讀后續寫Asadwasa13yearoldboywhowasveryhonestandhardworking.Recently,hehadenteredanewschool,sohehadnofriendsyet.OnMondaymorning,hewasnearlylateforschool.Thenightbefore,hisfamilyattendedhiscousin’sweddingandreachedhomelate,whichwaswhyhecouldn’tgetupontimeasusual.Atschool,Asadcouldnotpayattentiontoanythingandwantedthebelltoringsothathecouldbuysomethingtoeat.Afterafewhours,whenthebellrang,Asadquicklyopenedhisschoolbagtofindhismoney,butjustthenherememberedthathehadleftforschoolinahurryinthemorningandforgottentotakemoney.Helookedunderhisbooks,hopingtofindsomemoneybuttherewasnothing.Notknowingwhattodo,hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabenchinfrontofthecanteen.Hesawafewofhisclassmatesthere,amongthemwasFahad.Hewasoneoftherichestkidsinhisclass,buthewasaveryarrogant(傲慢的)boywhothoughteveryoneelsewasaloser.ButasAsadwasnew,hedidn’tknowmuchaboutFahad.WhenhewenttowardsFahadandaskedifhecouldborrowsomemoneyforhislunch,Fahadlaughedalotandsaid,“Iknewyouwerealoser,maybeabeggar?”Fahadlaughedoutsoloudthatotherkidsalsoheardandmadefunofthesituation.Hedidn’tanswerFahad,andslowlywalkedbacktowardsanemptybench.Whenhereachedthebench,henoticedsomethinglyingnearit.Itwasawallet.HepickeditupandrecognizeditasFahad’s,asherememberedFahadshowingittohisfriendsandtellingthathisuncleboughtitforhimfromtheUK.Therewasquitealotofmoneyinsideforakid.Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenFahadsaid,“Whyareyougivingback?”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________阿薩德與法哈德錢包的故事續寫續寫分析（兩段）?第一段：此段著重刻畫Asad的內心掙扎與最終抉擇。開篇表明Asad最初想通過私藏錢包懲罰Fahad的想法，“Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.”但緊接著，“However,hishonestnaturesoongotthebetterofhim.”轉折體現出他內心善良與正義戰勝了報復心理。“Hethoughttohimself,‘AlthoughFahadwasmeantome,Ishoulddotherightthing.’”通過內心獨白，清晰展現他的思想斗爭過程。隨后的動作描寫，“So,hetookadeepbreathandwalkedtowardsFahad...”“tookadeepbreath”表現出他克服心理障礙的艱難，而走向Fahad則是他踐行正確行為的開始。“WhenFahadsawAsadapproachingwithhiswallet,hiseyeswidenedinsurprise.”從Fahad的驚訝反應側面烘托出Asad行為的出乎意料，為下文兩人的對話與關系轉變做鋪墊。?第二段：以Fahad的疑問開啟，“ThenFahadsaid,‘Whyareyougivingback?’”自然引出Asad的回應，“Becauseit'stherightthingtodo.Iknowwegotoffonthewrongfoot,butIbelieveinhonesty.”Asad的回答簡潔有力，直接點明自己堅守誠實的信念，這不僅是對Fahad的回應，更是故事主題的一次直接呈現。“FahadwastakenabackbyAsad'swords.Hefeltashamedofhisearlierbehavior.”描述Fahad被Asad話語觸動后的內心變化，為他的道歉做心理鋪墊。“Hestammeredanapology,‘I'msorryforbeingsomean.You'reactuallyreallynice.’”Fahad的道歉以及后續兩人關系的轉變，“Fromthatdayon,Fahadchangedhisways.HebecamefriendswithAsad,andtheyoftenhungouttogether.”展現出Asad的誠實與善良所產生的積極影響，將故事從沖突引向和解與友誼，升華了故事主旨，強調了誠實和善良在人際交往中的重要作用。?故事線?Asad是一個誠實努力的13歲男孩，剛進入新學校還沒有朋友。周一早上因前一晚參加婚禮回家晚，差點上學遲到，到學校后發現忘帶錢買午餐。?Asad向班里家境富裕但傲慢的Fahad借錢，遭到Fahad嘲笑，同學們也跟著取笑他，他只能無奈離開。?Asad在長椅旁撿到Fahad的錢包，里面有不少錢，他一開始想私藏錢包懲罰Fahad，但最終憑借誠實本性決定歸還。?Fahad看到Asad歸還錢包很驚訝，詢問原因，Asad表明自己堅守誠實，Fahad被觸動，為自己之前的惡劣行為道歉，從此兩人成為朋友，Fahad也改變了傲慢的性格。?短語?keepitasecret保守秘密?getthebetterof戰勝、克服?thinktooneself心里想?takeadeepbreath深呼吸?walktowards走向?betakenaback感到驚訝?getoffonthewrongfoot一開始就關系不好?believein相信、堅守?feelashamedof為……感到羞愧?stammeranapology結結巴巴地道歉?changeone'sways改變某人的行為方式?hangouttogether一起出去玩?主旨升華句?ThisheartwarmingnarrativeofAsadandFahadnotonlyshowcasesthepowerofhonestyandkindnessintransformingrelationshipsbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatinthefaceofmeanness,choosingthemoralhighgroundcanleadtounexpectedfriendshipsandpersonalgrowthforallinvolved.?