第1頁/共1頁2025北京高三一模英語匯編寫作一、寫作1．（2025北京東城高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的外國好友Jim打算參加“我眼中的孔子（ConfuciusinMyEyes）”全球原創(chuàng)作品征集活動，來信詢問你的建議。請用英語給他回復一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．提出建議；2．說明理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．（2025北京西城高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國筆友Jim在你們學校的網(wǎng)站看到你們學校組織了“我的年度詞（MyWordoftheYear）”的學生活動，發(fā)來郵件詢問你的年度詞。請你用英文給他回復，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的年度詞是什么；2.你選該詞的理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．（2025北京房山高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你與本校外國交換生Jim準備組隊參加學校舉辦的主題為“TechnologyMeetsChineseTraditionalCulture”的創(chuàng)意大賽。請你用英文給Jim發(fā)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.分享你的創(chuàng)意設(shè)計；2.詢問Jim的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．（2025北京石景山高三一模）假如你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國好友Jim要參加學校舉辦的“世界智慧城市”(GlobalSmartCity)展示活動。他打算介紹北京，聚焦智慧北京的亮點，向你尋求相關(guān)建議、請你用英文回復，內(nèi)容包括：1.建議內(nèi)容；2.說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua5．（2025北京順義高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。中國電影《哪吒之魔童鬧海》（簡稱《哪吒2》）在全球放映，你的英國筆友Jim看過之后非常喜歡，發(fā)來郵件請你推薦另外一部中國電影。請你用英文給他回復，內(nèi)容包括：1.電影的內(nèi)容；2.推薦的理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．（2025北京門頭溝高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的外國好友Jim因使用AI工具完成寫作作業(yè)而受到批評。他寫信詢問你對這件事的看法，請你用英文給他回復，內(nèi)容包括：1你的看法；2.你的建議和理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua7．（2025北京豐臺高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的外國好友Jim打算在學校舉辦的世界非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)展示周（WorldIntangibleCulturalHeritageExhibitionWeek）中介紹中國非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)，發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你推薦的非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)；2.簡要說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．（2025北京朝陽高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你校正在舉辦以“美麗校園”為主題的原創(chuàng)作品征集活動，交換生Jim打算參加，發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復，內(nèi)容包括：1.建議創(chuàng)作內(nèi)容；2.就以上建議簡要說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua9．（2025北京平谷高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的朋友Jim打算暑假到中國旅游，他對中國的科技發(fā)展很感興趣，發(fā)來郵件請你推薦一座能深度體驗中國最新科技發(fā)展的城市。請給他回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦城市；2.推薦理由；3.表達祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．（2025北京海淀高三一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。世界讀書日即將到來，你的外國好友Jim正在開展主題為“信息時代中學生如何閱讀”的項目式學習，他發(fā)來郵件對你進行訪談。請你用英文給他回復，內(nèi)容包括：1.信息時代對閱讀的影響；2.你的閱讀方式和理由。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua11．（2025北京延慶高三一模）假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Jim打算本周末參加北京市中小學“游學中軸”活動，向你了解相關(guān)情況并征求你的建議。請你給她回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦一條中軸線游學線路；2.說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；提示詞：北京中軸游學theBeijingCentralAxisstudytour。DearJim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, LiHua

參考答案1．DearJim,Gladtoreceiveyouremail.Whatanexcitingactivity!Hereismyidea.I'mthinkingyoucanmakeashortanimationfilm.ThefilmwillfocusonyourunderstandingofConfucius'philosophy.Youcanshowhowhisideas,likekindness,influenceusteenagerstoshare,helpeachother,andbuildwarmfriendships,makingschoollifemoreenjoyable.Evenbetter,youcanstarta“kindnesschallenge”toencouragefriendstodosomethingniceeverydayandrecordtheirgooddeeds.ThefreshperspectivewillhelppeoplerealizetheeverlastingvalueofConfucius'ideas.Iamsureitwillmakeagreatentry.Goodluck!Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。外國好友Jim打算參加“我眼中的孔子（ConfuciusinMyEyes）”全球原創(chuàng)作品征集活動，來信詢問建議。請考生用英語給他回復一封電子郵件。【詳解】1.詞匯積累令人興奮的：exciting→thrilling影響：influence→affect幫助：help→assist鼓勵：encourage→motivate2.句式拓展合并句子原句：I'mthinkingyoucanmakeashortanimationfilm.ThefilmwillfocusonyourunderstandingofConfucius'philosophy.拓展句：I'mthinkingyoucanmakeashortanimationfilm,whichwillfocusonyourunderstandingofConfucius'philosophy..【點睛】[高分句型1]Youcanshowhowhisideas,likekindness,influenceusteenagerstoshare,helpeachother,andbuildwarmfriendships,makingschoollifemoreenjoyable.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]Iamsureitwillmakeagreatentry.(運用了省略that引導的賓語從句)2．DearJim,

I’mthrilledtohearfromyouandsharemy“WordoftheYear”—“Resilience”.

