1、高考英語二輪復習寫作專題 朱梅一考試說明的內容及要求考試大綱要求考生在寫作短文時應能準確使用語法和詞匯，因為語言的準確性是寫作中不可忽視的一個重要方面，它直接或間接地影響信息的準確傳輸。應用語法結構和詞匯的準確程度是高考改卷教師學生短文寫作的一項重要內容。 英語寫作是對考生綜合能力的全面考查，要求高三學生能根據所讀文章進行轉述或寫摘要；能根據文字、圖畫及圖表提供的信息寫短文或報告；還能寫語意連貫、結構完整的短文，敘述事情或表達觀點和態度；同時能在寫作中達到文體規范的要求。要求考生25分鐘內完成120字左右的作文高考寫作主要命題方式為看圖作文、示意圖、簡表、提綱、敘述、文字等。體裁:記敘文、應用

2、文、說明文和議論文。 英語作文即英語書面表達主要是考查考生綜合運用英語進行書面表達的能力，是一項主觀性試題。考試大綱指出，寫作是英語聽、說、讀、寫四項語言技能中不可分割的一個重要部分，更是語言生成能力的重要表現形式。該部分試題要求考生根據題示進行書面表達。考生應能：（1）準確使用語法和詞匯。（2）使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思。 1.安徽省六年作文匯總年份作文考點體裁2007年安徽省高考作文給格林先生回信，介紹共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，介紹欄目并簡要說明理由。應用文（寫信）2008年安徽省高考作文給David:你的美國筆友,寫封信介紹使用環保購物袋，談談你的感想。應用文（寫

3、信）2009年安徽省高考作文針對有些父母經常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現象, 陳述你的觀點。應用文(演講稿)2010年安徽省高考作文某英語雜志社開展一次征文活動，征文的內容要求你在電視、手機和網絡三者間，放棄其中一個并陳述理由。說明文2011年安徽省高考作文請你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談自己的一些做法。應用文(介紹經驗)2012年安徽省高考作文高中生對文，理科的選擇。向美國學生介紹你所做的選擇，并說明選擇的理由。應用文（發言稿）附安徽省近三年高考英語作文2012年安徽卷高考英語作文及范文假設美國某中學的學生明天來

4、你校訪問交流，主題是高中生對文，理科的選擇請你用英語寫一篇發言稿，向他們介紹你所做的選擇，并說明選擇的理由。注意:1.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數2.詞數120左右；3.短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息。 參考詞匯：文科 arts；理科:science Good morning,everyone.Welcome to our school.High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science.It was not an easy choice for me to make.After caref

5、ul consideration,though, I decided on science as my main subject of study.The reasons are as follows.First, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China.Second the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream as becoming a scientist.Third, my parents wish me to study scien

6、ce at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student.Last but not least,my physics teacher is my role model whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.Thanks2011年安徽卷高考英語作文及范文某校英文報開辟了一個專欄：Experience。本期話

7、題是如何解決學習中遇到的困難。請你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談自己的一些做法。注意：1、詞數100左右。2、短文中不能出現本人相關信息。As high schol studenst, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning.Everyone has their own way to deal with them.Here I would like to share mine.When I am faced with

8、a difficulty,usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages.In this way,I can not only work it out but improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.However,when it is something beyong my competence,I turn to my classmates or teachers for help.Sometimes,I also ask my par

9、ents for advice.As a result,I have made steady progress in my studies.2010年安徽卷高考英語作文及范文假設你將參加某英語雜志社開展的一次征文活動，征文的內容要求你在電視、手機和網絡三者間，放棄其中一個并陳述理由。請你以 “Which would you give up:TV,cell,or web”為題，寫一篇英語短文。注意：1.字數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。We are living in an information age,in which TV,cells and the Web are wi

10、dely used.It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.However,if I had to give up one of them,I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet.I could do without TV because few shows can take my fancy and therere too many commercials.Besides,most prog

11、rams on TV are also avaialble elsewhere.As for cells and the web,they are more necessary to me.I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.2. 近年，安徽高考對作文的命題趨勢 命題來源于大多數考生在生活中經歷過的事情，高考英語作文的主題越來越接近生活，這是和考生的日常生活緊密相關的，而且即使是上述指出的既定給出

