進階練14書信作文（滿分范文）專練（解析版）

學校:姓名：班級：考號：

一、其他應用文（共。分

1.（2023?上海?一模）假如你是明啟中學高三學生李華，你校學生會正在征集志愿者活動方案，請在以下

三項活動中選擇一項：

一、深入社區宣傳環保知識；

二、擔任“奉賢博物館”義務講解員；

三、去孤兒院為孩子們上興趣課。請你給學生會寫封郵件，內容須包括：

1.你的選擇及理由；

2.你準備如何做。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearSir/Madam,

Ourschoolwillholdavolunteeractivity,whichmaybechosenfromthefollowingthreeprogrammes:

publicizingknowledgeofenvironmentalprotectiontocommunities,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxian

Museumandconductinginterestinglessonstokidsintheorphanage.Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefor

theFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents.

TherearetworeasonswhyIchoosethesecondactivity.Tostartwith,ifsavaluableopportunityforstudents

tohaveabetterknowledgeoftheFengxianMuseum,duringwhichtheycanbroadentheirhorizons.Besides,it's

beneficialforstudentstoimprovetheircommunicationskillsespeciallyEnglishspeakingbecausetherearemany

foreignersvisitingit.

IfI'mluckyenoughtobechosenasoneguide,Iwillcherishthegoldenopportunityandmakefull

preparations,suchassearchingmaterialsontheInternetandaskingteachersforhelp.

Sincerely

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給校學生會寫封郵件在三個志愿者活動策劃中選擇某一項活

動，并闡述選擇的理由和要如何做。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

項目：programme一project

除止匕之夕卜：besides—moreover

珍惜：cherish^-treasure

尋求某人的幫助：asksbforhelp-seeksb5shelp

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents.

拓展句：Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents,fromwhich

studentscanlearnalot.

【高分句型11Tostartwith,ifsavaluableopportunityforstudentstohaveabetterknowledgeoftheFengxian

Museum,duringwhichtheycanbroadentheirhorizons.(運用了介詞+which引導的非限制性定語從句)

【高分句型2】IfI'mluckyenoughtobechosenasoneguide,Iwillcherishthegoldenopportunityandmakefull

preparations,suchassearchingmaterialsontheInternetandaskingteachersforhelp.(運用了if弓I導的條件狀

語從句)

2.(2023?上海閔行?統考二模)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設你是明啟中學的學生李華，你們學校將組織一次高三學生參觀大學的活動，學生可以從“專業及課程

介紹(MajorandCourseDescriptions)”;"參觀圖書館、實驗室(LibraryLaboratoryVisiting)^^;“隨班學

習體驗(OnSpotStudying)^^和“與教授面對面(DialoguewithProfessors)”四個活動中選取兩個作為主要

活動，特此向高三學生征求意見。請你寫一封郵件給活動組織者，內容須包括：

1.你最感興趣的兩個活動；

2.你對這兩個活動感興趣的理由。

【答案)Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iam

veryexcitedandhappy.WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsand

OnSpotStudying.

Firstofall,IamfondoftheactivityMajorandCourseDescriptions,whichcanhelpmehaveadeeper

understandingoftheuniversity'sprofessionalcoursesandclarifythedirectionformyfuturestudy.

Besides,IamdeeplyinterestedintheactivityOnSpotStudying.Intheactivity,Icantrulyexperiencethe

learningatmosphereoftheuniversity.Meanwhile,itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthe

studentsintheuniversitytakecourseseveryday,whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangetheway

thatIlearninthemiddleschool.

Allinall,theactivityofvisitingtheuniversityisofgreathelptoourfutureplanning.Iamlooking

forwardtothearrivalofthatday.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給活動組織者寫一封信，說明你對學校組織的高三學生參觀

大學的活動中感興趣的兩個活動以及對這兩個活動感興趣的理由

2

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

喜歡：befbndoJenjoy

高興的：happy—pleased一delighted

止匕夕卜：besides一whafsmore

機會：chance一opportunity

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamvery

excitedandhappy.

拓展句：Becauselhearthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,I

amveryexcitedandhappy.

【點睛】【高分句型1]WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsandOn

SpotStudying.（運用了what引導的主語從句）

【高分句型2】Meanwhile,itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthestudentsintheuniversity

takecourseseveryday,whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangethewaythatIlearninthemiddle

school.（運用了how與whether引導的賓語從句和which引導的非限制性定語從句以及that引導的定語從

句）

3.（2023?上海黃浦?統考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設你是海平中學高三學生李明，你所在的社區將在暑假開設面向小學生的日間托管服務，現招募社區高

中生志愿者，要求每一位志愿者能根據自己的特長開設一門微課程。請寫一封應聘信（信中請不要出現真實

的個人信息），信的內容須包括：

1）簡單的自我介紹；

2）你準備開設的微課程的名稱和主要內容；

3）你開設這門微課程的理由。

【答案】DearSir/Madam,

IamLiMingfromClass1,Senior3ofHaipingMiddleSchool.Tmwritingtoapplyforthepositiontohelp

theprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity.

