專題16高考英語專項突破“讀后續寫”一誤會故事

誤會是一個需要解開的結……

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閱讀下面短文，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

Samisabravepolicemanwhooftencomesacrossdangeroussituations.However,whenhe

wasyoung,heexperiencedafunnystoryduringhiswork.

Thatwasaniceday,andSamworkedatthepolicestationasusual.Arichandbeautiful

womancarryingapursedrovetowork.Sheparkedhercarinthestreetoutsideheroffice.When

shefinishedherworkthatafternoon,shegotintohercarquicklyandstarteddrivinghomeas

usual.Suddenly,shenoticedayellowcaratherback,whosedriverwasamanwithaveryugly

look.Tohersurprise,whensheturnedleft,theyellowcaralsoturnedleft.Whensheturnedright,

theyellowcarturnedright,too.Whenshestoppedatthetrafficlights,theyellowcarstopped

behindher.

Gradually,fearcameintoherheart.Whatshouldshedo?Howcouldshegetridofthis

terribleman?Todealwiththissituation,shedecidedtodrivequicklytothepolicestationwhere

Samworked.However,shewasevenmoresurprisedwhenshesawthecarstillfollowedherand

stoppedbehindher."Howdarehefollowmehere?^^shesaidtoherselfShecouldfeelherheart

beatingfasterthanever.Atthattime,Samwasstandingondutyoutsidethepolicestation.Seeing

Samwearingapoliceuniform,shewasmorethandelightedthatshewouldbesafe.

Atonce,shejumpedoutofhercarandrantoSamwithoutanydelay.Pointingattheman

insidethecar,shesaidabadmanwasfollowingherandaskedSamtoarresthim.Tofindwhat

washappening,Samwalkedtowardsthemanwhohadstoppedhiscarnearthewoman's.

ButwhatshockedSamwasthatthemandidn'ttrytoescapewhenhesawhim.Instead,the

manlookedrelieved.Secondslater,themanwalkedtowardsthewomanandSam.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Themanjustsmiledandstartedtotellthetruth.

Then,Samwaslostinthoughtandbegantotalkwiththewoman.

【答案】參考范文：

Themanjustsmiledandstartedtotellthetruth.Actually,themanjustwantedtogivethe

pursebacktothewoman.Hesaidwhenthewomangotintohercar,shedroppedthepurseonthe

streetunconsciously.Themanwasparkinghiscarnearthewomanandsawwhathadhappened.

Sohestartedtodrivehiscartochasethewoman.Thewomanopenedthepurseandmadesure

nothingwaslost.Shebowedtotheman,tookout100dollarsandhandedittotheman.Butthe

manhadleftbeforesheknewit.

Then,Samwaslostinthoughtandbegantotalkwiththewoman.Hetoldherthatthoughnot

handsome,themanhadaheartofgold.Inaddition,hetaughthernottojudgemenbytheirlooks.

AfterhearingSam'swords,thewomanfeltembarrassedaboutwhatshehaddone.Luckily,she

realizedherfaultandfeltgratefultotheman.Thewomanpromisedthatnexttime,whenshesaw

somethingstrange,shewouldnotmakeanyjudgementuntilfiguringoutthetruth.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了薩姆在做警察時遇到了一位女士，這位女士認為有壞人在

跟蹤自己，后來發現是因為女士覺得那個男人長的不好看誤會了人家，他其實是想把這位

女士的錢包送還的故事。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“這個人只是笑了笑，然后開始講實話。”可知，第一段可描寫事情的

真相。

②由第二段首句內容“然后，薩姆陷入了沉思，開始和那個女人說話。”可知，第二段可描

寫薩姆跟女士講道理，不要以貌取人。

2.續寫線索：害怕——求助一真相大白——感謝——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①追：chase/goafter/runafter

②意識到：realize/beawareof

情緒類

①窘迫的：embarrassed/abashed

②感謝：begrateful/bethankful/showone'sappreciation/showone'sgratitude

【點睛】

[高分句型1].Themanwasparkinghiscarnearthewomanandsawwhathadhappened.