12、的題目，題目也進行了詳細的解釋，因此考生幾乎不會出現無話可寫的尷尬局面。近幾年的英語高考作文命題思路和前幾年相比，變化并不大，仍然采用的是應用文的考查形式，是提綱類作文，體現了高考命題的穩定性。但是，今兩年試題是開放性作文，給各位考生留出了一定的自由發揮空間，有利于考生充分展示自己的英語書面表達能力。三 一輪復習中存在的問題作文改起來費時費力可能平時練得不夠，老師應該注重平時多練習（練習寫詞組、寫句子）。還有部分考生在作文當中錯詞、錯句、病句出現的太多，也需要老師不厭其煩的耐心指導，學生的語言表達需要加強提高，多背好句子，多積累，多練寫讓學生逐步具備較強的語言運用寫作能力。四 教學重點和教學策

13、略半開放式作文的特點是學生可以自由表達觀點，但闡述觀點時一定要論據充分，思路清晰，結構完整，邏輯性強，而且行文要流暢自然，富有層次感。類似形式的英語作文，考生并不陌生，在以往的復習和模擬訓練時，見過不少。因此，寫作作文難度不算大。而且，試題中已經寫好了開頭和結尾，考生不必考慮和擔心書信格式的問題，可以直接按照材料題示的有關內容進入主題，這有利于幫助考生增強信心，進行順利答題。考生應該克服畏難情緒，因為英語作文沒有唯一的固定標準答案，只要寫得好，只要寫得精彩，就能拿到比較高的分數。教學策略：多練習是最重要的 ，多看歷屆高考作文范文，學以致用，善于模仿 ，好的句型結構背掉，大聲朗讀， 熟悉句子，網

14、上閱卷 字數不要過多 要精練，注意卷面的整潔，字寫得漂亮。五 專題教學主要內容預測作文 1申請入學：假設你叫李明,是北京大學經濟系2009年畢業的一名學生.畢業后就職于北京經濟研究所。現在你想申請到哈佛大學讀MBA，2013年10月入學，寫一封入學申請信，介紹一下自己的情況，并索要相關的信息。審題概述本文要求寫一封入學申請信。首先要注意寫作的格式，包括收信人、寫信時間、稱呼、內容、祝愿語與簽名等。正文要按照題目所述意義闡述清楚，包括個人信息、申請的專業、索要相關信息和本人聯系方式。寫信時注意語言既要得體又要展示自己的優勢，忌過于夸大自己的能力。范文July 20 th, 2008Dear Si

15、rs,I read with great interest the prospectus (說明書) of graduate studies of your university. I am interested in the courses on economics. I wonder if you could consider me as an applicant for the MBA course of Economics beginning in October, 2009.I graduated from the Economics Department of Peking Uni

16、versity. After my graduation in 2005, I have been working at Beijing Institute of Economics for three years. I hope you can send me relevant information about the course. Please contact me by email.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Yours truly,Zhang Ming思路點評 第一段開門見山點出自己的興趣和要申請的專業，語言得體，態度謙和；第二

17、段介紹個人狀況，包括學生經歷和社會經歷，很好地展示了自己的優勢所在；最后表達自己期待得到對方回復，并附了自己學習期間的成績記錄表以供考核。高頻詞句1.catalog and application forms招生簡章和申請表2.I dearly hope that you will consider my application favorably.懇請您考慮我的申請事宜。3.I am most anxious to hear from you.急盼復。4. My solid academic background will meet your general entrance require

18、ments for graduate study.我的扎實學術功底能滿足貴校研究生學習的入學要求。預測作文 2環境保護 :假如你是李華，現任你們學校的學生會主席。你將代表學生會起草一份倡議書，號召全校同學行動起來，為環保運動做出自己的努力。同時下周六學校將組織同學 在全市進行環保宣傳活動，征召志愿者到校學生會報名。注意：(1)短文應該包括以上所提供的主要信息，可適當發揮;(2)詞數：120左右;(3)倡議書格式以提供，不計入總詞數;(4)參考詞匯：征召(新人) recruit。【猜題理由】隨著經濟的高速發展，社會自然環境遭受嚴重污染。環保意識的培養和環保工作的開展成為國人，乃至世人共同關注的熱