Iamverygoodatmathematics,andIoftenmakesomemicro-coursesforprimaryschoolstudents.Iplanto

setupamicro-course,thenameofwhichis'"Mathematicsinourdailylife,5.Thiscoursemainlyintroduceshowto

usemathineverydaylifesothatprimaryschoolstudentscanhaveadeeperunderstandingoftheimportanceof

mathematicsthroughexamples.

Thereasonwhythismicro-courseissetupisthatmanystudentsarenotinterestedinlearningmathematics.

Whafsmore,mathematicsisrarelyusedinreallife,somanypeoplethinkthatlearningmathematicsis

meaningless.Ihopethiscoursecanhelpmoreprimaryschoolstudents,andIalsohopetogetthisopportunityto

improvemyself.

Yours,

LiMing

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一封應聘信應聘社區高中生志愿者，內容包括簡單的自我

介紹，準備開設的微課程的名稱和主要內容以及開設該課程的理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

計戈I：plan—intend

而且：whafsmore一moreover

機會：opportunity一chance

提高：improve一promote

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositiontohelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity.

拓展句：I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositionwhereIcanhelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity,

【點睛】【高分句型1】Iplantosetupamicro-course,thenameofwhichis"'Mathematicsinourdaily（運

用了“介詞+which”引導的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型21Thereasonwhythismicro-courseissetupisthatmanystudentsarenotinterestedinlearning

mathematics.（運用了why引導的定語從句和that引導的表語從句）

4.（2023?上海長寧?統考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設你是明啟中學的高三學生李華。學校將開設講座“上海老洋房”，現就講座內容征求學生的意見。請給

負責的王老師寫封郵件，具體提出你的建議。內容須包括：

1）你對講座內容的具體建議；

2）簡述你的理由。

【答案】DearMr./Ms.Wang,

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Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents5adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheoldwestern-style

housesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.Hence,Iamwritingtosharemyviews.

First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeep

impressionoftheirappearance.Besides,anotheraspectshouldbeincludedintothelectureistheprofoundculture

behindthesehistoricalbuildings.Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.Lastbutnotleast,

howaboutofferingtheaudiencesomeusefultipsastohowtopreservethesepreciousbuildings?Onlyby

knowingthatcanweprotectthemefficiently.

Asabigfanoftheseoldbuildings,Isincerelyhopeyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Respectfullyyours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生以學生李華的身份為學校即將舉辦的“上海老洋房”講座提供

建議，提出講座應該包含什么內容，并指明提出這些建議的理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

關于：about一concerning

深厚的：deep-profdund

保護：protect—preserve

考慮：consider—>takesth.intoconsideration

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeep

impressionoftheirappearance.

拓展句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses,whichundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeep

impressionoftheirappearance.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.（運用了itis+被強調部分

+that+其他成分的強調句句型）

[高分句型2]Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents9adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheold

western-stylehousesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.（運用了that引導的表語從句）

5.（2023?上海青浦?統考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設你是浦潤中學高三學生李青。你的學校即將舉辦“回眸五十年”紀念活動，你在學生會參與相關的準備

工作，并負責向來賓介紹學校的變化，等等。請就此給你的英國好友Alan寫封郵件交流你的想法。你的

郵件必須包括：

1.介紹紀念活動的主要內容；

2.描述你所見聞的學校變化；

3.簡述你對學校發展的期許。

（注：文中不得出現真實的姓名及學校名稱。）

【答案】DearAlan,

Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears^^attheendofthis

month.Iwillparticipateintherelevantpreparationsasamemberofthestudentunionandberesponsiblefor

introducingthechangesintheschooltoguests.Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.

Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,leadinggueststo

visittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.Asisknown,

ourschoolhasundergonetremendouschangesinthepast50years.State-of-the-artteachingequipmentandeven

artificialintelligencedevicestoassistinteachinghavebeenequippedinourschool.Besides,therearevarious

culturalclubsandcommunitiestoenrichourleisurelife.

Hopemyschoolwillbecomebetterandbetter!

Yours,

LiQing

【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給你的英國好友Alan寫封郵件介紹你學校即將舉辦“回眸五

十年”紀念活動，內容包括紀念活動的主要內容、你所見聞的學校變化和對學校發展的期許。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參力口：participatein一joinin

止匕夕卜：besides—what飛more

希望：hope一wish

幫助：assist—'help

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears^^attheendofthis

month.

