1、一. 用詞精確 ;表達地道【北京卷】【試題回放】第一節(jié)情形作文20 分美國中同學(xué)jeff 將要來你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商支配住在你家；假設(shè)你是李華，請給 jeff 寫一封信，依據(jù)下圖次序介紹他來中國后的生活支配；留意： 1. 信的開頭已為你寫好；2.詞數(shù)不少于60；dear jeff,i m hua from beijing hongxing middle school. im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while you re in beijing.while you are here, w

2、ell provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a coupleof chairs and a tv. you ll also have your own bathroom. our school is quite close to our home, sowe could go to school t ogether by bike. at noon we ll eat at the school dining hall. i m sure like the delicious chinese food there, a

3、nd enjoy talking withfriends over lunch. classes in ourschool usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. you can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. it ll be a lot of fun.if you have any questions or requests, please let me know. well try our best to make yourstay here in beijing

4、a pleasant experience.best wishes,li hua名師點評 這篇文章的特點仍是比較清楚的，第一， 作者依據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點概括完整，內(nèi)容充實而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感;其次，本文沒有采納華麗的辭藻，但用詞特別恰當(dāng)，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新；【安徽卷】【試題回放】假如你是李華， 美國一所友好學(xué)校預(yù)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中同學(xué)英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情形；請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華， 美國一所友好學(xué)校預(yù)備與 你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中同學(xué)英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情形；請你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：l 表示贊成；l 提出你寵愛的欄目；l 簡要說

5、明理由；留意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右；2.新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好；3.適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；4.參考欄目：欄目columndear mr. green,i am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. that sounds great.and i definitely agree with you on that.some of the columnswhichyou mentioned in the letter are reallymycup oftea. say,“ cultur

6、e express” gives us a better understanding of the world. since people from different parts ofthe world have different values, it s necessary to learn from each other. this will offer a wonderful chance. apart from that,“ blurt out” is pretty good for chinese students to learn english idiomsand impro

7、veoral english. last but not least, “ entertainment is s”o cool.the popular singers,actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can just fond of the trendy things.well, i cant list more. i really cant wait to read that magazine.yours faithfully, li huateenagers are t miss

8、 it.第 1 頁 共 5 頁【名師點評】這是一篇滿分作文； 由于這篇作文的顯現(xiàn)， 導(dǎo)致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數(shù)普遍偏低；認真分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不推測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)受，否就這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的；比如說：my cup oftea, apart fromthat, oral english,last but not least, celebrities, catchy 和 trendy 的大膽運用， list, can't wait to簡直是 perfect.況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，

9、不管是書寫仍是語法；英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不行謂不讓人佩服；二. 非謂語動詞為作文添彩【北京卷】【試題回放】情形作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的同學(xué)李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請依據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后次序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“green action in our class 為題”的英文稿件；留意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbsapril12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. in the morning, w

10、e bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. upon arrival,we began to work immediately. some were digging holes. some were carrying and planting youngtrees. others were watering . after getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. bef

11、ore leaving we took some photos to record our green action. seeing the linesof trees, we all had a sense of achievement. we feel itosur duty to protect and beautify ourenvironment.【名師點評】本文是設(shè)計奇妙的提綱要點式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合， 立意較好； 文章思路清楚， 要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新奇，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達；【北京卷】【試題回放】開放作文請依據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50in

12、your spoken english class, your teacher shows you the following picture. you are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.what an interesting picture. a western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl ofnoodles. he is holding two forks the same way aswe chinese h

13、old chopsticks. he is trying sohard to pick up the noodles that he issweating a lot. at first glance, i think it s a bit funny, for we chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. the man in the picture istrying to copy us. obviously he is doing it the hard way. maybe u

14、sing one fork will do a better job,in my opinion, we don t need to copy others ways of thinking. sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達； 考生重點要看出這個人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的沖突性；行文結(jié)構(gòu)特別明晰，同時句式使用得嫻熟而精確；三. 復(fù)合句為寫作增色【全國卷】【試題回放】假定你是李華， 從小寵愛大熊貓panda,始終通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)

15、站website 關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園誕生的大熊貓“蘇琳 ”和她的母親 “白云 ”；現(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲；請依據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：第 2 頁 共 5 頁1、 自我介紹 ;2、 慶賀蘇琳生日 ;3、 感謝工作人員;4、 索取蘇琳三歲生日照；留意： 1、詞數(shù) 100 左右 ;2 、可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語已為你寫好；例文：dear sir/madam, greetings from china.i m li hua, a student in sichuan. ive been a panda lover since i was a child. about

