高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習懂事少年勇擔家務，危急時刻火場救人1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文“Please,mother,dositdownandletmetrymyhand,”saidFredLiscom,abright,activeboyseventeenyearsold.Mrs.Liscom,lookingpaleandworn,smiledandsaid,“You,Fred,youwashdishes?”“Yes,indeed,mother,”repliedFred,“IshouldbeapoorscholarifIcouldn’t,whenI’veseenyoudoitsomanytimes.Justtryme.”Alookofreliefcameoverhismother’sfaceassheseatedherselfinherlowrockingchair.Fredwashedthedishes,andputtheminthecloset.Hethensweptthekitchen,broughtupthepotatoesfromthecellar(地下室)forthedinnerandwashedthem,andthensetoutforschool.4續寫原文Freddidsobecausethedoctorsaidoneday,“Well,madam,it’smyopinionthatyouwouldhavebeenverysickifyouhadkeptbusy.”Fredhadgivenupagreatdealofwhatboyslike,forthepurposeofhelpinghismother.Theschoolboys’curiositywasexcitedwhenhewouldgivenootherreasonfornotcomingtoschoolearlier,orstayingafterschool.“I’lltellyou,”saidTomBarton,“I’llfindhimoutandboysseeifIdon’t!”SohecalledforFredtogotoschool,andwhenhelookedintothekitchenwindow,hesawFredstandingatthetablewithadishclothinhishand.5續寫原文Ofcoursehereportedthisatschool,andvariouswerethegreetingspoorFredreceived.“Well,you’reabraveonetostayathomewashingdishes.”Afterschool,Fredwascryingsecretlyatnightafterhermotherfellasleepwhensomeoneshouted“Fire!fire!”ItwasMr.Barton’shouse.Mr.andMrs.Bartonwerenotathome,leavingTomBartonandhissisterKatyalone.Withouttheslightesthesitation,FredrushedouttowardsTom’shouse.6段首句Paragraph1：FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.Paragraph2：Theyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析917歲的弗雷德?利斯康是個聰明又活躍的男孩。一天，他看到臉色蒼白、疲憊不堪的母親，主動提出要幫忙洗碗，讓母親休息。母親欣然應允，臉上露出了欣慰的神情。弗雷德不僅洗了碗，還做了清掃廚房、從地下室取土豆等家務，然后才去上學。原來，醫生曾告訴母親，如果她一直忙碌，身體可能會出大問題，所以弗雷德放棄了很多同齡男孩喜歡的活動，只為幫助母親。同學們對他早到晚歸的原因十分好奇，湯姆?巴頓決定一探究竟。他透過廚房窗戶看到弗雷德正拿著洗碗布站在桌前，于是在學校里大肆宣揚，弗雷德因此受到了同學們的嘲笑。一天晚上，弗雷德在母親睡著后暗自哭泣時，突然聽到“著火了！著火了！”的呼喊聲，著火的正是巴頓先生的家，而巴頓夫婦不在家，只有湯姆和他的妹妹凱蒂在家。弗雷德毫不猶豫地沖向了湯姆家。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.弗雷德發現湯姆在房子外面嚇得渾身發抖，凱蒂卻不在。他心急如焚，一把抓住湯姆的肩膀，大聲問道：“凱蒂呢？她在哪里？”湯姆滿臉淚痕，聲音顫抖地說：“她……她還在房間里，她害怕得不敢出來！”弗雷德抬頭望去，只見房子里火光沖天，濃煙滾滾，熱浪撲面而來。周圍的鄰居們都站在一旁，焦急地看著，卻沒有人敢進去。弗雷德深知時間緊迫，多耽誤一秒，凱蒂就多一分危險。他沒有絲毫猶豫，深吸一口氣，用濕毛巾捂住口鼻，毅然決然地沖進了火海。房子里煙霧彌漫，幾乎讓人無法呼吸，視線也變得極差。弗雷德一邊摸索著前進，一邊大聲呼喊著凱蒂的名字：“凱蒂！你在哪里？別怕，我來救你了！”火勢越來越大，周圍的墻壁被燒得通紅，不時有燃燒的碎片掉落下來。弗雷德的衣服被火星點燃，他迅速拍滅，繼續向前尋找。終于，在一個角落里，他聽到了微弱的哭聲。弗雷德順著聲音的方向走去，發現凱蒂蜷縮在那里，嚇得瑟瑟發抖。弗雷德立刻跑過去，緊緊地抱住她，輕聲安慰道：“凱蒂，別怕，我是弗雷德，我來帶你出去了?！眲P蒂抬起頭，看到弗雷德，眼中充滿了希望，緊緊地抓住他的手。11續寫思路分析Para2：Theyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.他們在房子倒塌前僥幸逃了出來。凱蒂緊緊地抱著弗雷德，淚流滿面，不停地說著：“謝謝你，弗雷德，謝謝你救了我?！备ダ椎螺p輕地拍著她的背，安慰道：“沒事了，凱蒂，都過去了?！敝車泥従觽兛吹剿麄兤桨渤鰜?，都紛紛鼓掌歡呼。湯姆也沖了過來，激動地抱住了妹妹和弗雷德，聲音哽咽地說：“弗雷德，我錯了，我不該嘲笑你。你是真正的英雄！”弗雷德微笑著說：“沒關系，湯姆?，F在最重要的是大家都平安無事?！边@時，巴頓夫婦匆匆趕了回來，看到孩子們都安然無恙，心中的大石頭終于落了地。他們對弗雷德感激不已，巴頓先生緊緊地握住弗雷德的手，說：“弗雷德，你救了我們的孩子，我們真不知道該怎么感謝你?！备ダ椎掠行┎缓靡馑嫉卣f：“這是我應該做的，叔叔?！睆哪且院?，學校里的同學們對弗雷德的態度發生了巨大的轉變。他們不再嘲笑他，而是對他充滿了敬佩和感激。弗雷德也明白了，真正的勇敢和擔當，不是為了得到別人的認可，而是在關鍵時刻能夠挺身而出，幫助他人。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.Hisheartsankinstantly,andhegrabbedTom‘sshouldersfirmly.“Where’sKaty?Whereisshe?”heshoutedanxiously.Tom‘sfacewascoveredwithtears,andhisvoicewasquivering.“She...she’sstillintheroom.She‘stooscaredtocomeout!”Fredlookedupatthehouse.Flameswereleapinghigh,andthicksmokewasbillowingout.Theheatwasunbearable.Theneighborswerestandingaround,lookingworriedbutnoonedaredtogoin.Fredknewthateverysecondcounted.Withoutamoment’shesitation,hetookadeepbreath,coveredhismouthandnosewithawettowel,andrushedintotheburninghousebravely.Insidethehouse,thesmokewassothickthatitwasalmostimpossibletobreatheorseeclearly.Fredfelthiswayforward,shoutingKaty'snameloudly.