單元寫作描寫自然奇觀Unit5Amazingnature寫作維度本單元的寫作項目是“自然奇觀”，相關內容包含以下方面：(1)描寫家鄉的自然景觀(2)根據提示介紹自然或人造奇觀寫作支架/模版描寫自然奇觀開篇點題具體描述自然奇觀的特點闡述自己的觀點黃金語料(從教材內外積累好句)開頭段①Inmyopinion,man-madewondersaremoreexcitingthannaturalones.②TheGreatWallisveryfamousintheworld.③Itwasmyfirsttripabroad.中間段①It’soneofthegreatestnaturalwondersintheworld.②It’sabout2，300metreslongand15metreswide.③ItliesinthemiddleofChina.④AlongthepathIenjoyedlotsofbeautifulsights,suchastheseaofcloudsandstrangerocks.⑤Youcanhearthesoundofthewaterfallafewmetresaway.⑥TheGreatWallhasbecomeasymbolofChinaanditsculture.⑦TheGrandCanyonissovastanddeepthatitfeelslikeadifferentworldinside.⑧TheNorthernLightsdanceacrossthenightsky,paintingtheheavenswithcoloursofgreen,yellowandblue.結尾段

①Inmyopinion,it’smorewonderfulthanotherplaces.②Ithinkpeopleallovertheworldshouldgotovisitit.③IhopetovisitMountTaiagainnextyear!④Let’scherishandprotectthisnaturalwondersoitstaysbeautifulforever.⑤Thebeautyofscenerymakesmeloveandrespecttheworldevenmore.⑥EverytimeIlookbackatthetrip,itfeelslikeaheart-tohearttalkwithnature.⑦AsIreflectonmyvisittothisplace,Iamremindedoftheimportanceofpreservingnature’streasures.經典例題(從經典例題中學會審題)波浪巖是世界奇觀之一，這片仿佛滔天巨浪高高掀起并瞬間凝固在半空中一樣的怪石每年都吸引著大量來自世界各地的游客前來親身體驗大自然鬼斧神工的魅力。請你根據以下提示寫一篇短文介紹波浪巖。~~~~~~~~~~~審人稱：第三人稱審體裁：說明文審時態：一般現在時NameWaveRockShapeahugewaveHistoryabout2.7billionyearsLocationabout3kmfromtheeastofthesmalltownofHyden,WesternAustraliaSizeHeight：about15metresLength：about110metres審要點：名稱、地點、形狀、大小、歷史要求：1.包含所有提示信息，語句通順，意思連貫，可適當發揮；2.80詞左右。WaveRock____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________精彩范文[從教材內外積累好句]精彩范文展示WaveRockHaveyouheardofWaveRock?It’soneofthegreatestnaturalwondersintheworld.WaveRockisabout3kmfromtheeastofthesmalltownofHyden,WesternAustralia.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~①I’mproudtosaythatI’mfromoneofthemostbeautifulplacesintheworld.(教材P69)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~WaveRockisabout2.7billionyearsold.It’sfamousforitsshape.Itlookslikeahugewave.It’sabout15metresinheight.Andit’sabout110metresinlength.IfyoulookdownatWaveRock,it’slikeabeautifulandcolourfulpicture!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~②Itislikeagreatseaabovetheplateau.(教材P68)Inmyopinion,it’smorewonderfulthanotherplaces.Whatdoyouthinkofit?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~③Inmyheart,it’sbetterthananyotherplace.(教材P69)【亮點詞塊】·hearof聽說·oneof...……之一·befamousfor以……聞名·looklike看起來像·lookdownat俯視·inone’sopinion在某人看來【高分句子】·IfyoulookdownatWaveRock,it’slikeabeautifulandcolourfulpicture!(If引導的條件狀語從句)如果你俯視波浪巖，它就像一幅美麗多彩的圖畫！·Inmyopinion,it’smorewonderfulthanotherplaces.(含有比較級的句子)在我看來，它比其他地方更精彩。實戰演練請根據下面的表格信息,以“TheNiagaraFalls”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。尼亞加拉大瀑布位置北美洲的東北部景觀描述分為(bedividedinto)三部分：最大的一部分在加拿大境內，高約56米，寬約675米；其余兩部分在美國境內，一部分高50多米，寬300多米，另一部分高50多米，寬80多米TheNiagaraFalls_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________尼亞加拉大瀑布位置北美洲的東北部評價世界上最偉大的自然奇觀之一；每年有大約1400萬游客從世界各地去那里參觀范文參考TheNiagaraFallsTheNiagaraFallsisoneofthegreatestnaturalwondersoftheworld.ItisinthenortheastofNorthAmerica.Itisdividedintothreeparts.ThelargestpartisinCanada.Itisabout56metreshighandabout675metreswide.TheothertwopartsareinAmerica.Oneisover50metreshighandmorethan300metreswide.Theother