這個關于Asad和Fahad的溫馨故事，不僅展示了誠實和善良在改變人際關系方面的力量，還深刻地提醒我們，在面對惡意時，堅守道德高地能為所有相關人員帶來意想不到的友誼和個人成長。?ThroughAsad'sjourneyfrombeingthevictimofmockerytobeingthecatalystforFahad'schange,wearevividlyshownthetransformativenatureofintegrityandpassion.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthateveninthemostchallengingsocialsituations,ourcorevaluescanbethebridgethatconnectsheartsandmendsdivides.?通過Asad從被嘲笑的受害者到成為Fahad改變的催化劑的歷程，我們生動地看到了正直和同情心的變革力量。他們的故事傳達了一個寶貴的教訓，即即使在最具挑戰性的社交情境中，我們的核心價值觀也能成為連接心靈、彌合分歧的橋梁。?ThestoryofAsadandFahadisnotmerelyataleofalostwalletandaborrowedlunch;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytoriseabovepettiness,torecognizetheerrorofone'sways,andtobuildmeaningfulconnectionsbasedonmutualrespectandunderstanding.?Asad和Fahad的故事不僅僅是一個關于丟失錢包和借午餐的故事，它是對人類精神超越狹隘、認識自身錯誤以及在相互尊重和理解基礎上建立有意義聯系的能力的深刻探索。?Inaworldwhereconflictsandmisunderstandingsarealltoomon,Asad'sdecisiontoreturnthewalletdespitethetemptationtoretaliatestandsasabeaconofhope,illuminatingthepathtowardsmoreharmoniousandempatheticsocialinteractions.Itremindsusthattruestrengthliesinourabilitytochoosekindnessoverrevenge.?在一個沖突和誤解屢見不鮮的世界里，Asad盡管有報復的誘惑但仍決定歸還錢包的舉動如同一盞希望之燈，照亮了通往更和諧、更具同理心的社會互動的道路。它提醒我們，真正的力量在于我們選擇善良而非報復的能力。?FromtheinitialhumiliationAsadenduredtothefinalfriendshipthatblossomedbetweenhimandFahad,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofgrowth,thepowerofpositiveinfluence,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateveryactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,hasthepotentialtocreatearippleeffectthatcantransformlivesandmunities.?從Asad最初所忍受的羞辱到他與Fahad之間最終綻放的友誼，這個故事體現了成長的本質、積極影響的力量，以及堅定的信念，即每一個善良的行為，無論多么微小，都有可能產生連鎖反應，改變生活和社區。?寫作示范?示范一?Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.ThethoughtofFahad'smockingwordsstillstung.Butasheheldthewallet,hisconsciencetuggedathim.“Ican'tstooptohislevel,”hemurmured.Gatheringhiscourage,hewalkedovertoFahad,whowaschattingidlywithhisclique.Fahad'seyesbulgedwhenhesawAsadapproachingwithhiswallet.?ThenFahadsaid,“Whyareyougivingback?”Asadsquaredhisshouldersandreplied,“BecauseIbelieveindoingwhat'sright.Iknowyoumightnotthinkmuchofme,butIwon'tletthatchangewhoIam.”Fahadwasrenderedspeechlessforamoment.Then,hisfacereddenedwithshame.“I'mreallysorry,”hestammered.“Iwaswayoutofline.”Fromthatdayon,Fahadmadeaconsciousefforttobemorehumble.HeandAsadbecameinseparable,andFahadoftenrecountedthisstorytoothersasareminderofthepowerofhonesty.?示范二?Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.Thewalletseemedlikeasweetopportunityforpayback.However,hishonestupbringingquicklyquelledsuchthoughts.“Revengewon'tsolveanything,”hetoldhimself.Withadeterminedlook,hemarchedtowardsFahad.FahadwasinthemiddleofbraggingwhenhecaughtsightofAsadwithhiswallet.Hisjawdroppedindisbelief.?ThenFahadsaid,“Whyareyougivingback?”Asadlookedhimstraightintheeyeandsaid,“Honestyismoreimportantthananygrudge.Ihopeyoucanseethat.”FahadwasdeeplymovedbyAsad'swords.Heapologizedprofusely,“Iwassowrong.You'reactuallyreallycool.”Fromthenon,Fahad'sarrogancemeltedaway.HeandAsadbecamegoodfriends,andtheirfriendshipwasaninspirationtothewholeclass,showingthatkindnessandintegritycouldovereeventhetoughestofsocialbarriers.?【答案】范文Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.Atleasthecouldaffordthelunchnow.However,anothervoicepoppedup,urginghimtogiveitbacktoFahad,whichmadehimfeeltorn.“Ishouldneverkeepthewalletatthecostofmyhonesty,a