全國甲&乙卷2024年高考英語作文真題【甲卷】英語課要求做課堂展示,請你根據(jù)所給圖片,以DevelopmentofTransportinChina為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目和首句已為你寫好。DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday'sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday’sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasseenenormousdevelopment.Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.Secondly,theintroductionofhigh-speedtrainshasdramaticallyshortenedtraveltimes,makingintercitytravelfasterandmorecomfortable.Lastly,theproliferationofnewenergyvehiclesunderscoresChina’sdedicationtoenvironmentalsustainability,reducingrelianceonfossilfuels.ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.Inshort,China’stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)所給圖片，以DevelopmentofTransportinChina為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。【詳解】1.詞匯激活提供：offer→provide極大地：dramatically→tremendously減少：reduce→decrease總之：inshort→inanutshell2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.拓展句：Firstly,sharedbicycles,whichofferanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttripshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility.【點睛】【高分句型1】Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)【高分句型2】ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.(運用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)【文本解讀】發(fā)言稿是指在公開場合發(fā)表講話的文稿。發(fā)言人可以針對某個具體問題來交流思想和感情、表達(dá)見解和主張、宣傳倡議某種精神或活動，如介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)、工作、經(jīng)驗等等。發(fā)言的目的是為了引起聽眾的共鳴，并使其在思想上認(rèn)同或信服發(fā)言人的觀點。因此，發(fā)言稿通常論點鮮明，邏輯性強，具有針對性、條理性和激勵性的特點，容易使讀者信服并在思想上產(chǎn)生共鳴。發(fā)言稿主要由標(biāo)題語、稱謂語、問候語、說明語、主體正文、結(jié)束語及致謝語構(gòu)成。本題目要求考生根據(jù)提供的圖片內(nèi)容寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容涵蓋共享單車、高鐵、新能源汽車三個方面，展現(xiàn)中國交通的發(fā)展。這一題目體現(xiàn)了高考作文貼近時代、關(guān)注社會熱點的特點，同時也考查了考生的觀察分析能力、語言組織能力和創(chuàng)新思維。【思路點撥】通過審題我們知道本題要求考生寫一篇發(fā)言稿。發(fā)言稿具有說服和號召的功能，所以語言要有力度，有感染力。第一段提出演講主題——中國的交通發(fā)展；第二段結(jié)合圖片詳細(xì)說明中國的交通發(fā)展?fàn)顩r，結(jié)尾可以發(fā)表感悟，如為國家的富強和民族的復(fù)興感到自豪等；第三段感謝聆聽【滿分范文】范文一Goodmorning,everyone!Today,I'mgreatlyhonoredtoaddressthetopic"TheDevelopmentofTransportinChina".Inourrapidlyevolvingsociety,justtakesharedbikes,high-speedrails,andnewenergyvehiclesasexamples.Sharedbikeshavetrulybroughtgreatconveniencetoourshort-distancetravels.Theyenableustomovefreelyinthecitieswithsuchease,minimizingthetroubleofrelyingonpublictransportationorprivatecars.Itisindeedasimpleandeco-friendlywaytogetaround.High-speedrailsareanoutstandingachievementintransportation.Theyconnectcitiesatastonishingspeeds,greatlyshorteningthetraveltimebetweendistantlocations.Withtheircomfortandefficiency,theyhaverevolutionizedthewaywetravellongdistances,makingitmoreaccessibleandpleasant.Newenergyvehiclesarealsoplayinganincreasinglycrucialrole.Theyrepresentashifttowardsamoresustainableandenvironmentallyfriendlytransportationalternative.Thesecarsarereducingourdependenceonfossilfuelsandhelpingtocreateacleanerandgreenerfuture.Thechangesinthesetransportationmodesreflecttheprogressoftechnologyandourpursuitofabetterlife.Theynotonlyenhanceourtravelexperiencebutalsohaveaprofoundimpactontheeconomyenvironment,andsocialdevelopment.Wearewitnessinganexcitingeraoftransportationinnovation,andthesechangeswillcontinuetoshapeourlivesinthecomingyears.Thankyouforlistening!DevelopmentofTransportinChina范文二Goodmorning,mydearteachersandfellowstudents,IfeelsohonoredtostandheretotalkabouttheremarkabledevelopmentoftransportationinChina.Aswediveintothistopic,wewillexplorethreespecificadvancements:sharedbicycles,newenergyvehicles,andhigh-speedtrains.Thedevelopmentoftransportationhasprofoundlychangedourlives.Thesharedbicyclesandthenewenergyvehicleshaveofferedaconvenientandeco-friendlymodeoftransportation,promotingahealthierandmoresustainableurbanenvironment.Asforthehigh-speedtrains,IhavetosaythattheyreallyhaverevolutionizedtravelwithinChina,connectingcitiesandregionslikeneverbefore,whichnotonlyboosteconomicgrowthbutalsofosterculturalexchangeandunitybybringingpeopleclosertogether.So,myfellowstudents,letustakeprideinournation'sachievementsdrawinginspirationfromourpasttofuelourjourneytowardsabrighterfutureandcontributetothecontinuedprogresstoshapeabettertomorrow.Thankyou.范文三It'sagreathonourtoaddressyouall!ThetopicIwanttosharewithyoutodayis"TheProgressofTransportinChina",illustratedthroughsharedbikes,high-speedtrains,andnewenergyvehicles.Thepastfewdecadeshaveseenremarkableprogressinthecountry'stransportsystem,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.Sharedbikesnowdotcitystreets,providingagreenandconvenientcommutingoption.Meanwhile,high-speedtrains,especiallythebullettrain,havedrasticallyreducedtraveltimesacrossthisexpansivenation.Furthermore,withtheemergenceofnewenergyvehicles,Chinaissteppingtowardsamoreeco-friendlyandsustainablefuture.ThesedevelopmentsnotonlyshowcaseChina'stechnologicalprogressbutalsoitscommitmenttoenvironmentalsustainability.Inshort,China'stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.范文四Dearfellowstudents,ThesethreepicturesencapsulatetheremarkabletransformationofChina'stransportationlandscape.Thefirstimage,featuringrickshawsandhorses,evokesabygoneeraofslow-paced,agrarianlife.Thesecondimage,showcasingbicycles,symbolizesChina'sentryintothemoderneraanditsburgeoningurbanization.Finally,thethirdpicture,brimmingwithcarsandbuses,vividlyillustratesthecountry'seconomicgrowthandurbantransformation.Thistransformationisnotmerelyaquantitativechange;itrepresentsaqualitativeleapinChina'sdevelopmentanditspursuitofmodernization.Itreflectsashiftfromadependenceonhumanandanimallabortoaneraofmechanizationandautomation,ajourneythathasfundamentallyalteredthewayweliveandwork.Thankyou.范文五Dearfriends,Today,I'dliketodiscusstheremarkableadvancementsintransportationtechnologyinChina.Threekeydevelopmentsstandout:sharedbicycles,high-speedrail,andnewenergyvehicles.Firstly,sharedbicyclesrevolutionizeurbanmobility,encouraginggreenandhealthytravel.Secondly,ourhigh-speedrailnetworkhastransformedintercitytravel,connectingdistantregionswithunprecedentedspeed.Lastly,newenergyvehiclesrepresentasignificantsteptowardsreducingcarbonemissionsandpromotingenvironmentalsustainability.Inconclusion,theseinnovationsnotonlyenhanceourdailylivesbutalsocontributetoagreenerandmoreefficientfuture.Let'scelebratetheseachievementsandembracetheexcitingpossibilitiesahead.Thankyou.2023年高考英語作文真題【甲卷】你們學(xué)校正舉辦主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動。請你以一位中國歷史人物為題寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡介及事跡；2.意義或啟示。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本解讀】本試題要求考生以“一位中國歷史人物”為題寫一篇短文投稿，參加主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動。內(nèi)容有兩個要點：人物簡介及事跡，意義或啟示。該題考查了考生的英語寫作表達(dá)能力、邏輯思維能力以及對中國歷史人物的了解程度。