拓展句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventwhichiscalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears“atthe

endofthismonth.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,

leadinggueststovisittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.

（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2】Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.（運用了because引導的原因

狀語）

6.（2023春?上海?高三上海市大同中學校考階段練習）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150

6

wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是啟明中學的高三學生古月胡，你校計劃引入一款人工智能批改系統來輔助教師批改作業與部分試

卷。有些同學表示支持，但也有部分同學表示了擔憂。因此學校委托學生會征詢大家對人工智能批改系統

的意見。

給學生會寫一封郵件，內容須包括：

1）你對人工智能批改系統的看法；2）你的理由。

【答案1DearPresidentoftheStudentUnion,

Iamfortunatetolearnthatwiththeprogressofscienceandtechnology,ourschoolplanstointroducean

artificialintelligencegradingsystemtoassistteachersingradinghomeworkandsometestpapers.Somestudents

supportit,whileothersopposeit.

Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingto

achievingeducationalfairness.Moreover,itisnotonlytimelyandcost-effective,butcanalsoreceivecontinuous

andpositivefeedback,whichisofgreathelptoforeignlanguagelearners.Whatisthemostimportantforusis

thatthegradingsystemcanforceustopromoteourabilitytoimprovestandardizedanswers.

Isincerelyhopethatthisartificialintelligencegradingsystemcanbeappliedtoourschoolassoonas

possible.

Yours,

GuYuehu

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給學生會寫一封郵件表達對人工智能批改系統的看法。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

進步：progress—improvement

弓I入：introduce—bringin

幫助：assist—'help

支持：support一areinfavorof

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingto

achievingeducationalfairness.

拓展句：Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,which

contributestoachievingeducationalfairness.

【點睛】【高分句型1jFrommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,

contributingtoachievingeducationalfairness.（運用了現在分詞短語contributingto充當結果狀語）

【高分句型2】Whatisthemostimportantforusisthatthegradingsystemcanforceustopromoteourabilityto

improvestandardizedanswers.（運用了What引導的主語從句和that引導的表語從句）

7.（2023?上海浦東新?統考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設你是明啟中學的高三學生李華，學校擬舉辦“漢語文化周”活動，現在向全校師生征集活動策劃案。請

給學生會寫一封郵件表達你的想法。你的郵件須包括以下內容：

1）介紹具體活動方案；

2）說明理由。

【答案】DearStudentUnion,

I'mwritingtosharemyideafortheupcoming"ChineseCultureWeek“eventatMingqiHighSchool.I

proposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieshighlightingtraditionalChineseartsandculture.

Firstly,wecouldorganizeacalligraphyworkshopwherestudentscanlearnhowtowriteChinesecharacters

usingbrushandink.Thiswouldnotonlygivestudentsachancetolearnanewskill,butalsotoappreciatethe

beautyandmeaningbehindChinesecharacters.Secondly,wecouldholdascreeningofaniconicChinesemovie

orTVshow.Suchas"MonkeyKing"or"DreamoftheRedChamber”.Thiswouldprovidestudentswitha

glimpseintoChinesehistoryandculture,andfostercross-culturalunderstanding.Finally,wecouldinviteaguest

speakertotalkabouttraditionalChinesemedicine,suchasacupunctureorherbalremedies.Thiswouldallow

studentstolearnaboutalternativeapproachestohealthcareandbroadentheirperspectivesonhealthandwellness.

Ibelievethathostingtheseactivitiesduring“ChineseCultureWeek“wouldbebeneficialforseveralreasons.

Firstly,itwouldhelppromoteculturaldiversityandunderstandingamongourstudentbody.Secondly,itwould

providestudentswithanopportunitytolearnaboutChinesecultureandhistory,whichisimportantintoday's

globalizedworld.Lastly,itwouldbeafunandengagingwaytocelebrateourschool'scommitmenttopromoting

culturalexchangeandeducation.

Thankyouforconsideringmyproposal.Ilookforwardtohearingyourthoughtsonthismatter.[241words]

Sincerely,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文寫作中的活動策劃案。要求考生向學生會寫一封郵件，表達自己對于學

校擬舉辦的“漢語文化周”活動所設想的活動策劃案。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：firstly一firstofall

機會：chance一opportunity

最后：finally—lastly/lastbutnotleast

提高、促進：promoteenhance/improve

8

考慮：consider一thinkabout

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieshighlightingtraditionalChineseartsandculture.

拓展句：IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieswhichwillhighlighttraditionalChineseartsandculture.

