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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Onewarm,sunnymorning,Marshajumpedrightoutofbed.Todaywasthefirstdayofsummervacationandalsothelastdayshe’dbespendingwithTanya,herverybestfriend.Tanyawasgoingtocampinanotherstate.She’dbegoneallsummer.MarshaandTanyaalwaysspenttheirsummerstogether.Thisonewouldbenofunwithouther!Marsha’smomcamein.“What’sthematter,Rabbit?”shesaid.“ImissTanyaalready.Isn’tthatsilly?”Marshasaid.“No,”hermothersaidsoftly.“Missingabestfriendisn’tsillyatall.”Marsha’seyeswerewet.“Iknowhowyoufeel.”“Youdo?”askedMarsha.Marsha’smomnodded.“IhadabestfriendwhenIwasyourage.Andshewentawaytocamp,too.”“Ifeltprettysad,”Marsha’smomsaid.“Iwantedmybestfriendtothinkaboutme.SoIgavehersomething.”“What?”askedMarsha.“Igavehermybestnecklace,”hermomsaid.“Youdid?”askedMarsha.“Well,Iwantedhertohaveit,”Marsha’smomsaid,“MaybeyoucouldgiveTanyaoneofyourfavoritethingstotaketocamp.Howaboutadoll?Thenshewillneverforgetthatyouareherbestfriend.”Marshawipedhereyes.“Mom,that’sagreatidea!”shesaid.“AreyougoingtogiveTanyayourGlendaGlitterdoll?”saidMarsha’smom.“Yes,Mom,”shesaid.“ThisistheoneIwanthertohave.ButnowI’mgoingtogetGlendaallniceandclean.”Soon,GlendaGlitterlookedjustlikenew.Nextitwastimetodressthedoll.Marsharantoherroom.Inaflashshewasback.Herhandswerefullofdoll’sdresses.“ThisistheoneIlikebest,”shesaid.“AndIknowTanyalikesitbest,too.”“Let’ssee.IthinkIcanfixthislittlerip(口子).”Marsha’smomwasgoodatfixingthings.Thedolldresssoonlookedgoodasnew.“Look,Mom!”shesaid.“Glendalooksbeautiful.”“Youknow,Kitten,”saidMarsha’smom,“Tanyawilllikethispresentsomuch.”“Tanyawillbeleavingsoon,”shesaid.“Webetterhurryup.”MarshaandhermomwalkedovertoTanya’shouse.Theyrangthebell.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Marshahidthedollbehindherback.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________續寫Marsha與Tanya的故事續寫要點第一段:重點描寫Marsha將藏在背后的娃娃送出時的細節,包括她的表情、動作、心理活動,以及Tanya看到禮物瞬間的反應,如驚訝、感動等。第二段:著重刻畫兩人交換禮物后的互動,如交流對禮物的感受,表達對彼此的不舍,以及對未來相聚的期待等。情感線起初,Marsha因好友Tanya即將遠行而滿心不舍,在送禮物時緊張又忐忑,擔心Tanya不喜歡。Tanya收到禮物后,驚喜與感動溢于言表,Marsha的緊張瞬間消散。當Tanya回贈禮物時,Marsha心中滿是溫暖,兩人都為這份真摯的友誼動容,從不舍到堅定對友誼長存的信念。故事線Marsha帶著藏在背后的娃娃來到Tanya家,準備送出禮物。Tanya開門見到Marsha十分興奮,Marsha緊張地拿出娃娃。Tanya看到娃娃后,驚喜不已,對Marsha表示感謝并緊緊擁抱娃娃。Tanya回贈Marsha一個裝有自制友誼手鏈的小盒子。Marsha打開盒子看到手鏈,立刻戴上,兩人緊緊相擁。盡管即將分離,她們堅信友誼會在這個夏天及未來持續深厚。主旨升華句Truefriendshiptranscendsdistance,justlikethebondbetweenMarshaandTanyathatremainsunbreakabledespitethesummerapart.Theirexchangeofgiftssymbolizestheeternalconnectionoftheirhearts,provingthatfriendshipisapreciousgiftthatlastsforever.Theloveandcaretheyshowthroughthesesimplepresentsremindusthattruefriendsarealwaysthere,inspirit,evenwhenphysicallyseparated.AsMarshaandTanyapartwaysforthesummer,theirfriendship,strengthenedbythisgift-givingmoment,becomesabeaconofhope,showingthatdistanceisnoobstacletoalastingfriendship.Thisheart-warmingexchangebetweenMarshaandTanyaisatestamenttothepoweroffriendship,whichcanwithstandthetestoftimeanddistance,bringingwarmthandcomforttotheirhearts.寫作示范示范一Marshahidthedollbehindherback.AsTanyaswungthedooropen,herfacebrightenedwithjoy.“Marsha!You’rehere!”shecheered.Marsha,withaslightlytremblingvoice,said,“Tanya,Ihaveapresentforyou.”ShecarefullypulledoutGlendaGlitter.“Thisismydearestdoll.Ihopeitcankeepyoucompanyatcampandmakeyouthinkofme.”Tanya’seyeswidenedinastonishment,andherlipscurvedintoabigsmile.“Marsha,it’samazing!Iloveitsomuch!”TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.Afterexpressinghergratitude,TanyahandedMarshaasmall,delicatelywrappedbox.“Foryou,Marsha.It’saphotoalbumfilledwithourmemories.Soyouwon’tforgetallthefunwehad.”Marshaopenedit,hereyesmistingupasshesawtheirpictures.“Tanya,thisisperfect.I’llcherishitalways.”Theyembracedtightly,knowingthatthoughmileswouldseparatethem,theirfriendship,likethememoriesinthealbum,wouldbeforeverengravedintheirhearts.示范二Marshahidthedollbehindherback.WhenTanyaopenedthedoor,Marshacouldbarelycontainheremotions.“Tanya,”shebegan,hervoicesoft,“Ibroughtyousomething.”Slowly,sherevealedGlendaGlitter.“Thisdollmeanstheworldtome,andIwantyoutohaveitforthesummer.”Tanyawasspeechlessforamoment,thensheexclaimed,“Marsha,thisisthemostwonderfulgiftever!Thankyou!”Shehuggedthedollclose,asifitwereaprecioustreasure.TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.Then,TanyashylypresentedMarshawithahand-paintedwoodenbox.“Imadethisforyou.InsidearelittlenoteswithallthethingsIloveaboutyou.”Marshaopenedthebox,herfingersgentlytouchingthenotes.“Tanya,thisissosweet.I’llreadthemwheneverImissyou.”Theystoodthere,holdingtheirgifts,realizingthatthesetokensweremorethanjustitems;theyweresymbolsoftheirunbreakablefriendshipthatwouldbridgethegapduringtheirtimeapart.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Marshahidthedollbehindherback.Marshaandhermomwentinside.TheysaidhellotoTanyaandhermom.“We’restillpacking,”Tanya’smomsaid.MarshawentovertoTanya.“Ihavesomethingforyou,”saidMarsha.“Wait!”Tanyasaid.“Ihavesomethingforyou,too.”Sheturnedandranoutoftheroom.Tanyawasbackinaflash.Shewasholdingsomethingbehindherback.Marshasti
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