2026屆新高考英語熱點突破復習

讀后續寫寫作策略Designthe

plot(情節創建)Connectdifferentpartslogically(邏輯連貫)Vivifythedescription(細節描寫)讀后續寫：基于語篇

接續故事相關背景

情節脈絡人物設定

主題意義讀后續寫評分依據:

與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；上下文的連貫性。

內容的豐富性應用語法結構和詞匯的豐富性和準確性；

problem\conflictsolution\resolutionevaluation\theme敘事文

Nineyearsago,IwasthedirectorofoperationsataconsumerproductscompanyinSanFrancisco.OneFridayafternoon,Iwascalledintoameetingthatwasalreadyinprogress,whichturnedouttobemyexitinterview.Iwasfiredalongwithseveralothers.Iwas64yearsoldatthetime.Itwasn’tcompletelyunexpected.Isignedapileofpapers,gatheredmypersonalbelongings,andlefttojoinmywifewhowaswaitingformeatanearbyrestaurant.Fast-forwardseveralhours,webothgotdrunk.

So,40plusyearsofcontinuousemploymentforvariouscompanieswasover.Ihadagoodnetwork,agoodreputation—IthoughtI’dbejustfine.Iwasanengineerinmanufacturingandpackaging.Ihadagoodbackground.Retirementwassimplynotanoptionforme.

Andthenanideabegantotakeroot,bornfrommyconcernforourenvironment.Iwantedtobuildmyownbusiness,designingandmanufacturingbiodegradablepackagingfromwaste.Thisiscalledcleantechnology,anditfeltreallymeaningfultome.Sonowattheageof66,with40yearsofexperience,Ibecameanentrepreneurfortheveryfirsttime.Byhandlingissueslikemanufacturing,patents,partnerships,funding,etc,Iwasonthetracksoon.Fiveyearslater,ourprofitshavedoubledeveryyear,andwehavenodebt.RightnowI’mdoingthemostrewardingandmeaningfulworkofmylife.TheCensusBureausaysthatby2050,therewillbe84millionseniorsinthiscountry.That’sanamazingnumber.That’salmosttwiceasmanyaswehavetoday.Canyouimaginehowmanyfirsttimeentrepreneurstherewillbeamong84millionpeople?Andtheywillallhavefourdecadesofexperience.

Problem(conflict):

Solution(resolution):

Evaluation(theme):

相關背景

情節脈絡

人物設定

主題意義

Nineyearsago,IwasthedirectorofoperationsataconsumerproductscompanyinSanFrancisco.OneFridayafternoon,Iwascalledintoameetingthatwasalreadyinprogress,whichturnedouttobemyexitinterview.Iwasfiredalongwithseveralothers.Iwas64yearsoldatthetime.Itwasn’tcompletelyunexpected.Isignedapileofpapers,gatheredmypersonalbelongings,andlefttojoinmywifewhowaswaitingformeatanearbyrestaurant.Fast-forwardseveralhours,webothgotdrunk.

So,40plusyearsofcontinuousemploymentforvariouscompanieswasover.Ihadagoodnetwork,agoodreputation—IthoughtI’dbejustfine.Iwasanengineerinmanufacturingandpackaging.Ihadagoodbackground.Retirementwassimplynotanoptionforme.

Problem:Unexpected,

I,attheageof64,wasfired，butIstilldidn’twanttoretire.

Solution:

相關背景

情節脈絡

人物設定

主題意義

Evaluation:

主題意義

So,40plusyearsofcontinuousemploymentforvariouscompanieswasover.Ihadagoodnetwork,agoodreputation—IthoughtI’dbejustfine.Iwasanengineerinmanufacturingandpackaging.Ihadagoodbackground.Retirementwassimplynotanoptionforme.

Andthenanideabegantotakeroot,bornfrommyconcernforourenvironment.Iwantedtobuildmyownbusiness,designingandmanufacturingbiodegradablepackagingfromwaste.Thisiscalledcleantechnology,anditfeltreallymeaningfultome.Sonowattheageof66,with40yearsofexperience,Ibecameanentrepreneur（企業家）fortheveryfirsttime.

Problem:Unexpected,

I,attheageof64,wasfired，butIstilldidn’twanttoretire.

Solution:1、Analyzereasonsformynotchoosingretirement(hadagoodnetwork,agoodreputation,

bejustfine,beanengineerinmanufacturingandpackaging,hadagoodbackground)

2、Takeadvantageofmystrengthsto

buildmyownbusiness,designingandmanufacturingbiodegradablepackagingfromwaste,areallymeaningfulenterprise.