（這句話運用了what引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2].Thewomanpromisedthatnexttime,whenshesawsomethingstrange,shewould

notmakeanyjudgementuntilfiguringoutthetruth.（這句話運用了when引導的時間狀語從句）

02

“GoingtoNationals!,,Wewereallscreamingandjumping.Kate,Jenny,WendyandI

embracedeachother,bouncing.""Goodjob,Tara.^^SaidKateassheputanarmaroundme.Iam

theyoungestontherelayraceteam,butPmfast.WhenIrun,Ileavetheskinofmyshyness

behind,andIfeellikeahorsemanontheMongoliangrassland,free,withoutboundaries.

Everybodyrantotheirparentsinthebleachers（露天看臺）.MyMomdidn'tmakeit.Again.

Igrabbedmyphoneandcalledher.Ittookawhileforhertoanswer."Yes,hidear.""Mom,we

wonstates,andwearegoingtonationals.^^Iburstoutinonebreath."Great!Lefstalklater;ril

pickyouupfromschool.,5Iwantedtosay:"Isthatit?Whyaren'tyouproudofme?Allother

parentsarehere,whyaren'tyou?^^butallIdidwast6OK,seeyousoon.^Doessheseeme?DoI

matter?

Itwaslateafter9PM.Alltheparentspickeduptheirchildren,butmyMomwasn'thereyet.

CoachJohnsonwaitedwithme.Wejuststood.Aspeedingcarturnedthecomer;itwasmy

Mom'sToyota.Coachpattedmeonthebackandleft.

“IamsosorryIamlate.Timejustflew.^^SaidMom.Iwantedtocryindisappointmentand

tellherthatIhatetobealwayslasttobepickedupandneverhavehercometomysporting

contests,schoolplays,oranythingelse;askherwhyshewon'tmaketimeforme.ButwhenI

lookedatherandsawhertiredeyesandclenchedjaw（咬緊下巴），Ijustsaid:"That'sOK,Mom,I

understand.^^HerjawhadstayedclenchedsincewecametothiscountryasMomwouldsay:"with

twopiecesofluggage,athree-year-old（me）,and$700.^^

注意：

1.續寫的詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

NationalsfinallycameandmyMomcameforthefirsttimeever.

IhadleteverybodydownandIranouttohidemyself

【答案】

NationalsfinallycameandMyMomcameforthefirsttimeever.SeeingmyMominthe

bleachers,Iwasespeciallyexcited.Iwaslikeracehorsesatthegate:nervouslywaitingandheads

heldhigh.Iwasthelastrunnerinourteam."Ihavetosealthewin.^^Itoldmyself.AfterWendy

passedthebatoninmyhand,Iexplodedforward.Thecrowdwerescreaming.Mythoughtsrocked

withthepulseoftheblood.IwasbeginningtopickupspeedagainwhenIwassuddenlythrown

offbalance.JustasIwasregainingcontrol,Ihittheflooranddroppedthebaton.Myworldhad

justended.

IhadleteverybodydownandIranouttohidemyself.Mylegswereallbloody,butthafsnot

whathurt.Idisappointedeverybody.Afterawhile,mymom,withredeyes,foundme."Iwillquit

theteam.^^Iwhispered."No,love!Youhadthebesttimeintherace.Itwasanaccident.She

continuedtomakemefeelgood,butIheardonlyhersoftvoicecomingasawarmembraceatme,

andthenIcriedoutmysorrow/'You're...neveratmymeets...alwayslate...youdon'thave

time...you'renotproudofme.^^Hervoicedropped/!loveyousomuchthatIwantedtobuilda

strongerboatforus.Iamproudofyoueverysecond.^^Thirstyforthosewords,Iranintoherarms.

