高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)因誤會(huì)而波折的摯友深情1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文HannahandIhavebeenbestfriendssinceprimaryschoolandwespendalmosteverydaywitheachother,sharingeverythinghappeninginourdailylifeanddiscussingproblemsinourschoolwork.Sometimes,otherchildrensaywearenofunbecausewearebothveryacademicandliketostudy,butwelikeitthatway.Wearebothveryhard-workingandalwaysgetgoodgradesatschool.LastMonday,wehadasurprisemathquiz.Thinkingitwasquiteeasy,Iwasnotworriedabouttheresultsatall.Imusthavesoundedveryproudofmyselfafterthequiz,sayinghoweasyitwasandhowIwassuretogetagoodgrade.Unexpectedly,thenextdayafterclass,mymathteachertoldmethatIhadthelowestgradeintheclass!Myheartsankandagreatsenseofshamewashedoverme;Imustbereallystupidtofailasimplemathquiz!4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Afterwards,Ipretendedtobecheerful,asifnothinghadhappened,butHannahsensedsomethingwaswrong.Whenwewenttowashourhandsinthegirls’washroombeforelunch,Hannahtriedtofigureoutwhatwasthematter.Strugglingtoholdbackmytears,IadmittedIhadfailedthemathquiz.“Butyouareabornmathgeniusandyouhaveputallyoureffortsinit.Theremustbesomemistakes!”Hannahcouldn’tbelieveherears.“Ishouldn’thavebeensoconfident.Wouldyoupleasekeepitasecretforme?”Ibegged.Hannahnodded,promisingnottotellanyoneelseaboutthesecret.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文However,thatafternoonInoticedthatmyclassmateswerestaringatmeasIcameintomathclassand,whenIwenttositdown,Iwasshockedtofindapieceofpaperonmydeskthatsaid,“StupidSarahgotaD!”IwassoupsetthatIfeltlikecrying.IthoughtthatHannahmusthavetoldmyclassmatesaboutmygradeafterpromisingnotto.Everyonemusthavebeenlaughingbehindmyback!6段首句Paragraph1：IwassoangrythatIwentstraighttoHannah.Paragraph2：Thenextmorning,mymathteachercametome,apologizingforhiscarelessness.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9漢娜和“我”自小學(xué)起就是摯友，都熱愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)且成績(jī)優(yōu)異。周一的數(shù)學(xué)突擊測(cè)驗(yàn)，“我”自我感覺(jué)良好。然而次日老師告知“我”得了全班最低分，“我”既震驚又羞愧。向漢娜坦白后，“我”請(qǐng)求她保密。但當(dāng)天下午，“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)桌上有羞辱紙條，認(rèn)定是漢娜泄密，對(duì)她大發(fā)雷霆。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：IwassoangrythatIwentstraighttoHannah.我憤怒至極，徑直走向漢娜。到她面前，我雙眼冒火，大聲吼道：“你答應(yīng)過(guò)我要保守秘密，為什么要告訴別人？你怎么能這樣背叛我！”漢娜被我的舉動(dòng)嚇了一跳，臉上滿是委屈，急忙解釋：“我真的沒(méi)有說(shuō)，肯定是哪里出了誤會(huì)。”可我在氣頭上，根本聽(tīng)不進(jìn)去，轉(zhuǎn)身就走，心里想著再也不理她了。接下來(lái)的幾天，不管漢娜怎么主動(dòng)跟我搭話，我都對(duì)她不理不睬。她課間來(lái)找我，我直接走出教室；她放學(xué)想和我一起走，我加快腳步獨(dú)自離開(kāi)。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Thenextmorning,mymathteachercametome,apologizingforhiscarelessness.第二天早上，數(shù)學(xué)老師找到我，為他的粗心大意向我道歉。原來(lái)錄入成績(jī)時(shí)，把我的分?jǐn)?shù)和另一位同學(xué)弄混了，我的真實(shí)成績(jī)相當(dāng)不錯(cuò)。聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息，我愣住了，隨后無(wú)比懊悔，意識(shí)到自己誤會(huì)了漢娜。放學(xué)后，我懷著愧疚的心情找到漢娜，真誠(chéng)地說(shuō)：“對(duì)不起，是我錯(cuò)怪你了，你能原諒我嗎？”漢娜微笑著說(shuō)：“當(dāng)然啦，我就知道會(huì)水落石出的。”我們相視一笑，友誼的裂痕就此修復(fù)。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)IwassoangrythatIwentstraighttoHannah.Withouthesitation,Istormeduptoherandsaid,"Itrustedyoutokeepmysecret,butyoutoldeveryoneaboutmylowgrade!Howcouldyoudothistome?"Hannahlookedatmewithdisbeliefinhereyes."Sarah,Ididn'ttellanyone.Ipromisedyou,andIalwayskeepmypromises,"shesaidearnestly.Butmyangercloudedmyjudgment,andIdidn'tbelieveher.Iturnedawayfromher,vowingnottotalktoheranymore.Inthefollowingdays,wheneverHannahtriedtoapproachme,Ijustignoredher.Sheleftmessagesinmylocker,butIdidn'trespond.Ithoughtourfriendshipwasover.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,mymathteachercametome,apologizingforhiscarelessness.Heexplainedthattherewasamix-upinthegrade-entrysystem,andmyactualscorewasmuchhigherthantheonehetoldme.Iwasshockedandthenfeltextremelyguilty.IrealizedIhadwronglyaccusedHannah.Afterschool,IfoundHannahandsaid,"Hannah,I'msosorry.Iwaswrongaboutyou.Canyouforgiveme?"Hannahsmiledgentlyandsaid,"Ofcourse,Sarah.Iknewitwasamisunderstanding.Ourfriendshipisstrongerthanthis."Wehuggedeachother,andourfriendshipwasmended.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)IwassoangrythatIwentstraighttoHannah.Withoutamoment'shesitation,Istormedtowardsher,myeyesablazewithfury."Iplacedmytrustinyoutokeepmysecret,yetyoubetrayedmebyrevealingmylowgradetoeveryone!Howcouldyoudosuchathing?"Ithundered.Hannahstaredatme,disbeliefwrittenalloverherface."Sarah,IswearIdidn'ttellanyone.Imadeapromisetoyou,andIalwaysabidebymyword,"shepleadedearnestly.However,consumedbyanger,Iturnedadeafeartoherexplanation.Ispunaroundandwalkedaway,determinedtoseverourfriendship.Inthedaysthatfollowed,nomatterhowmanytimesHannahattemptedtoreachout,Iremainedcold-shouldered.Messagesleftinmylockerwereleftunread,andherpresencewascompletelyignored.Iwasconvincedthatourfriendshiphadcometoanend.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,mymathteachercametome,apologizingforhiscarelessness.ItwasthenthatIlearnedtherehadbeenamix-upinthegrade-entrysystem,andmyactualscorewasfarfromthelowest.Shockedtothecore,Iwasimmediatelyoverwhelmedbyaprofoundsenseofguilt.Ihadunjustlyaccusedmydearestfriend.Afterschool,IsoughtoutHannah,remorseevidentinmyeyes."Hannah,I'mtrulysorry.Iwascompletelywrongaboutyou.Pleaseforgiveme,"Ibegged.Hannah,withagentlesmile,replied,"O