Thisyearhasbeenfilledwithchallenges,fromheavyacademicpressuretopersonalsetbacks.However,I’velearnedthatresiliencehelpsmebouncebackfromdifficulties.Whenfacingtoughexams,Ididn’tgiveupbutstudiedharder.Whendealingwithinterpersonalconflicts,Istayedcalmandfoundsolutions.

Resilienceislikeastrongropethatsupportsmethroughtoughtimes.ItmakesmebelievethatIcanovercomeanythingwithperseverance.

What’syourwordoftheyear?

Yours,

LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國筆友Jim寫封郵件，說明你的年度詞是什么以及你選該詞的理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累興奮的：thrilled→excited壓力：pressure→stress然而：however→nevertheless處理：dealwith→copewith2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Thisyearhasbeenfilledwithchallenges,fromheavyacademicpressuretopersonalsetbacks.拓展句：Thisyearhasbeenfilledwithchallenges,whichvariedfromheavyacademicpressuretopersonalsetbacks.【點睛】[高分句型1]Resilienceislikeastrongropethatsupportsmethroughtoughtimes.(運用了that引導的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]ItmakesmebelievethatIcanovercomeanythingwithperseverance.(運用了that引導的賓語從句)3．DearJim,I’mthrilledtoteamupwithyouforthe“TechnologyMeetsChineseTraditionalCulture”creativitycontest.MyideaistodesignaninteractiveappthatcombinesARtechnologywithtraditionalChinesepaper-cuttingart.Userscanscanrealpaper-cuttingswiththeirphones,andtheappwillbringthemtolifethrough3Danimations,tellingstoriesrelatedtothepatterns.IbelievethiscannotonlyshowcasethebeautyofChinesepaper-cuttingbutalsomakeitmoreengagingformodernaudiences.However,I’mnotsureaboutthetechnicalfeasibilityanduserexperience.Whatdoyouthinkofthisidea?Doyouhaveanysuggestionstoimproveit?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英文給Jim發(fā)一封郵件，分享你的創(chuàng)意設(shè)計以及詢問Jim的建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累激動的：thrilled→excited合作：teamupwith→cooperatewith展示：showcase→display建議：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Userscanscanrealpaper-cuttingswiththeirphones,andtheappwillbringthemtolifethrough3Danimations,tellingstoriesrelatedtothepatterns.拓展句：Userscanscanrealpaper-cuttingswiththeirphones,andtheappwillbringthemtolifethrough3Danimations,whichtellstoriesrelatedtothepatterns.【點睛】【高分句型1】MyideaistodesignaninteractiveappthatcombinesARtechnologywithtraditionalChinesepaper-cuttingart.(運用了that引導定語從句)【高分句型2】IbelievethiscannotonlyshowcasethebeautyofChinesepaper-cuttingbutalsomakeitmoreengagingformodernaudiences.(運用了省略that的賓語從句)4．DearJim,LearningthatyouaregoingtointroduceBeijingatthe“GlobalSmartCity”Exhibition,I’mgladtosharewhatIknowwithyou.First,Beijingfocusesontechnologicalinnovation,leadingtotheboomingdevelopmentofsmarttourism,smarthealthcare,smartmanufacturing,etc.Peoplecaneasilyenjoyallkindsofservicesprovidedbyartificialintelligence.Forexample,peoplecanvisittheForbiddenCityontheirownwiththeWechatguideandlearnaboutitshistory,whichisreallyfantastic.Besides,moreandmoresubwaysarebuilttomakeourtravelconvenient.Hopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyou.Ifyouneedmoreinformation,dofeelfreetoaskme.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國好友Jim回信，關(guān)于對方要參加的“世界智慧城市”(GlobalSmartCity)展示活動給出建議，并說明理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累開心的：glad→pleased集中精力：focuson→concentrateon提供：provide→offer此外：besides→inaddition2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：First,Beijingfocusesontechnologicalinnovation,leadingtotheboomingdevelopmentofsmarttourism,smarthealthcare,smartmanufacturing,etc.拓展句：First,Beijingfocusesontechnologicalinnovation,whichleadstotheboomingdevelopmentofsmarttourism,smarthealthcare,smartmanufacturing,etc.