2025八省聯考卷讀后續寫及滿分語料10類40句(機車黨硬漢柔情)解析版【讀后續寫真題深度解讀】【原題呈現】閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(紀錄片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.在費城開會，想參加動物籌款活動。Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn’tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.本想待在室內，后來決定出門去劇院。Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers—verybig,tough-lookingbikers.天黑出發，劇院門口遇到一群騎手。I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen—allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub—standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?孤身遇騎手，心生警惕起疑惑。AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.確定地方正確，決定進劇院躲避騎手。注意：(1)續寫詞數應為150個左右；(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【步步為贏】一、知故事大意閱讀材料講述了作者在費城出差時，看到一則關于當地動物救助組織的紀錄片宣傳廣告。由于不愿獨自一人外出，作者本打算在酒店房間度過這個晚上。然而，在感到無聊后，作者鼓起勇氣前往劇院觀看紀錄片，但在劇院前遇到了一個由許多大塊頭騎士組成的團體。作者一開始感到非常緊張，認為自己可能會遇到麻煩，甚至有點后悔自己的決定。盡管如此，作者最終決定進入劇院，希望能安全觀看電影。續寫部分要求構思作者進入劇院后發生的事情，特別是揭示摩托車騎士的真實身份，以及作者是如何從恐懼轉向安心。二、審篇章段落閱讀材料由五段組成，各段段落大意如下：第一段：作者在費城參加會議時，看到一個關于動物救助的紀錄片廣告，想去觀看募捐活動，但由于沒有同事陪伴，且擔心獨自外出，猶豫是否前往。第二段：作者回到酒店后感到無聊和不安，決定克服恐懼，前往劇院。劇院距離酒店只有五個街區，周圍環境看起來不危險，于是決定出發。第三段：天色已晚，街道幾乎空無一人。作者找到了劇院所在的街道，但轉角后卻被眼前的一群看起來強壯威猛的摩托車騎行者嚇到。第四段：雖然作者知道許多摩托車愛好者是友善的人，但此時作為一個獨自女性，身處陌生的街區，面對一群身穿標志的摩托車騎行者，作者感到非常害怕，并開始懷疑自己是否來錯了地方。第五段：盡管感到害怕，作者看到劇院的標志確認自己來對了地方。她決定進入劇院，希望里面會更安全，并祈禱摩托車騎行者會離開。三、定敘事結構從結構上看，文章采用了“設懸念—解謎”的敘事方式。閱讀材料部分通過詳細描寫作者的心理活動，尤其是對這群騎士的恐懼，制造了緊張氛圍。而續寫部分則要求合理構思情節解開這個謎團，讓整個故事從緊張轉為輕松，傳遞出一個積極向上的信息。續寫部分要繼續延續這個懸念并最終解答，保證故事有完整的閉環。情節發展故事細節開端(Beginning)在費城的一家酒店，作者看到關于動物救助的募捐廣告，決定去劇院觀看。發展(Development)在到達劇院時，作者看到一群摩托車騎士站在劇院門外，感到緊張和不安。高潮(Climax)她決定進入劇院，但在劇院內，她發現里面有更多摩托車騎士，這讓她更加困惑和不安。結局(Ending)當電影開始后，作者發現這些摩托車騎士實際上是一個動物救助組織的成員，他們是來支持這次募捐活動的。四、構寫作思路1.續寫第一段寫作思路續寫第一段的段落開頭語是“我匆匆進入劇院，結果發現劇院里還有更多的摩托車騎士?！边@暗示作者原本的恐懼沒有完全消失，她進入劇院后發現情況并沒有改善，反而有更多的騎士。這一段我們需要保持文章的緊張氣氛和懸疑感，可通過環境的描寫、作者的心理活動，以及騎士們的舉止，來繼續加強這種懸疑氛圍。

2.續寫第二段寫作思路續寫第二段的段落開頭語是“在電影開始后，我意識到這些騎士其實是一個動物救助組織的成員。”在這一段的續寫中，我們需要揭示這些騎士其實是參與動物救援活動的志愿者?？梢酝ㄟ^對影片內容的描述、騎士們的行為等，讓讀者逐漸意識到他們并不是“壞人”，而是為了公益事業而聚集在一起。通過這個轉折，消除之前的緊張氛圍，并傳達一種溫暖和正能量。步驟分析結果找出矛盾沖突故事中的主要矛盾是主人公的興趣和安全擔憂之間的對立，以及對陌生人外表的恐懼和內心勇氣的沖突。主人公熱愛動物，想去支持募捐活動，但她害怕獨自一人前往陌生環境并面對看似威脅的騎士群體。矛盾集中在興趣與恐懼的對立以及偏見與真實情況的反差，通過勇氣的表現推動情節發展，體現成長與突破自我。分析情感轉折情感的轉折從主人公初步猶豫到最終進入劇院，表現她對恐懼的克服。開始時她因騎士們的外表感到震驚和恐懼，但在克服內心的矛盾后，她選擇了信任和堅持。最終，她發現騎士們實際上是動物救援組織的成員，這一情感轉變突出了對陌生人和環境的重新認識。情感轉折體現在從不安與猶豫到勇氣與突破，再到偏見消解后的溫暖感動，推動了故事的情感遞進和主題的升華。推導主題故事通過主人公從恐懼到勇氣的成長，以及對騎士群體偏見的改變，探討了勇氣的力量和打破偏見的重要性。主人公不僅突破了自身的心理障礙，還感受到了陌生人善意的溫暖，從中領悟到不應以貌取人。主題為“勇氣與善意”，強調克服內心恐懼的重要性以及通過行動理解和接納他人的必要性，從而展現人際互動中信任與共鳴的力量。