19、點和焦點。對環保問題而言，"只要人人獻出一點愛，世界將 變成美好人間 !"此話題為學生熟知，與高中生的生活實際貼近，而且具有一定的開放性，使得每個學生都能夠有話可說，符合新課標理念下的命題方向。【構思點撥】首先簡要介紹環保問題之重要，號召同學們行動起來，共同參與環保活動;其次就環保發出倡議，并征召志愿者。這樣既把考生限定在一定范圍之內，又給予了考生相當的發揮的自由，有助于考生的作文脫穎而出。【參考范文】15 May, 2010Dear brothers and sisters,Oh behalf of the University Students' Union,

20、I, the Chairman of the Union , am earnestly calling for yo ur active participation in our environmental protection campai gn. It is the duty of every global villager; man just can not sustain his glorious c i vilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes consid

21、erable efforts to protect the environment.Do you cherish precio us opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth; Right next Saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental

22、 protection across the city. The University Students' Union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers. Let's join our h ands and take action immediately.Yours sincerely,Li Hua預測作文 3高三生活：假如你是武漢大學附中高三(1)的李華，今年即將高中畢業。請根據以下要點給某英文報寫一篇英語短文，談談你對高三生活的看法。(1)對獲得的幫助表示感謝;(2)消除與 同學之間的誤會;(3)努力學習，實現人生

23、夢想;(4)對學弟、學妹的建議。注意：(1)可適當加入細節，以使行文連貫;(2)詞數：100左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數) 。High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.【猜題理由】本篇書面表達能比較真實地反映學生的生活實際，話題內容關注學生的社交生活和樹立健康的人生觀，具有考查的現實意義和指導意義;在語言表達上，能夠讓學生充分運用所學知識，毫無詞匯障礙地表達自己的思想;此外，在語

24、言表達的設置上也有一定的伸展性，能有效地激發學生個 性觀點的創建。【構思點撥】本篇書面表達是常見 的提綱類型的寫作，要點明確清楚，便于學生組織文章，理清脈絡。行文時要注意處理好語言表達的控制性和伸展性之間的關系。【參考范文】High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.Firs

25、tly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, pare nts and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bri

26、dges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effo rt to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no

27、men.Li Hua預測作文 4面對失敗的態度:作為中學生，你肯定經歷過多次考試，體驗過成功，也遭遇過失敗。請你根據提示內容，簡要概述中學生中普遍存在的對考試失敗的兩種態度，并結合自身實際，說明你的觀點。 要求：(1)題目自擬;(2)詞數：100-120。【猜題理由】情感問題已經成為困擾大學生的首要心理問題。由于他們在學校學校都一帆風順，在家又備受寵愛，所以很多中學生都養成了我行我素的性格，卻不知道如何與別人相處，在人際交往和學校中很容易遇到挫折，在挫折面前又顯得不知所措。【構思點撥】本文可從三個方面來談，第一步總體概括中學生所面對的成敗問題;第二步談論面對失敗的 兩種態度;第三步談

28、談自己的看法。【參考范文】Failure is the mother of successWe middle school students have had many test s or exams. We have both achieved success and suffered from fa ilure. Different students take diffe rent attitudes to failu re.Some fall in low spirits when they don't do well in the exams. They usu ally lo

29、se heart and no longer study hard as before. But most studen ts take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. They found out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know, f

30、ailure is the mother of success. Even great men have failed many times before t hey succeeded. So we must deal with our failure correctly.預測作文 5參加勞動：假設你是李華，星期天你要和你的同班同學李明一起去敬老院參加義務勞動，你去找他，但他沒有在家 ，你給他留言說明要求，內容如下：(1)9：30在學校門口集合;(2)帶勞動工具(洗衣粉、理發工具、除草工具等);(3)自帶午飯，騎自行車前往。注意：(1)詞數100左右;(2)可以適當增加細節，以使行文 連貫。