【點睛】【高分句型11Firstly,wecouldorganizeacalligraphyworkshopwherestudentscanlearnhowtowrite

Chinesecharactersusingbrushandink.（運用了where弓|導定語從句）

【高分句型2]Secondly,itwouldprovidestudentswithanopportunitytolearnaboutChinesecultureandhistory,

whichisimportantintoday?sglobalizedworld.（運用了which引導定語從句）

8.（2023?上海?盧灣高級中學校考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingto

theinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

76.每年4月22日是世界地球日（WorldEarthDay）。為積極響應世界地球日活動，你校學生會開展了宣傳

海報的評比活動?，F已初評得出如下的前三名海報，并在全校范圍評選最佳海報。寫封郵件給你校學生會，

內容須包括：

你選出的最佳海報及其簡介；

你的理由。

【答案】Dearstudentunion,

Ilikethesecondpicture.Fromthispicture,wecanknowthatoriginally,theearthhasaclearbrook,green

forest,andthebluesky.Ancienttimes,howmanypoetspraisingtheearthbeautifulenvironment!Butnowthe

earthisinbadcondition.Forexample,insomeplaces,theairandwaterpollutionissoseriousthatitcausesmany

deaths.Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecauseofthedestructionoftheirhabitats.

Ithinkthispictureisareminderofustoprotectourearth.Ihopewehumanbeingscanrealizetheproblem.

Weshoulddosomethinggoodfortheearth,suchascleaningupbeachesandwater,pickinguprubbish,andgive

speechestocallonmorepeopletotakeaction.TodayisWorldEarthDay,andmillionsofpeoplehavecontributed

toprotectingtheenvironment.Butcanwesavetheearthonlybyoneday'swork?Thefutureofourplanet

dependsonourefforts.WhatweshoulddoistomakeeverydayEarthDay.Onlybytakinggoodcareofitevery

daycanwehopetoliveinharmonywithnature.Therefore,Ihopethispicturecanbethebestone.

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

干凈的：clear一cleam

同時：Atthesametime—Meanwhile

照顧：takegoodcareoJlookafter

號召：callon—callupon

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecauseofthedestructionoftheirhabitats.

拓展句：Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecausetheirhabitatsaredestroyed.

【點睛】【高分句型1]wecanknowthatoriginally,theearthhasaclearbrook,greenforest,thebluesky.（運用

了that連接的賓語從句）

【高分句型2】Weshoulddosomethinggoodfortheearth,suchascleaningupbeachesandwater,pickingup

rubbish,andgivespeechestocallonmorepeopletotakeaction.（運用了動名詞短語并列作賓語）

9.（2023?上海徐匯?統考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是明啟中學的李平。你的朋友Jenny來信說：隨著大學申請和期末考試的臨近，她十分忙碌，經常

熬夜，沒有時間參加喜歡的社團活動和社交生活，她感到難以平衡學業、課外活動和社會生活。請你寫封

郵件給她，內容包括：

1.分析她面臨的主要問題；

2.提出相應的建議和理由。

【答案】DearJenny,

WordscannotexpresshowsorryIamtohearthatyoucan'tbalanceamongacademic,extra-curricular

activitiesandsociallifebecauseyoucannotadapttothebusyschoollife,likeworryingaboutschoolwork,and

havingnotimetorelax.Don'tworry.Iwillofferyousometips.

Firstofall,Irecommendthatyouhaveabalanceddiet,whichcangiveyoumoreenergytostudyharderthan

before.Inaddition,itwouldbeofgreatbenefitifyoutakeanactivepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities.That

way,youcanmakenewfriends,whichcouldmakestressoffyourshoulder.Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthatyou

turntoyourteachersfbrhelpsinceteachers9encouragementandstudymethodwillalwaysliftyouup.

Isincerelyhopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionspracticalandwishyougetridofthosetroublesassoonas

possible.

Yours,

LiPing

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【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：tip^-advice/suggestion

表達：express^convey

能夠：can—ableto/becapableof

止匕夕卜：inaddition—besides

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Don'tworry.Iwillofferyousometips.

拓展句：Don'tworrybecauseIwillofferyousometips.

【點睛】[高分句型1]WordscannotexpresshowsorryIamtohearthatyoucan'tbalanceamongacademic,

extra-curricularactivitiesandsociallifebecauseyoucannotadapttothebusyschoollife,likeworryingabout

schoolwork,andhavingnotimetorelax.（運用了that引導賓語從句和because引導原因狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthatyouturntoyourteachersforhelpsinceteachers9encouragementand

studymethodwillalwaysliftyouup.（運用了that引導賓語從句和since引導原因狀語從句）

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nofewerthan120wordsaccordingtothe