16、threeyears ago i was delighted to learn that baiyun g ave birth to her daughter sulin and i vbeeenwatching her grow on your website,. now she s going to be three. i d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work,because of which sulin and herparents are living

17、 a happy and healthy life in the us.by the way, could i have a photo of sulin taken on her third birthday. thank you very much in advance.yours truly,li hua【名師點評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點如下：1.自我介紹 ;2.信息來源 ;3.慶賀生日 ;4. 感謝照料 ;5. 索取照片 ;6.合適的結(jié)尾；這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、終止語均表 達到位；文章行文活潑，感情真摯， 語言表述精確，充滿著作者因大熊貓得到細心

18、照料而對美方人員的感謝之情，以及期望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希望之情；長短句運用合理，結(jié)合了 簡潔句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作；積存卡片英漢互譯好詞 1.delighted adj. 欣喜的，歡樂的2.express v.表達3.give birth to v. 產(chǎn)生，生育好句 i dlike to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which sulin and her parents are living a happy and

19、healthy life in the us.我祝愿它生日歡樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感謝之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活；【全國卷 ii 】【試題回放】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國來賓，期望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣揚；請你用英語為其寫一篇文字介紹；主要內(nèi)容包括：1.地點：距白山入口處500 米;2.房間及價格：單人間共 20 間 ， 100 元/天;雙人間 共 15 間， 150 元/天 ;熱水淋浴 ;3.餐飲：餐廳 中、西餐 ，咖啡廳 茶、咖啡 ;4. 游泳池：全天免費開放 ; 5.歡迎預(yù)定；留意： 1.詞數(shù) 100 左右，開頭語已為你寫好 ;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)

20、，以使行文連貫；welcome to baishan mountain hotel.baishan mountain hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of baishan mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is rmb100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 doubleperson rooms, with a price of rmb 150 yuan per d

21、ay. it also provides hot water bath service. you can enjoy both chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. the swimmingpool is open for free the whole day. all these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery enjoyable. so come to enjoy yourself.wel

22、come to book rooms in baishan mountain.第 3 頁 共 5 頁【名師點評】本文開門見山， 第一點明白主旨；本文最大的特點是應(yīng)用了許多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩；開頭使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置；which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也 很正確；總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文；積存卡片英漢互譯好詞1. provide v. 供應(yīng) 2. convenience n.便利好句 all these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. 全部這些服務(wù)都會

23、給你帶來便利，并且特別的開心；評析： bring great convenience ，帶來便利；【重慶卷】【試題回放】據(jù)報道， 7 歲的美國女孩amybruce 得知自己身患肺癌lung cancer后處于極度的痛楚之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會acs 打算，每當(dāng)amy 收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3 美分的治療款；假如你是新華中學(xué)的同學(xué)李華，請你用英文給amy 寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情形表示勉勵準(zhǔn)備為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù) 留意：1. 信的格式已為你寫好2. 信中不得顯現(xiàn)你的真實情形；3. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；4. 請在答題卡上作答；dear amy,i mli hua from xi

24、nhua middle school of china. im sorry to hear thyaot u got the lungcancer which brought you great pain. but you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. so, stand up and fightagainst the disease. i msure you willwin.it is reported that the america anti-cancer association

25、will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. so i will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. in that way,you will get enough money for you to be cured. hope you can be well soon.yours,li hua名師點評 本文依照要求， 涵蓋了全部要點； 文章使用了高中常見的句式，如 im sorry to hear that.,it

26、 is reported that. 等，都比較好；作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)；積存卡片好詞 1.realize v.意識到 2.promise v.承諾 3.donate v.捐贈好句 1. im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了龐大的痛楚；好處： which 引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句；2. so, stand up and fight against the disease.因此，頑強地與疾病做斗爭吧.第 4 頁

27、 共 5 頁好處：擲地有聲，語言精確；四. 結(jié)構(gòu)清楚 ,句式精確【江蘇卷】【試題回放】2007 年 4 月 29 日上午 10 點到 11 點，全國億萬同學(xué)陽光體育活動在各地大中學(xué)校校同時進行，江蘇省1， 100 萬同學(xué)積極參加了這項活動；訓(xùn)練部提倡同學(xué)： u 每天錘煉一小時 u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請你依據(jù)以上提示，用英語預(yù)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們表達一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情形，并就高三同學(xué)是否需要每天花一小時錘煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛桑涣粢猓?、 發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上全部信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、 詞數(shù)： 120 左右；發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3、 參考詞匯：陽光體育活

28、動 a national student sports program;訓(xùn)練部 the ministry of education good afternoon, everyone,the national student sports program, waged by the ministry of education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10： 00a.m.11:00a.m.on april 29， 2007 in many primary and middle schools all over china. almost 11 million students in j