高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)從貧困社區(qū)走出的短跑傳奇：雪莉?安的逆襲人生1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Notsolongago,mostpeopledidn’tknowwhoShellyAnnFrancisPrycewasgoingtobecome.Shewasjustanaveragehighschoolathlete.TherewaseveryindicationthatshewasjustanotherAmericanteenagerwithoutmuchofafuture.However,onepersonwantstochangethis.StephenFrancisobservedtheneighteen-year-oldShellyAnnatatrackmeetandwasconvincedthathehadseenthebeginningoftruegreatness.Hertimeswerenotexactlyimpressive,butevenso,hesensedtherewassomethingtryingtogetout.HedecidedtoofferShelly-Annaplaceinhisverystricttrainingseasons.Theircooperationquicklyproducedresults,andafewyearslateratJamaica’sOlympicgamesinearly2008,ShellyAnn,whoatthattimeonlyrankednumber70intheworld,beatJamaica’sunchallengedqueenofthesprint(短跑).4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Wheredidshecomefrom?”askedanastonishedsprintingworld,beforeconcludingthatshemustbeoneofthoseone-hitwondersthatspringupfromtimetotime,onlytodisappearagainwithoutsigns.ButShelly-Annwastoprovethatshewasanythingbutaone-hitwonder.AttheBeijingOlympicshesweptawayanydoubtsaboutherabilitytoperformconsistentlybybecomingthefirstJamaicanwomanevertowinthe100metersOlympicgold.ShellyAnnisalittlewomanwithabigsmile.Herjourneytobecomingthefastestwomanonearthhasbeenanythingbutsmoothandeffortless.ShegrewupinoneofJamaica’stoughestinner-citycommunitiesknownasWaterhouse,oneofthepoorestcommunitiesinJamaica.Sometimesherfamilydidn’thaveenoughtoeat.Sheranattheschoolchampionshipsbarefootedbecauseshecouldn’taffordshoes.HermotherMaximehadbeenanathleteherselfasayounggirlbut,likesomanyothergirlsinWaterhouse,hadtostopaftershehadherfirstbaby.Maxime’searlyentryintotheadultworldwithitsresponsibilitiesgaveherthedeterminationtoensurethatherkidswouldnotendupinWaterhouse’sroundaboutofpoverty.OneofthefirstthingsMaximeusedtodowithShelly-Annwastakinghertothetrack,andshewasreadytosacrifice(犧牲)everything.5段首句Paragraph1：Itdidn’ttakelongforShellyAnntomeethermother’sexpectations.Paragraph2:ButShellyAnn’svictorywasfargreaterthanthat.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8曾經(jīng)，雪莉?安只是一名普通的高中運(yùn)動(dòng)員，看似和眾多前途渺茫的美國(guó)青少年一樣。但斯蒂芬?弗朗西斯在一場(chǎng)田徑比賽中發(fā)現(xiàn)了18歲的她，堅(jiān)信她潛力非凡，于是邀請(qǐng)她加入嚴(yán)格的訓(xùn)練。他們的合作成果顯著，幾年后在2008年初的牙買(mǎi)加奧運(yùn)會(huì)上，當(dāng)時(shí)世界排名僅70的雪莉?安戰(zhàn)勝了牙買(mǎi)加短跑界無(wú)可爭(zhēng)議的女王。人們起初認(rèn)為她只是曇花一現(xiàn)，但在北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)上，她奪得女子100米奧運(yùn)金牌，成為牙買(mǎi)加首位獲此殊榮的女性，徹底打消了人們的疑慮。雪莉?安成長(zhǎng)于牙買(mǎi)加最貧困的社區(qū)之一“水屋”，家境貧寒，有時(shí)連飯都吃不飽，甚至在學(xué)校錦標(biāo)賽上因買(mǎi)不起鞋而赤腳參賽。她的母親馬克西姆年輕時(shí)也是運(yùn)動(dòng)員，因家庭責(zé)任放棄了運(yùn)動(dòng)生涯，她決心不讓孩子重蹈貧困的覆轍，很早就帶雪莉?安去田徑場(chǎng)訓(xùn)練，并愿意為此犧牲一切。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph1：Itdidn’ttakelongforShellyAnntomeethermother’sexpectations.沒(méi)過(guò)多久，雪莉?安就不負(fù)母親的期望。在后續(xù)的各類(lèi)國(guó)際賽事中，她屢屢斬獲佳績(jī)，成為了賽場(chǎng)上的常勝將軍。每一次站在起跑線(xiàn)上，她都能感受到母親的支持和自己肩負(fù)的使命。她憑借著頑強(qiáng)的毅力和不懈的努力，不斷突破自己的極限，刷新著一個(gè)又一個(gè)記錄。她的名字在世界田徑界越來(lái)越響亮，成為了無(wú)數(shù)人心中的偶像。她用自己的成功改變了家庭的命運(yùn)，讓家人過(guò)上了富足的生活。她為母親在“水屋”社區(qū)購(gòu)置了寬敞舒適的房子，讓母親不用再為生活發(fā)愁。同時(shí)，她還積極投身于慈善事業(yè)，為“水屋”的孩子們修建了新的體育設(shè)施，鼓勵(lì)他們勇敢追求自己的夢(mèng)想，不要被貧困束縛。她經(jīng)常回到社區(qū)，親自指導(dǎo)孩子們訓(xùn)練，分享自己的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷，激勵(lì)他們努力奮斗。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph2:ButShellyAnn’svictorywasfargreaterthanthat.但雪莉?安的勝利遠(yuǎn)不止于此。她的成功成為了整個(gè)牙買(mǎi)加的驕傲，為國(guó)家?guī)?lái)了巨大的榮譽(yù)。她的故事激勵(lì)著無(wú)數(shù)牙買(mǎi)加人，尤其是那些生活在貧困社區(qū)的孩子們，讓他們相信只要有夢(mèng)想，并為之努力奮斗，就一定能夠改變自己的命運(yùn)。在她的影響下，牙買(mǎi)加掀起了一股運(yùn)動(dòng)熱潮，越來(lái)越多的孩子投身到田徑運(yùn)動(dòng)中，牙買(mǎi)加的田徑事業(yè)也因此得到了蓬勃發(fā)展。