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about?ThefamilydinneronSpringFestivalEve(年夜飯)（20分）滿分檔：準確理解寫作任務(wù)，文本長度符合要求、書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要點，結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴密，詞匯豐富，沒有語法錯誤。pointsstructurelanguageGetthekeypoints.checklist初中畢業(yè)生學(xué)業(yè)考試作文題評分標準年夜飯是中國文化最重要的團圓飯。年夜飯菜肴豐富、美味，像年糕（NewYearcake）、魚等都還帶有美好的祝愿。請以“TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve”為題，寫一篇約110詞的短文，向外國朋友介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的年夜飯，讓他們更好地了解豐富多彩的文化習(xí)俗。注意：1.文中不可出現(xiàn)人名；

2.標題已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Circle

thekeypoints.importancemeanings&wishescultures&customsSpringFestival

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1Body:Paragraph2SpringFestivaldishesinyourhometown meaningsorwishes

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3WhattraditionaldishesdoyouhaveonSpringFestivalEve?Whatgoodmeaningsorbestwishesdothesedisheshave?Howdoyoulikethedinner?

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NewYearcakeisatraditionaldish.Itmeanstohavemoregoodluckandbecomebettereveryyear.b.NewYearcakeisatraditionaldishinChinaanditmeanshavingmoregoodluckaswellasbecomingbettereveryyear.NewYear

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atraditionaldishwhich/thatmeanstohavemoreluckandbecomebettereveryyear.d.NewYearcake,oneofthetraditionaldishesinChina,meanswecanbecomebettereveryyear.WeChinesebelievewecanhavemoregoodluckeveryyearsothatweoftenhaveNewYearcakeasatraditionaldishonSpringFestivalEve.…ComparethesesentencesWhichone/onesdoyoulike?Fishisatraditionaldish.Itmeanswecanhavemorethanwhatweneedeveryyear.Tangyuanisalsoatraditionaldish.Itmeansthatthefamilywillalwaysbetogether.Tips：usecorrectandgoodsentencepatterns(使用正確優(yōu)美的句式)用which/that引導(dǎo)的定語從句；用and,aswellas,notonly…butalso…等連接詞連接的句子；用有插入語的句子；用改變主語的句子；用你自己喜歡的好句子……Howdoyouimprovethesesentences?

____________________,NewYearcakeisthefirstdishwhichmeanshavinggoodluckaswellasbecomingbetternextyear._________________,

Tangyuan,oneofthetraditionaldishesinChina,meansthatthefamilywillalwaysbetogether._________________,peopleliketoeatfishsothattheycanhaveenoughmoneytospendeveryyear.Inmyhometown,therearemanytraditionaldeliciousfoodsatthedinner.Tostart/beginthedinner,Besides/What’smoreGenerallyspeaking,weChinesepeoplealllikethedinnerverymuch.Lastly/Finally

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（使用合適的連接詞）表示羅列的：first,second,third;first,then/next,afterthat,finally;foronething,foranother;ononehand,ontheotherhand;besides/what'smore/also…表說明的：forexample,infact,actually…表并列的：or,and,also,too,notonly…butalso,aswellas,either…or…表總結(jié)的：inshort,inaword,afterall,ingeneral,generallyspeaking…Howdoyoumakethesesentencesintoagoodparagraph?TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEveThefamilydinneronSpringFestivalEveisthemostimportantdinnerintraditionalChineseculture.OnSpringFestivalEve,familymembersgettogethertoenjoythedinner.Thereareallkindsofdeliciousfoodanddrinks.Manyofthemusuallyhavegreatmeanings.Forexample,inWenzhou,NewYearcake

isoftenthefirstdishwhichmeans“havingmoreluckandbecomingbetter”inChinesepronunciation.Anotherdishisfishwhichhasthemeaningof“havingmorethanweneed”.Childrenalllikethisfamilydinner.Atdinnertheyreceivenotonlybestwishesbutalsoluckymoneyfromtheirparents.ItisaChinesetraditionthatwehavekeptforthousandsofyears.ChecklistPointsStructureLanguage中考范文假設(shè)你是李華，端午節(jié)假期即將來臨，請你用英語給來自加拿大的交換生Frank寫一封110詞左右的電子郵件，邀請他來你家共度假期，并向他介紹端午節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)和你的3天假期安排。

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points.Paragraph2a._________________________________________________________________(celebrate,thefifthdayofthefifthlunarmonth…)b._________________________________________________________________(toremember,QuYuan,who…)Paragraph3Day1(gotothelibrary,knowabout,…)___________________________________________________________________Day2(visitgrandparents,learntomakeZongzi,traditionalfood…)___________________________________________________________________Day3(watchaboatrace,exciting,…)___________________________________________________________________traditionsplansaninvitationBeginning:Paragraph

1__________Body:Paragraph2__________When?Why?What?Who?…Paragraph3__________Day1Day2Day3Ending:Paragraph4__________hopesParagraph1DragonBoatFestivaliscomingsoon.Canyoucometogettogetherwithmyfamily?Nowletmetellyouaboutit.Paragraph4I’msurewewillhaveagoodtime.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.WritingGroupworkCheckwithyourgroupmembersandchoosethebestoneandshareitwithus.Total__________________Checklist

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