2025年高考英語應用文課后續(xù)寫講義第06講讀后續(xù)寫滿分動作描寫：動作鏈（講義）(解析版)第06講讀后續(xù)寫動作描寫動作鏈讀后續(xù)寫·負面情緒必背一利用and形成動作鏈 1二利用非謂語形成動作鏈 2HYPERLINK三利用精彩紛呈不同動詞“說”形成動作鏈 4知識點1一利用and形成動作鏈1.Shefoldedherarmsandstaredathim.她抱起雙臂，盯著他看。Itappedthemanontheshoulderandaskedhimtomove.我拍了拍那名男子的肩膀，讓他挪動一下。Sheburiedherfaceinherhandkerchiefand

sniffed

loudly.她把臉埋在手帕里，大聲地擤著鼻子。4.Irushedhome,searchedthroughmycollectionofhats,andgrabbedthecottonone.我沖回家，翻遍了我收集的帽子，抓起了那頂棉質(zhì)的。5.Janeturnedtomewithtearsinhereyes,andbeggedmetohelpher.簡眼里含著淚水轉(zhuǎn)向我，懇求我?guī)蛶退?.Lauraburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.勞拉突然哭了起來，然后從房子里跑了出去。7.Jane站起來用盡全力揮動著她的襯衫并大聲喊叫。Janestoodup,screamedatthetopofherlungsandwavedheryellowblousewitheverybitofherstrength.【即時練】1.歌手瞥了一眼觀眾，深吸了一口氣，開始唱歌。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.2.他停下出租車，提著箱子跳上車，對司機說:“請到警察局去。”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”3.男孩們興奮地沖到湖邊，脫下衣服跳進水里。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theboysrushedexcitedlytothelake,tookofftheirclothesandjumpedintothewater.4.她沖上前，跪下，把兒子抱在懷里。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shedashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarms.5.雙胞胎起得很早，踮著腳尖走到廚房，從袋子里舀了一些面粉________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thetwinsgotupearly,tiptoedtothekitchenandscoopedsomeflouroutofthebag.6.他們的父親悄悄走進廚房，拍著雙胞胎的肩膀，用溫柔的聲音安慰他們。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theirfatherslidintothekitchen,pattingthetwins’shouldersandcomfortingtheminasoftvoice.7.他們端著早餐，走上樓，叫醒了他們的母親。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theycarriedthebreakfast,advancedupstairsandwokeuptheirmother.他穿上外套，沖了出去，砰地關上了門。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Heputonhiscoat,stormedoutandslammedthedoorshut.9.洛娜走到窗前，打開窗戶，抬頭看著外面的夜空。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lornacametothewindow,openeditandlookedoutupatthenightsky.10.然后瑪麗站了起來，穿過人群向我走來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThenMarystoodupandmadeherwaythroughthecrowdtowardme.知識點2二利用非謂語形成動作鏈Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.他們站在空蕩的路邊，仰望天空，從內(nèi)心感受到珍貴的寧靜。Throwingtheovercoatacrossherarm,shecrossedthehallquietly.她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿過大廳。Shelaughed,hereyesshining/sparkling/glistering/glowing/twinklingwithexcitement.她笑了，眼里閃爍著興奮的光芒。Tearsblurringhereyes,shetookabiteofthebread,enjoyingthepreciousmoment.淚水模糊了她的眼睛，她咬了一口面包，享受著這珍貴的時刻。Hedoveintothewater,kickinghislegsandstretchinghisarmsasfarashecould.他跳進水里，踢著腿，盡可能地伸直胳膊。Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertogoout.看到包里的外套，他看起來很驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出去。Gaspingwithpain,Davidforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow,shakysteps,begantorun.疼得直吸氣,大衛(wèi)還是強迫自己站起來,然后(邁著)緩慢、搖搖晃晃的步子開始跑起來.【即時練】1.看著勞拉轉(zhuǎn)身并走遠，薩拉忍不住大哭。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WatchingLauraturningherbackandwalkingaway,Sarahburstintotears..2.他們站在空蕩的路邊，仰望天空，從內(nèi)心感受到珍貴的寧靜。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.3.她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿過大廳。