31、【猜題理由】高考寫作題應該是學生較為熟悉的、身邊的與他們生活、學習密切相關的話題。因為高考有一定的連續性，有些省份仍可能采用應用文進行考查。【構思點撥】本題屬于提綱式要點作文，要求學生就所給內容寫一張留言條，是學生比較熟悉的題材，體現了 英語學習應該注意實用性，生活化的 原則。應注意下面幾點： (1)注意人 稱，應該用第一人稱的形式給同學李明(第二人稱)寫便條：(2)注意時態的正確使用：從試題的內容上可以看出在表達要點上應用將來時;(3)注意恰當使用邏輯詞語，是各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理

32、安排結構。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開門見山。【參考范文】Dear Li Ming,This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, we'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning

33、 and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and w eeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for

34、 lunch because we'll stay the re for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, you'll phone me at once.緩解學習壓力：假如你叫王軍，是一名剛剛經歷過高考的大一學生，請結合自己的經歷給高三的學生們提一些緩解學習壓力的建議。要求：1.建議至少要三條。2.字數：120字左右。3.開頭已為你寫好，不計入總字數。Dear friends,I used to be under great pressure when I was in Senior Three,eager to be

35、 admitted by an ideal university but at the same time anxious about my final score.Luckily,I finally managed to get through and realized my dream.To help you lessen your anxiety,I have some suggestions for you to follow.Firstly don't aim too high.Make a practical study plan and focus on the basi

36、c knowledge in your learning.Secondly,make good use of time.Stay concentrated when you are doing your lessons.After do some physical exercise and make sure that you have enough sleep.Thirdly,learn to reduce your pressure. If you have some difficulties or feel worried,talk with your family members or

37、 friends.Of course you can find some other ways to relax yourselves.預測作文 6讀書學習：某英文報社舉辦以“I Like Reading”為主題的征文活動，你打算投稿。請根據以下要點寫一篇短文：. 你為什么喜歡讀書； 你喜歡讀哪一類的書（例如：歷史、科學、文學等）？請給出至少兩個理由。注意：詞數120左右。 范文：I Like ReadingReading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are likewise

38、 teachers as well as good friends in my life. As we know, books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great from reading.There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like history books, science books, literary books and so on. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those

39、by famous writers. For one thing, they hope to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizon. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun.Isnt it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?預測作文 7鋼筆的用處（說明文）You are discussing the following picture with your E

40、nglish friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.預測作文 8假設你是新華中學的學生李華，不久前在學校舉辦的英語競賽中獲得一等獎。校報請你寫一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介紹你課外學習英語的經驗。請根據以下提示用英語寫一篇短文：1. 參加英語角的益處；2. 堅持寫英語日記的作用；3. 英文閱讀網站（EnjoyReading）對你的幫助。注意：1. 詞數：120-150； 2. 可適當增加細節， 以使行文連貫。【參考范文】One possible

41、version:As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same

42、interest with me. Besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral English improved a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice w

43、ill we make more progress. Finally, some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. Through these websites, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories. Whats more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study proce

44、ss. All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays off.【命題透視】今年的寫作難度平穩，秉承了“讓學生有話說”的原則，學生寫起來并不覺得無話可說，但是要想寫好并不是很容易。首先必須要有邏輯性，這三個要點必須條理清楚地都列出來；其次里面的某些詞句和句型要表達正確，運用恰當的句型，而且注意銜接詞的使用。只有這樣，才能寫出流暢地道的文章。六、寫作注意事項 1、草擬提綱 考生認真審題后，如果不是因為時間關系，最好不要急于往答題卷上書寫，可以留出3分鐘左右的時間，先在草稿紙上列一個小提綱，構思好想使用的詞匯和句子，建立起作文的基本框架。之后，再快速通一遍，進行修改定稿。這樣再往卷面上寫，就會相對地使作文寫得更出色一些，增加得分的幾率。 2、要點完整 考生如果想拿到高分，必須按照要求在作文中覆蓋試題規定的所有內容要點，完成試題任務，達到預期的寫作目的。在寫作時，考生應該留心是否要點完整，是否有要點遺漏。在題示要點完整的前提下，考生可以作文材料為中心進行適當地發揮，適當補充一部分相關內容，以期使作文更加完美。 3、按部就班 考生應該對高考持平常心，對待英語書面表達也是如此。在寫作時，考生應該按照平常老師的要求和