Thenextday,Iwentbacktothetrack.WhenIlookedatmyMominthebleachers,wesmiled.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者和同學贏得了洲際比賽，將要沖向全國的比賽，但是

別的同學的父母都到場和自己的孩子一起歡呼時，作者只能打電話給母親，電話那頭母親

沒有表示祝賀，作者因此感到很失望，作者希望母親能來現場看比賽，也希望母親能夠早

點來接自己，但是想到母親一直咬緊牙關養育自己，作者的內心的想法也說不出口。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“全國賽終于來了，我媽第一次來了。”可知，第一段可描寫作者母親

來看作者比賽的場景。

②由第二段首句內容“我讓大家失望了，我跑出去躲起來。”可知，第二段可描寫作者比賽

失誤后的羞愧，母親的鼓勵。

2.續寫線索：母親看作者比賽一比賽失誤一作者感到羞愧一母親的安慰和鼓勵一

作者和母親誤會解開

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①降低：fall/lower

②使失望：disappoint/upset

③離開：quit/departfrom

情緒類

①溫柔的：soft/gentle

②激動的：excited/agitated

【點睛】

[高分句型1].IwasbeginningtopickupspeedagainwhenIwassuddenlythrownoff

balance.（由連接詞when引導的時間狀語從句）

[高分句型2].IloveyousomuchthatIwantedtobuildastrongerboatfor

us.（由so…that引導結果狀語從句）

03

Anunexpectedchangeontheroad

ItwasadampeveninginSeptember2013whenIlandedinKuching,thecapitalcityof

SarawakinMalaysia.Iwasa19-year-oldDubai-raisedkidawayfromhomeforthefirsttimeto

startmyundergraduatestudiesinmechanicalengineering.

Aloneandhomesick,thewetwelcomeIreceivedattheairportdidn'tmakemefeelany

better.Ihadnevertravelledalonebeforeandtheseven-hourflightfromDubaiwasthelongest

flightIhadevertaken.Ipushedmyluggageandheadedtotheairportexittofindagreyvanwith

thenameofmyuniversityonit.Myride,Iassumed,andIwasright.

Aswelefttheairport,thedriverbegantalkingtome;hetoldmethatIwasthelastofthenew

studentshehadtopickupthatday.Hesharedinformationwithmeaboutthecityanditspeople

andwhatIshouldseeanddo.AsIamadrivingenthusiastmyself,westartedtalkingaboutcars

anddrivinginDubaiandhisaccountsofdrivinginKuching.

"NevermakeaSarawakianangry“hewarned."4Noroadrage(路怒).Verydangerous!nHe

thenwentontolisthisexperiencesofroadrageandbythetimehehadfinished,Ihadmadeup

mymindtobeverypassiveontheroads.

Notlongintoourjourney,thelightsofthecarbehindflashedatus.Thiscontinuedmore

aggressivelyandmydriverstartedtopanic.Wepulledovertotheroadsideinawell-litarea.My

heartwaspoundingbutItriedtoputonabravefaceasthemanfromthecaremergedandmade

hiswaytomysideofthevan.Ashereachedmywindow,Ilowereditandtriedtoforceasmile.

HereachedintothevanandIletoutaloud"Whoa(usedtotellsomeonetobecomecalmer)!"

注意：.

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

ThenIlookeddownathishandstoseethathewasholdingatravelbag.

Withasighofrelief,Itookmybagandthankedthisstranger.

【答案】

ThenIlookeddownathishandstoseethathewasholdingatravelbag."Isityours?Pve

founditattheairportandtriedtocatchupwithyou."themansaid.Iopenedthebagandit

containedmypassport,returntickets,aswellascashandlettersfortheuniversity.Ihadleftit

behindonthetrolleyattheairportandthismanhadbeentryingtoreturnittome.Atthismoment,

Irealizedthatwehadwrongedhimcompletely.（76words）

Withasighofrelief,Itookmybngandthankedthisstranger.Thestrange*friendlysmile

putmeatease.Iimaginedthehorriblescenariohadhenotreturnedit.Whenwearrived,thedriver

wishedmeluckwithmyuniversitystudiesanddroveaway.Theseactsofkindnessinstantly

cheeredmeupandthankstothishoneststranger,theinitialself-doubtIhadaboutmydecisionto

studysofarawayfromhomewasreplacedwithhopeandexcitement.