五、潤參考答案Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Theywerechattingloudlyandseemedtofilleverycorneroftheplace.Myheartsankevenfurther.Iquicklyfoundanemptyseatinthebackrow,tryingtomakemyselfasinconspicuousaspossible.Iclutchedmybagtightly,constantlyglancedaroundandprayedthatnothingbadwouldhappen.Everynowandthen,Ipeekedatthebikers,wonderingwhattheyweredoinghere.Weretheygoingtocausetrouble?Thetensionintheairwaspalpable,andIregrettedmydecisiontocomealone.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Theyhadcometosupportthefundraiserforthelocalanimalshelters.Asthedocumentaryunfolded,showingtheplightoftheabandoneddogs,Isawmanyofthebikerswipingawaytears.TheywereasmovedasIwasbytheheartwarmingandheartbreakingstories.Duringtheintermission,someofthemevencameovertome,smilingkindlyandaskingifIwasenjoyingthefilm.Theirtoughexteriorshidbig,softhearts.IfeltashamedofmyinitialfearandwastrulygratefulthatIhaddecidedtocome.Wespenttherestoftheeveningsharingourloveforanimalsanddiscussingwaystohelp.【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者在費城參加會議期間，看到酒店附近劇院有一場關于動物救助站救助流浪狗的紀錄片放映及籌款活動，作者因喜愛動物想去參加，卻在劇院外看到一群看起來兇巴巴的摩托騎手，猶豫后還是進入劇院，希望電影結束時騎手們已離開?！驹斀狻?.段落續寫：①由第一段首句“我匆匆走進劇院，卻發現里面有更多的騎手?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡哌M入劇院后，面對更多騎手時內心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的試圖讓自己安全、不引人注意的行動，比如找角落座位、緊緊抓包、頻繁觀察騎手等，展現當時緊張氛圍。②由第二段首句“電影開始時，我意識到這些騎手是一個動物救援組織?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫電影播放過程中作者看到騎手們被紀錄片觸動的表現，以及中場休息時騎手們與作者友好互動的情景，體現出騎手們外表與內心的反差，突顯溫暖主題。2.續寫線索：進入劇院，遇到更多騎手——內心恐懼找座躲避——電影開場，知曉騎手身份——觀影中騎手真情流露——中場休息友好交流3.詞匯激活：行為類：①緊握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize②偷看：peekat/stealalookat/glanceat③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate情緒類：①感動：moved/touched/affected②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed【點睛】【高分句型1】Everynowandthen,Ipeekedatthebikers,wonderingwhattheyweredoinghere.(運用了現在分詞短語作狀語和what引導的賓語從句)【高分句型2】Asthedocumentaryunfolded,showingtheplightoftheabandoneddogs,Isawmanyofthebikerswipingawaytears.(運用了as引導的時間狀語從句和現在分詞短語作狀語和賓語補足語)【讀后續寫真題滿分語料】滿分語料一、無靈主語（時間、地點、情感、自然現象、動作行為類名詞作主語）1.MyheartsankandIfeltlikeIhadwalkedintoalion'sden.1.我的心沉了下去，感覺自己好像走進了獅子窩。2.AwaveofpanicsweptovermeasInoticedaseaofbikers,allwearinginsignia.2.當我注意到一大群騎自行車的人時，一陣恐慌席卷了我，他們都戴著徽章。3.Theirtoughappearancedidn’tseemtomatchthepeacefulatmosphereinsidethetheater.3.他們強硬的外表似乎與劇院里的寧靜氣氛不相稱。4.ThefearIhadfeltearlierfaded,replacedbyadeeprespectfortheirdedicationandkindness.4.我早些時候感到的恐懼消失了，取而代之的是對他們的奉獻精神和善良的深深敬意。5.Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinmymind-maybeIhadmisjudgedthem.5.