試卷第=page2020頁，共=sectionpages4040頁專題10英語作文編者按：上海十六區二模完整齊全，深度解析，排版整齊。（一）（2024年寶山區二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李華，是希望中學的一名學生。現在你們班級英語課上的互動形式和內容都越來越豐富了，但有一個現象需要注意，就是當老師提出的問題學生不能及時回答時，有時候老師會代替學生回答，有時候也會出現較長時間的冷場。針對這種情況，請你給老師寫一封郵件，提出你的意見和建議。你的文章必須包括：簡單描述你覺得能改變這種現象方法；闡述你所提建議的理由。（文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTeacher,IamLiHua,astudentfromouresteemedschool.Recently,IhavenoticedthatourEnglishclasseshavebecomeincreasinglyinteractiveandengaging.However,thereisasmallaspectthatIbelievecouldbefurtherimprovedupon.Occasionally,whenaquestionisposedandstudentshesitatetorespondpromptly,thereareinstanceswhereyoumightansweronourbehalforamomentarylullensues.Toaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.Firstly,wecouldbeencouragedtodiscussinsmallgroupsbeforesharingourthoughtswiththeclass.Secondly,youcouldprovidepromptsorguidingquestionstohelpusbridgethegapinourthinking.Thereasonforthesesuggestionsistwofold.Firstly,itwouldfosteramorestudent-centeredlearningenvironment,encouragingactiveparticipationandcriticalthinking.Secondly,itwouldhelpbuildourconfidenceinspeakingEnglish,knowingthatwehavethesupportandspacetoexploreourideas.Thankyouforyourdedicationtoourlearning.Bestregards,LiHua【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生假如是李華，是希望中學的一名學生?，F在你們班級英語課上的互動形式和內容都越來越豐富了，但有一個現象需要注意，就是當老師提出的問題學生不能及時回答時，有時候老師會代替學生回答，有時候也會出現較長時間的冷場。針對這種情況，請你給老師寫一封郵件，提出你的意見和建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累培養：foster→develop建議：suggestion→advice提出：pose→putforward提供：provide→offer2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Toaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.拓展句：Ifwewanttoaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.【點睛】[高分句型1]Recently,IhavenoticedthatourEnglishclasseshavebecomeincreasinglyinteractiveandengaging.(運用了that引導賓語從句)[高分句型2]Occasionally,whenaquestionisposedandstudentshesitatetorespondpromptly,thereareinstanceswhereyoumightansweronourbehalforamomentarylullensues.(運用了when引導時間狀語從句和where引導的限制性定語從句)（二）（2024年崇明區二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是明啟中學的高三學生徐晶，你遠在英國的朋友Anna前幾天給你發來電子郵件，向你敘述了她未能成功入選校學生會的事情，為此一直悶悶不樂。恰巧你在圖書館看到下面圖中英國前首相丘吉爾講過的這句名言。你給Anna回一封郵件，用這句名言來勸慰和鼓勵她。在郵件中你必須：1.對Anna的失敗表示同情；2.用你對這句名言的理解和1-2個實例來勸慰和鼓勵Anna。注：不要在郵件中提及你的真實姓名和學校等相關信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAnna,I’msorrytohearaboutyourunsuccessfulbidforthestudentcouncil.Failurecanbetoughbutremember,asWinstonChurchillsaid,“Successisnotfinal,failureisnotfatal;itisthecouragetocontinuethatcounts.”So,don'tletonesmallfailurestandinyourway.ThinkofEdison,whofailedthousandsoftimesbeforeinventingthelightbulb.Hiscouragetopersevereledtoaworld-changingdiscovery.You,too,havethepotentialtoovercomethissetback.Don’tletthisfailuredefineyou;letitbeasteppingstonetogreatersuccess.Keepgoing,Anna.Itisyourcourageanddeterminationthatwillleadyoutonewheights.Ibelieveyouwillbeselectedsuccessfullyinthenextelection.Bestwishes,XuJing【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生對于遠在英國的朋友Anna前幾天給你發來電子郵件，向你敘述了她未能成功入選校學生會的事情，為此一直悶悶不樂，恰巧你在圖書館看到下面圖中英國前首相丘吉爾講過的這句名言這一情況，給Anna回一封郵件，用這句名言來勸慰和鼓勵她?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累痛苦的：tough→painful挫折：setback→frustration克服：overcome→conquer決心：determination→resolution2.句式拓展簡單句變非謂語作狀語原句：I’msorrytohearaboutyourunsuccessfulbidforthestudentcouncil.拓展句：Hearingaboutyoufailedinyourbidforthestudentcouncil,Ifeelsosorry.【點睛】【高分句型1】ThinkofEdison,whofailedthousandsoftimesbeforeinventingthelightbulb.（運用了關系代詞who引導的非限制性定語從句。）【高分句型2】Itisyourcourageanddeterminationthatwillleadyoutonewheights.