雪莉?安還成為了國(guó)際體育界的一面旗幟，她用自己的行動(dòng)詮釋了堅(jiān)持、拼搏和永不放棄的體育精神。她的成功不僅僅是個(gè)人的勝利，更是整個(gè)牙買(mǎi)加民族的勝利，她的故事將永遠(yuǎn)被銘記在人們心中，激勵(lì)著一代又一代的人奮勇前行。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Itdidn’ttakelongforShellyAnntomeethermother’sexpectations.Invarioussubsequentinternationalcompetitions,shefrequentlyachievedexcellentresultsandbecameafrequentwinneronthefield.Everytimeshestoodatthestartingline,shecouldfeelhermother'ssupportandthemissionshecarried.Withhertenaciousperseveranceandunremittingefforts,sheconstantlybrokethroughherownlimitsandrefreshedonerecordafteranother.Hernamebecamemoreandmorefamousintheworldoftrackandfieldandshebecameanidolintheheartsofcountlesspeople.Shechangedthefateofherfamilywithhersuccessandenabledherfamilytoliveaprosperouslife.SheboughtaspaciousandcomfortablehouseforhermotherintheWaterhousecommunitysothathermothernolongerhadtoworryaboutlife.Atthesametime,sheactivelyengagedincharitywork.ShebuiltnewsportsfacilitiesforthechildreninWaterhouse,encouragedthemtobravelypursuetheirdreamsandnotbeboundbypoverty.Sheoftenreturnedtothecommunitytopersonallyguidethechildrenintrainingandshareherowngrowthexperiencestoinspirethemtostrivehard.13范文呈現(xiàn)ButShellyAnn’svictorywasfargreaterthanthat.HersuccessbecametheprideoftheentireJamaicaandbroughtgreathonortothecountry.HerstoryinspiredcountlessJamaicans,especiallythechildrenlivinginpoorcommunities,makingthembelievethataslongastheyhavedreamsandworkhardforthem,theywilldefinitelybeabletochangetheirowndestinies.Underherinfluence,asportscrazesweptthroughJamaica.Moreandmorechildrendevotedthemselvestotrackandfieldsports,andJamaica'strackandfieldcausethusdevelopedvigorously.ShellyAnnalsobecameaflagintheinternationalsportscommunity.Sheusedheractionstointerpretthesportsspiritofperseverance,hardworkandnevergivingup.HersuccesswasnotjustapersonalvictorybutalsoavictoryfortheentireJamaicannation.Herstorywillalwaysberememberedinpeople'sheartsandinspiregenerationsofpeopletomoveforwardbravely.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Itdidn’ttakelongforShellyAnntomeethermother’sexpectations.Inaplethoraofsubsequentinternationalcompetitions,sheconsistentlyemergedvictorious,establishingherselfasadominantforceontheathleticstage.Eachtimeshetookherpositionatthestartingline,shecouldvividlyfeelhermother'sunwaveringsupportandtheweightofthemissionshecarriedonhershoulders.Drivenbyherindomitableperseveranceandceaselessefforts,sherelentlesslypushedtheboundariesofherowncapabilities,shatteringrecordsoneafteranother.Hernamerapidlygainedinternationalacclaimintheworldoftrackandfield,transformingherintoanidolforcountlessindividuals.Withherhard-wonsuccess,shenotonlyupliftedherfamilyoutofpovertybutalsoprovidedthemwithalifeofcomfortandprosperity.ShepurchasedaspaciousandcozyhouseforhermotherintheWaterhousecommunity,relievinghermotherofanyfinancialworries.Moreover,sheactivelydedicatedherselftocharitableendeavors.ShespearheadedtheconstructionofnewsportsfacilitiesinWaterhouse,inspiringthelocalchildrentopursuetheirdreamsfearlessly,undeterredbytheconstraintsofpoverty.Regularly,shewouldreturntothecommunity,personallymentoringtheyoungathletes,sharingherownjourneyofgrowthandmotivatingthemtostriveforexcellence.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)ButShellyAnn’svictorywasfargreaterthanthat.HertriumphbecameasourceofimmensepridefortheentirenationofJamaica,bringingunparalleledhonortoherhomeland.HerstoryservedasapowerfulinspirationforcountlessJamaicans,particularlythechildrengrowingupinimpoverishedcommunities.Itinstilledinthemthebeliefthatwithunwaveringdeterminationandhardwork,theycoulddefytheoddsandrewritetheirowndestinies.Inthewakeofhersucces