第1頁提議信是就某事向收信人提出寫信人提議和忠言。提議信有可能是寫給個人、組織或機構，信內容要包含寫信原因，提議內容，提出提議理由。提議信要寫得簡明扼要、目標明確、含有合理性和說服力。詳細寫作步驟普通是“三段式”，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陳說提議，詳細為：第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳說事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。第二段：應該首先必定對方優點，然后再寫需要改進地方或針對詳細情況提出詳細提議或忠言。千萬注意不要讓他人認為你是在投訴，而不是提提議。第三段：對提出提議進行總結。要注意有禮貌，使讀者輕易接收。第2頁①句首慣用語：Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.第3頁②表示“提議”慣用語：Ithinkthemostsuitable…foryouis…Iwouldliketosuggestthat…You'dbetter…/It'sbetterto…AsfarasIamconcerned…/Inmyopinion…Foronething…,foranother…IfIwereyou,Iwould…Itseemstomethatyoucould…第4頁③句尾慣用語：Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.第5頁

（陜西高考）假定你是中學生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom學生家長博客上，你看到以下內容。請你依據博客內容、寫作關鍵點和要求，給這位家長回復。I'mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.Ihavearuleformydaughter:beamongthetop5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother.Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool,butsomefriendsofminekeeptellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher.AmIwrong?第6頁寫作關鍵點：1.表明自己看法；2.陳說自己理由（可舉例說明）；3.提出最少兩條提議。要求：1.短文詞數不少于100（不含已寫好部分）；2.內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫；3.書寫需清楚、工整。第7頁Hi，TigerMom，

WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,healthandlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.Someall-Astudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected.Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice.Moreimportantly,letherlivelikealovelygirl;letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities;andlethermakemistakesofherownasweteenagersoftendo.第8頁①行文邏輯：直接提出觀點→從兩方面解釋原因→給出提議。很好地使用了連接詞，如：Furthermore，Moreimportantly等。②詞匯短語：利用了較高難度詞匯和短語。如：evaluating，universityadmission，developmentinwisdom，neverbeignored，turnedoutnottobe,bynomeans等。③句式句法：利用了多樣化句式結構。如：主語從句Whatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzle…；表語從句Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso./Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheir…；賓語從句SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice；狀語從句Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactor…/…astheywereexpected.以及therebe句型Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.等。第9頁閱讀下面這封中學生來信（摘自ChinaDaily21Century）。DearEditor，IamanewstudentatHainingHongdaSeniorHighSchool.MyhomeisfarfromHaining,soImustliveatschool.Thisisthefirsttimeformetogetawayfrommyparents.Ifeelverysad.WhenIlefthome,Icouldn'thelptearingmyselfawayfromthem.Idonotwanttobealoneatschool,andIamashygirl.Ihavebeencryinginbedatnightthesedays.Iwanttostayathomeforever.Imissmyparentsverymuch.Couldyoutellmewhattodo?Yourearlyreplyisexpected.Regards,Amy第10頁請依據以上內容，寫一封回信（信開頭和結尾已為你寫好。詞數100左右）。回信應包含以下關鍵點：1．勉勵Amy堅定求學信心，志存高遠，四海為家；2．就Amy當前情況，提兩到三個提議。第11頁DearAmy，Thankyouforyourletter.Iamsogladtohaveatalkaboutyourpresentsituationwithyou.Wishyouhappyeveryday.Faithfullyyours，×××第12頁【參考范文】DearAmy，

Thankyouforyourletter.Iamsogladtohaveatalkaboutyourpresentsituationwithyou.Peopleoftenmisstheirparentsthefirsttimetheyleavehome.Mostpeopledohavetoleavehomeforhighereducationoremployment.Youcannotlivewithyourparentsforever.Ithinkyoushouldrealizethatpresentseparationwillhelpyouracademicdevelopmentandyourimprovementofpersonalability.Youneedtomakefriendsonyourschoolcampus,sharingideaswithyourclassmateswhoarephysicallyclosesttoyounow.Maybeyouwillstillmissyourparents,butyournewfriendswillbringyouhappinessandjoytoyournewlife.AlsoIsuggestyouenjoyyourselfbytakinganactivepartindifferentkindsofactivitiesinschool.Youwillgetmu