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Throwingtheovercoatacrossherarm,shecrossedthehallquietly.4.他因為羞愧而感到臉頰發(fā)燒。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.5.她呆住了，嘴巴張得大大的。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shefroze,hermouthhangingopen.6.他向窗外望去，咬著嘴唇，好像在思考。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Helookedoutofthewindow,bitinghislips,asifthinking.7.手里拿著項鏈，珍妮抬起嘴唇，淚水模糊了她的視線。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Holdingthenecklaceinherhand,Jennyliftedherlip,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.媽媽聽了笑了，輕輕地拍了拍她的背。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hearingthis,hermothersmiled,pattingherbackgently.走到門口，珍妮深吸了一口氣。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Walkingtothedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.詹姆斯朝著著水街跑去，驚恐得發(fā)抖。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Jamesran/rusheddownWaterStreet,tremblingwithgreatpanic.知識點3三利用不同動詞“說”形成動作鏈基礎“say/talk”announce宣布；argue爭論；chat閑聊；complain抱怨；debate辯論；discuss討論；murmur低語；whisper低語，耳語；persuade說服；explain解釋；add補充說；repeat重復說；reply/respond回答；comment評論，發(fā)表意見；declare宣布1.“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart,”Irepliedwithembarrassment.“我...我..認為我不適合這個角色，”我尷尬地回答。2.“Ididn'tgetanidealscoreinthemathexam,”saidTom,disappointed.“我在數(shù)學考試中沒有得到理想的分數(shù),”湯姆失望地說。3.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Iansweredfirmly.“我再也不會那樣做了，”我堅定地回答。“Itworkslikethis,”sheexplained.“它是這樣工作的。”她解釋道。WechattedabouteverythingandthenBenturnedtome.我們聊了所有的事情，然后本轉(zhuǎn)向了我。“IneverthoughtI’dseethisplace,”hesaidatlast,inawhisper.“我從沒想過，我還能見到這樣的地方。”他最后近乎耳語般地說。“No,Iamnot,”Maryanswered,herownwhispersoundinghalffrightened.“不，我不是。”瑪麗低聲回答說，她自己的聲音聽起來也有點害怕。【即時練】薩姆大發(fā)雷霆，沖出房間，尖叫著說：“我再也不會回來了！”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Boilingwithrage,Samstormedoutoftheroom,screaming,“I’mnevercomingback!”“哦，不！”我們會死在這里的！”八戒說。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“Oh,No!Wewilldiehere!”saidBajie.3.“悟空！你怎么能這么殘忍呢！”唐的和尚說。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“Wukong!Howcanyoubesocruel!”saidTangMonk.4.豬說：“為什么總是我！”我只是坐下來！”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thepigsaid,“Whyisitalwaysme!Ijustsatdown!”5.“我太累了，找不下食物，”八戒說，“我先小睡一會兒。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“I’mtootiredtolookforfood,”Bajiesaid,“I’lltakeanapfirst.6.“我們等你的時候，你怎么敢睡覺？”吳凈說：“現(xiàn)在讓我們回到師父那里去吧。”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“Howdareyousleepwhilewewaitforyou?”saidWujing,“Nowlet’sgobacktoMaster.”7.她沖向門口，打開門，說：“來了，愛德蒙，我就在這兒。”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Rushingtowardsthedoor,sheopenedit,saying,“Here,Edmond,hereIam”.第06講讀后續(xù)寫動作描寫動作鏈讀后續(xù)寫·負面情緒必背一利用and形成動作鏈 1二利用非謂語形成動作鏈 2HYPERLINK三利用精彩紛呈不同動詞“說”形成動作鏈 4知識點1一利用and形成動作鏈1.Shefoldedherarmsandstaredathim.她抱起雙臂，盯著他看。Itappedthemanontheshoulderandaskedhimtomove.我拍了拍那名男子的肩膀，讓他挪動一下。Sheburiedherfaceinherhandkerchiefand

sniffed

loudly.她把臉埋在手帕里，大聲地擤著鼻子。4.Irushedhome,searchedthroughmycollectionofhats,andgrabbedthecottonone.我沖回家，翻遍了我收集的帽子，抓起了那頂棉質(zhì)的。5.Janeturnedtomewithtearsinhereyes,andbeggedmetohelpher.簡眼里含著淚水轉(zhuǎn)向我，懇求我?guī)蛶退?.Lauraburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.勞拉突然哭了起來，然后從房子里跑了出去。7.Jane站起來用盡全力揮動著她的襯衫并大聲喊叫。Janestoodup,screamedatthetopofherlungsandwavedheryellowblousewitheverybitofherstrength.【即時練】1.歌手瞥了一眼觀眾，深吸了一口氣，開始唱歌。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.他停下出租車，提著箱子跳上車，對司機說:“請到警察局去。”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.男孩們興奮地沖到湖邊，脫下衣服跳進水里。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.她沖上前，跪下，把兒子抱在懷里。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.雙胞胎起得很早，踮著腳尖走到廚房，從袋子里舀了一些面粉________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.他們的父親悄悄走進廚房，拍著雙胞胎的肩膀，用溫柔的聲音安慰他們。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.他們端著早餐，走上樓，叫醒了他們的母親。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________他穿上外套，沖了出去，砰地關上了門。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.洛娜走到窗前，打開窗戶，抬頭看著外面的夜空。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.然后瑪麗站了起來，穿過人群向我走來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點2二利用非謂語形成動作鏈Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.他們站在空蕩的路邊，仰望天空，從內(nèi)心感受到珍貴的寧靜。Throwingtheovercoatacrossherarm,shecrossedthehallquietly.她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿過大廳。Shelaughed,hereyesshining/sparkling/glistering/glowing/twinklingwithexcitement.她笑了，眼里閃爍著興奮的光芒。Tearsblurringhereyes,shetookabiteofthebread,enjoyingthepreciousmoment.淚水模糊了她的眼睛，她咬了一口面包，享受著這珍貴的時刻。Hedoveintothewater,kickinghislegsandstretchinghisarmsasfarashecould.他跳進水里，踢著腿，盡可能地伸直胳膊。Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertogoout.看到包里的外套，他看起來很驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出去。Gaspingwithpain,Davidforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow,shakysteps,begantorun.疼得直吸氣,大衛(wèi)還是強迫自己站起來,然后(邁著)緩慢、搖搖晃晃的步子開始跑起來.【即時練】1.看著勞拉轉(zhuǎn)身并走遠，薩拉忍不住大哭。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.2.他們站在空蕩的路邊，仰望天空，從內(nèi)心感受到珍貴的寧靜。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿過大廳。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.他因為羞愧而感到臉頰發(fā)燒。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.她呆住了，嘴巴張得大大的。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.他向窗外望去，咬著嘴唇，好像在思考。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.手里拿著項鏈，珍妮抬起嘴唇，淚水模糊了她的視線。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________媽媽聽了笑了，輕輕地拍了拍她的背。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________走到門口，珍妮深吸了一口氣。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________詹姆斯朝著著水街跑去，驚恐得發(fā)抖。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點3三利用不同動詞“說”形成動作鏈基礎“say/talk”announce宣布；argue爭論；chat閑聊；complain抱怨；debate辯論；discuss討論；murmur低語；whisper低語，耳語；persuade說服；explain解釋；add補充說；repeat重復說；reply/respond回答；comment評論，發(fā)表意見；declare宣布1.“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart,”Irepliedwithembarrassment.“我...我..認為我不適合這個角色，”我尷尬地回答。2.“Ididn'tgetanidealscoreinthemathexam,”saidTom,disappointed.“我在數(shù)學考試中沒有得到理想的分數(shù),”湯姆失望地說。3.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Iansweredfirmly.“我再也不會那樣做了，”我堅定地回答。“Itworkslikethis,”sheexplained.“它是這樣工作的。”她解釋道。Wechatteda