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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。Lastyear,duringthesummerbreak,myfriendsandIdecidedtogoforawalkintheforest.Theforesthadpaths,andwedecidedthatwewouldhikealongthepathsandmeetatacentralpointtohaveadrinklater.Thewholeteamhadseveralgroupsandwehadplannedonmeetingwiththerestoftheteamafterthreehours.Ihadalighter,apartiallychargedphone,andabottleofwater.Wecontinuedonourwaytowardsthedeeperpartoftheforestuntilwewerefarfromanyrecognizabletrail.Aftertwohours,wewereinthedeepestpartoftheforest,andwecouldnottraceourotherfriends.Allofasudden,abearcamerushingalongourpath,andweallrunindifferentdirections.Afterrunningforaboutfiveminutes,Istoodaloneinabush.IhadnoclueaboutmysurroundingsasIhadneverbeen.therebefore.Ishoutedatmyfriends’namesloudly,butallwasinvain:therewasnoreply,andthewholeplacewassilent.IwasconfusedandfeltlikecryingasIrealizedIwasalonewithnothingtoprotectmyself.Withalotoffear,ItriedtotracethepartwhereIhadcomefrom,butallwasuseless:lwaslost.AsIwalkedalongthepathtryingtolocatemyfriends,IrealizedthatIwastired,andnothingwaslookingfamiliar.Iwasoutoffood,water,andbarelyhadanybatteryinmyphone.Idecidedtowalkthroughthebushesasthetreeshadgrownsoclosetogether.Isqueezedmyselfbetweenthelittletrees.Aftersomethirtyminutes,itstartedrainingheavily.ThoughIhadheavyclothing,IwasrainedonuntilIwassoakedup.IstartedfreezingandprayingtotheGodforprotectionanddirectionoutoftheforest.注意;1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.-______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意去年暑假,“我”和朋友們去森林散步,計劃分組行動后在中心點會合。“我”帶著一些基本物品深入森林,兩小時后與朋友走散,遇到熊后各自逃跑。“我”身處陌生環境,呼喊無果后迷路,食物和水耗盡,手機電量不足,還遭遇大雨,處境艱難。二、伏筆及續寫回應(一)伏筆攜帶物品:“我”有打火機、部分充電的手機和一瓶水,為后續可能的生火、求救等情節提供了基礎,續寫中可利用這些物品展開求生行動。與朋友走散且環境陌生:增加了故事的緊張感和孤獨感,續寫可圍繞“我”如何尋找朋友或設法讓朋友找到自己展開。下雨:使“我”的處境更加惡劣,可在續寫中體現“我”如何應對惡劣天氣以及這對“我”心理和身體的影響。(二)續寫回應第一段:可寫“我”利用現有物品嘗試向同事發出信號的方法,如生火、用手機燈光等,以及在此過程中的心理活動和期待。第二段:寫聽到遠處噪音后的反應,可能是朋友的聲音或者其他未知情況,“我”如何進一步采取行動以及最終可能的結果,如是否成功與朋友會合等。三、續寫要點(一)第一段描述“我”嘗試制作信號的具體方式和過程,如火堆的搭建、手機的使用等。“我”的心理狀態,如希望與絕望交織、對朋友出現的期待等。周圍環境的變化對“我”行動的影響,比如風雨是否影響生火等。(二)第二段聽到噪音時“我”的第一反應和后續行動,如大聲呼喊回應、尋找聲音來源等。對噪音來源的猜測和內心的擔憂或喜悅。故事的結局走向,是否成功與朋友會合或發現其他情況。四、故事線進入森林-與朋友走散-迷路遇雨-嘗試發信號-聽到噪音-可能的結果(找到朋友或其他情況)五、感情線從最初的興奮和好奇,到遇到危險后的恐懼和孤獨,再到嘗試求生時的希望與絕望交織,最后到聽到噪音時的緊張和期待。六、主旨升華句Inthefaceoftheunknownforestandthetrialsofbeinglost,courageandresourcefulnessbecomethebeaconsthatguideusthroughthedarknessofdespair.(面對未知的森林和迷路的考驗,勇氣和機智成為引導我們穿過絕望黑暗的燈塔。)Whenlostinthewild,everyefforttosurviveandconnectisatestamenttothehumanspirit'sresilienceandthepowerofhopethatkeepsusgoing.(當在野外迷路時,每一次求生和聯系的努力都是人類精神韌性和支撐我們前進的希望力量的證明。)Amidstthesolitudeoftheforestandtheperilsofbeinglost,thedeterminationtofindawayoutandthelongingforconnectionfuelthejourneyofsurvivalandself-discovery.(在森林的孤獨和迷路的危險中,找到出路的決心和對聯系的渴望推動著生存和自我發現的旅程。)