【解析】

本文圍繞人物展開，主要講述來自于迪拜的19歲的學生一個人來到馬來西亞上學，下了飛

機之后，因為不適應而感覺不好。搭了一輛出租車去學校，出租車司機人很好，他們聊了

很多，其中關于不要在路上招惹到司機，他們容易是路怒者，會很危險。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“然后，我低頭看到他的手里拿著一個旅行包。”可知，第一段可描寫

那個人來還我的包。

②由第二段首句內容“我松了口氣，放下心來，拿過了我的包并且感謝了那個男人。”可知

,第二段可描寫作者對馬來西亞人的善良而感動，并且對在這里的學習和生活抱有希望。

2.續寫線索：發現—詢問——檢查并確認——錯怪——感謝一希望

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①發現：found/notice

②盡力：triedto/manageto

情緒類

①友好的：friendly/kind

②恐怖的：homble/tenible

【點睛】

【高分句型1】Atthismoment,Irealizedthatwehadwrongedhim

completely.（由that引導的賓語從句）

【高分句型2】Whenwearrived,thedriverwishedmeluckwithmyuniversitystudiesanddrove

away.（由when引導的時間狀語從句）

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Ayoungwomanwaswaitingforherflightatanairport.ShewasleavingforLondonbecause

shegotanewjobthere.ItwassaidthathernewbosswasatypicalEnglishgentleman-polite,

modest,humorousandconsiderate.Shewasexcitedaswellasalittlenervousabouthernewlife.

Withseverallonghoursbeforeherflight,thewomanhuntedforabookintheairportshops,

boughtapacketofcookiesandfoundaplacetosit.Shetookoutabookandstartedtoread.

Althoughshewasabsorbedinherbook,shehappenedtoseethatthemansittingbesideher,as

bold（大月旦的）ashecouldbe,grabbed（抓）acookieortwofromthebaginbetweenthem.

Educatedtobewell-mannered,shetriedtoignoreittoavoidanargument.Buttoshowthatshe

wastheowner,shestartedtotakecookiesfromthatbagtoo.Unfortunately,themandidn'tget

thathint（暗示）,sincehedidn'tstopgrabbingthecookies.

“Howannoying!?,shethought.Asthegreedycookiethiefkepteating,thewoman

munched（用力咀嚼）somecookiesandwatchedtheclock.

Shewasgettingangrierastheminuteswentby,thinking,“IfIweren'tsonice,Iwould

blackenhiseyes.^^Witheachcookieshetook,hetookone,too;whenonlyonewasleft,she

wonderedwhathewoulddo.

Withasmileonhisface,andanervouslaugh,hetookthelastcookieandbrokeitinhalf.He

offeredherahalf,andatetheother.Shegrabbeditfromhim,glaredathimandthought,"Oh,

brother.Thisguyhassomenerveandheissorude!Whydidn'theevenshowanygratefulness?^^

Shehadneverknownwhenshehadbeensoangry,andsighedinreliefwhenherflightwas

called.Shegatheredherbelongingsandheadedtothegatequickly,refusingtolookbackatthe

rudethief.Sheboardedtheplane,sankinherseat,andlookedforherbook,whichwasalmost

complete.

注意：

1.所續寫短文的詞數應為130左右；

2.續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

Paragraph1:

Asshereachedinherbaggage,shegasped（喘氣）withsurprise.

Paragraph2:

Surprisingly,shefoundthemansittingjustbehindher.

【答案】Asshereachedinherbaggage,shegasped（喘氣）withsurprise.Therewasan

unopenedbagofcookies.Aterriblethoughtcrossedhermind,“Ifmycookiebagishere,theother

oneIateishisandhejusttriedtosharewithme."Sherealizedthatthemanwasn'ttheirritating

cookiethiefandhewaspoliteenough.Incontrastwithhim,shewastheimpoliteone.Butitwas

toolatetosaysorrytohim.

