，條理清楚，語句通順，語言正確無誤。第二檔（1210分）：符合題意要求，表達基本完整，條理清楚，語句較通順，語言基本無誤。第三檔（97分）：基本符合題意要求，表達基本完整，條理較清楚，語句較通順，語言有部分錯誤。第四檔（64分）：不符合題意要求，表達不完整，條理清楚，語言錯誤過多，詞數不夠。第五檔（30）：所