他們出乎意料的舉動在我心中播下了懷疑的種子——也許我誤判了他們。6.Feartookovermeinaninstant,soIheldmywalletreallytightandtriedmybesttogounnoticed.6.恐懼瞬間籠罩了我，所以我緊緊地攥著錢包，盡量不被人注意。滿分語料二、動作鏈（AandB型，A,BandC型）7.Iclutchedmybagtightly,constantlyglancedaroundandprayedthatnothingbadwouldhappen.7.我緊緊地抓著包，不停地環顧四周，祈禱不會發生什么壞事。8.Oneofthebikersevensmiledatmeandhandedmeabookletabouttheirrescuework.8.其中一名摩托車手甚至對我微笑，遞給我一本關于他們救援工作的小冊子。9.Touchedbytheirpassionandkindness,Iapproachedthemexpressedmyadmirationandrespect.9.我被他們的熱情和善良所感動，走近他們表達了我的欽佩和尊重。滿分語料三、獨立主格結構/with復合結構10.Withthedocumentaryon,thebikerswatchedthefilmattentively.10.隨著紀錄片的播放，摩托車手們聚精會神地看了這部電影。11.Isteeledmyselfandslidintoaseatattheback,myheartpoundinglikeadrum.11.我挺直了身子，滑到后面的座位上，我的心像鼓一樣砰砰直跳。12.Iapproachedoneofthem.“Thankyouforwhatyoudo,”Isaid,myvoicetrembling.12.我走近其中一人?！爸x謝你所做的一切，”我說，聲音顫抖。13.Withpanicwashingoverme,myheartsank,regrettingIshouldhaverushedbacktothehotel.13.我驚慌失措，心沉了下去，后悔自己應該趕緊回酒店。滿分語料四、非謂語短語（作主語、賓語、狀語、定語、賓語補足語等）14.Ikeptstealingglancesatthem,stillfeelingextremelynervous.14.我偷偷地瞥了他們一眼，仍然感到非常緊張。15.Theyorganizedthiseventtoraisefundsandawarenessfortheabandoneddogs.15.他們組織了這次活動，為被遺棄的狗籌集資金和提高認識。16.Overwhelmedbyamixtureofconfusionandworry,Iwaitedforthefilmtostart.16.困惑和擔憂交織在一起，我等待著電影的開始。17.Takingadeepbreath,Imanagedtofindanemptyseatasfarawayfromthemaspossible.17.我深吸一口氣，設法找到了一個離他們盡可能遠的空座位。18.Wespenttherestoftheeveningsharingourloveforanimalsanddiscussingwaystohelp.18.我們花了剩下的時間分享我們對動物的愛，并討論如何提供幫助。19.HoldingmywallettightlyIseatedmyselfatthebackofthetheater,tryingtoremainunnoticed.19.我緊緊地握著錢包，坐在劇院后面，盡量不被人注意。滿分語料五、形容詞/副詞開頭20.Surprisedandamazed,Inoticedthatallthebikerswereallinanorderlymanner.20.我驚訝地發現，所有的騎手都很有序。21.Unabletocontainmyemotion,Iwastouchedtotears.21.我無法控制自己的情緒，感動得流下了眼淚。滿分語料六、特殊句式（倒裝+強調+省略）22.NosoonerhadIsettledinthanInoticedabikergentlypettingasmalldogbyhisside.22.我剛安頓下來，就注意到一個騎自行車的人輕輕地撫摸著他身邊的一只小狗。23.StillnervousasIwas,Itriedtocalmmyselfdown,waitingforthefilmtostart.23.盡管我仍然很緊張，但我還是努力讓自己冷靜下來，等待電影開始。24.LittledidIknowthattheywereheretosupportthelocalanimalshelters.24.我幾乎不知道他們來這里支持當地的動物收容所。25.NotonlydidIlearnnottojudgeapersonbytheirlooks,butalsoIencounteredbikersmakingtheworldbetterforanimals.25.我不僅學會了不以貌取人，還遇到了為動物創造更美好世界的摩托車手。滿分語料七、介詞短語位于句首26.Despitetheirtoughappearance,theyweren’tasdangerousastheylooked.26.盡管他們外表強硬，但并不像看上去那么危險。27.Atthesightofscenes,mypreviouspanicgavewaytorespect.27.看到這些場景，我之前的恐慌讓位于尊重。28.Insteadofbeingscary,theywereworkingtomaketheworldabetterplaceforthehelplessanimals.28.他們非但沒有表現出恐懼，反而致力于讓世界變得更適合無助的動物。