Surprisingly,shefoundthemansittingjustbehindher.Herfaceburnedwithshameand

apologizedforwhatshedidandsaidtohim.<6Itdoesn'tmatter!themansmiledatherandsaid.It

wastotallyunexpectedforhertohearhisresponse.Sheunderstoodthatrealpolitenessand

gentlenesswassincerekindness,eventhoughotherstreatedyouinarudeway.Itwastheman

whotaughtherthetruth.

【解析】

本文以餅干為線索展開，講述了一位女士在登機前被鄰座的先生“偷吃”了餅干。經過多次

試探，這個先生并沒有“收斂”，故而她認為這位先生非常沒禮貌并且粗魯。登機后女士發

現自己的餅干仍然在包中，并且冤枉了那位先生。她意外地發現那位先生坐在她的后面，

并且向他道歉。這件事使她明白真正的禮貌是發自內心的善意。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

由第一段首句內容“當她伸進行李時，她驚訝地喘著氣。”可知，第一段可描寫女士意識到

那位先生并沒有粗魯地偷吃自己的餅干。相反，自己才是那個不禮貌且粗魯的人。

由第二段首句內容“令她驚訝的是，她發現這位先生正坐在她后面。”可知，第二段可描寫

女士向先生道歉，并且明白真正的禮貌的意義。

2.續寫線索：看到餅干——意識到錯誤——想道歉——發現那位先生——道歉——感唐

3.詞匯激活

行為類

道歉：saysorry/apologized

笑：laugh/smiled

情緒類

令人惱怒的：annoying/irritating

【點睛】

[高分句型1]Sherealizedthatthemanwasn'ttheirritatingcookiethiefandhewaspolite

enough.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Itwasthemanwhotaughtherthetruth.（運用了Itwas…who引導的強調句）

05

Itwasdark,coldandrainingonDecember24.Jameslefthisofficeandwalkedslowlyacross

thestreettotheparkingplace.Hewasverytired.Hetookouthiscarkeyandputdownhis

umbrella.Heputthekeyintothelockandturnedit.Nothinghappened.Thedoorwouldnotopen.

ThenJamesrealisedthatitwasthewrongcar.Hiscarwasred,butthisonewasdarkblue."Oh

dear!Imusthaveparkedinadifferentplacethismorning,5,thoughthe.Puttinguphisumbrella,he

setofftolookforhiscar.Therainpoureddownandtheeveninggotcolderandcolder.

Havingwalkedroundallthesidestreets,Jamesdidn'tfindhiscar.Hewasexhaustedand

angry."'SomeonemusthavestolenmycarJhethought."NowIshallhavetogotothepolice

stationandreportit."Thepolicemantherewasveryhelpful.Hewrotedownadescriptionof

Jamescarandthentookhisaddressandtelephonenumber.AsJameswasleaving,thepoliceman

wishedhimamerryChristmas.

^tChristmas!^^thoughtJames."Ohno!I'veforgottenallaboutChristmas.Ihaven51boughtmy

wifeapresentandnowalltheshopsareshut.WhatshallIdo?”Whenwaitingforthebus,hegot

wetterandmoremiserable（難受的）.Hehadnoumbrellaandtherainfloweddownintohiscollar.

Hefeltlikeburstingintotears.

WhenJamesgothome,hefoundhiswifestandingonachairandlookingforsomethingina

veryhighcupboard.uWhatareyoudoing,Jessica?^^heasked.4tThebiggoldstarfortheChristmas

tree,“Jessicareplied."Justamoment,rilgointothegarage（車庫）andfetchthestepladder

（梯子）foryou,“saidJames.WhenJamessaw.thewell-decoratedChristmastreeandlotsof

presentsunderit,hefeltevenmoreunhappy."Whatalovelytree!^^hethoughtashewent

downstairs,CCIhaven'tevengotonepresentforJessica.FvelostmycarandI'mcompletelywet.I

musthavelostmyumbrella,too.”