這一命題旨在向世界展示中華文明，講述體現(xiàn)中國精神的中國故事，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生傳承和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化，增強文化自信和價值觀自信，厚植愛國主義情懷。【思路點撥】宏觀思維：類型：短文-記敘文；主人稱：第三人稱+第一人稱；主時態(tài)：過去+現(xiàn)在寫作思路分析：第一段：whowhenwhat寫誰，點題指出所寫人物+介紹【生活的時期和身份等】，第二段：why為什么寫他：重要性-最為哦突出的事跡和重大社會影響【顯示文化素養(yǎng)】第三段：what對我有什么影響：你現(xiàn)在或者以后會怎么做【滿分范文】范文一LiBaiisarenownedpoetinChinesetraditionalculture.Hewaspopularfromhisowndaytothepresentasageniusandaromanticfigurewhotooktraditionalpoeticformstonewheights.Hehasthenickname“Shixian”,meaning“ImmortalPoet”,whichsetsahighvalueonhisworks.LiisbestknownfortheextraordinaryimaginationandstrikingTaoisminhispoetry.Thoughconsideredtobeagenius,hewouldn’tbothertositfortheImperialExaminationtobecomeanofficial.Hespentmuchofhislifetravellingaroundthecountry,enjoyingwineandleadingacarefreelife,whichisreflectedinhispoetry:placeshevisited,descriptionsofnature,joyshefeltwhendrinkingandsoon.Uptonow,aboutathousandpoemscomposedbyLiBaihavesurvived,thirty-fourofwhichareincludedinthecollection300TangPoemspublishedinthe18thcentury.InthesamecenturytranslationsofhispoemsbegantoappearinEurope.范文二InChina'shistorywithfivethousandyears,thestarsareshining,suchasShenNong,whotastedhundredsofherbs,Confucius,ateacherforallages,andLiBai,thePoetryImmortal,tonamejustafew.Ofallthoserenownedones,ZhugeKongmingismyfavorite.ZhugeKongming,afamousstatesman,strategistandinventorinChinesehistory,wastheprimeministerofShuinTheThreeKingdomsperiod.HeassistedLordLiuBeiandledtheBattleofRedCliff,whichformedasituationwherethecountrywasdividedmainlyintothreekingdoms.AfterthedeathofLiuBei,hewentontoassisthissuccessorLiuChan,fightingagainstWeiKingdomforfivetimes,inordertorepayLiuBei'skindness,andfinallydiedofillnessfromoverwork.Especiallyadmirablearehisoutstandingtalentandnoblequality,fromwhichIlearntobeloyaltomycause,mypursuitaswellasmycommitment,andsticktoitforlife!(162words)范文三DuFuwasconsideredtobethegreatestofalltime.Althoughhewaslittle-known,hisworkscametobehugelyinfluentialinChineseliteraryculture.HehasbeencalledtheSageofPoetryandawiderangeofhisworkshavebeenintroducedtoWesternreaders.Hisgreatambitionwastoservehiscountryasasuccessfulcivilservant.Buthislife,likethecountry,wasdestroyedbytheAnLushanRebellionandhislastfifteenyearswereatimeofalmostconstantunrest.Hewroteaboutthesuccessandfailureofthegovernment,ortheeffectsofthetimesinwhichhelivedonhimselfandontheordinarypeople.HislyricalcommentsarebasedonemotionandhisworksmadehimthecentralfigureofChinesepoetichistory.范文四InthedistinguishedChinesehistory,manypeoplemakegreatcontributionstothedevelopmentofourcountry,amongwhomZhangQianstandsoutparticularly.IntheWesternHanDynasty,followingtheemperor’scommand,ZhangQianmadehisjourneytotheWesternRegions.SellingtraditionalChineseproductsliketeaandsilkandimportingavarietyofitems,heopenedthedoortothefriendshipbetweenChinaandmanycountriesinCentralAsia.Throughhistraveling,theSilkRoadcameintobeingandhegreatlypromotedthespreadofChineseculture.Nowadays,withmoreandmoreinternationalexchange,itisagreattimeforustolearnfromZhangQiantospreadourbrilliantculturetothewholeworld.范文五LiQingzhaowasborninJinan,ShandongProvince.Herfatherwasanopen-mindedimperialcourtofficial,whoofferedhisdaughtertheprivilegeofaverygoodeducation.Thankstoherexceptionaltalent,Liestablishedherselfearlyasapeerlesswriterofpoemsandparticularlylyricpoems.