滿分語料八、環境描寫29.Thelightdimmingdown,Ihadnochoicebuttowatchthefilmwithafrightenedheart.29.燈光變暗了，我別無選擇，只能帶著一顆害怕的心看電影。30.Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andimpolitestaresmademyheartpoundevenfaster.30.皮夾克、沉重的靴子和無禮的眼神讓我心跳得更快。滿分語料九、主從復合句31.IfeltashamedofmyinitialfearandwastrulygratefulthatIhaddecidedtocome.31.我為最初的恐懼感到羞愧，并對自己決定來感到非常感激。32.Ihesitatedforamomentatthedoor,unsurewhetherIshouldstayorleave.32.我在門口猶豫了一會兒，不確定是留下還是離開。33.Bythetimethecreditsrolled,myperceptionofthesemenhadshiftedentirely.33.當學分滾動時，我對這些人的看法已經完全改變了。34.Themomenttheyapproached,Igotalmostchoked,hardtobreath.34.他們走近的那一刻，我幾乎喘不過氣來。滿分語料十、主題升華句35.ItwasnotuntilthenthatIreallyunderstood“don’tjudgeabookbyitscover”.35.直到那時，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”。36.AsenseofreliefwashedovermeasIrealizedthatthesebikerswerethereforanoblecause.36.當我意識到這些騎自行車的人是為了崇高的事業而來時，一種解脫感涌上心頭。37.IwastouchedbytheirloveforanimalsandgladthatIhadn'tletmyfearstopmefromcoming.37.他們對動物的熱愛讓我感動，我很高興我沒有讓恐懼阻止我來。38.AsIwalkedoutofthetheater,Ilookedbackatthebikerswithnewfoundrespectandadmiration.38.當我走出劇院時，我帶著新的尊重和欽佩回頭看了看那些騎自行車的人。39.ItwasthroughthisbraveadventurethatIgotacquaintedwiththeseenthusiasticanimalrescuers.39.正是通過這次勇敢的冒險，我結識了這些熱情的動物救援人員。40.Irealizedthatcourageisnotonlyaboutfacingdangerbutalsoaboutseekingthegoodnessinothers.40.我意識到，勇氣不僅意味著面對危險，還意味著尋求他人的善良。【讀后續寫真題好題調研】1．（24-25高三下·山東·開學考試）犬吠傳希望，忠誠救主歸閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。GrgaBrkieneverexpectedthatamountain-climbingtripwouldputhiminsuchadesperatesituation.ThatSunday,whileclimbingthehighestpeakoftheVelebitmountainrange,whichwasabout5,800feetabovecoastline,heaccidentallyslippedandfellnearly500feetdownasnowyslope(斜坡).Thefallcausedhislegtobeseverelybrokenandhecouldn’tmoveatall.Hewasfilledwithfear,knowingclearlythatifnoonecametorescuehim,hemightdieofthefreezingtemperatureinthissnowyplace.Fortunately,twonearbyhikersspottedBrkeandhiseight-month-oldAlaskanmalamute(阿拉斯加犬),North,atthebottomoftheslope.However,theycouldn’treachthemsafely.Afterabriefdiscussion,theyknewtheyhadnochoicebuttorushoffinsearchofprofessionalrescuers.Beforetheyleft,theydroppedsomenecessarysuppliestothebottomoftheslopesothatBrkiccouldkeephisstrengthandenergy.Inspiteofthat,Brkiccouldn’thelpbeingshivering(顫抖)inthesnowwiththetemperaturegettinglowerandlower.Atthiscriticalmoment,North,sensingitsmaster’sgreatdanger,immediatelysprangintoaction.ItcircledaroundBrkicafewtimes,asifassessingthebestwaytohelp.Then,withagentleyetdeterminedmotion,itslowlyandcarefullylaiditselfoverBrkie’sbody,makingsuretocoverasmuchofhimaspossible.AsanAlaskanmalamute,Northarenaturallyresistanttocold,whosewaterproofdoublecoatscankeepitwarmevenintemperaturesaslowas-20°F.Nowitwaslikeawarmlittlesun,tightlyguardingBrkie.Northremainedperfectlystill,andwasalerttoanysignsofapproachinghelporpotentialdanger,asifithadtakenonthegreatresponsibilityofbeingBrkie’sguardianandprotectinghismasterfromanypossibledanger.