閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。About7yearsago,Iwasavolunteeratanaquarium(海洋館),ItwasamazingbecauseIadoredtheocean.AtthetimethoughIwantedtobeabiologist,soitwasextraspecialforme.“SharkWeek"rolledaround,and,IwasexcitedbecauseIlovesharks,Apparentlyeveryoneelsewantedtoworksharkweektooastheschedulefilledupfast.Ihadoneshiftduringsharkweek.I.wasdroppedoffattheaquariuminthemorning.Iwenttomystationwithacoworker..andthenIstartedfeelingsick.Istartedtremblingabit,andthenmystomachstartedaching.Apparentlymyfacewassuperpaleandmycoworkernoticedmeabouttofall.over.Shewasabletowalkmetooneoftheemployeesonlydoorsbeforehavingtogobacktoherstation.Imademywayslowlytotheofficeandexplainedthesituation.Ineededtogohome.Iwantedtocry.ThatwasmyonlyshiftduringsharkweekandIhadtomissit.Andontopofthat,Ihadtotakethebushome.NormallyIdidn'tmindtakingthebushome,butmybusstopwasupaverysteep(多的)cityhill.It’squiteaclimbevenifyouaren’tsick.ButIstillmanagedtodoit.Now,onthatwalk,there'sacupcakeshopbeforeIreachmy.stop.MymomwouldgivemesomemoneytobuymyselfatreatafterworkusuallysoIwenttherefrequently.Welltheyalsohavehomemadeicecreamthere.AndconsideringitwasahotsummerdayandIfeltsick,Idecidedtostopin.注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.BeforeIcouldevenpulloutmywallet,thewomanheldupherhand.文本主旨本文主要講述了作者在海洋館擔任志愿者期間，在“鯊魚周”上班時突然生病，不得不提前回家。回家途中經過常去的甜品店，因天氣炎熱且身體不適決定買冰淇淋，由此展開的一段經歷，展現了生活中意外狀況下的溫暖瞬間。五要素分析人物：作者、同事、甜品店店員、媽媽時間：約7年前的夏天，“鯊魚周”期間的一個工作日地點：海洋館、從海洋館回家的路上、家附近的甜品店事件：作者在“鯊魚周”上班時生病，提前回家，途中去甜品店買冰淇淋原因：作者生病無法繼續工作，因炎熱和身體不適想買冰淇淋緩解詞匯積累sick（生病的）、trembling（顫抖的）、aching（疼痛的）、pale（蒼白的）volunteer（志愿者）、shift（輪班）、station（工作崗位）cupcakeshop（紙杯蛋糕店）、counter（柜臺）、wallet（錢包）、homemade（自制的）、icecream（冰淇淋）續寫分析銜接句：續寫第一段開頭“Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.”承接上文作者決定在甜品店買冰淇淋，自然引出在店內的后續情節。續寫第二段開頭“BeforeIcouldevenpulloutmywallet,thewomanheldupherhand.”則緊接上一段作者準備付款的動作，使故事連貫發展。情節合理性：從作者生病提前回家，到因炎熱不適決定買冰淇淋，再到店員的反應，整個情節發展符合生活邏輯。例如，作者身體不適想吃冰淇淋緩解，而店員的善意舉動也在情理之中，可能是看到作者狀態不佳心生憐憫。情感鋪墊：前文作者因生病錯過“鯊魚周”唯一輪班的沮喪，以及回家途中的艱難，為后文在甜品店獲得溫暖形成對比，情感過渡自然。情節一致性人物行為一致：作者一直處于生病狀態，在整個過程中行動緩慢、狀態不佳，符合其身體狀況。場景一致：故事場景始終圍繞從海洋館回家的路線，包括經過的甜品店，沒有突兀的場景轉換。情感一致：作者一開始的沮喪情緒，到在甜品店感受到溫暖，情感轉變合理且連貫。主題一致：全文圍繞作者在“鯊魚周”的意外經歷展開，展現生活中的意外與溫暖，主題貫穿始終。邏輯一致：從作者決定買冰淇淋，到準備付款，再到店員的反應，邏輯緊密相連。高分語句呼應原文+高級句型呼應原文中作者身體不適的描述：JustasIwasonthevergeofcollapseattheaquarium,myweakenedstatewasonceagainevidentasItotteredtowardsthecounterinthecupcakeshop,longingforarespitefrommysickness.（使用了Justas引導的方式狀語從句，以及onthevergeof等短語，生動地體現了作者狀態的延續性）呼應作者錯過鯊魚周輪班的沮喪：DespitethedisappointmentofhavingtoabandonmyonlyshiftduringSharkWeek,thisunexpectedencounterinthecupcakeshopofferedaglimmerofhope,muchlikealighthouseguidingashipthroughstormyseas.（運用Despite引導的讓步狀語，以及muchlike的類比結構，強化了情感對比）高級句型提升文采Notonlydidthecoldicecreamsoothemyachingbody,butthekindgestureofthewomanbehindthecounteralsowarmedmyheart,makingmerealizethateveninthefaceofadversity,thereisalwayskindnesstobefound.