Herlifewasabittersweetstory.Atthebeginning,Liledacarefreelife.Mostofherlyricpoemsdescribedthelonelylifeandmelancholyfeelingsofyoungwomenfromtheuppersociety.Afterthedeathofherhusband,herlifechanged.Hardshipandsufferingmadeherpoeticstylewidelydifferentfromearlierworks.Itturnedtobemelancholyandimposing,reflectingthehardship.

LidevelopedadistinctiveYi'anstyleoflyricpoems,whichfeaturesplainlanguage,adelicaterestraint,theblendingofintensepassionandliteraryimages,andbeautifulmelodiousrhythms.What’smore,herlyricpoemsareveryeasytorecite.【2023全國乙卷】學(xué)校英文報組織同學(xué)們分享自己在假期中學(xué)到的新技能，請你以此為主題寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括:1.簡要概述;

2.體驗和感受。注意:1.字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右;2.題目已為你寫好。LearningANewSkill______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本解讀】記敘文是以敘述人物的經(jīng)歷或事物發(fā)展變化的過程為主的一種文體。在高考英語寫作中，記敘文的命題形式主要是提綱式，提示信息一般包括人物事跡及其對你的影響（寫人）或活動時間、地點、目的、具體內(nèi)容及活動感受（記事）等。這種寫人、記事類半開放性記敘文，要按照記敘文的六要素（時間、地點、人物、起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果）安排內(nèi)容，有一定的靈活性，把事件、人物或場景交代清楚即可。另外，文章要言之有物，尊重事實，有中心，有重點，有邏輯。【思路點撥】本篇作文要求考生寫一篇短文投稿。文章可分為三段，首段可以講述在什么時候?qū)W到的新技能；第二段詳細(xì)敘述新技能的內(nèi)容；最后一段描述自己從中獲得的體驗和感受。寫作時可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且選用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、語言流暢，過渡自然。模板：?篇首句1.LastsummerholidaywasmemorablebecauseIlearnedanewskill,whichwasquiteuseful.去年暑假是難忘的，因為我學(xué)到了一項相當(dāng)有用的新技能。2.Lastweek,Ihelpedmyuncletoharvestteainhisgarden,andIlearnedhowtopicktealeaves,

whichwasverymeaningful.上周，我?guī)椭迨逶谒幕▓@里采茶，我學(xué)會了如何采摘茶葉，這很有意義。3.Lastmonth,mybestfriendinvitedmetojoinaswimmingclub,whereIlearnedhowtoswim.上個月，我最好的朋友邀請我加入一個游泳俱樂部，在那里我學(xué)會了游泳。?篇中句1.First,heshowedthemoves,andthenItriedtoimitatewhathedid.Atlast,Imastered...首先，他展示了動作，然后我試著模仿他的動作。最后，我掌握了……2.Itriedmybesttodoit,butcouldn’tlearnhowtokeepthebalance.我盡了最大的努力去做，但卻無法學(xué)會如何保持平衡。?篇尾句Thisexperienceisquitevaluable.NotonlydidIlearnanewskillthatcanhelpmeinemergency,butitalsoenrichedmysummerlife.這次經(jīng)歷很有價值。我不僅學(xué)到了一項新技能，它可以在緊急情況下為我提供幫助，而且也豐富了我的暑假生活。2.Throughthisexperience,Irealizedtheimportanceofmasteringanewskill.通過這次經(jīng)歷，我認(rèn)識到了掌握一項新技能的重要性。【滿分范文】范文一LearningaNewSkillLearningaNewSkillItisimportantforustomastersomebasiclivingskillstoprepareusforourfuturelife.ThatiswhyIlearnedhowtocookduringtheMayDayholiday.Sincemymotherisskilledatcooking,Idecidedtolearnfromher.Earlyinthemorningweboughtsomeingredients,includingsomevegetables,meatandafishinthelocalmarket.Oncewegotbackhome,Ibegantowashandcutthemcarefully.Undertheguidanceofmymother,Iturnedonthegascooker.Ifirststir-friedtwovegetables.ThenIcookedmeatwithpotatoes.Themostdifficulttasktodowascookfishwithtomatoes.However,Ifinallydidit.ThemomentIputthedishesonthetable,myparentsgavemeathumbs-up.IfeltsoproudthatIsharedhouseworkwithmyparents,whichalsoshowedIhadgrownup.范文二LearningaNewSkillItis