（運用了Itis…that…的強調句式。）（三）（2024年奉賢區二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.隨著中國傳統文化的復興，漢服(Hanfu)作為一種獨特的服飾文化，逐漸受到人們的關注和喜愛。假如你是明啟中學的學生李華，你校正在向學生們征集新社團的創建意向。作為漢服愛好者，你準備成立漢服社，請給校委會寫一封郵件表達你的想法。你的郵件需包含：1.成立該社團的目的；2.社團擬開展的活動及原因。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSchoolCommittee,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.MynameisLiHua,astudentatMingqiHighSchool,andIamwritingtoproposetheestablishmentofaHanfuClubwithinourschoolcommunitywiththepurposeoftherevivalofHanfuclothing.TheactivitiesthattheHanfuClubplanstoundertakeareasfollows.Atfirst,wewillorganizeworkshopstoteachinterestedstudentsaboutthehistoryofHanfu,itssignificanceinChineseculture,andhowtowearitcorrectly.Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,allowingstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.Besides,theclubwillhostculturalperformancesshowcasingvariousaspectsoftraditionalChineseculture,withafocusonHanfu.Byengagingintheseactivities,webelievethattheHanfuClubcancontributetofosteringagreatersenseofculturalprideandidentityamongourstudentbody.Thankyouforconsideringourproposal.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給校委會寫郵件，提出組建漢服社團的申請?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累重要性：significance→importance得體地：correctly→decently此外：besides→inaddition各種各樣的：various→diverse2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,allowingstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.拓展句：Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,whichallowsstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.【點睛】【高分句式1】TheactivitiesthattheHanfuClubplanstoundertakeareasfollows.(運用了that引導的定語從句)【高分句式2】Byengagingintheseactivities,webelievethattheHanfuClubcancontributetofosteringagreatersenseofculturalprideandidentityamongourstudentbody.(運用了that引導的賓語從句)（四）（2024年虹口區二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是明啟中學高三學生趙磊，你的外國朋友William一直對中國文化很感興趣。近日，他在網上了解到有兩個相關的線上節目（節目信息如下表所示），但他對節目選擇有些茫然，想聽聽你的建議。請給William回復一封郵件，郵件內容須包括：（1）推薦其中一個節目；（2）通過比較兩個節目的信息，說明你推薦該節目的理由。節目名稱故宮里的國寶TreasuresoftheForbiddenCity尋訪中國美食ExploringChineseCuisine節目內容介紹故宮里的國寶及其背后的故事介紹中國傳統美食及其烹飪方式節目形式紀錄片短視頻節目語言英語解說無字幕(subtitles)中文解說英語字幕___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearWilliam,HavinglearntyouareinterestedinChinesecultureandthatyoucannotdecidewhethertooptfortheTreasuresoftheForbiddenCityortheExploringChineseCuisine,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyownideathatthesecondoptionmightbemoresuitableforyou.Thereasonsbehindthechoice,asfarasIcansee,canbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.Tobeginwith,asisuniversallyacknowledged,deliciouscuisineisalwaysapopulartopicaroundthewholeworld.Inthisprogramme,youwillbeintroducedtheprocessofmakingChinesetraditionalfood,whichisalsoapartoftheChineseculture.Inaddition,itwon'tcostyoumuchtimesinceitispresentedbyshortvideo,sothatyoucanchooseyourtimefreely.Lastbutnotleast,althoughtheprogrammeisspokeninChinese,thereareEnglishsubtitlesforyoutohaveafullunderstandingofthecontent.Tosumup,itisadvisablethatyouchoosethesecondone.Hopetheabovemightbeofanyhelptoyou.ThankyouforyourtimeandwishyouagreatsuccessinlearningabouttheChineseculture.Yours,ZhaoLei【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給外國朋友William寫一封郵件，給他提一些關于了解中國文化節目的選擇建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累選擇：option→choice總之：tosumup→inshort普遍地：universally→widely有幫助的：beofhelp→behelpful2.句式拓展改為復合句原句：Thereasonsbehindthechoice,asfarasIcansee,canbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.

拓展句：ThereasonswhyImadethechoicecanbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.

【點睛】【高分句型1】HavinglearntyouareinterestedinChinesecultureandthatyoucannotdecidewhethertooptfortheTreasuresoftheForbiddenCityorthe

ExploringChineseCuisine,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyownideathatthesecondoptionmightbemoresuitableforyou.(運用了現在分詞短語作狀語和idea后that引導的同位語從句)【高分句型2】Tobeginwith,asisuniversallyacknowledged,deliciouscuisineisalwaysapopulartopicaroundthewholeworld.(運用了as引導的非限制性定語從句)（五）（2024年黃浦區二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.“人設”通常指人們向公眾展示的自我，現在很多學生經常說“我的人設不能倒”。校學生會正在開展有關“人設能不能倒?(Canmypublicimagefallapart?)”的討論，請你在學生會郵箱投稿，表達自己的想法。你的投稿須包括(文中請不要出現真實的校名和人名)：1)你覺得自己的人設是什么？2)你覺得你的人設能倒嗎？為什么？_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文CanMyPublicImageFallApart?Mypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer.Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.However,Ibelievethatmypublicimagecanindeedfallapart.Nooneisperfect,andweallmakemistakes.IfIweretobehaveinawaythatcontradictsmyestablishedimage,itwouldnaturallycollapse.Thisisnotsomethingtofear,asitprovidesanopportunityforgrowthandself-reflection.What’simportantistolearnfromourmistakes,adapt,andstrivetorebuildamoreauthenticandsustainableimage.Therefore,whileIaimtoupholdmycurrentpublicimage,Iamalsoopentothepossibilityofitsfallibility.【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一封主題為“CanMyPublicImageFallApart?”的作文投稿。【詳解】1.詞匯積累重要：beimportant→matter機會：opportunity→chance害怕：fear→scare維持：uphold→sustain2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Mypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer.Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.拓展句：Sincemypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer,Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.【點睛】[高分句型1]What’simportantistolearnfromourmistakes,adapt,andstrivetorebuildamoreauthenticandsustainableimage.(運用了what引導主語從句以及不定式tolearn作表語)[高分句型2]Therefore,whileIaimtoupholdmycurrentpublicimage,Iamalsoopentothepossibilityofitsfallibility.(運用了while引導讓步狀語從句)（六）（2024年嘉定區二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你所在的小區附近將新建一個大型游樂場，很多居民表示不滿。社區管理處決定征集居民意見并召開專題討論會，作為居民代表，寫一份討論會發言稿，內容需包括：1.你認為新建大型游樂場可能會存在的問題(至少2個)；2.你對以上問題的建議和理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearneighbors,Iamhereasaresidentrepresentativetovoiceourconcernsabouttheupcominglargeamusementparknearourcommunity.Whiletheideasoundsexciting,therearepotentialissueswemustconsider.Firstly,noisepollutioncouldbecomeanimportantproblem.Theconstanthustleandbustleoftheamusementparkmightdisturbourpeaceandquiet.Secondly,trafficcongestionisanotherconcern.Theinfluxofvisitorsislikelytocausemajortrafficjams,affectingourdailycommutes.Toaddresstheseissues,Iproposeconductingathoroughnoiseimpactassessmentandimplementingnoisereductionmeasures.Additionally,weshouldexploretrafficmanagementstrategiestominimizecongestion.It'scrucialforourvoicestobeheardandconsideredinthisprocess.Let'sworktogethertofindsolutionsthatbenefitourcommunity.【解析】【導語】這是一篇發言稿。要求考生作為居民代表就你所在的小區附近將新建一個大型游樂場，很多居民表示不滿一事，寫一份討論會發言稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累變得：become→turninto重要的：important→significant問題：problem→issue合作：worktogether→teamup2.句式拓展同義句改寫原句：Firstly,noisepollutioncouldbecomeanimportantproblem.拓展句：Initially,thematterofnoisepollutionemergesasasignificantconcern.