（使用Notonly...butalso的倒裝結構，強調了冰淇淋和店員善意的雙重作用）Thecupcakeshop,whichhadalwaysbeenaplaceofindulgenceinnormaltimes,nowbecameahavenofcomfortinmymomentofneed,asanctuarywhereIcouldfindsolacefrommyphysicalandemotionaldistress.（運用非限定性定語從句，豐富了對店鋪意義的表達）主題表達&意義延伸直接引語點明主旨Asthewomanhandedmetheicecreamandsaid,“Thisone'sonthehouse.Youlooklikeyoucoulduseabreak,”Irealizedthatsometimes,thesimplestactsofkindnesscanhavethemostprofoundimpactonourday.（通過店員的直接引語，直接點明了善良舉動對人產生積極影響的主旨）促成轉變，引發感悟Fromthedespairofmissingmyshiftandfeelingunwell,theunexpectedkindnessinthecupcakeshoptransformedmyperspective.Icametounderstandthatlifeisfullofunexpectedtwists,butit'softenthekindnessofstrangersthathelpsusnavigatethroughthetoughtimes.（描述了從消極到積極的情感轉變，引發對生活中陌生人善意重要性的感悟）借象征物點明主旨Thecupoficecream,asimpletreatonanordinaryday,becameasymbolofhopeandkindnessinmyotherwisegloomyday.Itrepresentedthesmallbutsignificantgesturesthatcanbrighteneventhedarkestoftimes.（將冰淇淋作為象征物，點明其代表的希望與善意，深化主題）情感走向作者最初因生病錯過“鯊魚周”輪班而沮喪，在回家路上身體不適心情低落，進入甜品店后，店員的善意舉動使作者感受到溫暖，情感逐漸從消極轉向積極。主題深化通過描述作者在困境中得到陌生人的善意，展現了生活中人與人之間的溫暖與關愛，深化了即使生活有意外挫折，但仍有美好瞬間值得銘記的主題。下水文兩篇下水文一

Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.Thewomanbehindthecounterlooksatmewithconcern.ShenoticesmypalefaceandthewayI'mstrugglingtostandsteadily.Itrytosmile,butitprobablycomesoutmorelikeagrimace.ItellherI'mnotfeelingwellandthatIjustneedsomethingtocoolmedown.BeforeIcouldevenpulloutmywallet,thewomanheldupherhand.“Thisone'sonthehouse,”shesayssoftly.“Youlooklikeyoucouldusealittlepick-me-up.”I'mstunned.Istutteroutathankyou,feelingalumpforminmythroat.Shehandsmethecupoficecream,andItakeasmallbite.Thecold,creamysweetnessspreadsthroughmymouth,andforamoment,IforgethowsickIfeel.Isitdownatasmalltable,savoringthetreatandtheunexpectedkindness.WhenIfinallyleavetheshop,Ifeelabitbetter,bothphysicallyandemotionally.Thatsimpleactofkindnessturnsmydisappointingdayaround.下水文二

Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.Myvoiceisweak,andIcanbarelykeepmyeyesopen.Theshopisquiet,withjustafewothercustomersenjoyingtheirtreats.Ileanagainstthecounter,waitingformyicecream,prayingIdon'tpassoutbeforeIcangetit.BeforeIcouldevenpulloutmywallet,thewomanheldupherhand.“Don'tworryaboutit,”shesayswithawarmsmile.“Youseemreallyunwell.Ihopethismakesyoufeelbetter.”Shequicklyscoopsagenerousportionoficecreamintoacupandhandsittome.I'mtouchedbyherkindness.Itakeafewspoonfuls,andtheicecreamseemstorevivemealittle.IstarttotellherhowmuchIappreciateit,butshejustwavesmeoff.AsIleavetheshop,Ifeelanewsenseofgratitude.Thatsmallactofkindnessfromastrangergivesmethestrengthtomakeitupthesteephilltomybusstop.Italsoremindsmethatevenontheworstdays,therearealwaysgoodpeopleandsmallmiracles.參考答案Paragraph1:Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.Thewomanbehindthecounterdidtheusualcustomerservice“How’syourday?”ItalkedabouthowIhadtogohomebecause