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,themoreproficientyouwillbecome.范文五LearningaNewSkillMylong-awaitedsummervacationfinallyarrived.Lastweekend,itwasveryhot.MydaughterandIcametotheswimmingclassfortrainingasusual.Iwasworriedandwithbutterflyinmystomach,butmydaughterencouragedmetobebraveanddetermined.Onceintheswimmingpool,thegreenwatermademefeelcalm.Ijumpedintotheswimmingpool.Itwascoolandcomfortable.Thecoachtaughtmetobreathefirst.Thecoachsaid,"takeabreath,andthenbreathethroughyournose."Ididitfiveorsixtimes,andIlearnedit.Thenthecoachtaughtmetoslapwater.Igraspedtherailing,slappedthewaterwithmylegsandfeet,andfeltverytiredafterafewtaps.Inordertolearnhowtoslapwater,Istillpracticed,andfinallylearnedhowtoswiminwater.Simple!Ilearnedfreestyle.Swimmingmakesmeconfidentandkeepthegoodfeelingandhighspirit.Iampositiveandhappynow,Iwillinsistonthishobbyallthetime,whichmakesuscoolinthehotsummerdays.Anyway,swimmingisajoyfulactivityinthehotsummer.2022年高考英語作文真題【甲卷】你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護(hù)海洋的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本解讀】試題要求考生根據(jù)所給的情境寫一封100詞左右的投稿。內(nèi)容是關(guān)6月8日是世界海洋日。要求寫出海洋的重要性以及保護(hù)海洋的倡議。試題有一個半開放性的特點。內(nèi)容要緊扣這個世界海洋日的主題。要求考生對這個環(huán)保對于海洋的事情有所了解，并且，適當(dāng)增加某種細(xì)節(jié)。從而明確寫信目的，海洋日的海洋的重要性，這幾個方面去展開描寫。并且發(fā)出保護(hù)海洋的倡議，這點讓保護(hù)環(huán)境這個主題得以升華。【思路點撥】【解題思路（分段落，列提綱）】第一段：作用：開篇。要求：開門見山，點名主題。篇幅：2-3行：2句-3句。DoyouhaveideaaboutJune8?ItisnotonlythecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseseniorschoolstudents,butalsoWorldOceansDay,designatedbytheUNtoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotecttheoceans.第二段：作用：文章主體內(nèi)容。要求：層次分明，邏輯清晰，要點齊全。篇幅：4-5行，4-5個句子。Theoceanisthecradleofalllifeonearth,richinnaturalresources,andalsoourbluehomeforahappylifeandhappygrowth.Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.Tobeginwith,protecttheMarineecologicalenvironmentandadvocategreenenvironmentalprotectionactions.What’smore,tostrengthentheconsciousnessoftheseainaccordancewiththelaw,consciouslyprotectthebluelandandresourcesenvironment,startfromme,startfromnow,startfromaroundthings,takeanactivepartingreenvolunteeractivities,andadvocategreenenvironmentalprotection.Finally,greeninitiative,greenlife,nottotheocean,sewage,handinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,beasmallguardtoprotecttheblueland.第三段：作用：收尾，點題，補充其他細(xì)節(jié)等。要求：概括，得體。篇幅：2行左右，1-2個句子。ThethemeofOceanDay2022is"ProtectingtheharmoniouscoexistencebetweenmanandnatureintheMarineEcosystem".HandinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,andinherittheMarinecivilizationfromhearttoheart.