Evaluation:

Byhandlingissueslikemanufacturing,patents,partnerships,funding,etc,Iwasonthetracksoon.Fiveyearslater,ourprofitshavedoubledeveryyear,andwehavenodebt.RightnowI’mdoingthemostrewardingandmeaningfulworkofmylife.TheCensusBureausaysthatby2050,therewillbe84millionseniorsinthiscountry.That’sanamazingnumber.That’salmosttwiceasmanyaswehavetoday.Canyouimaginehowmanyfirsttimeentrepreneurstherewillbeamong84millionpeople?Andtheywillallhavefourdecadesofexperience.

Problem:Unexpected,

I,attheageof64,wasfired，butIstilldidn’twanttoretire.

Solution:1、Analyzereasonsformynotchoosingretirement(hadagoodnetwork,agoodreputation,

bejustfine,beanengineerinmanufacturingandpackaging,hadagoodbackground)

2、Takeadvantageofmystrengthsto

buildmyownbusiness,designingandmanufacturingbiodegradablepackagingfromwaste,areallymeaningfulenterprise.

Evaluation:Makeeffortstobesuccessfulanddomeaningfulthingsevenifyouareretiredorintrouble.

閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。

WhenLisawasalittlegirl,shelearnedanimportantlessonfromherfather.Herfathertoldherthatwhenfacingaproblem,sheshouldnevergiveup.Insteadsheshouldtryanothersolution.Inthefollowingyears,Lisaalwaysrememberedherfather’swords.

WhenLisawaslittle,shedreamedofbecomingafashiondesigner.Itwasalwaysherdream.Butitwasnotaneasyroad.Afterleavingcollege,LisawenttoPariswithherdesignsinordertomakeherdreamcometrue.InParis,shetriedtotalktofamousdesignersandshowthemsomeofherdesigns,butnoneofthemshowedanyinterest.ThoughLisawasdiscouraged,shedidn’tgiveup.Oneday,atafriend’sparty,shewasintroducedtoayoungladywhowasdressedinabeautifulknitted(編織的)sweater.Itwasn’tafancycolor,butitdidhaveveryspecialstitches(針法).Lisaaskedthatladyifsheknitteditherself.ShesaiditwasaworkofaladyinParis.

Lisareallylovedthespecialstitchesandwantedtoincludetheminherdesigns.AndthenLisahadanevenbraveridea.“Whynotownafashionstoreofmyown?That

way,Icoulddesign,makeandsellmyownclothes,”shethought.Soshedecidedtobeginwiththatkindofsweaters.

Lisa’sfriendintroducedhertoMadamDeanwhoknittedthatsweater.TheladywasfromArmeniaandshelearnedtoknitthatkindofsweaterfrompeopleinhercountry.

LisadrewapictureofasweaterandaskedMadamDeantoknitthesweaterforher.MadamDeanagreed.Oneweeklater,Lisagotthesweater.ThefollowingdayafterLisareceivedit,sheworeittoapartyinthefashionindustry.

Lisawasverynervousbutshewaslucky.Notlongafterthepartybegan,hersweaterdrewtheattentionofastoreownerfromNewYork.Shewantedtoorder40suchsweatersintwoweeks.Lisawasreallyhappyandacceptedtheorder.注意：1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150詞左右；

2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

3.續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph1

Thenextday,LisatoldthegoodnewstoMadamDean.__

_______________________________________________

Paragraph2

Lisathenrememberedherfather’swords.____________

________________________________________________

Problem(conflict):

Solution(resolution):

Evaluation(theme):

相關背景

情節脈絡

人物設定

主題意義

ThoughLisawasdiscouraged,shedidn’tgiveup.Oneday,atafriend’sparty,shewasintroducedtoayoungladywhowasdressedinabeautifulknitted(編織的)sweater.Itwasn’tafancycolor,butitdidhaveveryspecialstitches(針法).Lisaaskedthatladyifsheknitteditherself.ShesaiditwasaworkofaladyinParis.

Lisa’sfriendintroducedhertoMadamDeanwhoknittedthatsweater.TheladywasfromArmeniaandshelearnedtoknitthatkindofsweaterfrompeopleinhercountry.

LisadrewapictureofasweaterandaskedMadamDeantoknitthesweaterforher.MadamDeanagreed.Oneweeklater,Lisagotthesweater.ThefollowingdayafterLisareceivedit,sheworeittoapartyinthefashionindustry.

Lisawasverynervousbutshewaslucky.Notlongafterthepartybegan,hersweaterdrewtheattentionofastoreownerfromNewYork.Shewantedtoorder40suchsweatersintwoweeks.Lisawasreallyhappyandacceptedtheorder.

Problem:It’salmostimpossibletofinish40suchsweatersinonly2weeks,butLisalongedforsuccessbyaccomplishingthisorder.