注意：1.續寫詞數應為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。BeforeBrkiclostconsciousness(意識),heheardNorthbarkingloudly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,therescuersmanagedtosaveandrushBrkietothehospitalwithNorth.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】BeforeBrkiclostconsciousness,heheardNorthbarkingloudly.Thebarkingwasasignalofhopewhichechoedthroughthemountains,leadingtherescuerstofindthem.WhentheyfoundBrkic,theyweresurprisedtofindthatNorthwasstillwarminghismasterwithoutanymovementuntilitrealizedthattheywereheretohelp.Therescuersquicklylaunchedtherescueoperation.TheycarefullyfixedBrkic'sbrokenlegwithasplint,thengentlyliftedhimontoastretcher.Duringthewholeprocess,Northrefusedtobeseparatedfromitsownerandwatchedpatiently.Finally,thererescuersmanagedtosaveandrushBrkictothehospitalwithNorth.Inthehospital,BrkicunderwentanemergencyoperationwhileNorthwasunharmed.ThemomentBrkicregainedconsciousness,hethankedthosekindpeopleandsearchedforNorth,whowasalsolookingathimwiththosewarmandloyaleyes.BrkicreachedouthishandweaklytopetNorth,withhisvoicechokedwithemotionashewhisperedwordsofloveandthanks.Infaceoftheemergency,itwasloyaltyandkindnessthatcrossallboundariesandbroughthopeofsurvival.【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了GrgaBrkie帶著阿拉斯加犬North爬山時不小心摔倒，從雪坡上滑下來受傷，無法動彈，幸好附近的兩名徒步旅行者在斜坡底部發現了他們，但是他們無法到達那里，只能趕緊去尋找專業的救援人員，隨著氣溫越來越低，Brkic忍不住在雪地里打哆嗦，North覺察到主人的危險情況，溫柔地躺在Brkie身上為他保暖，并保持著警惕，保護他的主人免受任何可能的危險。【詳解】1.段落續寫：①由第一段首句內容“在Brkie失去知覺之前，他聽到North在大聲吠叫。”可知，第一段可描寫North的叫聲引導救援人員找到他們并展開救援。②由第二段首句內容“最后，救援人員設法救出了Brkic，并將其與North一起送往醫院?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Brkic經過手術后恢復知覺，感激那些善良的人和忠誠的North。2.續寫線索：救援人員發現Brkic和North——展開救援——送到醫院——恢復知覺——感激3.詞匯激活行為類①帶領：lead/direct②意識到：realize/beaware③尋找：searchfor/lookfor情緒類①驚訝：surprised/astonished②感謝：thanks/appreciation【點睛】【高分句型1】Thebarkingwasasignalofhopewhichechoedthroughthemountains,leadingtherescuerstofindthem.（運用了關系代詞which引導的定語從句）【高分句型2】ThemomentBrkicregainedconsciousness,hethankedthosekindpeopleandsearchedforNorth,whowasalsolookingathimwiththosewarmandloyaleyes.（運用了themoment引導的時間狀語從句和關系代詞who引導非限制性定語從句）【高分句型3】BrkicreachedouthishandweaklytopetNorth,withhisvoicechokedwithemotionashewhisperedwordsofloveandthanks.