專題07讀后續寫父母親情

2020-2024年高考真題同類話題滿分范文經典背誦

2021年新高考I&II卷

閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.

HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrench

toastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeff

knewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.They

decidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadethe

Frenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesinto

theeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.Everythingwasgoing

smoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jenna

threwtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoit

cookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridge

boiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthe

stovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.But

Jeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshe

caughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右。

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

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Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

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【答案】Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikea

saviortothetwochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionsandstartedalloveragain.

Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeyto

success.Itwasallrightthistime.Deliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappytheywere!

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousand

perfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforher

thatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn’texpect.The

childrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.

【導語】本文以母親節為線索展開，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動手，

做起飯餐來，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗的故事。

【詳解】1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“當雙胞胎失望地環顧四周時，他們的父親出現了。”可知，第一段可描寫他們的父親指

導幫助他們準備早餐。

②由第二段首句內容“這對雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親。”可知，第二段可描寫母親收到孩子

們的禮物早餐，非常感動。

2.續寫線索：指導——積極——獻禮——感動

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①幫助：help/assist

②完成：finish/complete

③擁抱：hug/embrace

情緒類

①高興：happy/delighted

②感動：moved/touched

【點睛】[高分句型1].Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.(which引導的非限制性

定語從句)

[高分句型2].Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.(固定短

語notonly…but(also)和強調句型)

2021年浙江卷7月

閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事，

Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn’tunderstandmyworldofschool

activities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamily

expenses.

Ididn’treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass(超過)

anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.

Summersinthemid-70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,

preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmy

trombone(長號).

ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkin

hisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweeds

tospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwe

beganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,

lamb’s-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardto

thepay,eventhoughIwasn’tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.

Athome,mydadsaid,“Ajob’sabigsteptogrowingup.I’mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold.”

Mydad’swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.

Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn’tinterested.I

decideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.

注意：

1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;

2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語;

3.續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好;

4.續寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph1：Thepayarrivedatlast.

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Paragraph2：Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.

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【答案】

Thepayarrivedatlast.Althoughthejobwasverytiring,IwasveryhappyinmyheartforIgotsomething

frommywork.Thetoiloflaborwasforgottenforthetimebeing.IthoughtIshouldhavemyownmoneyand

plannedhowtospendit.“Howmuchmoneyhaveyouearned?”Dadasked.Iwassurprised,reluctanttotellhim

myincome.Thenextmorning,mydad’slivestocktruckstartedrunning.Isawmyfather’shard-workingfigureand

thoughtofhiswords“Ajob’sabigsteptogrowingup”.

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.TheywereworriedthatIwastooselfishto

give.Irealizedthatmylaborwasveryhard,butmygrowthandourwholefamilyhadbeendependingonthehard

workofmyparents!Dadnevercomplainedaboutunfairness!Heevenseemedtothinkthatwasfair.Ithought,

“I’veonlyworkedfortwoweeks,buthowmanyyearsmyfatherhasworked!”Intheevening,Dadcameback.I

proudlytookoutmyownmoneyandhandedittoDad.

【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者高中畢業后，參加農場工作，辛辛苦苦掙到的錢，不情愿貢

獻給家庭，后來在看到父親的辛勞之后，理解了父母擔心的是自己太過自私而不知奉獻，終于想通，并自

豪地將自己勞動所得交給父親的故事。

【詳解】1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“工資終于到了。”可知，第一段可描寫作者的工資到手后，高興地計劃自己用這筆錢，

不愿意交給父親，然后看到父親的辛勞，想到了父親經常說的那句話——工作是邁向成長的一大步。

②由第二段首句內容“我立刻明白了父母的擔心。”可知，第二段可描寫作者明白了父母擔心自己不懂得奉獻，

然后又想到了父親為這個家的辛勞付出，想通了以后，然后自豪地把錢交給了父親。

2.續寫線索：高興——計劃——不情愿——發現——奉獻——自豪

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①計劃：programme/plan

②奉獻：give/devote

③發現：see/find

情緒類

①不情愿的：unwilling/reluctant

②自豪地：proudly/withpride

【點睛】[高分句型1]Althoughthejobwasverytiring,IwasveryhappyinmyheartforIgotsomethingfrommy

work.(運用了although引導的讓步狀語從句)

[高分句型2]Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.(運用了what引導的賓語從句)

2021年浙江卷1月

閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。

Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthe

pumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethat

wehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage-Icarriedan85-pounder

backlastyear.

Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthe

winner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemy

point.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhy

Ithoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthe

time.

Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.

AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebriefly

preventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwas

abletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.

Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwith

Jasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItried

toremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulled

hard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaround

tryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloud

intheenclosedspace.

注意：

1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

3.續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

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Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.

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ThevideowaspostedtheMondaybeforeHalloween.

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【答案】Paragraph1

Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Dadwassummoned–less,itseemed,inexpectationof

practicalhelpthantomakesurehedidn’tmissoutonthespectacle.Iheardhimproposecallingthefiredepartment.

“Staytuned,”saidMom;she’dmentionedshewasgoingtouploadthevideotoFacebook,butitwasonlythenI

realizedshe’dbeenfilmingthewholetime.Thevideocutsbeforemyrescue—Dadgotmetopushmyheadfarther

intothepumpkinsoMomcouldreachinandundotherubberbandroundmyponytail.Iemergedwith

squash-conditionedhair,asorechinandmynosepluggedwithpulp.

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Thevideowasposted