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

AsJamesopenedthegaragedoor,hespottedsomething,frozeninamazement.

Pleasedtoknowhiscarwasthere,Jamesenteredtheroomwiththepresent.

【答案】AsJamesopenedthegaragedoor,hespottedsomething,frozeninamazement.Inside

thegaragewashisredcar.Hesuddenlyrememberedthatitwouldn,tstartthismorningsohejust

tookataxitowork.Jameswasoveijoyed.HewasjustabouttorushupstairsandtellJessicathe

goodnewswhenheheard,uMeow!Meow!^^Helookedinsidethecarandtheresatasmallkitten

withpointedearsandgreeneyes.James5eyesweregluedtothekittenforafewminutesanda

brilliantideastruckhim."ThisisforJessica.^^Hepickedthekittenup.

Pleasedtoknowhiscarwasthere,Jamesenteredtheroomwiththepresent."Thisisyour

present,9,saidtoJessicahappily.t4Oh,thankyou,darling.Tvealwayswantedakitten,“herfacelit

up.Justthenthetelephonerang.Itwasthepoliceman.Jameswastoldthathiscarhadn'tbeen

foundbuthisumbrellawasgotinthepolicestation.Puttingthephonedown,Jamesgazedat

Jessica,joywellingupinsidehim.BathedinthewarmChristmasatmosphere,Jameswalkedover

toJessicaandhuggedhertightly.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了主人公James在圣誕節的時候誤認為自己的車丟了，心情變

得沮喪，沒有給家人買圣誕禮物，天下著雨，雨傘也丟了，心情非常糟糕，渾身濕透的回

到家里，后來發現車在車庫里，警察也找到了丟失的傘，心情變好的故事。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“詹姆斯打開車庫門，發現了什么東西，驚訝地僵住了。”可知，第一

段可描寫James發現自己的車在家里，也找到了給妻子的禮物，以及他的心情變化。

②由第二段首句內容“詹姆斯很高興知道他的車就在那里，他帶著禮物進了房間。”可知，

第二段可描寫James愉快地和妻子在一起，警察找到了雨傘，James非常高興，沐浴在圣誕

節溫暖的氣氛中。

2.續寫線索：找到了車—發現了小貓—給妻子送禮物——警察找到了雨傘一

高興起來

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①沖上樓：rushupstairs/dashupstairs/goupstairshurriedly

②.突然想起：strike/occurto/hit

情緒類

①.高興：oveijoyed/verydelighted/extremelyhappy

【點睛】

[高分句型1].Hesuddenlyrememberedthatitwouldn'tstartthismorningsohejusttookataxito

work.（運用了that引導賓語從句，so連接并列句式）

[高分句型2].Puttingthephonedown,JamesgazedatJessica,joywellingupinside

him.（運用了現在分詞作狀語，獨立主格結構）

[高分句型3].BathedinthewarmChristmasatmosphere,JameswalkedovertoJessicaand

huggedhertightly.（運用了過去分詞作狀語）

06

TheRudeBoy

JamesSeltonwasoneoftherudestboysinthevillagewherehelived.Ifapersoninthestreet

waswelldressed,hewouldcryout,"Dandy（花花公子）!”Ifaperson'sclothesweredirtyortom,

hewouldthrowstonesathim,andannoyhimineveryway.

Oneafternoon,justastheschoolwasdismissed,astrangerpassedthroughthevillage.His

dresswasplainandsomewhatold,butneatandclean.Hecarriedacane（手杖）inhishand,onthe

endofwhichwasabagandheworeabroad-brimmed（寬邊的）hat.

NosoonerhadJamesseenthestrangerthanhewinkedtohisplaymates,andsaid,t4Nowfor

somefun!^^Hethensilentlywenttowardthestrangerfrombehind,and,knockingoffhishat,ran

away.

