復習課4高一年級英語主講人馬曉宇河北工業大學附屬紅橋中學WritingtaskofeachUnitUnit3WritinganexperimentUnit4WritingaboutanartworkUnit5WritingaboutadivingexperienceUnit6WritingsafetyguidelinesVanGogh's

Sunflower

ThissunflowerpaintingisanoilpaintingbyVincentvanGogh,agreatpainterfromtheNetherlands.ItwascompletedinArlesin1889andisamonghismostfamousworks.

Itshowssunflowersinavase,mostlyinthreeshadesofyellow,frombrightyellowstobrownishyellows.Icanseetheflowersareatdifferentstagesoflife-somearejuststartingtobloomandsomearestartingtowither（枯萎）.

Thepaintingleavesagreatimpressiononme.Inmyopinion,itshowsthemeaningoflife.Eachoftheflowersistryingitsbesttogrowandshowitsbeauty,nomatterwhichstageoflifeitisat.Thepaintinggivesmeadeeperunderstandingoflife.如何寫好介紹類的說明文？一、審清題目，謀篇布局1、通過審題確定寫作的主題2、說明文的結構——三段式3、注意語言的適切性二、運用所學的詞匯和句型詞匯：Style:

lively,abstract,realistic,traditionalFeature:special,unique,impressive,vivid,amazing,magnificentfamous/well-known,bright,colorful,meaningful,physicalfeatures,innerspiritandstrengthArtist:bebornin...;beknownfor/as...;beskilledin/begoodat二、運用所學的詞匯和句型

句型：Introduction:Thispaintingwasan...by...It'samonghis/her...Itwascompleted...Mainbody:Itdescribes/shows/represents/reflects...Itispaintedmostlyin...Thecoloursrangefrom...to...Conclusion:I'mfondof...because...Iwasdeeplyimpressedwith...三、使用過渡詞，使行文連貫1、表示引入的常用語asisknowntoall;asweallknow2、表示列舉的常用語firstofall;what'smore/inaddition/besides;finallyontheonehand;ontheotherhand；meanwhile3、表示原因的常用語because;becauseof;owingto;thanksto;dueto4、表示強調的常用語especially,inparticular;mostimportantly四、使用高級句式，給文章增彩1、定語從句2、名詞性從句3、非謂語動詞4、并列句注意事項1、審清題目，避免出現與題目、人物關系不適切的語言；2、審全要點，仔細讀題，不要遺漏要點；3、審準時態，不要出現時態混亂的問題；4、適當使用過渡詞，使上下文邏輯通暢；5、語言表述準確、簡潔，恰當地使用高級句型;6、文章結構清晰，層次分明，書寫工整、規范。改寫句子ThissunflowerpaintingisanoilpaintingbyVincentvanGogh,agreatpainterfromtheNetherlands.ItwascompletedinArlesin1889.(用定語從句改寫）Thissunflowerpaintingisanoilpaintingwhichwas

completedbyVincentvanGogh,agreatpainterfromtheNetherlandsinArlesin1889.改寫句子Thepaintingleavesagreatimpressiononme.Inmyopinion,itshowsthemeaningoflife.

（用名詞性從句改寫）Inthispainting,whatimpressesmemostisthatitshowsthemeaningoflife.Thereasonwhythepaintingleavesagreatimpressiononmeisthatitshowsthemeaningoflife.改寫句子Itshowssunflowersinavase,mostlyinthreeshadesofyellowrangingfrombrightyellowstobrownishyellows.Itshowssunflowersinavase,mostlyinthreeshadesofyellow,frombrightyellowstobrownishyellows.(用非謂語改寫）改寫句子Thepaintinggivesmeadeeperunderstandingoflife.(用并列句改寫）Appreciatethepaintingbyheart,andyouwillgetadeeperunderstandingoflife.中國畫歷史悠久，文化底蘊深厚，深受國內外人士的喜愛和好評。中國有許多著名的傳統派畫家，其中之一就是齊白石。請你根據以下提示，介紹齊白石的作品《蝦》：1、齊白石擅長畫蝦，因作品栩栩如生而深受人們喜愛；2、這幅《蝦》以毛筆蘸墨、著色自然；3、對這幅畫作的理解和感受。注意：1、字數100左右2、可適當增加細節，使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：shrimps蝦1、審題：文體--說明文人稱--第一人稱時態--一般現在時，一般過去時2、謀篇：引入主題

說明文三段式內容介紹總結全文

3、要點提煉：引入主題--中國畫歷史悠久，聞名世界。其中齊白石的畫是比較有代表性的作品；主體內容--介紹齊白石繪畫風格及他的作品特點；總結全文--對齊白石作品的感悟。4、注意：盡可能地用上前面學習過的詞匯、短語和句式。范例1MostpeopleagreethattraditionalChinesepaintingsareverybeautiful.Inmyopinion,peoplelikethembecausetheyshowChineselonghistoryandrichculture.TherearemanyfamoustraditionalChinesepaintersandQiBaishiisoneofthem.Nowletmeintroducehisrepresentativework--The

Shrimps.Youcanseethebrushdrawinginblackinksandnaturalcolorsinthispainting.What'smore,

thelivelystyleofdrawingalsoleadstothepopularityamongmanypeople.I'mreallyfondoftheShrimpsbecauseQiBaishicombinesChineseartwithnatureperfectly.范例1范例2

Asisknowntoall,traditionalChinesepaintingsareverybeautiful.Inmyopinion,thereasonwhypeoplelikethemisthattheyshowChineselonghistoryandrichculture.TherearemanyfamoustraditionalChinesepainters,oneofwhomisQiBaishi.Nowletmeintroducehisrepresentativework--The

Shrimps.

Whatimpressesmemostinthispaintingisthelivelystyleofdrawing.Itshowsvividphysicalfeaturesofshrimpsinblackinksandnaturalcoloursrangingfromlightinktothickink.Duetothisreason,itattractsart