“Katy!Whereareyou?Don'tbeafraid.I'mheretosaveyou!”Thefirewasgettingfiercer,andthewallsaroundhimwereburningred.Burningdebriswasfallingfromtimetotime.Fred'sclothescaughtfire,buthequicklypatteditoutandcontinuedhissearch.Finally,inacorner,heheardafaintcry.Followingthesound,hefoundKatyhuddledthere,shiveringwithfear.Fredrushedoverandhuggedhertightly.“Katy,don'tbeafraid.I'mFred.I'mheretotakeyouout,”hesaidsoftly.KatylookedupatFred,hereyesfilledwithhope,andshegraspedhishandtightly.14范文呈現heyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.KatyclungtightlytoFred,tearsstreamingdownherface.“Thankyou,Fred.Thankyouforsavingme,”shesaidrepeatedly.Fredpattedherbackgently.“It'sokay,Katy.It'sallovernow.”Theneighborsaroundthemcheeredandclappedwhentheysawthemcomeoutsafely.TomalsorushedoverandhuggedhissisterandFredexcitedly.“Fred,Iwaswrong.Ishouldn'thavelaughedatyou.You'rearealhero!”hesaidwithachokedvoice.Fredsmiledandreplied,“Itdoesn'tmatter,Tom.Themostimportantthingisthateveryoneissafenow.Justthen,Mr.andMrs.Bartonrushedback.Whentheysawtheirchildrenweresafeandsound,theywererelieved.TheywereextremelygratefultoFred.Mr.BartonheldFred'shandfirmly.“Fred,yousavedourchildren.Wedon'tknowhowtothankyouenough,”hesaid.Fredfeltabitembarrassed.“It'swhatIshoulddo,Uncle,”hesaid.Fromthenon,theattitudeoftheschoolmatestowardsFredchangedgreatly.Theynolongerlaughedathimbutadmiredandappreciatedhim.Fredalsorealizedthattruecourageandresponsibilityarenotaboutgettingrecognitionfromothersbutaboutbeingabletostepforwardandhelpothersincriticalmoments.15升級版范文呈現FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.Hisheartpoundingwildlyinhischest,FredimmediatelygraspedTom'sshouldersfirmly.“WhereonearthisKaty?Tellme!”heyelled,hisvoicefilledwithurgency.Tom,hisfacestreakedwithtears,stammered,“She...she'sstillinsidetheroom.She'stoofrightenedtomove!”Glancingupatthehouse,Fredwasmetwithaterrifyingsight:flameswereleapinghighintothesky,andthick,blacksmokewasbillowingout,makingtheairhotandsuffocating.Theneighbors,thoughworried,stoodhelplesslyby,noneofthemdaringtoentertheinferno.Fullyawarethateverypassingsecondcouldbeamatteroflifeordeath,Fred,withoutamoment'shesitation,tookadeepbreath,coveredhismouthandnosewithawettowel,andchargedheadlongintotheburninghouse.Onceinside,thethicksmokemadeitalmostimpossibletobreatheorseeanythingclearly.Gropinghiswayforward,FredshoutedKaty'snameatthetopofhislungs.“Katy!Canyouhearme?Don'tbeafraid!I'mcomingtogetyou!”Thefireragedon,thewallsaroundhimglowingred-hot,andburningdebrisraineddownsporadically.Suddenly,Fredfeltasearingpainashisclothescaughtfire,buthequicklypattedouttheflamesandpressedonwithhissearch.Justwhenhewasstartingtofeeldesperate,afaintcryreachedhisears.Followingthesound,hefinallyspottedKatyhuddledinacorner,shakinguncontrollably.Withoutasecondthought,Fredrushedoverandwrappedhisarmsaroundherprotectively.“Katy,it'sme,Fred.I'mheretotakeyoutosafety,”hemurmuredsoftly.Katylookedupathim,hereyesbrimmingwithhope,andclungtightlytohishand.16升級版范文呈現Theyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.Katy,herbodystilltremblingwithfear,clungtoFredlikealifeline,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,Fred.Yousavedmylife,”shesobbedrepeatedly.Fred,gentlypattingherback,reassuredher,“It'sallrightnow,Katy.Thedangerisover.”Theon-lookingneighborseruptedintocheersandapplausewhentheysawthetwoemergesafely.Tom,hisfaceflushedwithemotion,rushedoverandembracedbothFredandhissister.“Fred,Iwassowrong.Ishouldn'thavemadefunofyou.You'reatruehero!”heexclaimed,hisvoicechokedwithemotion.Fred,flashingawarmsmile,replied,“It'sallwaterunderthebridge,Tom.Whatmattersmostisthatwe'realls