Themanturnedandsawhim,butJameswasoutofhearingbeforehecouldspeak.The

strangerputonhishat,andwentonhisway.AgaindidJamesapproach,butthistime,theman

caughthimbythearm,andheldhimtightly.However,hecontentedhimselfwithlookingat

Jamesamomentintheface,andthenpushedhimfromhim.Nosoonerhadthenaughtyboyfound

himselffreeagainthanhebegantopelt（連讀投換B）thestrangerwithdirtandstones.

ButJameswasveryfrightenedwhenthemanwasstruckontheheadbyabrick,andbadly

hurt.Alltheboysranaway,andJamesskulked（偷偷摸摸走動）acrossthefieldstohishome.

Ashedrewnearhishouse,hissisterCarolinecameouttomeethim,holdingupabeautiful

goldchainandsomenewbooksforhimtosee.ShetoldJames,asfestasshecouldtalk,thattheir

uncle,whohadbeenawayseveralyears,hadcomehome,andwasnowinthehouse;thathehad

broughtbeautifulpresentsforthewholefamily;thathehadlefthiscarriageatthetavern（客棧）,a

mileortwoo工andwalkedonfoot,soastosurprisehisbrother,theirfather.

注意：1.續寫的詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.

Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.

【答案】Paragraph1:

Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.He

wasbadly/severelyhurtandthewoundwasjustovertheeye.Hearingthis,Jamesimmediately

realizedthatitwashethathurthisuncle.Shamefulandfrightened,hedarednotstepintothe

house.Atthattime,heheardhisfathercallinghimtocomein."Whatmakesyoulooksopale?”

askedCaroline,changinghertone.Withpalmssweating,hehadnochoicebuttoobey.Insidethe

roomsatthestranger,orratherhisuncle,withhisforeheadboundup,talkinghappilywithhis

father.WhatasenseofshamedidJamesnowfeel!Hangingdownhishead,hewalkedtoward/

approachedhisuncle.

Paragraph2:

Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisfhce.Thenhecried,cuOh!

Ifsyou!^^Butwhenhisunclesawthepuzzledfather,heimmediatelyexplainedthathejustmet

Jamesinthestreet.Inaflash,Jameslearntthathisunclewasreadytoforgivehim.Butfacing

suchakinduncle,hecouldn'tconcealhisguilt.Havingconfessedwhathehaddonetohisuncle,

Jamesfeltrelieved.Heneverforgotthislessonsolongashelived.Itcuredhimentirelyofhislow

andinsolent/rudemanners.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了James

Selton是他住的村子里最粗魯的男孩之一，他經常捉弄他人。一天下午，放學時，一個陌

生人經過村子，James開始捉弄這個陌生人，用磚塊擊中陌生人的頭部并受重傷。James嚇

壞了趕緊回家，妹妹告訴他，他們的叔叔離開這里多年，現在回到家里，并給他們全家買

了漂亮的禮物。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“她說，當他穿過村子時，一些壞男孩向他扔石頭。”可知，第一段可

描寫叔叔受傷的情況和James的擔心和害怕，不敢回家。

②由第二段首句內容“他的叔叔走到他跟前，但當他看到他的臉時突然停住了。”可知，第

二段可描寫James的叔叔認出來他。James向叔叔坦白了自己的一切，如釋重負，決定改掉

自己低賤無理的舉止。

2.續寫線索：意識到一害怕一羞愧一坦白一改正

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①.意識至！J：realize/beawareofTbecomeawareof

②.交談：talkwith/chatwith/haveachatwith

③.坦白：confess/acknowledge/admit

情緒類

①.愉快地：happily/memly/cheerfully

②.羞'愧：shame/disgrace

【點睛】

[高分句型1].Hearingthis,Jamesimmediatelyrealizedthatitwashethathurthis

uncle.（運用了現在分詞作狀語和賓語從句）

[高分句型2].Insidetheroomsatthestranger,orratherhisuncle,withhisforeheadboundup,

talkinghappilywithhisfather.（運用了倒裝結構，with的復合結構，現在分詞作狀語）

專題16高考英語專項突破“讀后續寫”一誤會故事

誤會是一個需要解開的結……

01

閱讀下面短文，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

Samisabravepolicemanwhooftencomesacrossdangeroussituations.However,whenhe

wasyoung,heexperiencedafunnystoryduringhiswork.