【點睛】【高分句型1】Forexample,peoplecanvisittheForbiddenCityontheirownwiththeWechatguideandlearnaboutitshistory,whichisreallyfantastic.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Ifyouneedmoreinformation,dofeelfreetoaskme.（運用了if引導的條件狀語從句）5．范文1：DearJim,GladtohearyouenjoyedNezha2.Now,I’dhighlyrecommendUproarinHeaven.Thisfilm,producedinthe1960s,isbasedontheearlychaptersofthefamousChineseclassicJourneytotheWest.IttellsthestoryofSunWukong,theMonkeyKing,andhisresistanceagainsttheEmperorinHeaven.Irecommenditbecauseit’samasterpieceofChineseanimation,showcasingtraditionalartformslikePekingOperainitscharacterdesignandmovement.Plus,itoffersagreatintroductiontooneofChina’smostfamousfictitiousfiguresandbelovedstories!Ibelieveit’savisuallywonderfulandculturallysignificantfilmthat’ssuretodelight.（107）Yours,LiHua范文2：DearJim,I'msogladtohearyouenjoyedNezha2andI'dliketorecommendyouanotherfantasticfilmdeeplyrootedinChinesetraditionalculture:CrouchingTiger,HiddenDragon.Thisfilm,directedbyAngLee,isamartialartstalesetintheQingDynasty.Ittellsastoryoflove,duty,andsacrifice.Thefilmcentersonalegendarysword,theGreenDestiny,andthelivesittouches.IhighlyrecommenditbecauseitbeautifullyshowcasestraditionalChinesevalueslikehonor,faith,andrespectforelders.Thefilm'swonderfulvisuals,combinedwithitsattractivestorymakeitatrulyunforgettablecinematicexperience.Italsoprovidesinsightintotheworldofmartialartsspiritandexploresthecomplexitiesofhumanrelationships.Hopeyoucanenjoyit.（125）Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國筆友Jim回信，推薦另外一部中國電影。【詳解】1.詞匯積累高興的：glad→delighted喜歡：enjoy→befondof著名的：famous→well-known展示：showcase→display2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Thisfilm,directedbyAngLee,isamartialartstalesetintheQingDynasty.拓展句：Thisfilm,whichwasdirectedbyAngLee,isamartialartstalesetintheQingDynasty.【點睛】[高分句型1]Irecommenditbecauseit’samasterpieceofChineseanimation,showcasingtraditionalartformslikePekingOperainitscharacterdesignandmovement.（運用了because引導原因狀語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）[高分句型2]Ibelieveit’savisuallywonderfulandculturallysignificantfilmthat’ssuretodelight.（運用了省略了that的賓語從句和that引導的定語從句）6．DearJim,I’mtrulysorrytohearaboutyourexperience.It’sunderstandabletofeelupsetwhenyoureffortsarequestioned,butlet’strytoseethisfromanotherperspective.First,sincerelyapologizetoyourteacherandclarifyyourintentions,whichshowsmaturityandhelpsrebuildtrust.Explainthatyouaimedtosavetimebutnowrealizetheimportanceofindependentpractice.Second,useAIasa“helper,”nota“doer.”Forexample,letitcheckgrammar,butalwayswritethecontentinyourownwords.Bybalancingefficiencywitheffort,you’llgrowacademicallywhilestayinghonest.Thisisalearningexperience,notafailure.Stayconfidentandkeeppolishingyourskills!Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英文給Jim回復，他因為使用AI工具完成寫作作業(yè)而受到批評。對此提出你的看法以及建議和理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累沮喪的：upset→frustrated真誠地：sincerely→heartfeltly打算：aimto→intendto例如：forexample→forinstance2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Bybalancingefficiencywitheffort,you’llgrowacademicallywhilestayinghonest.拓展句：Ifyoucanbalanceefficiencywitheffort,you’llgrowacademicallywhilestayinghonest.【點睛】【高分句型1】It’sunderstandabletofeelupsetwhenyoureffortsarequestioned,butlet’strytoseethisfromanotherperspective.（運用了when引導時間狀語從句）【高分句型2】First,sincerelyapologizetoyourteacherandclarifyyourintentions,whichshowsmaturityandhelpsrebuildtrust.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）7．