Solution:

Evaluation:

Paragraph1

Thenextday,LisatoldthegoodnewstoMadamDean.____________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2

Lisathenrememberedherfather’swords.____________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________

ThoughLisawasdiscouraged,shedidn’tgiveup.Oneday,atafriend’sparty,shewasintroducedtoayoungladywhowasdressedinabeautifulknitted(編織的)sweater.Itwasn’tafancycolor,butitdidhaveveryspecialstitches(針法).Lisaaskedthatladyifsheknitteditherself.ShesaiditwasaworkofaladyinParis.

Lisa’sfriendintroducedhertoMadamDeanwhoknittedthatsweater.TheladywasfromArmeniaandshelearnedtoknitthatkindofsweaterfrompeopleinhercountry.

LisadrewapictureofasweaterandaskedMadamDeantoknitthesweaterforher.MadamDeanagreed.Oneweeklater,Lisagotthesweater.ThefollowingdayafterLisareceivedit,sheworeittoapartyinthefashionindustry.

Lisawasverynervousbutshewaslucky.Notlongafterthepartybegan,hersweaterdrewtheattentionofastoreownerfromNewYork.Shewantedtoorder40suchsweatersintwoweeks.Lisawasreallyhappyandacceptedtheorder.

Problem:It’salmostimpossibletofinish40suchsweatersinonly2weeks,butLisalongedforsuccessbyaccomplishingthisorder.

Solution:1、Analyzethepossiblesolution(PossiblyDeanhadfriendsabletoknitsuchsweaterinParis;

possiblytheyturnedtosuchskilledknittersinDean’scountryforhelp.)

2、Chooseonewaytosolvethisproblem.

Evaluation:

WhenLisawasalittlegirl,shelearnedanimportantlessonfromherfather.Herfathertoldherthatwhenfacingaproblem,sheshouldnevergiveup.Insteadsheshouldtryanothersolution.Inthefollowingyears,Lisaalwaysrememberedherfather’swords.

WhenLisawaslittle,shedreamedofbecomingafashiondesigner.Itwasalwaysherdream.Butitwasnotaneasyroad.Afterleavingcollege,LisawenttoPariswithherdesignsinordertomakeherdreamcometrue.InParis,shetriedtotalktofamousdesignersandshowthemsomeofherdesigns,butnoneofthemshowedanyinterest.

Problem:It’salmostimpossibletofinish40suchsweatersinonly2weeks,butLisalongedforsuccessbyaccomplishingthisorder.

Solution:1、Analyzethepossiblesolution(PossiblyDeanhadfriendsabletoknitsuchsweaterinParis;

possiblytheyturnedtosuchskilledknittersinDean’scountryforhelp.)

2、Chooseonewaytosolvethisproblem.

Evaluation:Herfather’swordshasansignificanteffectonherlifeanddream.

Thenextday,LisatoldthegoodnewstoMadamDean.However,withouthesitation,MadamDeanrefused,honestlysayingthatshecouldonlyknittwosweatersintwoweeksanditseemedimpossibletofinishtheorder.Hearingherwords,Lisafeltherheartbeatingwildlyandevenburstintotearsasifherlifehadbeenatanend.Butshedidn’twanttolosesuchagreatopportunity,whichwasreallysignificantforhertoachieveherdream.

Lisathenrememberedherfather’swords.Shefoughtbackthetearsandcalmeddown.“Iamboundtothinkofanothersolution.”shethoughttoherself.Suddenly,itoccurredtoherthatshecouldturntoDeanforhelp,askinghertomakeeffortstofindotherskilledknittersinParisorhercountry.Eventually,theysucceededinfindingabout20moreknitterstoaccomplishtheordertogether.Withoutdoubt,thesweaterssatisfiedtheownercompletely.Withtimegoingby,herfashionstoreandsweatersdrewtheattentionofpeoplewhohadpassionforsuchbreathtakingsweaters.Shebecameasuccessandsheattributedittoherfather’swords.What...dosaythink?How...feel?TheWaterofLifeItwasoneofthehottestdaysofthedryseason.Wehadnotseenraininalmostamonth.Thecropsweredying.Cowshadstoppedgivingmilk.Thecreeksandstreamswerelonggonebackintotheearth.Itwasadryseasonthatwouldbankruptseveralfarmersbeforeitwasthrough.Everyday,myhusbandandhisbrotherswouldgoaboutthetiringprocessoftryingtogetwatertothefarm.Ifwedidn’tseesomerainsoon,wewouldloseeverything.ItwasonthisdaythatIlearnedthetruelessonofsharingandwitnessedtheonlymiracleIhaveseenwithmyowneyes.IwasinthekitchenmakinglunchformyhusbandandhisbrotherswhenIsawmysix-year-oldson,Billy,walkingtowardthewoods.Hewasn’twalkingwiththeusualcarefreeabandonofayouthbutwithaseriouspurpose.Icouldonlyseehisback.Hewasobviouslywalkingwithagreatefforttryingtobeasstillaspossible.Minutesafterhedisappearedintothewoods,hecamerunningoutagaintowardthehouse.Iwentbacktomakesandwiches,thinkingthatwhatevertaskhehadbeendoingwascompleted.