Thatwasaniceday,andSamworkedatthepolicestationasusual.Arichandbeautiful

womancarryingapursedrovetowork.Sheparkedhercarinthestreetoutsideheroffice.When

shefinishedherworkthatafternoon,shegotintohercarquicklyandstarteddrivinghomeas

usual.Suddenly,shenoticedayellowcaratherback,whosedriverwasamanwithaveryugly

look.Tohersurprise,whensheturnedleft,theyellowcaralsoturnedleft.Whensheturnedright,

theyellowcarturnedright,too.Whenshestoppedatthetrafficlights,theyellowcarstopped

behindher.

Gradually,fearcameintoherheart.Whatshouldshedo?Howcouldshegetridofthis

terribleman?Todealwiththissituation,shedecidedtodrivequicklytothepolicestationwhere

Samworked.However,shewasevenmoresurprisedwhenshesawthecarstillfollowedherand

stoppedbehindher."Howdarehefollowmehere?^^shesaidtoherselfShecouldfeelherheart

beatingfasterthanever.Atthattime,Samwasstandingondutyoutsidethepolicestation.Seeing

Samwearingapoliceuniform,shewasmorethandelightedthatshewouldbesafe.

Atonce,shejumpedoutofhercarandrantoSamwithoutanydelay.Pointingattheman

insidethecar,shesaidabadmanwasfollowingherandaskedSamtoarresthim.Tofindwhat

washappening,Samwalkedtowardsthemanwhohadstoppedhiscarnearthewoman's.

ButwhatshockedSamwasthatthemandidn'ttrytoescapewhenhesawhim.Instead,the

manlookedrelieved.Secondslater,themanwalkedtowardsthewomanandSam.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Themanjustsmiledandstartedtotellthetruth.

Then,Samwaslostinthoughtandbegantotalkwiththewoman.

【答案】參考范文：

Themanjustsmiledandstartedtotellthetruth.Actually,themanjustwantedtogivethe

pursebacktothewoman.Hesaidwhenthewomangotintohercar,shedroppedthepurseonthe

streetunconsciously.Themanwasparkinghiscarnearthewomanandsawwhathadhappened.

Sohestartedtodrivehiscartochasethewoman.Thewomanopenedthepurseandmadesure

nothingwaslost.Shebowedtotheman,tookout100dollarsandhandedittotheman.Butthe

manhadleftbeforesheknewit.

Then,Samwaslostinthoughtandbegantotalkwiththewoman.Hetoldherthatthoughnot

handsome,themanhadaheartofgold.Inaddition,hetaughthernottojudgemenbytheirlooks.

AfterhearingSam'swords,thewomanfeltembarrassedaboutwhatshehaddone.Luckily,she

realizedherfaultandfeltgratefultotheman.Thewomanpromisedthatnexttime,whenshesaw

somethingstrange,shewouldnotmakeanyjudgementuntilfiguringoutthetruth.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了薩姆在做警察時遇到了一位女士，這位女士認為有壞人在

跟蹤自己，后來發現是因為女士覺得那個男人長的不好看誤會了人家，他其實是想把這位

女士的錢包送還的故事。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“這個人只是笑了笑，然后開始講實話。”可知，第一段可描寫事情的

真相。

②由第二段首句內容“然后，薩姆陷入了沉思，開始和那個女人說話。”可知，第二段可描

寫薩姆跟女士講道理，不要以貌取人。

2.續寫線索：害怕——求助一真相大白——感謝——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①追：chase/goafter/runafter

②意識到：realize/beawareof

情緒類

①窘迫的：embarrassed/abashed

②感謝：begrateful/bethankful/showone'sappreciation/showone'sgratitude

【點睛】

[高分句型1].Themanwasparkinghiscarnearthewomanandsawwhathadhappened.

（這句話運用了what引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2].Thewomanpromisedthatnexttime,whens