第17講怎樣寫開放類作文第1頁一、魔法導航1.仔細觀察,認真審題。審題對開放類作文寫作相當主要,經過審題確定文

章主題、時態和體裁。2.直奔主題,重點突出。盡管開放類作文考生發揮空間較大,但一定要緊緊

圍繞主題展開寫作,在文章結構上必須做到重點突出。3.內容充實,緊緊圍繞主題。全文要緊緊圍繞所給信息主題,進行合理闡述,并表示

自己感想。在這一部分,只要用簡單語言講出道理即可,沒必要過深地挖

掘信息,同時要確保文章立意是主動向上。4.過渡自然,結構緊湊。要讓一篇文章讀起來通順、流暢,就應該注意段落之

間過渡銜接。所以,有必要在上下文之間添加一個過渡詞或過渡句。——收放自如,文采飛揚5.全方面審核,仔細檢驗。寫完文章后,要注意對照寫作要求仔細審核,看所寫內

容是否符合題意,內容是否充實,句型是否正確,有沒有拼寫錯誤等。第2頁二、慣用句式1.分析原因(1)Thereare...reasonsfor...(2)Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.(3)Thereasonforthisisthat...2.表示主要、必要、困難、方便、(不)可能(1)Itisimportant/necessary/difficult/convenient/possibleforsb.todo...(2)Itplaysanimportantrole/partin...(3)beofimportance/significanceto...(4)attachimportanceto...3.說影響(1)haveanimpact/effecton...(2)dogreatharmto/beharmfulto...第3頁4.列辦法(1)...candomanythingsto...(2)Agoodmany/Avarietyofthingscanbedoneto...(3)Strong/Effectivemeasuresshouldbetakento...5.展望與呼吁(1)appealtosb.todo/urgesb.todo/callonsb.todo...(2)try/doone'sbesttodo...(3)dowhat/allthatsb.cantodo...(4)sparenoefforttodo/makethegreatestefforttodo...(5)doeverythinginone'spowertodo...6.表示好處(1)Ithasthefollowingadvantages.(2)Itdoesusalotofgood.第4頁三、典題示例

真題在線(湖北)請依據以下提醒,并結合詳細事例,用英語寫一篇短文。Smallthingsmakeabigdifference.Thesmallthingswedocanmakeusarespon-

siblememberofthesociety.注意:①無須寫標題;②除詩歌外,文體不限;③內容必須結合你生活中詳細事例;第5頁④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;⑤詞數不少于120,如引用提醒語則不計入總詞數。

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審題謀篇寫作類型開放類作文中心人稱第一人稱主體時態普通現在時普經過去時關鍵點布局第一段:引入話題,如說明自己經歷一件小事對自己影響等。第二段:記敘一件證實自己觀點事例,說明“小事不小”道理。敘事時一定要緊緊圍繞主題,擴展要得當,過渡要自然。第三段:自己認識和感想,升華主題。第7頁考場作文:Fromathingsomedaysago,Iknowthatitisn'

ttoohardtobecomearesponsiblememberofthesociety.Icanstillremember①aincidentwhichhap-penedonarainySundayafternoon.Iwasonmywaytothebookstoreandwas②waitingthegreenlightatacrossingwhenagirlofabouttenwasknockeddownbyapassingcar,whichdroveoffquickly.Amanimmediatelyrushedtothegirltogiveherfirstaid.Ialsojoinedinwithouthesitation.③Comparingwiththees-capeddriver,IamproudofwhatIdid.Asamemberofthesociety,Irealizethatre-sponsibilityplaysaveryimportantroleincreat-ingabettersociety.文章提升:1.修改錯誤:1)incident讀音以元音音素開頭,故應將①a改

為

。2)wait是不及物動詞,故應在②waiting后加介

詞

。3)compare與其邏輯主語I之間是被動關系,故

將③Comparing改為

。2.提升提議:將畫線部分改為強調句型:

閱卷現場第8頁參考范文:DuringthelastsummervacationIexperiencedmanythingsbutitwasonesmallthingthatwasthe

mostunforgettable.OnasunnySaturday,Iwastakingabustovisitmyuncle.Somanypeoplewerethereonthebus

thatsomepersonshadtostand,includinganoldwoman.Onseeingthisscene,Iofferedmyseatto

herwithouthesitationbecauseIthoughtrespectingtheoldisavirtueintraditionalChineseculture.

Whenseeingthesmileonthewoman'sface,Ifeltveryproud.FromthissmallthingIcametounderstandthatsmallthingsmakeadifferencetotheworld.Only

wheneveryoneplacesahighvalueonresponsibilityforthesocietycanwecreateabettersociety

tolivein.第9頁

答案1.修改錯誤:1)an2)for

(3)Compared2.提升提議:it'sresponsibilitythatplaysaveryimportantroleincreatingabetter

society第10頁四、高分秀場(江西高三十校第一次聯考)北大前任校長王恩哥說過:作為新時代學生,我們應該插上兩個翅膀——理

想和毅力,結交兩個朋友——圖書館和運動場。請就以上話題展開想象寫一

篇文章,闡述你對此了解。注意:1.詞數100左右;2.能夠適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯:理想ideal;毅力perseverance

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答案Onepossibleversion:AsWangEnge,formerPresidentofPekingUniversityonceput,“Giveyourself

twowings—idealsandperseverance;maketwofriends—thelibraryandtheplay-

ground.”Whathesaidissurelyofgreatimportanceandbenefittous.Idealsreflectwhat

wevalueandcherishintheworld,whichwillshapeusinthefuture.Without

them,wemaygetlostanddon'tknowwheretostartinlife.Onthecontrary,if

yousticktothemandpersevere,neverquittinghalfway,youwillmakeit.第12頁Andthenweshouldhaveanothertwofriends—thelibraryandtheplayground.