Momentslater,however,hewasonceagainwalkinginthatslowpurposefulstridetowardthewoods.Thisactivitywentonforoveranhour:walkingcarefullytothewoods,andthenrunningbacktothehouse.Finally,mycuriositygotthebestofme.Icreptoutofthehouseandfollowedhimonhisjourney.

Hewascuppingbothhandsinfrontofhimashewalked,verycarefulnottospillthewaterheheld.Maybetwoorthreetablespoonswereheldinhistinyhands.Isneakedcloserashewentintothewoods.Branchesandthornsslappedhislittlefacebuthedidnottrytoavoidthem.Hehadamuchgreaterpurpose.AsIleanedintospyonhim,Isawanamazingsight.Amotherdeerwithahugepairofdeerhornsappearedinfrontofhim,withababyfawn(幼鹿)lyingonthedryground.Ialmostscreamedtogethimaway.Paragraph1However,Billywalkedrightuptothem._____________________________________________________________Paragraph2Iwitnessedthemostbeautifulheartworkinghardtosavealife.____________________________________________

DescribewhatIwitnessedvividlyHowdidBillyfeedthefawn?Cautiously,Billycroucheddownbytheweakfawn,holdingthewaterinhiscuppedhandsandslowlysendingittoitsmouth.Anxiouslyyetgently,hekneltdownbesidethebabyfawn,carefullystretchedhisarms,andsentthetwoorthreetablespoonstoitsmouth.Hecrouchedgingerlyinfrontofthefawn,stretchingouthishandswiththewaterinthepalms.“Drinkit!”hemurmured.Whatdidthefawndo?Thebabyfawnlifteditsheadslowlyanddrankthewaterinhistinyhands.Thepoorcreature,apparentlyindesperateneedofwater,lickeditupquicklywithitsshell-pinktongue.Thethirstyfawndrankthewatergreedily,andmuchtomysurprise,thefeeblecreaturestruggledtoitsfeetslowly.Whatdidthemotherdeerdo?Themotherdeerloweredherheadandlickedmyboy’scheekgently,asifexpressinggratitude.

Background/Conflictdrycropsdyingcowsstopgivingmilkcreeksandstreamslonggonebackintotheearth(溪流干涸)Ifwedidn’tseesomerainsoon,wewouldloseeverything.wouldbankrupt(使破產)severalfarmersInfer:______________________________It’sbettertosolvetheproblem\conflictwhendesigningtheplot.★Therewasanurgentneedforrain!MaincharactersThestoryistoldfromthemother’sperspective.★Billysix-year-old,carefreemotherdeerwithahugepairofdeerhorns(mightbeadangertotheboy)babyfawnlyingonthedryground(mightbedyingofthirst)I(themother)PlotdiagramKeysentence:ItwasonthisdaythatIlearnedthetruelessonofsharingandwitnessedtheonlymiracleIhaveseenwithmyowneyes.(Para2-4)IsawBillywalkingslowlyandpurposefullytowardsthewoodsandthenrunningout.Ifoundthisactivitywentonforoveranhour.Outofcuriosity,Ifollowedhim.Isawanamazingsightandwasterrified.hintDesignthePlotHowdidBillyfeedthebabyfawn?Whatdidthebabyfawndo?(standup/stilldyingofthirst)…AsIleanedintospyonhim,Isawanamazingsight.Amotherdeerwithahugepairofdeerhornsappearedinfrontofhim,withababyfawn(幼崽)lyingonthedryground.Ialmostscreamedtogethimaway.Para1:However,Billywalkedrightuptothem.____________________________Para2:Iwitnessedthemostbeautifulheartworkinghardtosavealife.__________Didthemotherdeerhurthim?Whatwasthemotherdeer’sreaction?HowdidIfeelaboutthescene?sharing(hottestday,workedoveranhour,branchesandthornsslappedonhisface,…)miracledifferentpartslogicallyconnectedWhatdidIdo?AppreciatetheuseofspecificverbsindescriptionIt’sbettertofollowthelanguagestyle.★Hewasn’twalkingwiththeusualcarefreeabandonofayouthbutwithaseriouspurpose.Minutesafterhedisappearedintothewoods,hecamerunningoutagaintowardthehouse.Icrept(躡手躡腳地走)outofthehouseandfollowedhimonhisjourney.Hewascupping(窩成杯狀)bothhandsinfrontofhimashewalked,verycarefulnottospillthewaterheheld.I

sneaked(crept)closerashewentintothewoods.