【滿分范文】范文一OurOceans，OurResponsibilityDoyouknowJune8,whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalsoWorldOceansDay,designatedbytheUNtoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotecttheoceans?Theoceanisthecradleofalllifeonearth,richinnaturalresources,andalsoourbluehomeforahappylifeandhappygrowth.Tobeginwith,protecttheMarineecologicalenvironmentandadvocategreenenvironmentalprotectionactions.What’smore,tostrengthentheconsciousnessoftheseainaccordancewiththelaw,consciouslyprotectthebluelandandresourcesenvironment,startfromme,startfromnow,startfromaroundthings,takeanactivepartingreenvolunteeractivities,andadvocategreenenvironmentalprotection.Doyouagreewithme?Ifso,let’shandinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,andinherittheMarinecivilizationfromhearttoheart.（160）點評：文章用了中規(guī)中矩的手法，和讀者用疑問句進(jìn)行交流，倡議書內(nèi)容交代的比較自然流暢。范文二OurOceans，OurResponsibilityTodayisJune8,WorldOceansDay,whosethemeof2022is"ProtectingtheharmoniouscoexistencebetweenmanandnatureintheMarineEcosystem".Theworldisdevelopingtoofasttocareforitshealth.Itisourpitytosacrificetheharmonyofoceantoachieveeconomicdevelopment：thepollutedoceans,thedyingmarinecreatures,thedestroyedundersearesources,etc,areallcryingforourhelp.ItishightimethatwestrengthenthestudyofMarineknowledgeandenhancetheawarenessofMarineprotection.DeepentheunderstandingandunderstandingofMarinemothers,effectivelyenhancetheawarenessandresponsibilityofprotectingtheblueland,andstrivetobeasmallexpertinprotectingtheMarineecologicalenvironment.Let’sreturnthemermaidtoacleanocean,andmaketheirlifemorehappy.(145)點評：文章用了比喻類比的手法，采用了現(xiàn)實生活中破壞海洋的危害為例子，說明海洋保護(hù)的重要性。最后以還給美人魚一個美麗的家園為比喻，表達(dá)美好期盼。范文三OurOceans，OurResponsibilityThereiscomprehensiveevidencethatwehumansarenottakinggoodcareoftheocean,posingalotofproblems,suchasplasticpollution,oilleak,risingsealevelsaswellasextremeweathers.Asaconsequence,greatimportanceshouldbeattachedtoprotectourocean.Admittedly,intenseattentionshouldbepaidandtirelesseffortsbemadebypeopleallovertheworld.Initially,governmentsneedtoconsidermakingpoliciesandtakingpropermeasurestotoconserveourocean.Inaddition,whatisofutmostimportanceisthatweindividualsshouldraiseourawarenessofenvironmentprotection,reducingourfootprintandlivingagreenlifestyle.Hopefully,withourjointefforts,weareboundtobuildanenvironmental-friendlyplantsharedbywehumanbeing.范文四OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8wasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceanDay.It’sadaytostresstheimportanceofoceanandremindpeopletoprotectit.It’sgenerallyacknowledgedthatoceanplaysanimportantroleinmanyaspects.Firstofall,withrichbiologicalresources,oceanprovidessamplesforbiologicalscienceresearchintermsofthediversityofglobalbiologicalresources.Inaddition,itsabundantfoodresourcesandenergyintheoceanmakeitpossibleforlivingthingstosurvive.Equallyimportantly,theabundantwaterresourcesintheoceanbeartheoperationoftheglobalwatercirculationsystem,whichaffectorevendeterminetheglobalclimatechange.Somanybenefitsdoesoceanbringtohumanbeingsthatgreatimportancecan’tbeattachedenoughtoprotectit.Ofcourse,it’severybody’sdutytoshoulderthisresponsibility.Foronething,it’sagoodideatowidelystudyknowledgeconcerningoceanandthinkofeffectiveapproachestoprotectit.Foranother,let’sstopourbadbehaviorswhichmayindirectlypolluteocean.Smallthingsmakeabigdifference.Ibelieve,withourjointeffort,atrulygreenwillalwayssurroundus.范文五OurOceans，OurResponsibilityAsisknowntoall,theWorldOceanDayfallsonJune8thannually.Oceanplaysanindispensableroleinwatercirculation,carbonstorageaswellasclimateadjustment.Itisalsohometoalargevarietyofmarinespeciessuchasfish,coralandalgae,allofwhichconstituteabigpartintheoceanbiologicalchain.Therefore,itisnoexaggerationtosaythathardlycanwehumangoaboutourlivesshouldoceanbeeliminatedfromourplanet.Consideringtheabovemeritsofocean,Iappealtoeveryonetodoourbitinpreservingourcommunaltreasurehouseaswellastheoriginofalllifeforms-thedeepbluesea.(113)【2022年全國乙卷】學(xué)校英文報正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)習(xí)活動狀況描述：2.簡單評論;3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。【文本解讀】本試題設(shè)置了讀圖表、寫短文的形式，特別突顯了高中英語課標(biāo)中所增添的“看”的考查，強調(diào)了讀圖能力。設(shè)置的寫作情境是校英文報正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論，要求考生閱讀有關(guān)學(xué)生英語學(xué)習(xí)活動調(diào)查結(jié)果情況的圖表，使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果信息寫一篇帶有個人思考的、有記敘有說明有議論的小短文。這精心設(shè)計的試題情境使寫作形式更加靈活，內(nèi)容更加開放。這封信中會涉及到考生“我”、參與英語學(xué)習(xí)活動情況調(diào)查的“學(xué)生們”，因此第一、三人稱都可能會用到；表達(dá)學(xué)習(xí)活動狀況描述和簡單評論，主要用一般現(xiàn)在時；關(guān)于建議，為將來的事情，因此時態(tài)會用一般將來時，或者用情態(tài)動詞來表達(dá)建議。寫作時要根據(jù)主要內(nèi)容的順序來寫，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且選用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使文章通順、語言流暢。【思路點撥】【寫前四審】1.審題材：投稿2.審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主3.審人稱：第一、三人稱為主4.審要點：構(gòu)思文章是否符合題目要求，主旨突出，內(nèi)容要點齊全，寫作對象明確，語言的選用得當(dāng)，符合要求等。【整體思路】1.敘述并說明英語學(xué)習(xí)活動調(diào)查的原因及目的。2.分兩方面闡述：英語學(xué)習(xí)活動調(diào)查結(jié)果柱狀圖描述，并加以簡單評論。3.你實用的建議。【滿分范文】范文一LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.Arecentsurveysuggeststhatthemajorityofstudentsbeinginterviewed,about65%,tendtolearnEnglishbylisteningtoEnglishsongs.50%ofthestudentschoosetowatchEnglishmoviesasawayoflearning.ReadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningsitesprovetobethelesspopularwaysaccountingfor18%and12%respectively.Overall,theresultsarequiteinteresting,indicatingthatlanguagelearningcanbeintegratedwithpersonalhobbiesandentertainment.Inthefuture,IthinkourschoolcouldprovidesomeactivitiessuchasbookclubsorEnglishcornerstofurtherinspirestudentsinterestinlearningEnglish.范文二LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanyth