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安徽省池州市20232024學年高二上學期期中教學質量檢測英語試卷閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Jennylikeddrawingandherparentsthoughtshehadagiftfordrawing.Soherparentswereplanningtosendhertoanartschoolfordrawingclasses.Oneday,whenJennyreturnedfromschool,hermothersaid,“Jenny,doyouwanttogotoanartschool,whereyoucanlearntodrawinyoursparetime?”Hearingthat,Jennywasveryexcitedandhappilyagreedsincebeinganartistwasalwaysherdream.Thefollowingday,Jenny’sparentstookhertotheartschoolwhichwasathirtyminutebusrideawayfromtheirhome.TheyenrolledJennyinadrawingclassinthatschool.Then,Jennystartedtakingclassesregularly.Atfirst,sheshowedgreatinterestandlistenedcarefullyinclass.Shepracticedhardinordertodobetterindrawing.However,someweekslater,Jennygottiredofgoingtotheclass.Itwasveryhotatthattimeoftheyear.Sheoftenhadtowalkinthehotsuntogettothebusstop.Whatwasworse,shefoundthatdrawingwasn’taseasyasshehadthought.Shewastoldthatit’dtakemanyyearsforhertobearealartist,soshewantedtogiveup.Oneday,whenitwastimeforhertogototheclass,shedidn’tleavehome.Hermotherlookedatthewallclockandsaid,“Honey,it’salreadythreeo’clocknow.Yourclassbeginsinjusthalfanhour.Youshouldhurry.”ButJennydidn’tmove.Shesaid,“I'mnotgoing.Infact,Iamtiredofdrawing.”Hermotherwasverysurprised.Sheaskedherwhy.Jennytoldherwhatshethought.Hermotherthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Youcantakeabreakifyoureallydon’twanttogotoyourdrawingclassnow.Goandpayavisittoyourgrandma.Ifyoustilldon’twanttogoafteryouebackfromyourgrandma’s,thenI’llcallyourteacherandtellheryourdecision.”注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段開頭語已為你寫好;3.請在下面的橫線上作答。Paragraph1:Jennyagreedandwenttohergrandma’slater.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Lookingatthetwopictures,Jennyaskedwhodrewthem.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:珍妮熱愛繪畫且有天賦,父母送她去藝術學校學習。起初她興趣濃厚,但因天氣炎熱、繪畫難度大且成才需時久等原因而心生厭倦,甚至想放棄。母親讓她去奶奶家冷靜思考,再做決定。伏筆及回應:伏筆:珍妮有繪畫天賦且最初對繪畫課感興趣。回應:在奶奶家看到畫作后重新燃起對繪畫的熱情。伏筆:珍妮覺得繪畫不易且想放棄。回應:了解到奶奶堅持繪畫的經歷后受到鼓舞,改變想法。伏筆:母親讓珍妮去奶奶家并尊重她后續的決定。回應:珍妮在奶奶家有了新感悟,母親的做法給了她思考和轉變的空間。伏筆:珍妮去奶奶家前表達對繪畫的厭倦。回應:在奶奶家被畫作觸動,態度發生轉變。伏筆:未提及奶奶與繪畫的關聯。回應:在奶奶家發現奶奶的繪畫經歷及作品,成為故事轉折點。續寫要點:情感線:從對繪畫的厭倦、迷茫,到在奶奶家看到畫作后的好奇與觸動,再到了解奶奶繪畫經歷后的敬佩與重新堅定信念。故事線:珍妮去奶奶家,看到墻上兩幅畫,詢問后得知是奶奶所畫,奶奶講述自己繪畫經歷,珍妮深受鼓舞,決定繼續繪畫學習。主旨升華句:“Passionisthefirewithinthatnevertrulyextinguishes.Itmayflickerinthefaceofchallenges,butwithalittleinspiration,itcanreigniteintoaroaringblaze.”(熱情是內心永不熄滅的火焰。它可能在挑戰面前閃爍,但只要一點靈感,就能重新燃起熊熊烈火。)“Thejourneyofmasteringanartisfilledwiththorns,butitisthetenacitytokeepgoingthattransformsthetravelerintoamaster.Letnottheinitialdifficultiesblindustothebeautyofthedestination.”(掌握一門藝術的旅程布滿荊棘,但正是堅持下去的毅力將行者變成大師。不要讓最初的困難蒙蔽我們對終點之美的認知。)“Inthepursuitofadream,setbacksarebutsteppingstones.Eachstumbleteachesusalessonandbringsusclosertothesummitofachievement.”(在追求夢想的道路上,挫折只是墊腳石。每一次跌倒都給我們一個教訓,讓我們更接近成就的巔峰。)“Trueinspirationoftenliesintheunlikeliestofplaces.Itisuptoustokeepoureyesandheartsopen,readytoreceivethemessagethatwillguideusbacktoourpath.”(真正的靈感常常隱藏在最意想不到的地方。我們要做的是睜大雙眼、敞開心扉,準備好接受那將指引我們回歸正軌的信息。)“Theloveforanartformisaseed.Evenwhenburiedunderthesoilofdoubtandweariness,itcansproutanewwiththerightnourishmentofencouragementandperseverance.”(對一種藝術形式的熱愛是一顆種子。即使被埋在懷疑和疲倦的土壤下,在鼓勵和毅力的滋養下也能重新發芽。)寫作示范一:

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Jennyagreedandwenttohergrandma’slater.Whensheenteredhergrandma’sroom,shesawtwobeautifulpicturesonthewall.Onewasalandscapepaintingwithvividcolorsandtheotherwasaportrait.ThelinesandcolorsinthepicturesweresoharmoniousthatJennycouldn'thelpbutbeattracted.Shestoodinfrontofthepictures,staringatthemintently.Thedetailsandtheemotionsconveyedinthepaintingsmadeherforgetherwearinessaboutdrawingforamoment.

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Lookingatthetwopictures,Jennyaskedwhodrewthem.Hergrandmasmiledandsaid,“Idid.IhaveloveddrawingsinceIwasalittlegirl,justlikeyou.ThereweremanytimeswhenIwantedtogiveup,too.ButIkeptgoing,andovertheyears,Ihavecreatedmanyworks.”Jennywasastonished.Sherealizedthatifhergrandmacould堅持下來,她也能.Shetoldhergrandmathatshewantedtogobacktotheartschoolandcontinueherdrawingclasses.Fromthenon,Jennywasfullofenthusiasmagainandworkedharderthanever,determinedtopursueherdreamofbeinganartist.寫作示范二:

Paragraph1:

Jennyagreedandwenttohergrandma’slater.Asshewalkedintothelivingroom,hereyeswereimmediatelydrawntotwopictureshangingonthewall.Thefirstonedepictedaserenecountrysidescenewithagoldenfieldandawindingriver.Thesecondwasapictureofagroupofchildrenplaying,theirexpressionsfullofjoy.Jennywasintriguedbytheskillandemotioninthepaintings.Shewalkedclosertoexaminethebrushstrokesandtheuseofcolor.

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Lookingatthetwopictures,Jennyaskedwhodrewthem.Grandmarepliedwithatwinkleinhereye,“Ipaintedthem.I'vebeenpaintingallmylife.Ithasn'talwaysbeeneasy,butit'sbeenapassionthathaskeptmegoing.”Jennylistenedcarefullyasgrandmasharedherexperiencesoffacingdifficultiesandoveringtheminherpaintingjourney.Inspiredbygrandma'sstory,Jennyfeltanewsenseofdetermination.Shedecidedthatshewouldn'tgiveupondrawing.Shewouldembracethechallengesandstrivetoimprove.Whenshereturnedhome,shetoldhermothershewaseagertogobacktotheartschoolandcontinueherpursuitofart.【答案】Paragraph1:Jennyagreedandwenttohergrandma'slater.Shetoldhergrandmawhathadhappened.AfterhearingwhatJennysaid,hergrandmatookoutapictureandaskedherwhatshethoughtofit.Jennysaidfrankly,“Itdoesn’tlookgood.”Hergrandmasmiledandthentookoutanoth

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