DearJim,I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’reintroducingChineseintangibleculturalheritageattheWorldIntangibleCulturalHeritageExhibitionWeek.I’dhighlyrecommendChinesepaper-cutting.Paper-cutting,withahistoryspanningover1,500years,isatraditionalfolkartinChina.Itinvolvescuttingintricatedesignsfrompaperusingscissorsorknives.NotonlydoesitshowcasetheremarkablecraftsmanshipofChineseartisans,butitalsocarriesprofoundculturalmeanings,oftensymbolizinggoodluck,happiness,andprosperity.It’sawonderfulwaytoexperiencethecharmofChineseculturefirsthand.Ibelieveyourpresentationwillbeagreatsuccess.Goodluck!Yours,LiHua【導語】作文本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。外國好友Jim打算在學校舉辦的世界非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)展示周中介紹中國非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)，要求考生按照要求用英文給他提出建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累興奮的：thrilled→excited推薦：recommend→nominate展現(xiàn)：showcase→show非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’reintroducingChineseintangibleculturalheritageattheWorldIntangibleCulturalHeritageExhibitionWeek.拓展句：Hearingthatyou’reintroducingChineseintangibleculturalheritageattheWorldIntangibleCulturalHeritageExhibitionWeek,I’mthrilled.【點睛】【高分句型1】I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’reintroducingChineseintangibleculturalheritageattheWorldIntangibleCulturalHeritageExhibitionWeek.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型2】NotonlydoesitshowcasetheremarkablecraftsmanshipofChineseartisans,butitalsocarriesprofoundculturalmeanings,oftensymbolizinggoodluck,happiness,andprosperity.（運用了notonly位于句首的部分倒裝句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）8．DearJim,Excitedaboutyourplantoparticipatein“TheBeautyofCampus”activity!I’meagertosharemysuggestionsaboutwhattocreate.Ibelieveitwouldbeawonderfulideatoshootavideohighlightingtheheartfeltbondsbetweenstudentsandteachers.Youcancapturefootageofbustlingofficeswhereteachersdiligentlyhelpstudentswiththeiracademicchallenges.Toaddamoreheartwarmingtouch,youcouldinterviewstudentsandincorporatetheirappreciationforteachers’guidance,support,andthepositiveimpactthey’vehadontheirlivesintothevideo.Theirhonestremarkswouldnotonlybeautifullyshowthedynamiccampuslife,butalsoportraythebeautyofcharacter.Whatdoyouthinkofmyideas?Feelfreetoaskmeanyquestionsduringyourshooting.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于建議信。要求考試給交換生Jim回封郵件，就他所詢問的有關(guān)學校正在舉辦的以“美麗校園”為主題的原創(chuàng)作品征集活動的創(chuàng)作內(nèi)容提出建議，并說明理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累：參加：participatein→takepartin渴望的：eager→longing突出、強調(diào)：highlight→emphasize聯(lián)系：bond→connection影響：impact→influence充滿活力的：dynamic→energetic2.句式拓展：同義句轉(zhuǎn)換：原句：Ibelieveitwouldbeawonderfulideatoshootavideohighlightingtheheartfeltbondsbetweenstudentsandteachers.拓展句：Ibelieveitwouldbeawonderfulideatoshootavideothathighlightstheheartfeltbondsbetweenstudentsandteachers.【點睛】【高分句型1】Youcancapturefootageofbustlingofficeswhereteachersdiligentlyhelpstudentswiththeiracademicchallenges.（運用了以關(guān)系副詞where引導的限制性定語從句。）【高分句型2】Toaddamoreheartwarmingtouch,youcouldinterviewstudentsandincorporatetheirappreciationforteachers’guidance,support,andthepositiveimpactthey’vehadontheirlivesintothevideo.（運用了動詞不定式作目的狀語和省略了關(guān)系代詞的限制性定語從句。）9．DearJim,I’mthrilledtohearyou’replanningatriptoChinathissummer!Basedonyourinterestincutting-edgetechnology,IhighlyrecommendShenzhenasyourtopdestination.ShenzhenisChina’s“SiliconValley”andaglobalcenterforinnovation.First,it’shometotechgiantslikeHuawei,Tencent,andDJI,whereyoucanvisitexhibitionhallstowitnessfuturisticinventions,fromAIrobotsto5Gapplications.Second,don’tmisstheShenzhenScienceMuseum,whereinteractiveexhibitsletyouexperienceVRspaceexplorationorprogramaminirobot!Besides,Shenzhenperfectlycomb