【點睛】【高分句型1】Whiletheideasoundsexciting,therearepotentialissueswemustconsider.（使用了關系代詞that引導的定語從句，先行詞為issues）【高分句型2】Toaddresstheseissues,Iproposeconductingathoroughnoiseimpactassessmentandimplementingnoisereductionmeasures.（使用了非謂語動詞作狀語）（七）（2024年金山區二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是明啟中學的學生吳磊，你在英語一考中取得了118分的成績，現在你正面臨著是否參加6月份二考的選擇，請談談你的想法。內容需包括：1）說明你的選擇；2）闡述你的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文MyDecisionontheSecondEnglishTestI'mWuLei,astudentfromMingqiHighSchool.IamwritingtosharemythoughtsonwhethertoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtestscheduledforJune.Aftercarefulconsideration,Ihavedecidedtoforegothesecondtest.Myprimaryreasonforthisdecisionstemsfromtheencouragingscoreof118Iachievedinthefirstexam.ThisresultindicatesthatIpossessasolidfoundationinthelanguage,andIbelievethatwithcontinuedeffortanddedication,Icanfurtherenhancemyproficiency.Additionally,Irecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,andIwishtoutilizeiteffectively.Participatinginthesecondtestmightnotsignificantlyimpactmyoverallscore,butitcouldpotentiallydetractfrommyfocusonothersubjectsandextracurricularactivities.Inconclusion,IamconfidentinmycurrentEnglishproficiencyandbelievethatmyeffortsshouldbedirectedtowardsmaintainingandimprovingmyperformanceinotherareas.Therefore,IhavechosennottoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtest.【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假設你是明啟中學的學生吳磊，你在英語一考中取得了118分的成績，現在你正面臨著是否參加6月份二考的選擇，請談談你的想法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累參加：participatein→joinin此外：additionally→besides提高：enhance→strengthen總之：inconclusion→inshort2.句式拓展同義句轉換原句：Additionally,Irecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,andIwishtoutilizeiteffectively.拓展句：Additionally,afterIrecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,Iwishtoutilizeiteffectively.【點睛】[高分句型1] IamwritingtosharemythoughtsonwhethertoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtestscheduledforJune.(運用了特殊疑問詞+不定式作賓語)[高分句型2]InconclusionIamconfidentinmycurrentEnglishproficiencyandbelievethatmyeffortsshouldbedirectedtowardsmaintainingandimprovingmyperformanceinotherareas.(運用了that引導賓語從句)（八）（2024年靜安區二模）假設你是明啟中學李華，你校藝術節即將舉辦主題為“最美瞬間”的攝影展，捕捉“熱愛生活、積極向上、全面發展”等正能量的精彩瞬間?，F邀請每位同學提供自己生活中的一張照片參展，并撰寫攝影作品的介紹供參觀者閱讀。你打算提供什么樣的照片？請寫一篇短文作為參展攝影作品的介紹，內容包括：1)對該照片的簡要描述；2)你選擇該照片參展的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Thisisaphotodepictingasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.Intheimage,thesunisjustpeekingoverthehorizon,castingawarmgoldenglowacrosstheskyandilluminatingtherollingcloudsthatclingtothemountainslopes.Ichosethisphotofortheexhibitionbecauseitcapturesabreathtakingmomentofnaturalbeautyandserenity.Thevibrantcolorsofthesunrisesymbolizehopeandnewbeginnings,reflectingthethemethattheartfestivalseekstopromote.Additionally,thetranquilatmosphereofthesceneencouragesviewerstopauseandappreciatethewondersofnature,fosteringasenseofmindfulnessandgratitude.Thephotoinvitesviewerstoconnectwiththeirsurroundingsandfindinspirationinthesimplejoysofeverydaylife.Itservesasaremindertoembraceeachmomentwithenthusiasmandapositiveoutlook.【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于開放性作文。題目要求學生以李華的身份，參與學校藝術節即將舉辦的“最美瞬間”攝影展，為參展攝影作品寫一篇介紹，需涵蓋簡要描述和選擇的理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累描繪：depict→portrary捕捉：capture→catch,seize象征：symbolize→representsignify激勵某人做某事：encouragesb.todo→motivatesb.todo,inspiresb.todo培養：foster→cultivate,develop2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Thisisaphotodepictingasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.拓展句：Thisisaphotothatdepictsasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.【點睛】[高分句型1]Intheimage,thesunisjustpeekingoverthehorizon,castingawarmgoldenglowacrosstheskyandilluminatingtherollingcloudsthatclingtothemountainslopes(運用了現在分詞短語作狀語、that引導限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Ichosethisphotofortheexhibitionbecauseitcapturesabreathtakingmomentofnaturalbeautyandserenity.(運用了because引導原因狀語從句)（九）（2024年浦東新區二模）隨著人工智能的快速發展，ChatGPT已進入我們的生活，正逐漸影響我們的學習方式和體驗，有人認為它會帶來諸多便利，也有人心存顧慮。假設你是明啟中學的學生王磊，學校貼吧就此話題正在熱議，你對此很感興趣，決定回帖響應?；靥麅热輵ǎ?.你是否支持使用ChatGPT;2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AsastudentatMingqiHighSchool,IamintriguedbytheongoingdiscussionsurroundingtheintegrationofChatGPTintoourlivesamidsttherapiddevelopmentofartificialintelligence.RegardingtheuseofChatGPT,Iamcautiouslysupportive,recognizingbothitspotentialbenefitsandconcerns.Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.Whetherit’sclarifyingconcepts,practicinglanguageskills,orreceivingpersonalizedfeedback,ChatGPToffersvaluablesupportthatcomplementstraditionallearningmethods.Additionally,ChatGPTcanfostercreativityandexploration.ByinteractingwithChatGPT,studentshavetheopportunitytoengageinstimulatingconversations,explorenewideas,andexpandtheirknowledgeindiversesubjects.Thisinteractivelearningexperiencecansparkcuriosity,inspireinnovation,andencourageindependentthinkingamongstudents.However,IalsoacknowledgetheneedforcautionwhenusingChatGPT.Aswithanytechnology,thereareconcernsaboutprivacy,accuracy,andoverreliance.It’sessentialtouseChatGPTresponsibly,criticallyevaluatetheinformationitprovides,andmaintainabalancebetweentechnologicalassistanceandindependentlearning.Inconclusion,whileIsupporttheuseofChatGPTasavaluabletoolineducation,it’simportanttoapproachitsintegrationthoughtfullyandmindfullytomaximizeitsbenefitswhileaddressingpotentialchallenges.(word:217)【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。隨著人工智能的快速發展，ChatGPT已進入我們的生活，正逐漸影響我們的學習方式和體驗，有人認為它會帶來諸多便利，也有人心存顧慮。假設你是明啟中學的學生王磊，學校貼吧就此話題正在熱議，你對此很感興趣，決定回帖響應。【詳解】1.詞匯積累提高，促進：enhance→prompt/facilitate鼓勵：inspire→motivate重要的：essential→vital總之：inconclusion→toconclude2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.拓展句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseitisconvenientandaccessible.【點睛】【高分句型1】Whetherit’sclarifyingconcepts,practicinglanguageskills,orreceivingpersonalizedfeedback,ChatGPToffersvaluablesupportthatcomplementstraditionallearningmethods.（運用了whether...or引導的讓步狀語從句）【高分句型2】WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）（十）（2024年普陀區二模）假設你是明啟中學高三學生張磊，你的英國朋友Michael來信說他打算今年暑期來中國度假，你想邀請他去你的家鄉游覽。請你給他回信，內容需包括：1）你最想帶他去的幾個地方，以及參與的活動；2）你所提建議的理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMichael,I’mverygladtohearthatyouplantocometoChinaforavacationthissummer.I’dliketoinviteyoutovisitmyhometown.ThereareseveralplacesI’dliketotakeyouto.First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseumtolearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.Then,wecanvisitthebeautifulnaturalscenery,suchasthemountainsandrivers.Wecanalsoparticipateinsomelocalactivities,liketastingthelocalfoodandexperiencingthetraditionalcustoms.Isuggesttheseplacesandactivitiesbecausetheycangiveyouacomprehensiveunderstandingofmyhometown.Youcannotonlyappreciatethebeautyofnaturebutalsofeelthecharmofthelocalculture.Ibelieveyouwillhaveagreattime.Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon!Yours,ZhangLei【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文寫作中的邀請信。要求考生給英國朋友Michael寫信，邀請其去你的家鄉游覽?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累高興的：glad→happy/delighted打算做某事：planto→intendto參觀：visit→payavisitto參與：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseumtolearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.拓展句：First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseum,wherewecanlearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.【點睛】【高分句型1】ThereareseveralplacesI’dliketotakeyouto.（運用了省略關系代詞that的定語從句修飾先行詞places）【高分句型2】Isuggesttheseplacesandactivitiesbecausetheycangiveyouacomprehensiveunderstandingofmyhometown.（運用了because引導的原因狀語從句）（十一）（2024年青浦區二模）假設你是浦潤中學高三學生李青。學校將舉辦“中國工坊”（ChineseWorkshop）活動，主題涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中國傳統手工藝（handicraft）、中國書法（calligraphy）和中國繪畫。屆時，英國姐妹學校的師生代表將到校訪問。學校擬招募學生現場教授相關技能。請寫一封自薦信，內容必須包括：申請參加本次活動；闡述你對本次文化交流活動意義的理解；結合個人興趣和特長，說明一項你想要教授的技能，并陳述理由。（注：文中不得出現真實的姓名及學校名稱。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearOrganizingCommitteeIamLiQing,aGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool.Iamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinparticipatingintheupcoming“ChineseWorkshop”event.ThisculturalexchangeholdsprofoundsignificanceasitoffersaplatformforourBritishcounterpartstointimatelyexperiencetherichnessofChineseculture.Throughthisworkshop,wecanbridgeculturaldividesandfostermutualunderstanding.GivenmypassionforChinesecalligraphy,Iameagertosharethisancientartwithourguests.Calligraphyisnotjustaboutwriting;it’sareflectionofone’sspiritandcharacter.Teachingthisskillwillnotonlyimpartknowledgebutalsopromoteculturalappreciation.Ibelievethatmyenthusiasmandproficiencyincalligraphywillcontributetothesuccessofthisworkshop.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Sincerely,LiQing【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。學校將舉辦“中國工坊”（ChineseWorkshop）活動，主題涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中國傳統手工藝（handicraft）、中國書法（calligraphy）和中國繪畫。屆時，英國姐妹學校的師生代表將到校訪問。學校擬招募學生現場教授相關技能。要求考生根據提示寫一封自薦信?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累強烈的：keen→strong參加：participatein→engagein即將到來的：upcoming→forthcoming重要性：significance→importance2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：IamLiQing,aGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool..拓展句：IamLiQing,whoisaGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool.【點睛】【高分句型1】Iamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinparticipatingintheupcoming“ChineseWorkshop”event.（運用了動名詞participating作賓語）【高分句型2】Ibelievethatmyenthusiasmandproficiencyincalligraphywillcontributetothesuccessofthisworkshop.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）（十二）（2024年閔行區二模）假設你是上海市明啟中學的高三學生李華，你的新西蘭筆友Terry即將在下個學期來你們學校參加為期2個月的學習交流項目。他發來郵件，請你給他一些在上海生活和學習的建議。請你回復郵件。你的郵件須包含2～3條建議和相關理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTerry,Happytoknowthatyouwillcometoourschooltoparticipateina2-monthlearningexchangeprogramnextsemester,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonyourlifeandstudyhere.First,itisbettertoliveinthedormitory,whichcangiveyoumorechancestocommunicatewithyourclassmatesandknowmoreaboutourschool.Besides,youcangooutatnighttoShanghaiBundtoenjoyitsbeautyandlearnsomecustomsandcultur