（運用了獨立主格結構以及從屬連詞as引導的時間狀語從句）2．（23-24高三上·浙江·開學考試）寶寶落水，狗狗上演生死救援閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。AFour-leggedGuardianAngelSnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach.Ihadjustcleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjob,andnowourfinancialsituationwasdepressing.Finally,Ihadputthehomeonthemarket.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane(大丹犬),Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.ThethoughtoflosingthedogandourbeautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.Deepindiscouragement,Isattypingupmyapplicationletters.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseemythirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentleBrigitte.ItseemedasifBrigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmaspackageshadarrived.

Irantothedoorbutnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.Thinkingofthese,Icouldn’thelpsighingandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn’ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,IrealizedForrestwasnowheretobeseen.

Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.注意：1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡相應位置作答。ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文1】ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Breathlessandastonished,IwatchedBrigittemusteringhercouragetoswimtowardsmyson,whowasstrugglingdesperatelyintheicywater.Almostmeanwhile,Isprangintoaction.Witheverypowerfulstroke,IgotclosetowhereForrestwasfloating.Fortunately,hewasabouttosinkwhenIgrabbedhimbythearmanddraggedhimtotheshallowendofthepool,withBrigittepaddlingalongside,concernobviousinherbigandintelligenteyes.ThemomentIgotmyboyout,ourbeloveddogbouncedaroundhim,constantlylickinghispalefaceasiftowarmhim.Voicetrembling,Icalled911andsoonwewererushedtothenearesthospital.Everysecondcounted!Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.Atthis,Iheavedasighofrelief.Onarrivinghome,ourdogBrigitteleapedhighuptogiveuswarmandwetkisses,wagginghertailcheerfully.Lookingdirectlyintohereyeswithgratitudeandabitofguilt,Iscoopedherupandheldherclosetomychest,unwillingtolethergoforasingleminute.ItwasthenthatIsuddenlybecameawarethatlifesometimescanbecruelandmiserable,buttherewasalwayssomeoneorsomethingguidingyou,protectingyou,andaccompanyingyouwithunconditionalloveandloyalty.Ourdogwasjustourguardianangel,shatteringmydespairaboutlosingourhomeandguidingusoutoftrouble.HowcouldIleaveher?【滿分范文2】ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.The