Lostintheforest,welearnthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,ourinnerstrengthandthewilltoreachoutcanleadustothelightofsafetyandthewarmthofcompanionship.(在森林中迷路時,我們了解到即使在最絕望的情況下,我們的內在力量和尋求聯系的意愿也能帶領我們走向安全的光明和同伴的溫暖。)Intheheartoftheforest'smysteryandtheturmoilofbeinglost,thestruggletosignalforhelpandthehopeofhearingaresponsearethethreadsthatweavethestoryofsurvivalandthediscoveryofourowncapabilities.(在森林神秘的中心和迷路的混亂中,發出求救信號的努力和聽到回應的希望是編織生存故事和發現我們自身能力的線索。)七、寫作范文范文一第一段Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Iusedthelightertostartafire,hopingthesmokewouldcatchtheirattention.Thewetbranchesmadeitdifficult,butIpersisted,carefullyblowingonthesmallflames.IalsotookoutmyphoneandsetittoflashthebrightestlightIcould,wavingitaroundintheairperiodically.AsIworked,Ikeptprayingthatmyfriendswouldseeorsensemysignals.Thedarknesswasclosingin,andthefearofspendingthenightaloneintheforestwasoverwhelming,butIforcedmyselftostaycalmandfocusedonmyattemptstomakecontact.第二段Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Myheartleaptwithhope.IimmediatelystoodupandshoutedasloudlyasIcould,"I'mhere!I'moverhere!"Ilistenedintently,tryingtodeterminethedirectionofthesound.Itseemedtobegettingcloser.Istartedrunningtowardsit,stillshouting,myvoicehoarsefromtheeffort.AsIgotcloser,Irecognizedthevoicesofmyfriends.Finally,wereunited,exhaustedbutrelieved.Wehuggedeachothertightly,gratefultobebacktogether.Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofstayingcalmandresourcefulindifficultsituationsandthevalueofthebondwithmyfriends.范文二第一段Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Igatheredsomedryleavesandsmallbranchestobuildabiggerfire,hopingthebrightflameswouldbevisiblefromadistance.Ikeptthelighterclose,carefullynurturingthefire.Ialsousedmywaterbottletoreflectthelightofthefire,creatingaflashingeffect.Asthedarknessdeepened,myanxietygrew,butIrefusedtogiveup.Ikeptthinkingaboutmyfriendsandhowtheymustbelookingformetoo.Istaredintotheforest,willingsomeonetoseemysignalsandcometomyrescue.第二段Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Ifrozeforamoment,thenquicklygotup,myheartpounding.Ilistenedcarefully,anditsoundedlikevoices.Ishoutedbackwithallmystrength,"I'mhere!Help!"Iwaited,holdingmybreath.Thenoisegrewlouder,andsoonIcouldseetheflashlightbeamsofmyfriendsthroughthetrees.Iwasovercomewithreliefandjoy.Whentheyfinallyreachedme,wewereallemotional.Werealizedhowimportantitwastosticktogetherandbemorecarefulinthefuture.Thisadventuremadeusstrongerandmoreawareoftherisksandrewardsofexploringtheunknown.【答案】Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Aftermanyvaintrials,itoccurredtomethatIhadalighterwithme.Iwaswildwithjoyanddecidedtobuildasignalfirebycollectingleavesandlightingthemupformyfriendstos
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